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"Thank you so much.... by the way I am Ahesha." the girl said her name, "Angad Khanna at your service."

"Jaanthi hoon main Misthi ki sahali hoon." she replied, Angad immidietly started stammering, "Misthi babhi ke saheli."

"Haan Mr. Khanna aur agar aap mere saath flirt kya tho I'm sure aap ko tho patha hai ke kya hoga." she replied, "Ji haan umm sorry... vo aap please...."

"Don't worry main yeah baath kisi ko bhi nahi bathaungi." she reassured him as he left to go on his own path, that was Angad Khanna. A large flirt with a great sense of humor not to mention hot, still there was only one person he was afraid of in his entier life. His friend Misthi, some one who will come up latter in this story. Now back to the plot, he walked up to Naina's cabin and knocked the door, "Hi mom."

"Aare Angad beta andar aao." she replied, "Bolo kya hua ke aaj tum achanak tum use yahan par ayi ho?"

"Kuch nahi baas yeah kehene aaya tha ke aaj ke party ke thyari hogaye hai. I supervised the whole thing my self." he replied as a pune came in with his drink, "Great, I know it would be a hit. Tum ne supervise jo kia."

"Thanks mum, aur haan venu has been set. Bill aur advance ka details aap ko do din main mil jayega." he added sipping his drink, Naina acnowladged it as she continued to read through another file, "Aur haan dadi ne ziid pakad raki hai ke main Mukti ko bhi lekar jaun mere saath apni weekend par."

"Kaunse vo beach house wali? Par kyun beta?" she asked looking up suprised, "Vahi purani kahani, hum use attention nahi dete hai aur use dena chahiye...."

"Ma bhi na patha nahi use aise kyun lagtha hai ke hum Mukti ko ignore karthe hai." Naina sighed, "Aur Angad beta tum to janthe ho na agar ma ne yeah zid pakadliya tho us ladki ko lekar janahe padega tuje. Don't worry beta I'll talk to her, vo aap logon ke saath aayegi phir bhi pareshan nahi karegi."

"Thank you so much mum aap tho mera sabse bada musibath ko solv kar diya." he smiled, "I just hope trip ke waqth vo aise kuch nahi karti jiske wajai se gang ke mood karab hojaye."

"Be positive love." Naina smiled Angad rolled his eyes finnishing his drink he placed it down and picked up his bags, "By mom see you at home."

"By love." she smiled, going back to her work. Yes, Naina Khanna was a very good mother to her children just as she was a good enterpurnare. She always pampered Angad and gave him an advice in such a way that it would always help him get his way with out getting a 'bad name' among anyone. "Hi Karthik!"

"Hi Angad, mom se milne aaya tha?" his brother stopped with a large affectionate smile, that's Karthik Khnna the boy who took care of the bussiness as well as an affectionate brother, he was after all "Haan vo party ke baare main."

"Haan muje yaad hai baba." he smiled, "Aur haan weekend ka trip tho tai hogaya na?"

"Don't ask." Angad replied sadly, "Dadi ne kehediya ke main Mukti ko bhi apne saath lekar jaun."

"Oh God." Kartick groaned, "Tera trip ko kya hoga bechara us ladki ke saath tho tume na jane..."

"I know lekin mom ne kaha ke vo Mukti ko samjayenge so I'm cool." he grinned at his brother, "Great any ways suno muje jaana hoga."

"Sure bro, see you at home." he waved and walked away placeing back his i-pod in his ear and humming a tune. Getting into the car he drove away after placeing the i-pod along with the car radio, he was after all the cool son of the Khanna's who was soon going to become a doctor. Soon to enter into his second year he was going to become a senior! He was going to be enjoy the free time, his holiday. He was going to spending a weekend with his friends.... what he did not know was, that trip was going to be the start of a long journy. A journy that would make him understand the past and start closing a years old growing gap.

Sharma House



A large house with a homely garden stood comes into the view of the camera.... zooming in there is a beautyful hall being set with flowers placed in the vaises. Just then some one dressed in black tracks and a baggy yellow t-shirt walked in, the servents who are working stopped seeing him, "Good morning sir ji..."

"Hmm..." he nodded as he took the news paper from the servent's hands and began reading as he walked down the stairs, from the staircase nearby came a lady dressed in a pink cotton sari, her hands were decorated with beautyful pink bangles with gold ones at each end. "Mr. Anurag Basu aap aabhi aaye hai aur aabhi se aap paper ko padna shuru kardiya. Aar kam se kam aarthi tho lelo."

"Sorry Sam." Anurag smiled at her, that was Anurag Basu a great bussiness tycoon and a great father for his three kids. His wife Sampatha 'Sam' Basu was a famous writer with great stories, "Waise bache kahan hai?"

"Bache tho aabhi aabhi gayi hai excersice karne ke lia. Tume tho patha hai na A.B donon kithne jude hue hai ek duje se." she replied, "I know Sam... lekin aayenge kaab?"

"AAARE YEAH TUM KYA KAR RAHE HO?" a girl screamed from top of the stairs, "Tumse baagne ka koshis kar raha hoon sister."

Sam smiled, "Shayad thode deer main."

"Ruko... aaj main tume nahi chodungi." the girl yelled as two figures dashed down the corridor, "Aare sorry, sorry..."

"Yudi ka bacha agar tum aab ruke nahi na tho main tume vo halath karungi..." the two of them dashed down till a point when the girl almost bumped into Sam, "Sam mami dekiye na yeah Yudi muje phir se chedne laga hai."

"Kya hua Kripa beta?" she asked smilling at the girl who was dressed in a beautyful brown chudidar her hair still wet from the quick shower she had taken, "Phir se is ladka ne muje pareshan kia.... es baar phir se tiika ko meri chehere par lagadia."

Sam laughed indeed Prem had spread the teeka over her right cheek, "Hay you are my sis, aur sare bai apne behen ko hamesha chedthe hai."

Anurag smiled seeing how what his son was doing, his white kurtha's it self was set with red tika paste. The young man fit more into the image of his second name than his first with his eye-brow ring and cool-dude attitude. Prem Yudi Basu, his son... the son of his first wife Prerna. "Are beta kya kar rahi ho?"

"Kuch nahi dad baas de ko irritate kar raha tha. You know how Yudi is hamesha natkat aur usi ke saath pyar." he replied, Sampatha rolled her eyes, "Beta tum Kripa ko hamesha kyun pareshan karthe ho?"

"Esiliye step-mom, kyunki vo meri behen hai." Prem replied rubbing his hands showing of his favorite rung, "Aab if you don't mind main ja raha hoon exersice karne ke liya. By by."

"Dekiya na mami us ladka ne phir se...." Kripa complained, "Janthi hoon beta lekin pyar kartha hai esiliye yeah saab kartha hai vo ladka tere saath."

"I know mami... aap ko tho patha hai na ke meri ma aur bai ke achanak mauth ke baad Prem na hi muje sambala tha." she replied tears filling in her eyes thinking of her dead parents, "Agar Prem nahi hotha tho shayad main kabhi..."

"Janthi hoon beta." Sam replied touching her shoulder, "Any ways chalo exersice ka waqth hogaya."

Anurag watched as the girl went away and turned to Sam, "Thank you Sam."

"Kiske liya A.B?" Sam asked turning to him with a suprise in her face, "Kripa aur Prem ko ek maa ke pyar dene ke liya agar tum nahi hothe tho patha nahi kya kar patha main."

Sam placed a hand over his lips, "Nahi A.B maine jo kuch bhi kya apne liya kia. Tume tho patha hai na..."

"Patha hai Sam still thank you so much tumhare siva koi nahi hai jo yeah kaam ethne ache thara sambal sakthe hai." he hugged her emotionally, just then some one came in dressed in cream jeans and a black shirt and jacket combination. Some bags had been set down with some more bags as well and smiled at the couple, "Aare wah kya romance hai vo bhi jaab jawan bache ghar par hai."

"Shravan?" Sampatha turned and smiled at the man standing there, "Hi Sampatha aunty!"

Running up to them he touched their feet and got their blessings, "So good do see the two of you."

"Beta... aarhi aur prashad lelo." she replied, "Thank you aur haan uncle hume vo contract mill gaya vo loog kaal arahe hai yahan par finalise karne ke lia."

"I knew ke tume zarur karsake ho. Congradulations beta tum tho ek din ek bahoth ache bussiness magannet banega." Shravan smiled, "Thanks uncle...ab mai jaa kar fresh hotha hoon waise aunty muje ek strong coffee ke zarurath hai."

"Tume apni coffee tho milega." she replied, "Jao aur naha kar aajo."

"Sure lekin please thoda zyada chakar." Shravan begged before going to his room, Sam and Anurag laughed at the action of the boy. Shravan Basu, Anurag's elder brother's son: the brother who had died a very long time ago when he was just seven. Since then Shravan had been Anurag Basu's surrogate son and the eldest son of the Basu house. Ristha, is the story of these people and some more.... the story of four people mainly who come together as a team for saving one person.

Krishi
Edited by shakthi258 - 16 years ago
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great part
dnt like angad's attitude.
prem and kripa were fun
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hey, awesome updates!, please continue soon!!!!!!!!!!11
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AWESOME!!!!!!! Plz pmme when u update. Ur a very good writer.
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heyy coolll part plzzzzzzzzz contuied soon
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Khanna House

Mukti is on the way to her house in the taxi when her mobile rings, "Ji aunty."

"Deko Mukti ma ne Angad se kehediya ke tume uske weekend ke trip main shamil kare. Aur Angad ne bhi maanlia lekin please tum uske trip ko barbad maath karna." she requested, "Uske liya yeah brake kafi zarur baath hai."

"Don't worry aunty main Angad ko koi problem nahi dungi." she replied, "Aunty muje jaana hoga, I'll see you latter."

"Sure aur haan aaj ek party hai ghar par hai, please sham thayar rehena." she added cutting the line bluntly. Mukti simply rolled her eyes she did not expect much from her aunt, "Patha nahi kyun dadi yeah chahti hai ki main Angad ke saath uska vo weekend main jaun. Waise main karu bhi kya karun unlogon ke saath, well Angad ke saath?"

Dumping her bag down she turned towards Teady and asked, "Teady zara meri kamre mai ek coffee bijwayenge?"

"Ji ma'am." he replied as she went away a drag in her walk, a sweet voice called from inside, "Mukti beta?"

"Ji dadi?" Mukti called going towards the room insdie, "Acha hua ke tum agayi ho, main yahi chahathi hoon ki tum Angad ke saath uske weekend get away main chalo."

"Lekin dadi main kyun jaun aur vo bhi us Angad ke saath?" she aksed, "Mukti! Beta tume kithne baar samjaya maine ke angag tumhara bai kai use naam se nahi kam se kam Angad biya tho bulao."

"Sorry dadi, kabhi nahi and I mean that kabhi nahi." she added rolling her eyes, "Besies Angad Khanna bai matterial nahi hai."

"Teek hai beta. Main manthi hoon tume Angad ke saath ithna lagao nahi hai lekin thoda sa kosish to karo, thab tume patha chalega ke vo kithna acha ladka hai. Aur vo bhi ek bai ka farz nibane lagega." she replied Mukti finnished the last sentence, "Vo ek bahoth ache ladka hai jo apni farz ka koi kayal nahi hai. Dadiii janthi hoon main yeah saath achi thara. Lekin vo ladka muje apni behen nahi maantha aap kun hum donon ko baar baar kareeb hone ke koshis kar rahe hai."

"Jaanti hoon beta, lekin please tum apni is dadi ke lia koshish tho karo." she requested, Mukti simply nodded, "Teek hai dadi... lekin muje nahi lagtha ke Angad kabi muje ek insan ke roop main dekega. Any ways main packing karthi hoon."

"Teek hai bachi." dadi kissed her forehead, "Aur haan beta agair Angad ke kuch kadvi baath kia na tho tum uske bura maath maana."

"Maina maana kaab dadi?" Mukti replied getting up and going away, dadi looked at her and smiled, "Muje patha hai bachi ke tum ek din zarur tum Angad ko apne bhai manogi. Ek din aise zarur ayegi."

Mukti entered her bedroom and looked at the pale blue walls sighing, it was all right nothing special. Her bed was a comfertable one set with dark blue and a white flower print. Her dark blue comferter set aside by the servents along with some custions set in blue and whites. Her study area was set with a table nailed to the wall, along with some draws and an over head set of cuboards. The dressing table in another cornor of the room set along with cosmetics and other things along with a smaler set of draws. The seat pushed inside to save space, just the way she always liked it. The light greay desighn set with intense silver pattens. Her closet was also queit large but at the moment it was closed, her treadmill pushed up and the t.v opposite to it in a cornor set comfertable enough for her to watch from any angle. Mukti looked around at her bed side table and looked at the small cute teady and smiled, next to it was a photograph of her with her parents. A very old one and something she loved, it always made her smile. Wipping her tears she simply walked inisde the closet and pulled out some bags and started packing some clothes for the trip. She hated going there but this was one of those 'long' weekends where she had to go and spend time with Angad and his friends. Her meditaitons were broken by her phone, "Hi Kaaya."

"Hai Mukti kya kar rahi ho es weekend?" she asked, "Angad ke saath ek week end trip par jaana padega."

"Kya hua achanak?" Kaaya asked, "Don't ask aur sabse buri baath muje Thursdey sham par he jaana padega aur hum aayenge sirf Tuesday morning... kafi bada week end jo hai."

"Point lekin Mukti tum please muje phone karo agar koi problem hoga tho please chup chap apne andar dark maath rako." Mukti smiled Kaaya always took care of her, "Ji meri ma main zarur aise karungi. Aur agar agya hai tho main packing karne jaou yeah koi kaam hai?"

"Acutally kuch kaam hai... Mukti kya tum aaj sham hamare saath aaogi?" she asked, "Sure sounds good, kaun kaun arage hai?"

"Hum donon, Hari, Jiya, Rudraksh aur Sanjana." she replied, "Sounds good main aathi hoon kab ka show hai?"

"Two hours main..." Mukti smiled, "Teek hai... are yaar zara Rudraksh ko kehedo ke vo muje aakar pick up kare."

"Teek hai main use bathati hoon." she replied and cut the phone. The Mukti Khnna as she was known to the family was not how she was with her friends... she was the cool girl. The girl who always had fun and enjoyed playing around with the younger siblings of her friends, the girl who helped aunty's and uncle's in parties... the sweet child. The chill girl who walked out of her closet dressed in white cutoffs and a yellow tanktop. Picking up a white jacket along with it she threw it over her shoulder humming a song that had been playing on the radio along with her wallent and mobile before running out of her room and down just as a guy on a red bike neared the door stopping just as he pulled over, "Hi Rudraksh chale?"

"Kamal hai yaar phir se tum bahar agayi. Teek hai chalo..." she hopped on as they drove away, "Kaise lagtha hai tume meidcal ka admission?"

"Bahoth kush hoon." she hugged him from behind, "Patha hai Rudraksh jaab main choti thi thab se yeah sapna deka ke main ek din ek docter banun. Aur bahoth jald vo sapna saach hojayega."

Rudraksh touched her hand gently, "Patha hai Mukti besides you deserve this, ithni mehenth jo kia tumne espar."

"Hmm aur tum bolo tumhare bussiness studies course kasa hai?" Mukti changed the subject, after all Rudraksh had been away for nearly six months. "Bahoth ache thara, vahan ke loog bhi kafi ache hai. Affectionate and loving, muje aise treat karthe hai jaise main unke apne beta hoon koi paying gust nahi. I love the whole thing Mukti.... ithna pasand aaya ke main soch raha hoon ke vahi par ek softwere company shuru karun."

"Kya? Tum sach main Bangalore main apni bussiness shuru karoge kya?" the exitment in her voice quiet clear, "Tum ne tho hamesha ek ache leader tho the aab ek bahoth kamiyaab bussiness person bhi."

"Aur tum? Tum tho ek bohoth achi docter banogi Mukti. Bahoth logon ke zindagi main roshni lekar aaogi aur ek din I am so proud of you Mukit." he added pulling over the bike, "Any way chalo."

Mukti ran up the stairs of the of the theater as manny girls gave admiering looks towards Rudraksh who once again ignored it, "Hi Sanjana, Hari, Jiya, Kaaya."

"Hi Mukti." they courused Kaaya took hold of her hand, "Aare dekne tho do hamare hone wali docter ko...."

"Bolo kaise lag rahi hoon?" Mukti asked twirling around, "Bahoth kuubsurath hoo meri pyari buddy. Aab chalo bhi sahi, hamare liye ek bada pack popcorn aur drinks inthizar kar rahe hai."

"Great tho une aur inthizar nahi karna chahiye." she replied and they went away letting Rudraksh join them. Through out the first parts of the moive Jiya was constantly sighing and smilling... the very romantic girl she was and Mukti was rolling her eyes. When Lisa walked up to her husbands office with the tiffin carriar Rudraksh sighed, leaning over to Mukti he wispered, "Aare yaar agar pure movie main donon ka yeah lovy-dovy seens hai tho main baag jaounga main."

"Company chaiye. I knew I should not trusted Kaaya's judgement of the moive. Hmm kai aur chale?" she asked, "Chalo... coffee shop hamare favorite?"

"Sounds good." turning to Kaaya she told her that she is leaving, the girl simply waved her off too involved in the movie. Mukti and Rudraksh went to a nice cozy coffee shop and ordered "Two cold coffee's please! Aur kuch logi?"

"Hmm hot chocolate-dounat hai?" she asked, "Great two of those as well."

"Tume yaad hai ke hum yahan kab aaye the, peheli baar?" Mukti asked sitting down, "Haan hamare peheli mulakat ke baad... tum tenth exams main school first aayi thi."

"Sirf char point se maine state first miss kar diya." she replied, "Tum meri vo party main aayi the aur uske baad hum esi coffee shop."

"Aur yehi do cold coffees aru dounats kaye the. I recall that as well." he added as they found some seats, "Really Mukti tab se lekar aaj thak hamare safar ek saath kithna acha laga hai na?"

"Haa do saal dosth bankar... aur hamare zindagi main kithne fark aagaye hai na?" Mukti asked, he nodded, "Aur uske upar hum kafi close bhi aagyage. I'm so proud of you Mukti."

"Thanks Rudraksh aagar tum na hothe tho shayad main yahan thak kabi nahi pahonth pathi. You always know how to boost me up." Mukti replied sipping their drink, "I know dosth jo hoon. Hmm same taste as ever."

"I don't believ this tum taab se lekar aaj kar kithe badalgaye ho yaar." Mukti added leaning back, "Aur tum bilkul nahi Mukti hamasha wahi ladki jo yeah MBA first year student ne deka."

"Vohi?" she asked, "Haan vohi tho ho aab bhi..."

Nither of them noticed a cool guy and his skimpy dressed girlfriend walking inside, "How cute Mukti... tume koi aur ladka nahi mila kya? You know koi tumari age ke aas paas?"

"Angad aap yahan kya kar rahe hai?" Mukti asked, "Aap ko koi Malishka se milna tha na?"

"That would be her, Malishka meet my stupid and uncool cosin Ms. Mukti Khanna." he replied, pulling the girl closer, "Muki meet Malishka my date for the evening."

"Ooh hi Mukti I'm Malishka." the girl shook Mukti's hand with her own waxed and manacured one, "Hi... aap yahan kya kar rahe hai? Aap tho koi italian resaturent jaane wale the right?"

"Jaane tho wale the lekin muje patha chala ke Malishka ko yahan ke coffee bahoth pasand hai." he replied sitting down (uninvited) opposite to Mukti and Rudraksh, "Excuse me one coffee expresso with wipped cream and a dash of chocolate aur for the lady?"

Malishka asked for a italian coffee, "Sure love... anything else you want?"

"Nothing at the moment." she shook her head makeing Mukti roll her eyes, "So umm Malishka kya karte hai aap?"

"Ji main model hoon aur saath saath main collage main bhi hoon..." she rattled off Mukti nodded sipping her own drink and wondering what Angad saw in that girl appart from skimpy clothing and a plastic face. "That's not all you are tum kithne modest ho patha hai guys Malishka ek faboulous accress bhi hai. Any ways enough about us Rudraksh tum kya karthe ho?"

"First of all it is Rudr and main apne bussiness kholne wala hoon." he replied, "Bank se loan milgaya baas kuch aur chezon ka inthizam karna padega and I'll be on my way off."

"Tho tum Mukti jaise ladkiyon ke saath kya kar rahe ho?" Angad asked casually running his hands down Malishka's back, "Tume koi aur chahiye. Someone who knows the page 3 world and bussiness associates, jo tume contacts develop karne main madath karte hai."

"Angad muje all ready kafi contacts hai lekin main apni kaam ke silsile main nahi personally Mukti se milne aaya tha." he replied touching Mukti's hand comfertingly an action Malishka did not miss. Nither did Angad, who once again miss took it, "Tho aap ke haath madam ke upar kya kar rahe hai?"

"She's my friend Angad and at the moment muje uspar tharas aah raha hai ke vo aap ke behen hai." Rudr replied pulling Mukti along as they went out. He was fumming when Mukti was in tears who knows what she had to face when she got home. Rudr practically threw her on the bike when they came out, "He talks to you like that and you don't say a word Mukti yahan ho kya raha hai?"

"Angad undonon ka beta hai Rudr main sirf baanji." she replied hanging her head, "Waise maine bahoth pehele he Angad ke saamne chup rehna seek liya."

"I really feel bad for you Mukti." Rudr replied getting on the bike...

Kirshi

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"I really feel bad for you Mukti." Rudr replied getting on the bike, Mukti did not respond as they drove away, inside she was dreading the lecture she was going to have from Naina. It was always like this, Angad would come and spoil his own date and the blame would be placed on Mukti. Naina never listened to her... she never would ever that much she knew. What's the use of even trying to get her to listen when she felt there was nothing wrong her darling son could do? Tears filled her eyes at the very thought of it but she wipped it away before anyone could notice. Rudr tried to lighten up the situation and asked Mukti, "Hay aaj shaam ek party hai dad ke kuch associates ke saath hamare farm house main. Would you like to join in?"

"I'm comming uncle invited me over two weeks ago, Naina aunty ko bhi inform kardiya." she added smilling, "Lekin tume madath karna padega outfit decide karne main?"

"Done." he replied turning the bike towards Khanna mansson. Half an hour latter in Mukti's room Rudraksh was looking through some of Mukti's clothes to decide what she coud use for the party when Mukti was packing (cough - throwing - cough) clothes for the trip. Finally Rudraksh placed two clothes in front of her and asked, "Finalise one of these."

"Yeah... WHAT PAGAL HO KYA? MUJE ANGAD KE BARBI DOLL DATES KE THARA NAHI JAANA." she yelled Rudraksh smiled, "Tum barbi doll nahi lagogi trust me."

"Lekin Rudr..." he placed a finger on her lips, "No excuses tum pehen kar tho deko na yaar tume bahoth pari lagogi."

"Teek hai lekin sirf esiliye kunki tum ne..." he laughed once again picking up his bike keyes, "I'll see you at the party."

"By!" Mukti called as he waved and left leaving Mukti to pack up her stuff. She really did not want to go to Angad's long weekend. It was going to be very long for her after all.

Basu House

Kripa was seated on the swing in the garden dressed in a long pink dress with a white top reading a story book. She was so immersed in the book that the whole world around her was rediced to nothing when suddenly, "KRIPA!"

"Aah!" she dropped her book, "Yudi ka bacha deko main tera kya haal..."

Both of them began running around and Kripa tripped over a hose pipe Prem began laughing holding his stomatch. "Aabe..."

Kripa smiled seeing the watter flotting out of the pipe picking it up she sprayed it all over Prem with full forice, "KRIPA - AARE YAAR KAR KYA RAHI HO TUM?"

"Apni badla le rahi hoon." she laughed making him wet compleatly letting him yell and shout as she ran away with Prem on her heals. They reached the sofa where Prem tackled Kripa down and began tickilling her like anything. "P-re-prem-em. B-ba-an-k-r-ro." She begged between laughs as he finally let her go, "Coffee hojay?"

"Sure. Main banai hoon tum kuch chocolate sandwitches tho banao." he nodded, "Tum kal kya kar rahi ho Kripa?"

"Main shopping ja rahi hoon collage ke liye." she replied, Prem sighed, "Muje aab bhi samaj main nahi aaraha hai ke tume fashion desighing kyun lena tha."

"Kyunki muje vo field pasand hai waise jaise tume hospital mannagement pasand hai." she replied placeing the coffee powder in the machine and switching it on, "Teek hai baba... lekin tume kaal apne liya shopping kyun jaana padega."

"Shopping apne liye nahi hamare liya tumhare liye bhi aur tume aana padega. Deko tumhare purane kapde kaise bilkul fade hogaye hai?" she aksed pulling them, "Aur uske upar tume digital notepad bhi lena padega uske saath saath pen drive aur c.d's bhi. Aur hume kya kuch nahi karidna hai."

"Janta hoon baba." Prem sighed, "Teek hai hum shopping chalenge."

"Good boy jao aur naha kar aao jaldi." she kissed Prem on the cheek and went to change her self. Prem sighed and changed into a pair of black jeans along with a white baggy t-shirt and a black cap before spraying himself with some perfume-deo. Picking up his walet and watch he walked out when his mobile rang, "Yes dad?"

"Prem beta main aur Sam aaj ek dost ko milne ja rahe hai. Tum aur Kripa khalena." Anurag told him, "Actually main aur Kripa shopping ke liya ja rahe the, we'll have something outside. Kya aap baad main mere account main kuch paise daal sakte hai?"

"Sure beta aur haan have fun." Anurag added, "Thanks dad... by... KRIPA JALDI KARO."

"Aare baba aagayi." Prem turned around and shook his head, Kripa was indeed ready in her short dhenim skirt and a white tank top with light makeup and some jwellery. The oufit made her look like an angel but to Prem she was just like another normal girl whatever she wore, "Chale?"

"Haan chalo." Prem took her hand in his and walked out swinging it, to a lay-man's eyes they looked like two sweet friends enjoying a timeout. Deep inside that was what the two of them were, two close friends who spent a lot of time together. In the shopping mall Kripa entered a clothes shop for men and began looking for clothes. "Yudi yeah jeans deko."

"Hmm no kuch aur shades deke?" he aksed, "Teek hai kuch aur desighns dikayie please."

"Kaise chahiye aap ko madam?" the man asked, "Hmm stylish nahi... something he can use for slightly proffestional places."

"Sure ma'am." the salse person showed her some jeans and they selected some. "Kuch shirts dikaye... humm fullsleaved."

"Kiskeliye?" Prem asked, "Dates ke liya duffer you will need something good."

"You select for those muje nahi dekna." Prem replied attending a call, Kripa continued shopping constantly pulling Prem back and seeing how a shirt would look on him, "Nahi yaar... umm tum ise deko."

Half an hour latter they left with three bags with Prem's clothes two medium ones with clothes and a small one with some soxs and laces. Next they went to a cosmetics shops where Prem actually stopped talking and helped Kripa look through the new line of make up that had come up. "Tume yeah kaise lagtha hai?"

"Nahi Disha told me it was not that good... use diyaie?" she requested as the sales person showed her several things and Prem continued to help her with the selection. "Yeah nailpolish?"

"No go for the other shade." he adviced picking up another, "Koi ache perfumes hai?"

Evening Basu House

Prem and Kripa were enjoying pakodas and coffee when a lady in a light brown sari walked in, "Aare tum donon shopping se wapas kaab aaye?"

"Hi nani." Kripa jumped up and kissed her cheeck, "Aabhi aaye the coffee?"

"No thank you beta main baas apni ek nayi kithab ke promotion ke liya kaam kar rahi thi." she replied sitting down. Mohini Basu was a great author and a renound person in the writting world. She was also a person who enjoyed staying up to date with the upcomming activities of the world. A very close friend of Prem and Kripa, "Ithne sare kaam hai esiliye breakfast ko bhi muje apni kamre main kaana pada tha."

"Aap ke novel ko maine pada dadi." Prem replied sipping his coffee, "Vo child abuse discrition aap ko thoda zyada nahi laga aap ko?"

"Zarurath tha." Dadi replied patting Prem on the head, "Kripa tum apni packing kaab shuru karogi?"

"Jaakar karna tho padega nani..." Kripa cribbed cuddling into her grandmother, "Muje tho packing aur unpacking tho bilkul pasand nahi hai."

Mohini kissed her on the head softly and replied, "Bilkul apni maa par gayi ho tum."

Prem got up, "Chalo kaaf hogaya cuddling aab chale? Hame bhi kaam hai sis."

"Chalo bro..." she replied stretching her body as she got up and left to pack up their things.

Khanna Mansion - Mukti's Room


Mukti was sitting and writting when some one came and knocked the door, "Come in."

"Mukti beta I need to talk to you..." she cut her off, "Aunty coffee shop main Angad ne kuud aaya I did not invite him. Aap please isbaar bhi inzam mujpar maath daliye."

"I don't want you to spoil his weekend Mukti. Please is baath ka kyaal rakna, aur waise maji tho esbaath paar kafi zid kar rahi hai." Mukti nodded, "If you don't mind muje kaam hai."

"Teek hai I'll see you latter aur haan aaj main aur Deepak bahar ja rahe hai." she added, "Ek party hai..."

"Enjoy your time waise muje bhi aaj ek party attend karni thi." she added casually contining to write Naina did not comment on it and left the room muttering about how spoilt Mukti was as well as how she was so insensitive. What she did not know was that the party Mukti was talking about was her party for getting the medical collage seat in one of the most happening disco's halls.

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Promo: A new twist aur muje bahoth sare responses chahiye
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hey great part... i feel so sorry for mukti..continue soon..
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Awesome!!!! I loved it!! Cont soon. Hope AK meet soon.

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