pyaar ya inkaar ff p25 pg41 LAST PART

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arwa

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Posted: 16 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: junglli billi
DARI KE LIYA I M REALLY SORRY >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> BUT WHAAAAH KYA UPDATE THAAAAAAAAAAAAAA<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<

thank you very much

its okay I know its not easy to comment all the time. But whenver u do its gud.

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virgo 30

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Posted: 16 years ago

#52

great update ....its just awsome man. n specially veer as a poet is

coool plz update as fast as possible

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arwa

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Posted: 16 years ago

#53

hey virgo 30 thanks alot for the comments. I'm glad uve appreciated it and especially Veer's character. Yeh I'll be updating soon.

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uighyuihui

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Posted: 16 years ago

#54

hey dear i just love ur FF😊😊
btw nice update 👏
i hant read that book... but like ur characters very much😃
veer is really very cool 😎and loving😳 and the way u used the kavitas was really nice...👏
ananya is very pretty and looks like he is very innocent to😳...the way scripted her charecter is really good👏👏
i wished that VA would have danced....but no prob
sia is full of live im loving her very much ....her anger on dharam is quite natural😛
bhomi and sawri humesha kitarah badmashi kar rahi hai😆 and the way they teased the rajkumars is soo hillarious😆😆😆
i hope dharam will learn his leasson soon and sia makes him understand this .....par wo jo veer ko karne se rook raha hai wo anjane main khud hi karraha hai😉😳
anaya is fainted oh god i hope she is fine....and i dont now y but feeling like something gonna happen now like a heart break for ananya....😕
plz update it asap

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arwa

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Posted: 16 years ago

#55

Part 4

Necessary Meeting

Sumaina

S.M: Maharani kya aapko pata hai ke Aryanagar se dusra sandesh aaya hai?

Nivi: Acha? Zaroor Ananya ke pohoch ne kee khabar hogi

S.M: Wo to hai per osse aage bhi sunye. Yaha pe likha hai ke Ananya pohoch to gayee lekin onkee tabiyat bohat kharaab hai. Bohat taiz bukhaar hogaya hai jiskee wajese onhe kuch dino tak wahee rehna parega. Ab khush hogayee aap? Dekhliya na aapkee zidd kee wajese kya hogaya. Ab aage Ananya ko jo kuch bhi hoga na oskee zimmedaar aap hogi.

Nivi: Aap khamakha itne pareshaan horahe hai. Kuch nahi hoga hamaree Ananya ko. Waha Aryanagar me oska sabse acha ilaaj hoga or wo jaldi theek hojaaehgee.

Sia enters their room

Sia: Maa, pitaji hame lagta hai ke hame Aryanagar jaana chaaheeye

Nivi: Aryanagar? Koi zaroorat nahi. Ananya ke liye waha per or log hai or tum waha jaake kya karogi? tumhaare liye to waha kuch bhi nahi. isse behtar yeh hai ke tum apnee behno ke saath Shaamgar ke mele me jao

Sia: Pitaji hum jaante hai ke is haalat me Ananya zaroor hame apne paas chaahegee

S.M: theek hai. Hum tumhaaree sawari ka intezaam karte hai

Sia: Nahi pitaji hum soch rahe the akele hee chalke jaaye. Wese bhi aaj mausam bohat accha hai or hum Aryanagar suraj dhalne tak pohoch jaaenge.

Nivi: Sumaina se Aryanagar chalke jaaogee or wo bhi itne saare keechar or dhool se bhare huwe raaste se? Hargiz nahi! waha jaake kissee ko mooh dikhaane ke laayak nahi rahogee

Sia: hum waha sirf Ananya se milne jaarahai hai to kisee or kee parwa hame kaha. Hum ne nirne le liya hai to bus

Bhoomi and Sawri come rushing in

Bhoomi: Ma, hum kabse tayaar hoke bethe hai. Mele me kab jaarahai hai hum?

Nivi: theek hai Sia, agar tum jaana chahtee ho to jaa saktee ho per osse pehle in dono ko Shaamgar tak chore na hoga. Oske baad aage tum chaleejaana.

they all agree and as planned first travel to Shaamgar and both Sawri and Bhoomi run towards the mela excitedly leaving Sia to go ahead.

Sia has a lovely time walking through the jungle and the hills. She doesn't care about the mud splashing on her clothes or her hair getting all messed up. This is her time and she's enjoying it.

Just near sunset she reaches Aryanagar and is in the boundary of the mahal grounds when she comes face to face with Dharam.

Dharam: Rajkumari Sia?

Sia: Ji, Rajkumar Dharam. (stern look) Hum yaha apni behen Ananya kee tabiyat kee wajese aaye hai

Dharam: acha? or wo bhi akele bina kisee sawari ke?

Sia: Ab aap dekh hee rahe hai to pooch ne ka kya matlab? (both stare at each other with spite) Ab agar aapkee poochtaach khatam hogayee ho to phir kripa karke hame Ananya ke paas le chalenge

Dharam saw she wasn't pleased to see him, which somewhere nagged him but he displaced it from his thoughts and lead her inside. More like she walked ahead with attitude whilst he followed.

In Ananya's room Sia sat down near Ananya on the bed and touched her warm forehead and held her hand. Ananya looked very pale and very ill.

Sia: ab hum aagaye hai Ananya. tum bohat jald theek hojaogee

Ananya gave a weak smile and tightened her grip on Sia.

Dharam's room

Antara: yeh Rajkumari Sia to baree ajeeb hai. Kissee bhi tarha se rajkumari nahi nazar aatee. to kya huwa agar onkee behen kee tabiyat theek nahi, iska matlab yeh to nahi ke aise hee bin bataye ghoomte, ghoomte pohoch jaaye

Dharam stood silently looking out of the window

Veer: To isme itnee buree baat kya hai Antara? Rajkumari Sia apnee behen se bohat pyaar kartee hai, to bus pohochgayee

Antara: or pohochee bhi kis haalat me? (laughed as if mocking) aadhese ziada kapre keechar me dhule huwe the or pure ke pure baal bikhre? Kamaal kee rajkumari hai yeh

Veer: Sach me Antara kabhi to insaan ko oskee seerat se parkho, naake surat se

Antara: Hame to yahi seekhaya gaya hai Veer ke insaan kee seerat oskee surat se hee pata chal jaatee hai. (then looks at Dharam who has his back towards them) Wese Dharam aap kya sochte hai is baare me? Is mulaqaat ke baad hame yakeen hai ke aapka nazariya zaroor badal gaya hoga onkee "anokhee" (said with sarcasm) aakho ke baare me

Dharam: (turns around) Bilkul nahi. Balke is yatra se wo or bhi haseen hogayee hai

Antara felt bad and envy for Sia. Then decided to change the topic.

Antara: Wese Rajkumari Ananya bohat khoobsurat or pyaari hai. Afsos ke onka khandaan hee itna neecha hai

Veer: oonch neech barabari se hee hamesha rishte nahi bante

Dharam: Per jab baat do gharaane ko milaane kee ho to zaroor ossee se bante hai. Puree baat wahi to hai Veer

Veer was going to answer back but noticed Sia coming in towards Dharam's room. He went to receive her.

Veer: Rajkumari Sia, ab aapkee behen kee tabiyat kesee hai?

Sia: Abhi bhi bohat taiz bukhaar hai

Veer: mujhe lagta hai ke jab tak wo theek nahi hoti aapko yahi rehna chaheeye

Sia: nahi, hum to sirf yaha Ananya ko dekhne aaye the. Aapko ziada takleef nahi dena chahte

Veer: isme takleef kee koi baat nahi hai. Aap yaha hamaree mehmaan banke rahengee.

Both Dharam and Antara give each other a disbelief look.

Sia: shukriya

Veer: Me abhi Sumaina aapke pitaji ko sandesh behej deta hu

Sia leaves from there

Dharam: Yeh tumne kya kiya Veer?

Veer: kya kiya? Dekho Dharam me jaanta hu tumhe yeh log pasand nahi, per insaaniyat ke khatir kya tum nahi chaahoge ke Rajkumari Ananya theek hojaaye or oske baad waapis ghar jaaye?

Dharam didn't say anything and turned away. Veer smiled and walked out to make arrangements.

Few hours later Sia was getting changed in Ananya's room

Sia: Ab kya hum puree tarhase rajkumari lagrahee hai?

Ananya: (speaking weakly) Tum bohat hee khoobsurat ho Sia, or tum jaantee ho

Sia: Ananya hum yaha tumhaare paas hee rehna chahte hai

Ananya: acha nahi lagega tumhe. Kuch dair jao, ghoom aao

Sia: Yaha pe koi hai hee nahi dekhne laayak. Wo Rajkumari Antara to baat bhi kartee hai jaise aasmaan pe bethee ho or tumhaare Rajkumar Veer to bus kuch ziada bohat hee acche hai hamare liye

Ananya: Wo hamare Rajkumar Veer nahi hai Sia

Sia: Abhi to nahi hai per bohat jald hojaaenge

Both give each other smiles and then Sia walks out. She roams around finding it awfully quiet. A sainik comes and astonishes her.

Sainik: agar aap Rajkumar Veer ko dhund rahee hai to wo Maharaj ke kamre me hai

she thanks him and goes forward towards a place which she assumes is maharaj's room but instead she comes into a hall with a compound filled with sand and to her surprise she finds Dharam there doing sword practice. She keeps staring at him whilst he is completely involved. Then as he turns around he pauses when he sees her. They keep staring in silence until Sia pouts with anger and leaves. Dharam uses force and throws his sword which hits a far away wall.

She meets Veer on the way and he walks her towards a hall.

Sia: Ab maharaj kee tabiyat kesee hai?

Veer: Vaidji ka kehna hai ke onkee beemari ab aise more pe pohoch gayee hai ke (tries suppressing his tears) dheere, dheere or bhi bigarti jaaehgee

she feels sorry for him

Sia: Hum maante hai ke hum maharaj ko itne jaante nahi per hame yeh pata hai ke shayad yahi ek waje hogi onhe mukti dilaane kee

Veer: phir bhi mera dil yeh maane ko tayaar nahi. Dharam to apne aapko sambhaal lega per me yeh kabhi bardaasht nahi karpaoonga (wipes his tears)

Sia: aapko himmatse kaam lena hoga

Veer: chalye choreye yeh sab or aaye kuch or baate karte hai

they continue walking towards the hall

in the hall

Antara and Veer are playing the chausath game whilst Sia is sitting observing. Dharam enters.

Antara: Ah Dharam, aakhir aapko waqt milhee gaya aane ka

he doesn't answer and walks straight and stands in front of Sia and puts his hands behind his back.

Dharam: ab aapkee behen kee tabiyat kesee hai?

Sia: Ji, ab wo pehlese behtar hai

Dharam: humhe sunke khushi huwi

Then walks off to a nearby sofa

Antara: To Rajkumari Sia, aap khelengee hamare saath?

Sia: Ji nahi. hame yeh khelna aata nahi

Antara: kya? Aisee koi rajkumari nahi jisse yeh khel na nahi aata ho. Hame to lagta hai aap bohat saaree cheezo me maahir hai per bus dikhaatee nahi hai

Sia: Aapko aisa bilkul sochne kee zaroorat nahi. Naahi hum bohat saare kaamo me maahir hai or naahi hum apne aapko kisee se chupaate hai. Hum jo hai wo sab jaante hai. chal or beimaanee hame to sikhaaya gaya hee nahi

she speaks taunting Antara as she didn't like her at all. Neither did Antara but she decided to change the topic again. She caught Dharam sitting with a scroll.

Antara: hmmm aap yu chup, chup ke kya karahai hai Dharam?

Dharam: isme koi chupaane waalee baat nahi. Hum Avdhi me apnee behen ko sandesh bhejrahe hai

Antara: Ah Sakshi. Kitne mahine hogaye osse mile huwe. Kaisee hai wo? Pichlee baar dekha tha ose to abhi bhi bacchi hee thi. Kya ab bari huwi bhi hai ke nahi? Zaroor wo bhi hum jesee khoobsurat to ho hee gayee hogi.

Dharam: beshak. Rajkumari Sia jesee kehsakte ho osse

Antara gives Sia the look again unpleased with the comparison.

Antara: wese Sakshi hai bari pyaari. Pura din hastee gaatee rehtee hai or sitaar to kamaal ka bajaatee hai. Hame bataye Sia, kya aap sitaar bajaana jaantee hai?

Sia: Jaante hai per bohat accha nahi

Veer: saare rajyo me rajkumariya koi na koi cheez me maahir hai. Sab kuch jaantee hai. jitnee saaree mujhe milee hai onhe naahi sirf naach na gaana aata hai per sitaar bajaana, ghore sawari or talwaar baazi bhi aatee hai. mere hisaab se to sabke sab puree tarhase tayaar hai or kaabil hai

Dharam: hamare nazarye se kisee bhi rajya me koi bhi kaabil rajkumari nahi

Antara: Baat to sahi hai. Sirf yahi sab thoree na kisee ko kaabil bana ta hai. Ek rajkumari ka bolene ka andaaz, chaal dhaal, or sajne sawarne kee ada, sab dekha jaata hai or phir ose kaabil samjhaa jaata hai

Dharam: ha, or in sabme ek ehem cheez shaamil honee chaheeye jise insaan dimaag kehta hai

Sia: (quite amused by him) hame hairaanee nahi horahee hai Rajkumar Dharam ke aap aisa sochte hai. Dekha jaaye to aap jin logo se milte hai osse kaha aap asliyat ko samjhenge. Hame lagta hai ke aapko aurat ko parakhna hee nahi aata

Antara: Rajkumari Sia, kuch ziada hee ghamund hai aapko aurat hone pe

Sia: hum wahi kehte hai jo hame sahi lagta hai or jitna humne dekha hai

Antara: Shayad aapko naseeb hee nahi huwa ziada tar Sumaina se nikal ne ka. Ham aapko batade ke hum log jin logo se milte hai onmese bohat saaree rajkumariya hai jo bohat hee kaabil hai

Veer: ab yeh saaree baate choro warna puree raat jhaghar te hee rahoge.

Antara turns away and resumes playing. Dharam and Sia stare at each other in disagreement.

Next day a message comes that Nivriti is going to come to visit Ananya.

End of part.

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arwa

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Posted: 16 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: starpisces123
hey dear i just love ur FF😊😊
btw nice update 👏
i hant read that book... but like ur characters very much😃
veer is really very cool 😎and loving😳 and the way u used the kavitas was really nice...👏
ananya is very pretty and looks like he is very innocent to😳...the way scripted her charecter is really good👏👏
i wished that VA would have danced....but no prob
sia is full of live im loving her very much ....her anger on dharam is quite natural😛
bhomi and sawri humesha kitarah badmashi kar rahi hai😆 and the way they teased the rajkumars is soo hillarious😆😆😆
i hope dharam will learn his leasson soon and sia makes him understand this .....par wo jo veer ko karne se rook raha hai wo anjane main khud hi karraha hai😉😳
anaya is fainted oh god i hope she is fine....and i dont now y but feeling like something gonna happen now like a heart break for ananya....😕
plz update it asap

thanks alot for appreciating

hmm dont worry Im sure ull want to read it hopefully after reading my fic.

im glad uve liked all the characters and the plot so far.

Well Dharam's character will develop throughout the story and its true what u said that yeh he is also do it unknowingly what he is preventing Veer from doing. Heheh let's see what happens.

Dont worry for the time being there wont be a heart break yet. perhaps there wont really be one.

thanks once again and i hope u continue reading and enjoying.

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Samiksha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#57

Wow...latest update..😛

This one is very nice yaar...👏

Reading the title i had thought that this might be the necessary meeting between veer and ananya but it was not so.... well i m still in doubt as to whether it was necessary sia-ananya meeting or necessary dharam-sia meeting... 🤔 i thin DS has more in this part so its them i guess 🤔

Absolutely liked sia's nature... she enjoys herself walking all the way to aryanagar... widout caring for anybody else... u do need to do that sometimes... 😊

Aww... veer is truly truly a charmer 😳 uski baatein...wow..😛

I had expected that as Veer invited ananya over to aryanagar... he will go and meet her and ask about her well-being and abt her health... and agains ay something in his inimitable manner 😳

But veer toh aaya hee nahi 😕

Antara is envious of Sia.. wonder how antara wil play a part in dharam sias growing relations..

Dharam sia scene wid him swordfighting was very nice... no words said.. but everything expressed... 👏

Maharaj on death-bed...😔 i feel sad... poor veer... he already on the verge of crying..😔

Liked the exchange of ideas in the room wen playing... got to see a part of everyones view-point...veer,sia,dharam,antara... and also sakshi's intro thru antara...

Ah! Dharam values a mind in a girl.. 👍🏼

reminds me of Rhett Butler from Gone with the Wind 😃

nivi coming over...😒 oh god... she is hyper abt everything.. and her everything only includes her daughters marriages 😆 what will she do wen she comes?

I m sure...wid her behaviour....veer wil understand that ppl are like tht...but Dharam..i m sure he will find her irritating.. 🤔

Lets see what happens.....

Lovely update by u...Arwa.. 👏

And dont say u r not too good wid the hindi diction of dialogues...they are all very understandable..

and precise... 😊

Edited by ~samy~ - 16 years ago

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arwa

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Posted: 16 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: ~samy~

Wow...latest update..😛

This one is very nice yaar...👏 - thanks a lot

Reading the title i had thought that this might be the necessary meeting between veer and ananya but it was not so.... well i m still in doubt as to whether it was necessary sia-ananya meeting or necessary dharam-sia meeting... 🤔 i thin DS has more in this part so its them i guess 🤔 - hmmm there are a lot of meanings to this title as there are quite some meetings in this part which I'm sure u've noticed.

Absolutely liked sia's nature... she enjoys herself walking all the way to aryanagar... widout caring for anybody else... u do need to do that sometimes... 😊 - yep she is one of those who doesn't care what others think abt u.

Aww... veer is truly truly a charmer 😳 uski baatein...wow..😛

I had expected that as Veer invited ananya over to aryanagar... he will go and meet her and ask about her well-being and abt her health... and agains ay something in his inimitable manner 😳

But veer toh aaya hee nahi 😕 - yeh well he hasnt had the time to do that but dont worry he will soon go and meet her.

Antara is envious of Sia.. wonder how antara wil play a part in dharam sias growing relations..

Dharam sia scene wid him swordfighting was very nice... no words said.. but everything expressed... 👏 - yeh she'll play a part for sure. hmmm thanks for appreciating that part.

Maharaj on death-bed...😔 i feel sad... poor veer... he already on the verge of crying..😔

Liked the exchange of ideas in the room wen playing... got to see a part of everyones view-point...veer,sia,dharam,antara... and also sakshi's intro thru antara... - yep that was an intro to everyone's view points towards aliance with a woman.

Ah! Dharam values a mind in a girl.. 👍🏼

reminds me of Rhett Butler from Gone with the Wind 😃 - that was a new comparison as i didn't think abt it but Darcy also said that in P&P if u remember.

nivi coming over...😒 oh god... she is hyper abt everything.. and her everything only includes her daughters marriages 😆 what will she do wen she comes?

I m sure...wid her behaviour....veer wil understand that ppl are like tht...but Dharam..i m sure he will find her irritating.. 🤔

Lets see what happens..... - yeh now it'll be intersting to see what she does coming there.

Lovely update by u...Arwa.. 👏

And dont say u r not too good wid the hindi diction of dialogues...they are all very understandable..

and precise... 😊 - thanks a lot for appreciating my work once again.

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esha

@bunny007

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Posted: 16 years ago

#59

it was superb plz do cont loved sia's nature and her attitude towards dharam it was gr8 and no va meeting that was sad but hope in next part we'll see va scenes plz do cont asap...

esha