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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 5
Unforgettable goodbye
Nivriti arrives at Aryanagar and seeing the lavish grounds and the mahal simply blows her away. She is thrilled and delighted. Now even more determined to get her daughter married here.
Antara: Ab Sumaina kee maharani bhi pohoch gayee hai. Kya ab yeh Aryanagar ka mahal dharam shaala bangaya hai?
Veer: Antara tum....
Sainik: Rajkumar Veer, Maharani Nivriti mahal me pohoch gayee hai
Veer nods and then walks out ignoring Antara. He meets Nivriti outside Ananya's room.
Veer: Maharani Nivriti, aapka Aryanagar me swaghat hai
Nivi: shukriya. Hame jese hee khabar millee ke Ananya kee tabiyat abhi bhi bohat kharaab hai, hum forun chale aaye
Veer: me samaj sakta hu. Aap jaaye or Rajkumari Ananya se milaaye. Me aapse baad me milta hu
Both of them leave to their respective places
Later in Veer's room
Dharam, Veer and Antara are discussing something when Nivriti comes in with Sia.
Veer; Maharani ab Ananya kee tabiyat kesee hai?
Nivi: hame afsos hai ke onkee tabiyat abhi bhi bohat kharaab hai or wo yaha se lejaane ke bilkul kaabil nahi
Sia is annoyed with her mother's frantics.
Nivi: Hame ose aapke hawaale kuch or din rakhna hoga.
Antara makes a sullen face annoyed with Nivriti already.
Veer: aap onkee chinta matkijye. Mere hote huwe onhe yaha koi takleef nahi hogi or wo bohat jald theek hojaaengee
Nivi: Wo to hum jaante hai. Hum to yaha aakar sab kuch dekhte hee samjh gaye the. Isse behtar hamaree Ananya ke liye koi jaga nahi hosakti
Veer: Ji bilkul. Agar aap chaheeye to app bhi yaha rehsakti hai jab tak Rajkumari Ananya theek nahi hoti
Nivi: Ji wo...
Dharam: Veer! Ab hum tumhe yeh faisla nahi lene denge. Humne Rajkumari Ananya ko yaha aane diya tumhaaree zidd pe. Humne Rajkumari Sia ko bhi rehne diya wo bhi tumhaaree zidd pe, lekin ab kya Sumaina ke pure khaandaan ko yaha basaa ne ka iraada hai?
Nivi: kya! (raised voice) Maaf kijye Rajkumar Dharam per hame yaha aane ka koi shoke nahi. Hamara Sumaina hamare liye kaafi hai to hame kisee or jage jaake basne kee koi zaroorat nahi, Wo to hamaree majboori thi.
Dharam turns away and looks out of the window.
Sia: Ma! (warning in her tone) Rajkumar Dharam sahi kehrahe hai. Aap is tarha aayee ke wo...
Nivi: is tarha aayee matlab? Hum Sumaina kee Maharani hai. Jaha chaahe waha jaasakte hai. Or wese bhi hum yaha inse milne nahi aaye hai ke yeh hame itna kuch kehrahe hai.
Veer: Dekhye is waqt mera bhai bohat pareshaan hai isliye aisa kehdiya. Aap chalye yahase me aapse baat karta hu
Nivi: Wese bhi hame inse baat karne me koi dilchuspi nahi. Theek hai. (looks in Dharam's direction) Dekha ise kehte hai tameez or acche sanskaar. Aapkee tarha sirf oska dikhawa nahi karte Rajkumar Veer.
Sia: Ma! ab aap rehne dengee is baat ko, or chalye yahase
Sia wasn't pleased of how her mother got excited on Dharam. Eventhough she was right she didn't want her to charge on him like that. It just made things worse. Her and Veer walked Nivriti out of the room before she put up any other show.
Veer: Dekhye me Dharam kee taraf se maafi maangta hu aapse. Wo kya hai ke pitaji kee haalat or pure rajya kee zimmedaari kee wajese bohat pareshaan rehta hai aajkal. oska ghussa kabhi kabhi baahar nikal aata hai.
Nivi: Koi baat nahi. hum aapse kehne waale the ke hum waapis jaarahe hai or sirf Ananya ko dekhne aaye the. Hame yakeen hai ke aap oska khayaal rakhenge
Veer: Ji, osme aap chinta mat kijye
Nivriti leaves
Sia: Aapka shukriya aapne ma ko sambhaal liya
Veer: Ji isme shukriya kis baat ka. Me jaanta hu kitna bura laga hoga onhe. Wese Dharam ko wo kehna nahi chaheeye tha
Sia: Ab jo hogaya so hogaya. Hame koi shikayat nahi
Veer smiled and walked away and Sia went back to Ananya's room.
Midday
Ananya opened her eyes and was surprised.
Ananya: Aap? Aap yaha kya karahe hai?
Veer: Aap ka intezaar
Both stare at each other as a wind blows past them. Ananya smiles and becomes shy.
Veer: Uh mera matlab hai, aapka neend se utne ka intezaar karaha tha. Do din hogaye or mujhe aapse milne ka moka hee nahi mila.
Ananya: hame maaf kardijye, hamaree wajese aapko pareshaani huwee
Veer: isme Pareshaani kee kya baat hai? Maine aapko yaha bulaya tha or aap meree mehmaan hai or mehmaan kee khaatir karna mera farz hai
Ananya gives a faint smile as she is still a bitt unwell. Veer touched her forehead
Veer: ab to bukhaar kuch kam hogaya hai. Dekhna aap bohat jald theek hojaengee
She coughs lightly and tries to reach for the water by her side
Veer: Are yeh kya karahee hai? Thairye me deta hu
he reaches for the glass and then puts it near her lips and lifts her head from the back. As she drinks she keeps staring at a smiling Veer and simply admires him even more. He was so caring.
A lone tear fell from her eye and he noticed it. After putting the glass down he wiped it off her face.
Veer: Kya huwa Ananya, aap ro kyu rahee hai?
Ananya: Kuch nahi. Bus hum sochrahe the ke aap hamara kitna khayaal rakh rahe hai to kya hum is laayak bhi hai ke nahi
Veer: yeh kesee baate soch rahee hai aap? Me aapse kehdu ke yeh sab me apni marzi se karaha hu kyu ke naahi aap in sab ke laayak hai, balke aapke liye to yeh sab bhi kam hai. Agar me vaid hota to me aapko ek hee din me theek kardeta. To kami to mujhme huwee na? aap me nahi.
Ananya: Aap jaante hai, aap bohat acche hai
Veer: Jaanta hu (grins) Per aapse ziada nahi. Ab aap aaraam kijye me chalta hu
Ananya: Sunye (holds his hand) Agar aap bura na maane to kuch dair hamare paas or bait sakte hai? Hame accha lagta hai
Veer: (smiles) Zaroor
Both of them start chatting about anything. He makes her laugh many times and she simply forgets about her illness. He even recites many of his kavitas to her which just soothes her mind.
Some of them included were as follows:
"Kya aapko ehsaas hai
Baat ab yeh hi khaas hai
Aapka dil hamare paas hai
hamara dil aapke paas hai
yeh kyu aaj resham see hai roshni
yeh kya geet sa in hawaon me hai
tumhe chuke huwee resham ye roshni
Mere dil kee dharkan fizaon me hai
behke behke kahi dil me jazbaat hai
jaagi jaagi koi ankahee pyaas hai
Aapka dil hamare paas hai
hamara dil aapke paas hai"
Dharam had just arrived from extensive horse riding and had become quite tired so he was in his room relaxing by sitting on the ledge of his window.
Sia was outside roaming in the garden as usual and she found a beautiful dear. She smiled and got tempted to touch it so began chasing it just like a small child.
It stopped coincidently under Dharam's room and she managed to comfort it and was able to play with it.
Dharam opened his eyes after hearing her giggles and was surprised to find her playing with the dear. She looked so innocent. Once again he couldn't take his eyes off her and all his tiredness wiped away and he became completely relaxed.
In the evening
Everyone is in the hall. Dharam is sat involved with a map and thinking strategies.
Sia is sat on the otherside writing a message to Sunaina.
Antara is feeling rather bored so she is roaming around the hall. She comes towards Dharam and towers over him hoping he'll give her some attention and atleast look at her but he continued to be busy with the map. She gives up and goes towards Sia.
Antara: Sia, kyu na aap bhi hamare saath yu chakkar lagaaye. Bara aaraam or sukoon milta hai.
Sia smiles and decides to join her. Antara knew that if she'll join her then Dharam would definitely become attentive. They begin going around
Antara: Kya aap hamara saath nahi denge Dharam?
Dharam: (looks up) To phir oska kaaran khatam hojaehga
Antara: kya matlab? Sia iska kya matlab hosakta hai?
Sia: hum naahi jaane to behtar hai
They continue walking
Antara: kripa karke hame bataeeye Dharam aapka matlab kya hai
Dharam: Ab jo aap dono yu ghoom rahee hai, osme aap ziada acchee lagtee hai, jo bethe huwe nahi lagti. Or hum yahape bait kar oska maza ziada lesakte hai, aapke saath chalkar nahi.
Antara: (laughs) Kitna ajeeb or gareeb jawaab diya hai aapne. Sia hame lagta hai ke Dharam ko iskee saza milnee chaheeye. Kya kare?
Sia: (joins in grinning) Hmm kuch asaan nahi. Mazaak uraaye inka, hasye inpe.
Antara: Dharam ka mazaak uraana asambhav hai. Inme koi bhi kharaabi hai hee nahi
Sia: Hmmm, koi bhi kharaabi nahi? To kya yeh sant hai?
Dharam: ab yeh to kisee bhi insaan ke bus kee baat nahi ke osme koi kharaabi na ho. Ha per humne hamesha yehi koshish kee hai ke hum jo bhi karte hai osse kabhi hamara mazaak na bane. Hum un kamzoriyo se apne aapko dhoore rakhte hai
Sia: Ah, to zaroor osme ghamund or guroor shaamil hoga
Dharam: ha guroor insaan ko hamesha kamzore banata hai, per ghamund ek aisee cheez hai jo insaan ke dimaag me hamesha upar hee rehta hai dusri cheezo se.
Sia rolls her eyes and disagrees.
Dharam: Sia, hum yeh nahi kehte ke humme koi kharaabi nahi per hum kisee ko bhi ose samjhne kee ijazat nahi dete. Kabhi kabhi hamara ghussa humpe haavi hojaata hai. jiske baare me hum afsos kuch nahi karsakte. Per wo kabhi bhi bewaja nahi hota. Ek baar hamaree nazro ke saamne kuch bura hai to bus wo hamesha bura hee rehta hai.
Sia: Yeh sach much me insaan kee bari kamzori hai, per hum ospe has nahi sakte
Dharam: Hame lagta hai ke her wo kamzori insaan ko hamesha burai kee taraf daal deta hai
Sia: Aap kee sabse bari kamzori to sabko hamesha nafrat se or krodhse dekhna hai
Dharam: Or aapki, sab ko hamesha ghalat samjhna hai
Antara saw the discussion had heated up too much between them two
Antara: Ah, kyu na kuch khaane ka bandobast ho
she calls the daasi
Daasi: ji Rajkumariji
Antara: hum sab ke liye kuch khaane ka or pine ke liye lao
The daasi leaves. Sia and Dharam keep staring at each other as if they wanted to kill each other.
Next morning
Finally Ananya has recovered and now both her and Sia are getting ready to leave for Sumaina. They are being put in the carriage by Veer.
Veer: Waha pohochte hee mujhe khabar bhejdena. Or maharaj or maharani ko mera pranaam dena. Ab aap yaha jab chaheeye aasakti hai Rajkumari Ananya
Ananya: Shukriya Rajkumar Veer. Aapne hamare liye jo kiya wo bohat hai.
Veer: (keeps staring at Ananya with longing to not let her go but is helpless) Me praatna karunga ke aapkee yatra safal ho or sahee salamat ho. Ye bhi praatna karunga ke hum dubaara bohat jald mile.
Veer holds Ananya's hand and they talk with their eyes. Sia is observing and is smiling at their camaraderie. She is very happy for Ananya.
Then the carriage drives on and Veer and Ananya keep staring at each other until they disappear.
Dharam watches from his room window as they depart.
Antara: chalo acha huwa yeh dono aakhir yahase chalee hee gayee (notices Dharam staring out) Per hame lagta hai ke aapko zaroor afsos horaha hai or yaad bhi aaehga wo Sia ka ukhar ke aapko jawaab dena or khaas karke onkee "anokhee" aakhe.
Dharam: Aisa kuch bhi nahi jo aap soch rahee hai
Whilst his brain was telling him that, his heart was saying something else. It was easy to convince Antara but it wasn't easy to convince himself.
In the carriage Sia was finally truely happy once again.
Sia: Hum jaante hai Ananya ke tumhe Rajkumar Veer bohat pasand hai per hume kabhi bhi itnee khushi nahi huwi koi jaga chorete huwe. Ab os mahal me hamara dum ghute ne laga tha.
Ananya just smiled at her and both the sisters just hugged.
End of part.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#72

aw! that was so nice part Arwa!

i liked very much ur poems from veers side, they are so beautiul! and i also loved ananya and veers mutual respect, wow! i can imagine that era so easily in ur ff..!
well, my favourite parts are when sia and dharam are together..
their luv story wil be amazing to read!
its just amazing! the contrast between ur story characters and the shows, its really lovely.
well, veer is sooo nice! and princely!
but, antara.. who is she? i mean, does she is a relative of aryanagar family? sumtimes i think she wants to flirt wid dharam, sumtimes i think she is more like an indifferent guest..
anyways, great part!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#73
wow....wah dia's....ooo dharam n sia at each others heads...lol...VA scenes n dias r amazin! x
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Posted: 16 years ago
#74
Loveeeeeeeeeelyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy 😍 awwwwww I so did not want Anu sia to go so soon 😭
Its beautiful I love all ur leads.. I love sia n dharam better than veer anu 😳
EAGERLY waiting for next part.. try n update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#75
Wow it was a great part as usual.. 👏👏👏
I loved everything..veer ananya....and dharam sia...😃
hav a exam tomorrow... so not commenting in detail...if i can i wil edit this post later...
Gud job!!! 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awwwwwww it was gr8 loved all of it it's just out standing loved veer ananya's scene and veer's kavita's he is totall lover boy...
esha
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Posted: 16 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: Girl_2007

aw! that was so nice part Arwa!

i liked very much ur poems from veers side, they are so beautiul! and i also loved ananya and veers mutual respect, wow! i can imagine that era so easily in ur ff..!
well, my favourite parts are when sia and dharam are together..
their luv story wil be amazing to read!
its just amazing! the contrast between ur story characters and the shows, its really lovely.
well, veer is sooo nice! and princely!
but, antara.. who is she? i mean, does she is a relative of aryanagar family? sumtimes i think she wants to flirt wid dharam, sumtimes i think she is more like an indifferent guest..
anyways, great part!

thanks a lot for the appreciation
thats gr8 that u can imagine it as it is quite hard for me. Sometimes i even think it has become some what modern but I guess it doesnt really matter that much.
Yep Veer is a complete lover boy.
Thanks for liking DS parts.
Well Antara is not a relative but a very close friend of both Dharam and Veer and she had always had a thing for Dharam. I did mention it in her intro but I guess it wasnt clear. Anyways thats why she's there and interfering all the time.

Originally posted by: CutieA

wow....wah dia's....ooo dharam n sia at each others heads...lol...VA scenes n dias r amazin! x

thank you very much
yeh both of them ready to kill each other which is the best part of their relationship.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: bhuvana3

Loveeeeeeeeeelyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy 😍 awwwwww I so did not want Anu sia to go so soon 😭

Its beautiful I love all ur leads.. I love sia n dharam better than veer anu 😳
EAGERLY waiting for next part.. try n update soon

thanks alot for appreciating
Aww I know it was becoming quite cozy in Aryanagar but I guess they had to leave eventually.
Thanks once again.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ~samy~

Wow it was a great part as usual.. 👏👏👏
I loved everything..veer ananya....and dharam sia...😃
hav a exam tomorrow... so not commenting in detail...if i can i wil edit this post later...
Gud job!!! 😃

thanks a lot for the appreciation
it's okay u can do it whenever u have the time and gud luck in ur exams.

Originally posted by: hiri

awwwwwww it was gr8 loved all of it it's just out standing loved veer ananya's scene and veer's kavita's he is totall lover boy...

esha

Thanks a lot esha
yeh he is a complete lover boy.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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are you going to post today arwaa ?? 😍

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