The Destiny updated pg. 145 part 23 - Page 12

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Posted: 16 years ago

SUPERB update…..loved it….

Raj and naina have finally got married…..Yippee… kash real LRL main bhi inki shadi dikhai hoti…..that would have been the best episode….well lets hope that they always remain together happily.

Raj was completely lost in naina's beauty…..and naina's friends teasing him….he would have been blusing really hard…..

Naina's reaction when it started raining by saying that it was Naveen crying for her….was very emotional and sweet.

And when raj tells naina about how he would want a strong relationship with her….one of understanding and trust…..so he would want to take things slowly….was indeed very loving….kash all men were as understanding as him….he indeed is the perfect husband…..Naina is absolutely right that her parents have selected a perfect guy for her….

Naina is going to be very excited to know everything that Naveen would have told him about her……

Please update soon.

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Posted: 16 years ago
too good dear and bit emotional too
the wedding nite vala dialouge was so good
plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago

Hiiiiii Vertika...sooooo sorry for late rply.

to ab ud k bare main likhti hoon......kya likhoon..... yaar raj k character ko kitne achhe tarike se tune likha hai....he's such a perfect gentle man....kisi bhi ladki ka admirer...bilkul raj ki tarah hi hoga......!!!!!!
u r such a great writer....yaar......!!!! ab mujhe thand lagne lagi hai...teri a.c jo hoon.
naina jo bhi raj k bare main sochti hai...raj jo bhi naina k bare main sochta hai...sab kuch tune itne achhie tarike se likha hai k i m just speechless......!!!
raj ko naina k friends ka tease karna ..... achha laga...thoda emotional tha jab naveen ko naina yaad kar rahi thi..............................
sach main ...yaar..is ud ne mera dil choo liya......
nahin...aur jyada tarif nahin karungi...isi se kaam chala le ...baki k tarif tere next ud par karungi.....
are...haan ...ek baat to main batana hi bhool gayi........!!!!!
jab main shadi ke parts padh rahi thi na......tab mujhe laga k pandit k jagah tu bathi hui hai.........matlab tune jis tarah pandit ji k dialogues likhe hain na..mujhe laga tu hi raj aur naina k shadi karwa rahi thi pandit ban kar.......😆
ok.....ud ......soon.
luv.....PRIYA
Edited by srojaleen - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

itz an awesum...luv the way u portrayd raj's chracta...his such a sweetheart...plz add bit mre rmnce

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Posted: 16 years ago
just fantastic n awesome dialouges
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hai yaar to sweet , Naina aur Raj ki shaadi ho gayi finally.😛
I am so happy with this yaar.😃
Naina ko garv ho raha hai ab Raj par👏, Raj ne jab dekha Naina ko marriage dress me vo clean bold ho gaya tha.😉
Naina ki frnds bhi apne jeeju ko taese karne me koi kasar nahi chodti hain.😆
Naina ne Naveen ko yaad kiya, kaafi senti part tha vo.😭
Weddning night and the day after that was really sweet.😊
Raj ko pata tha ki Naina ko yellow roses pasand hain vow g8!.😛
update was awesome dear.⭐️
update soon.
Edited by varshita - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

HIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII VARTIKA KAISI HO SWEETY????????😛

THE UD WAS FANTASTIC DARLING👏

SUPERB👏

MINDBLOWING👏

ROCKING👏

TOOOGOOOOD👏

FABLOUS👏

ROMANTIC👏
TOUCHING👏
BEAUTIFUL👏
DESCRIBED VERY NICELY
GR8 WORK👏
FINALLY RAJ & NAINA KI SHAADI I AM SOOOOOOOOO HAPPY😃
UD SOON DEAR😛
LOVE U JAANEMAN😊
DEEPA..........
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Posted: 16 years ago

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!

Raj ki mom usse tease kar rahi hai!!!😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Raj se toh sabar hi nahi hota!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉

Naina is looking so beautiful!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Raj toh usse dekhta hi reh gaya!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj ki saaliyan ab usse tease kar rahi hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj toh beech beech mein Naina ko dekh raha hai aur Naina ko bhi kuch ho raha hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Finally Raj aur Naina ki shaadi ho gayi!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Navin Naina se kehta tha ke woh uski shaadi ke waqt bilkul nahi royega!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Kitna tease karta tha usse!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Bechari Naina!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Navin ko kitna miss kar rahi hai!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Tez baarish hone lagi toh Naina ne kaha rote huye ke usne kaha tha ke Navin hi sabse zyada royega!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Finally the wedding night!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj aaya kamre mein aur Naina ko kuch ho raha hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Raj is so good and understanding!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Its nice that he does not want to rush into things!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Its just two days since they have met aur Raj chahta hai ke pehle unke mann mile!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Aur jab Naina chahegi tabhi woh uske kareeb aayega!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊He is so sweet!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Naina ab samaj gayi ke Raj baakion se alag hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Naina ki nazron mein uski izzat aur badh gayi!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Raj ne jab ghunghat uthake uska chehra dekha toh he wanted to kiss her but did controlled himself!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj ne muhdikhai ka gift diya aur sofa par sone chala gaya!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

This reminds me of Jodhaa Akbar!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Naina is really lucky to have Veer in her life and she realises that!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Raj Naina ko sote huye dekh raha hai aur uske haathon ki mehendi mein apna naam dhundha!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Haaaaiiii!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Raj toh Naina ko dekh ke kho gaya she is looking so pretty!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj ne usse bouquet kiya!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Usse pata hai ke Naina ko yellow roses pasand hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj Navin ki baatein bahut dhyan se sunta tha!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Tabhi usko Naina ki pasand ka pata hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉

Naina toh bahut excited hai yeh janne ke liye ke Navin ne Raj ko kya kya bata bataya hoga!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊


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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi Vertika
Finally our very own Raj and Naina got married and I m happy to know that he is so understanding. The flashback scene and the scene followed the flashback one were very emotional. Both the scenes literally brought tears in my eyes. What more I can say other than the update was mindblowing. Do update soon and keep up the good work.
With Lots of Love
Shree
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hello!! Vertika!!!
Very nice update....loved it truly........
Raj is so understanding.......
Awesome........brilliant .........
Waiting for the next part...
Take care
Continue soon....




love
Riya.

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