The Destiny updated pg. 145 part 23 - Page 15

Originally posted by: starasdf

i just found ur fic nad let me tell u ur a great writer

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😃OMG I LUVED THE WAY RAJ PRAPOSED TO NAINA

kaise darr gayaa tha jab prapose kiys he put his hands over his face omg i luv that par😃

😆, vo bhi kamal hai na.

👏👏👏Great writing it was very emotional plz cont. soon👏👏👏

thank u yaar. 😊😊

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Originally posted by: varshita

sorry yaar mujhe pata hai ki mai sab se late hoon reply karne me , maaf kar de pls yaar.😕

Kya karoon baaki k fics padhte padhte hi itna time ho jaata hai ki is k liye time hi nahi mila, par ek baat acchi hai ki tune abhi aage update bhi nahi kiya hai.😆

Thanks for waiting for my comment.😉

Update was really jhakaas👏, mujhe accha laga Raj ki baatein sun kar jo us ne Naina se wedding night me kahi thi😊. I really love him for that😃. Sach me abhi us ko Naina ko kuch time dena chahiye na. Naina kitna dar gayi thi na jab Raj ne us ka ghoonghat khola tha.😛

Naina ka bhi dial accha tha thanks Raj for coming in my life waala. Raj to bada samjhdaar ho gaya hai Naina k liye flowers le kar aaya very smart😉. Shaadi k time bus Naina ko hi dekh raha tha so cute.😳

Naina was missing Naveen so much; that was so senti.😭

update soon now.

Originally posted by: varshita

Sorry

Here is the sixth part

They returned home on time so all of them set out for Rajveer's home; Naina's was not happy by the opinion of leaving the city but she knew if Naina will not be here with them than they will be unable to live properly.Naina's parents also were moving with Shekhawat's with heavy heart she left the city and her home. They hired two cabs and a mini bus. Mini bus for carrying luggage and cabs for carrying them.

When they reached Delhi Rajveer's mom first brought them to their home and told them they will shift tomorrow in their house. Naina was waiting in the cab for all of them.

Soon Raj came and brought her inside his grand house. Naina was mesmerized by the beauty of bungalow

Raj's mom was waiting for her at the entrance of the main door. She placed a Kalash of rice on floor. When they reached there Raj's mom stopped Naina outside. She did aarti first of newly married couple. Than she instructs Naina to hit the Kalash with her right foot and she did the same as she was told. Than she placed a thali in front of her and told her to keep her feet in it and walk inside after that.

After all the rituals Naina made her way to Raj's room. It was a beautiful room and so much spacious from inside. A huge bed was placed between the room. The room was colored with light pink and dark blue shade.

Raj was in the garden thinking some thing about his past and their future. The main thing is that Naina still doesn't know the reason y her in laws insisted Rajveer to marry her. He knows one thing the day when she will know the truth that will be the tuffest day of his and Naina's life. He was thinking about the days he spend with Naveen in Academy. He was missing Naveen badly today.

Naina has first took a shower and came out. She made herself ready .Her mother in law had called all their relatives and Raj's father's friend's family too and at the next day it was a huge reception. Naina was thinking same what Raj was thinking, "Kaash aaj bhaiya hote yahan to kitne khush hote na mujhe aur Raj ko saath dekh kar."

"Pata nahi aisa kyoun hua?" Raj thought.

"Naina neeche aao." Her mother in law called her.

She came and sat with her. She said, "Naina humara ek hi beta hai Raj hum chahte the ki us ki shaadi badi dhoom dhaam se ho to hum ne kal ek reception party rakhi hai tum dono ki shaadi ki khushi me. Ye humare khandani jewar hain aaj se ye tumhare hain in ko samhaal k rakhna."

"Kya hua maa aapne bulaya?" Raj asked entering.

"Yahan aa baith mere saath." She said.

"Naina ye haar hai is k saath ye chudiyaan , maang teeka, payal, bichiya, magalsutra aur kaan k bunde aur ye paanch anguthiyaan hain. Is me kami hai bus kamar peti aur nath ki hai. Mai abhi le kar aati hoon naya waala dabba jewaron ka." She said n left.

"Veer," she said.

"Haan bolo Naina." Raj asked sweetly.

"Mai ye sab kaise samhaaloongi? Mujh se ye sab nahi hoga." She said.

"Naina sab ho jaayega don't worry mai hoon na tumhare saath." Saying this he placed his hands on hers which sent a current in both bodies.

Soon Raj realized his mistake and moved his hand. Tabhi Raj ki mom bhi aa gayi.

"Ye lo Naina baaki ki saari cheejein kal raat tum ko pehanani hain ye sab." Raj's mom said.

"Kal raat par kal raat ko kyoun mom?" Raj asked .

"Are kal tum dono k liye reception diya hai bus isiliye." His mom told him.

Naina was blushing at it and Raj noticed it so he smiled. Soon his father joined him and instructed Raj some thing. Naina went in her room and placed all the jewelry on the bed.

Raj came there after sometime. He saw Naina trying all the jewelry on her. He smiled at her. He was watching her constantly from the door.

Naina was unable to take out haar from her neck. She tried but failed; Raj was watching it so he moved in and move closer to her. Naina didn't notice him. He opened the knot Naina tied in neckless. Naina felt that he is helping her. His hands touched the bare part of her back n Naina shivered with this touch. Raj realized it too.

He came back to his bed and saw the ornaments. "Ye lo cupboard ki keys hain in ko safe me rakh do." He gave her the keys.

Naina took it and placed all the jewelry inside the safe.

"Bhabhi," some one called her.

She and Raj turned and found Raj's cousin sis Neha (Dimple Jhangiyani) standing at the door.

"Tu wahan kyoun khadi hai yahan aa na." Raj called her in.

She moved inside, "Bhaiya bhabhi to badi khoobsurat dhoondhi haii tum ne, kahan se?" she winked.

Naina felt her self blushing at her such comment.

"Accha ye bata tu kab aayi yahan?" Raj asked.

"Bus abhi abhi aayi hoon socha sab se pehle bhabhi se mil loo." Neha said walking towards Naina.

"Bhaiya se nahi pehle bhabhi se milna hai vaah kya jamana aa gaya hai." Saying this Raj left.

"Hello bhabhi mai Neha, Raj bhaiya k uncle ki beti hoon aur ghar ki sab se ladali beti hoon." Neha said.

"Hello Neha." Naina said.

"Bhabhi vakai me aap bahut sundar hain aur aap ki awaaz to aur bhi sundar hai." Neha said.

"Bhabhi mere bhaiya thode se shaitaan hai par pyaar bhi bahut karte hain apno se. Mujh se to sab se jyada to pls un ka acche se aur pyaar se khayal rakhiyega." Neha said winking.

"Neha ji jaisa aap kahein."Naina smiled.

"Jee nahi only Neha aap mujh se badi hain na." Neha said.

"Ok Neha ab theek hai." Naina said.

"Are haan mai to batana hi bhool gayi neeche aap ko mehndi lagane k liye ladki aayi hai jaldi aa jaaiye necche."She said n left.

Naina went inside and first Mrs. Shekhawat started draw her mehndi and after that it was the work of mehndi artist. Raj was just passing from there, when he saw Naina .

"Apne pati ka naam bataiye." The mehndi artist asked.

Naina was blushing at this so much so Neha said, "Rajveer. Rajveer naam hai humare bhaiya ka." She said, "Kya baat hai bhabhi aap to bada blush kar rahi hain." She teased.

"Raj tu yahan kya kar raha hai?" one of his friends called him.

Naina saw him their eyes met and Naina lowered his eyes shyly. Raj smiled and left.

Raj joined his friends and their boy talks. Soon the clock struck 11:00 p.m. so they started going and Naina's mehndi was also finished.

"Bhabhi aap chalogi kaise?" Neha asked.

"Haan vo to hai, kya karein." Naina was also doesn't know what to do.

Just than Neha saw Raj going in his room she had a mischievous glow in her eyes so she called him, "Bhaiya jara yahan aaiye to."

"Kya hua?" Raj asked casually.

Kaisa tha ye part, reply is must from all of u.

Update was really gud..👏...So Naina 's parents r also shifting along with her..Vaise bhi no1 is dere for dem except Naina...

👏👏👏gr8 update👏👏👏

hii sis how r u...? finally aapne update kar diya..!! gud!!

now talking abt the part... it was just awesooommmmmmmmmeeeeeeeeee... bole tho ek dum jhakaas.... i enjoyed every bit of it...

so finally naina is in to her new house... woh grahapravesh ke lines ache the...

chalo acha hai.. koi tho hoga jo naina ko tease karega.. she is soo sweet.. ab yeh hi hai jo r-n ko khareeb layegi... thank u soo much for the superb part..:-)


waiting for the next one eagerly...
lots of love
ritu:-)

haii this part was so good...raj and naina are so cute when they are together..and naina is blushing a lot...that's a good sign..and raj's cousin neha is damn cute....

how could u stop at this point yaar..waiting eagerly to see what happens next

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

just awesome updt..........too good

Hiiii......vertika dear...it was sooooooooooooo romantic ud...dear.👏

achha hai k naina k parents bhi wahan se chale aaye,raj aur naina ko sath main khus dekh kar naveen ka gaam thoda sa to kam hoga un k liye......!!!!!😊😊😊 waiting eagerly for the next ud....cont soon. luv.........priya😊