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Vartika07 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Shree85

Hi Vertika

Hello dear.😛😛😛
As usual awesome update and what a character Raj is.
Thanks a lot dear.😊😊😊
Firstly he doesn't wanted to marry Naina and now he says that she is the girl he was looking for to spend his whole life with.
Vo bada hi confuse tha pehle ab nahi hai.
He is also feeling jealous that was a good sign for love.
Jealousy to hogi hi.😉😉😉
Finally after gaining so much courage Raj proposes Naina and now they are getting married the same day only.
Yeah Mr. Ahluwalia ki state bahut acchi nahi hai na to pata nahi kya ho jaaye isiliye shaadi jaldi ho rahi hai.😕😕😕
I liked the update very much. Keep up the good work.
With Lots of Love
Shree

Thanks dear.😃😃😃

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Deepanwita

HIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII VARTIKA SWEETY HOPE U R ROCKING????????😃

THE UD WAS FANTASTIC👏
SUPER-DOOPER ROCKING👏
OUTSTANDING👏
MINDBLOWING👏
TOOOOGOOOOOD👏
AWESOOOOME👏
CHALO FINALLY RAJ READY HAI SHAADI KE LIYE
UPDATE ASAP
LOVE
DEEPA.......

Hello dear i am fine n u?😛😛😛
Haan finally Raj is marrying Naina u all are invited in it.😃😃😃
Thanks darling.😊😊😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: RSZR

hiiya sis i am sooo haaapppppppyyyyyyyy🥳.. raj nd naina r getting married.. yes!!!!... ?hmm tho naina ke veer jii jealous ho gaye jab unhone pranjal ko naina ke saath dekha.. haii...😳😳😳

Haan honge nahi apni hone waali biwi ko kisi aur k saath haste hue dekh kar.😉😉😉


but mujhe sirf ek baat ka darr hai💔.... jab naina nd her parents ko sach pata chalega that raj has killed navin... tab kya hoga????
abhi k liye ye sab mat socho yaar dono ko khsuh hone do.😛😛😛

mujhe tho sochte hue bhi darr lagta hai.😒...... i?wish this that this truth should not be known by?anyone.....
yehi acha hoga....
Jo hoga acche k liye hi hoga aisa hi socho bus.😊😊😊

thanksss a lot for this lovely part
lots of love
ritu😊

Thanks Ritu that u liked the part and calling me di too.😃😃😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: varshita

Hey really awesome dear. 👏

Really loved the update dear. 😛
thanks yaar.😃😃😃
Ek ladke ko Naina k saath baat kya karte dekha itna jealous feel karne laga aage kya hoa us ka? 😆 Pranjal is childhood frnd of Naina g8! aur sab se acchi baat ye hai ki vo already married hai to Raj ko chinta karne ki koi jaroort nahi hai😆 aur us ki beti bhi hai Maithali vow. 😃
Haan ab jab pata chal gaya hai to chain mil gaya hoga Raj ko.😉😉😉
Raj ne finally saari himaat juta kar Naina ko bol hi diya ki vo us ko pasand karne laga hai aur shaadi karna chahta hai.😳
First time us ne kuch sahi kiya hai.😆😆😆
Kya response tha pehle to Naina ko laga ki vo ehsaan kar raha hai us par par jadi hi us ne realize kar liya ki vo pasand karne laga hai use.😉
Koi ladki bhi aisa sochegi jis k saath ye sab ho chuka ho.😕😕😕
Aur to aur dono shock ho gaye ye jaan kar ki sab pehle se hi plan tha.😛
Ab Naina sharma k bhaag gayi is ka matlab us ki taraf se haan hi hai.😉
Matlab haan na, sab bahut smart hain Raj ki family me.😆😆😆
update asap mai jyada wait nahi kar sakti hoon.😲

Thanks for reply sweety.😊😊😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
kar rahi hoon yaar bus.😊😊😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Hello guys ye raha next part of Destiny

"Beta Naina abhi thodi der me aayegi, tujhe itna wait karna padega." She teased her son.

"I didn't mean that ma." He replied blushing.

"I know what do u mean. Ok now let's move." She said.

They reached temple at the right time and all the preparations were completed. Finally the groom's ritual started.

Naina came half an hour later that. She came out of the car and came upwards slowly with her maa and a few friends.

It was clear that Raj was impatience to see her bride. When he saw Naina coming he really got a thump in his stomach. He was speechless and mesmerized by her simple but adoring beauty. She was looking awesome in that pink bridal joda. She has wore some jewellery along with it like maang teeka , a heavy neck less , a nuth and chdiyaan. Her bindi was looking gorgeous at her beautiful face.

Raj was completely lost in her beauty when one of Naina's friend said, "Jee ja ji ab bus kariye aaj k baad aap ko hi dekhna hai Naina ko." She teased Raj in this way.

Raj came out from his world and embarrassed in front of gals.All gals giggled at him whereas Naina smiled .

Soon pandit ji started reciting mantras .Naina was noticing that Raj was steeling glances of her at regular intervals. She was feeling thump in her throat.

It was time for kanyadaan now. Mr. and Mrs.Ahluwalia did it with tears in their eyes. Naina was also sobbing. They placed Naina's hand on Raj's hand in a hope that Raj will keep her happy through out his life as all parents expect.

Soon after pandit ji gave Raj sindoor . "Is ko lagaiye."

Raj filled sindoor in Naina's maang after that pandit ji gave him mangalsutra to make Naina were it. Raj tied it around her neck. He was looking her lovingly where as Naina has lowered her eyes.

"Ab aap log pheron k liye khade ho jaaiye," Pandit jee said.

All stood and before that one of Naina's friend has tied her knot. In first four pheras Raj was leading after that in three pheras Naina lead them.

After the Pheras Naina and Raj took the blessings of their parents. It was time for vidaai and Naina was remembering her brother.

Flashback:-

"Tu dekhna jab teri vidaai hogi tab mai tere dulhe se kahoonga le jaao is ko mujhe bahut pareshaan kiya hai is ne aur mai bilkul nahi rounga."Naveen said making fun of her.

"Haan haan dekhna sab se jyada tum hi roge. Dekhna." Naina ne kaha tha tab.

"Bilkul nahi tub hi dekhna." He teased her again.

"Dekhoongi."Naina said n left the room in anger.

Present

She was remembering that sweet memory.

"Kya hua Naina? Lava parchaiye bhi karni hai abhi kahan kho gayi?" her mom asked.

Lava parchaiye hone hi waali thi ki badal cha gaye aur tej bearish hone lagi.

"Maine kaha tha na bhaiya ki sab se jyada aap hi roge." Naina said with wet eyes.

After all such rituals this was time for vidaai. Naina was crying hard for her parents.

"Raj khayal rakhna meri bacchi ka." Naina's dad said with g8 difficulty.

"Bikul apni beti ki tarah rakhenge." Mr. Shekhawat said.

Vahan se seedhe Raj aur Naina ko hotel bhej diya gaya jahan se kal un ko nikalna tha un ki jaroorat ka samaan bhi tha vahan.

Now it was wedding night. Naina was seated on the bed with a big ghoongat covering her face.

Raj entered in the room and Naina's heart beats started racing faster and faster. Raj came to her. As Raj was taking each and every step Naina was shivering with a unknown feeling.

"Naina", Raj said softly sitting besides her.

She didn't say anything because she was feeling some tickling sensation in her body.

"Naina mai janta hoon ki abhi tum mujhe acche se nahi jaanti ho. U know me from last two days only. So I am in mood to rush for doing it. I think u must know me first very well than after whenever u will be able to accept me I will than touch u. Mujhe ek majboot rishta chahiye Naina. Shaadi k baad tan hi nahi man bhi milte hain to mai chahta hoon ki pehle humare man mil jaye, fir jab tum khud chahogi tab mai tum ko doosri bhi tarah se pyaar karoonga". Raj said.

It made Naina realized that all boys are not same and Raj is really different among all. Us ki najar me Raj ki respect aur bhi badh gayi aaj. Her brother and her family has chosen a good guy for friendship and as a husband.

"Par ek rasam to nibhani hi hai na." Raj said. "Daro mat bus mud dikhai ki." Raj said.

He moved closer too her which made Naina again shiver. He opened his ghoonghat and saw her face. Her eyes were closed. He held her chin move it upwards and look at her elegant beauty. He felt a sudden urge in him to kiss her hard but didn't do it.

"Ye raha tumhara muhdikhai ka gift." He gave a box to her and went to next corner of bed picking up pillows he went to sofa and laid on it.

Naina changed her dress and come to bed he saw Raj sleeping. He went to him and said in a low voice, "Thanks Veer for coming in my life." She headed towards bed n slept peacefully there.

Next day morning:-

Naina was still sleeping but Raj woke up fast. It was almost eight at morning. Raj got up n went to wash room. He made himself fresh and came out but still found Naina sleeping.

He went closer to her and started watching her face lovingly. A strand of her hair was disturbing her so he removed it from her face. In this process he touched her cheek lightly which sent shivers in his body. He looked at her hands mehndi and smiled after finding his name in it. Suddenly his cell phone rang. Naina woke up by phone's ring.

"Haan maa boliye." Raj asked moving in a corner because he didn't want to disturb Naina.

"Beta come back fast, now we have to leave with in two hours." Raj's mom told.

"Ok mom v are coming." He said n put the phone down. He turned to find Naina but she was not on bed. Raj understood that she has got up.

After half an hour Naina came back from wash room. She has worn a pretty purple color saari n she was looking beautiful. Raj was not in the room .Naina frightened that where has Raj gone so she decided to call the reception. The receptionist informed her that Raj has gone some where and will about to return.

Raj came back soon and knocked the door. Naina opened it. Raj was lost after seeing her like that. She was looking so pretty.

"Kya hua Veer?" Naina asked.

"Oh…………..nahi kuch nahi." Raj could hardly say that.

He came in and said, "Vo maa ka phone aaya tha v should move now." He said n something reminded, "This is for u Naina…….." he handed over a bouquet to her with pretty flowers.

Naina smiled and said, "Thanks Veer. Par tum ko kaise pata chala ki mujhe yellow roses acche lagte hain?" she asked.

"Vo ek baar Naveen ne bataya tha." He replied smiling.

"Aur kya kya bataya tha bhaiya ne mere baarein me?" she asked excitedly.

"Baad me, abhi hum ko nikalna hai raaste me bataoonga." He said and both left the place soon.

Kaisa tha ye update guys.

Pls reply soon.

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Posted: 16 years ago
This part was jusssssssss mind-blooooowingggg sis..👏👏👏
raj was teased by naina's friends... haii😳.. i wiah i would hav seen him blushing with my own eyes😳😳😳... but maine imagine kar liya tha😉.😉.

wow!!!!! naina aur raj ki shaadi ho gayi.. yipee..!!! aaj dil bahut khush hai..

naina remembered her bro's words.. how sweet😛.. those lines were just awesoome... nd very touching indeed😭..jab ladki shaadi karke jaati haitho sabse zyaada dukh bhai ko hi hota..😭😭

ab bas ek hi wish hai ki in dono ki jodi hamesha bani rahe.. naina is rite... raj is very different from other guys.. he is the best..

lagta hai raj, naveen ki baatein bahut dyaan se sunta tha.. tabhi tho naina ki pasand ko jaan gaya.. how sweet..😛😛
thank u sooooooooooo much for this fabulous part.....👍🏼

lots of love to my sweet di,🤗
ritu😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hii Vertika.......

hey i think am the second one to replay cool.yeh toh haad ho gayi😆
yaar update is tooooooo Good.finally Naina n Raj got married.am soooooo happy. wish them happy married life ahead..
yaar ye Raj itna cute kyun hai😉
well waiting to c what next......plzzzzz update soon dear.
Edited by vvdn - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Hi Dear,

I read dis update n it was outstanding really👏..Way u described the marriage was so sweet..raj was numb after seeing Naina in wedding attire..All the gals were teasing Raj..(Raj jaisa jiju ho to salis aur kar bhi kya sakti hain)😉..Navin's part was too sentimental..I mean it really hurts when your only brother is not dere in such n important occasion of your life😭...

U described the wedding nite perfectly..I mean its gud on Raj's part dat he is not rushing with things..Its only two days b4 they met..How can they have such kind of relationship so soon..Loved this part really
Naina mai janta hoon ki abhi tum mujhe acche se nahi jaanti ho. U know me from last two days only. So I am in mood to rush for doing it. I think u must know me first very well than after whenever u will be able to accept me I will than touch u. Mujhe ek majboot rishta chahiye Naina. Shaadi k baad tan hi nahi man bhi milte hain to mai chahta hoon ki pehle humare man mil jaye, fir jab tum khud chahogi tab mai tum ko doosri bhi tarah se pyaar karoonga". Raj said.

It made Naina realized that all boys are not same and Raj is really different among all. Us ki najar me Raj ki respect aur bhi badh gayi aaj. Her brother and her family has chosen a good guy for friendship and as a husband.

"Par ek rasam to nibhani hi hai na." Raj said. "Daro mat bus mud dikhai ki." Raj said.

He moved closer too her which made Naina again shiver. He opened his ghoonghat and saw her face. Her eyes were closed. He held her chin move it upwards and look at her elegant beauty. He felt a sudden urge in him to kiss her hard but didn't do it.

"Ye raha tumhara muhdikhai ka gift." He gave a box to her and went to next corner of bed picking up pillows he went to sofa and laid on it..."

Naina is really lucky to have Veer in her life...Morning seen was so sweet n innocent when Raj looks at naina adoringly n sees his name on her palm...😳

He is completely in love with Naina n i think she too feels the same for him..I think they will have a very happy married life ahead..(Agar sathi itna pyaar karne wala aur understanding ho to life becomes really beautiful)...😍😍😍
Do update soon..
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Posted: 16 years ago
update was fantastic
i loved it
update soon........

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