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Posted: 16 years ago
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Prithvi? No ways!!! sorry but it is Prem and Mukti - Prithvi does have a very strong relationship with Mukti but you will have to wait to see what it really is... it is kind of different and no it is not a brother sister kind...
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"Thanvi aunty Mukti ke docter hai Angad." Aarman replied moving away from Kripa as he needed to give Angad some advice. Kripa decided to look in to a few shops nearby. A particular aaroma shop caught her eye and she was looking at the window. There were various bottles, candles and even incence sticks in the shop, mesmarised by the colours Kripa did not notice a woman and a girl walking out of the shop holding a bag of purchases. Nither did the girl as she was deep in converation with the woman. Both of them bumped into each other, "Sorry maine aap ko nahi dheka."

"That's all right, main bhi notice nahi kiya ke main kahan ja rahi thi." Kripa replied when Aarman yelled, "MUKTI tum yahan kya kar rahi ho, Thanvi aunty? Namasthe."

"Hello beta maine hi Mukti ko yaha lekr aayi thi." she replied, "Aroma therepy ki zarurath jo thi ise aare beta muje ghar jaana hai. Tum Mukti ka kyal rakna teek hai?"

"Sure aunty have a nice day." he replied taking Mukti's hand in his, "Bol tu kaisi hai?"

"Teek hoon thoa thaki lekin teek hoon." he smiled, "Good tho tum recover hone lagi ho, aur haan Mukti yeah hai Kripa aur Kripa yeah hai Mukti."

"Hi Kripa, aap ke baare main kafi suna maine lekin pehli baar mil rahi hoon." Mukti offered her hand, Kripa shook it with a smile, "Same, lekin ek shikayath hai ke Aarman ne kabhi yeah nahi bathaya ke tum kithne khuubsurath ho."

Mukti blushed and looked down, indeed she was dressed in a knee length yellow knee length skirt with a black sleaveless top with cute yellow jwellery and black shoes with yellow socks to go with them. Aarman inturupted them, "Bas bas Mukti tume ghar jaana chahiye aur aaram karna chahiye. Chalo!"

"Lekin biya main aabhi aabhi Kripa se mili hoon." he shook his head firmly, "No main aaj use ghar lekar aathi hoon, sham lekin tume aaram karna chahiye."

"Uum teek hai, Kripa zaurur aana." the girls bid goodby and left the place, Kripa smiled at Aarman, "Tho yeahi hai tumhari Mukti?"

"Haan yahi hai Mukti Khanna." he replied, "She's everything you described her to be waise ke wasie kafi pyari bhi hai."

"Hai pyari lekin kafi katharnak bhi." Kripa looked suprised, "Katharnak?"

"Ithni badi prankster hai ke vo Prem ko bhi bholi dikayegi." Kriap laughed, "Really?"

"Haan lekin ek baath hai, dance kafi achi karthi hai." he replied, "Tune tho Mukti ko kabhi ghar ke functions main nahi deka tab patha chalega ke madam kya cheez hai." Nither of them noticed a man reading the newspaper but he lowered it and said, "Haan tum tho nahi janthe ho ke Mukti Khanna kya cheez hai meri jaan lekin main tho jantha hoon!"

That man called some one and said, "Boss Mukti ne mall se nikal gayi hai aur ghar ja rahi hai. Haan ji usne vo saab karidliya. Teek hai, aadab."

Mumbai Airport

Two people, a man dressed in a dark grey bussiness sute and a woman dressed in a pink cotton sari walked out of the airport pulling their trolly in front of them filled with baggage. The man was speaking on the phone, "Haan beta hum pahonch gaye hai,flit tho kafi acha tha. She's fine, teek hai baad main baath karthe hai."

"Bache kaise hai?" Parvathi asked, "Teek hai, saab apne apne kaam par pade hue hai."

"Good aise he hona chahiye." Parvathi retorted as they got into a cab and Bajaj told him to drive to the Taj. "Maine hamare purane dosthon ko phone kar diya aur information manga."

"I know and I hope tume yaad hai ke hum sach main kiske liye aaye hai." he added, "Haan baba muje yaad hai. Excuse me, phone call, haan kahiye Mr. Basu."

Krishi
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey great part.. continue soon
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"I know and I hope tume yaad hai ke hum sach main kiske liye aaye hai." he added, "Haan baba muje yaad hai. Excuse me, phone call, haan kahiye Mr. Basu."

"Ms. Parvathi, sare kaam plan ke muthabik ja rahe hai. Koi problem nahi hai." he replied, "Excellent, aap jaise koi nayi kabhar aathi hain muje phone karke phone kiye."

"Zarur, aur haan Deshpande ne do din pehele phone kiye, Mukti ke case main kuch naya findings hai." Parvathi nearly dropped the phone, "Kaise kabhar?"

"Case saach main close nahi hua hai, kisi ne request kiya ke duniya ke liye vo close hojay." he replied, "There is an under ground investigation going on, jo bhi hai uska network kafi acha hai aur ek aur baath important hai. Unlogon ko request kiya koi jo case main kaafi involved hai ise zyade information nahi mila."

"Jaise aap ko kuch aur patha chaltha hai muje bolo." she turned to Bajaj and told him, "Typically her style of working, vo bhi bilkul aise he karthi thi apni kaam."

"You don't think Mukti is like her do you?" Baja shook his head, "No I don't think so I know so! Mukti kaafi baath main apni ma par gayi hai."

"Point, so hamare plan ke muthabik..." Bajaj finnished, "Nahi ja sakthe hai use patha chal jayega hame kisi aur methord use kara padega. Mrs. Basu ne kaha ke use jogging karne ke aathad hai right?"

"Haan, aur sports main kaafi interest bhi hai." Parvathi replied, "Aur muje patha hai ke use kaise hamare kareeb lekar aa sakthe hai."

Khanna House (Angad's Room)

Angad was watching a movie laying on the bed, Anita was fastasleep next to him. Being so engrosed in the moive he did not notice Mukti knocking the door but he did look up when she called his name, "Mukti kuch chahiye kya? Can I get you anyting?"

"Nahi main baas tumse yea keheni aayi ke main thode deer ke liye bahar jaa rahi hoon." Angad looked at the time, "Lekin is waqth? Lunch leekar jao na."

"Acutally main lunch ke liye he ja rahi hoon, apne friend ke ghar par." she added, Angad simply nodded before patting Anita's eyes again as she stired a bit making her go back to sleep. "Teek hai, wapas kaab aaogi tum?"

"Shaam thak, muje apne dosth ke party attend karna hai." she shrugged, Angad did not say anything, there was nothing he could do about it and he knew so! He only watched as Mukti went out... he wanted to so badly reach out to the girl. He was so deep in thought that he did not here the phone ring first but jerked and picked it up, "Hi Karthick, kya hua yaar?"

"Angad how about you and me have dinner outside, aaj mum aur dad ko ek party atend karna padega." he nodded, "Sure kahan jayenge?"

"La Vaisas ek nayi italian restaurent hai, chale?" Angad muttered an ok, "Great got to go meeting."

"Have fun." he replied, "Will do, meeing Disha Khandar ke saath hai."

"Dhisha Khandar, come on bro that is being plane mean aap saach main use milne ja rahe hai?" Karthick laughed, Dhisha was one person Angad had a crush on for the longest time, he loved teasing the boy like anything for it. "Autograph lekar aaun tereliye?"

"Can you seriously bai?" he begged, "Haan baba lekar aatha hoon don't worry."

Khanna Enterprise

Karthick walked into the conference room buttoning up his light brown jacket ready to face the big time model, "Good afternoon Ms. Khandar."

"Good afternoon Mr. Khanna, kaise hai aap aaj?" she asked, "Ji teek hoon aur aap?"

"Main bhi teek hoon tho kaam shuru kare?" he nodded pulling out the file, "Yeahi hai aap ke contract aap pad sakthe hai aur agar koi quiestions hai tho aap muje puch sakthe hai."

"Ji maine aap ke pure contract pad liya aur haan muje aap ke pariwar ke baare main kaafi ache thara patha hai. Muje aap ke company ke bussiness technique bhi. Meri ek saheli aap ke pariwar ke member jo hai."

Krishi
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi guys,

I've been facing loads of changes in my life for the last 8 months. That should explain the rare updates, it's just that from a world of nothing more than the net I'm going to the other extreem. This is to a point where I hardly watch the programs such as DMG and any dance show even if I want to due to lack of time. Not to mention totally stressed out, that's the reason I write to de-stress, a few more responces would be nice and I promise from the next few parts on the story gets a twist.

Love,

Krishi

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Posted: 16 years ago
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really nice update! I just started following it and I love how you have protrayed all the relationships!!!

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"Main bhi teek hoon tho kaam shuru kare?" he nodded pulling out the file, "Yeahi hai aap ke contract aap pad sakthe hai aur agar koi quiestions hai tho aap muje puch sakthe hai."

"Ji maine aap ke pure contract pad liya aur haan muje aap ke pariwar ke baare main kaafi ache thara patha hai. Muje aap ke company ke bussiness technique bhi. Meri ek saheli aap ke pariwar ke member jo hai."

"Kaun Aaliya?" he asked, "Nahi main aap ke cosin Mukthi ke baare main bol rahi hoon."

"Mukthi? Aap Muktthi ko kaise janthe hai?" She smiled, "Ithni aachi thara nahi actually maine kabhi kabhi kuch parties main deki."

"Kiski party main?" he really felt suprised, "Heera Malik, uske kuch parties main, janthi nahi use uthna lekin baath tho hua hai. Any ways kaam katham karle waise muje kuch kaam ke liye jaana hai."

"Sure, please." they went through the contract quickly and finnished their work and sighed the contract. At the end of it Karthcik sighed and leaned back, frustrated he picked up the phone and called his secratory, "Mere koi aur important meeting hai?"

"Nahi sir, aap ko sirf kuch projects dekna chahiye." she replied, "Teek hai saab ko pack karke mere gaadi main bijwado, aur ek strong cup of tea chahiye. Mint ke saath."

"Aabhi karthi hoon sir." she replied turning to the man, Karthcik sat in his office and kept turning his paper weight, he had only one thought in his head, Nahi main aap ke cosin Mukthi ke baare main bol rahi hoon anger was beginging to pulse through his body at the embaresment and lack of information. It was finally her fault, it was because of her that all this happened, Sipping his tea he brought the image of the woman's suprise and the way she waved of the subject understanding the lack of communication. He could not do that tough, he was insulted badly in front of that new model!

Mukti's Room

Karthcik walked into Mukti's room searching for her, "Mukti? Mukti tum kahan ho?"

"Babua, Mukti bitiya ghar par nahi hai." the servent replied, "Kahan hai vo?"

"Ji vo bahar gayi hai." he replied, "Teek hai, main use phone kartha hoon. Hello, Mukti kahan ho tum?"

"Karthick main apni kuch dosth ke saath hoon kuch kaam hai?" he took a deep breath, "Wapas kaab lautogi."

"Kaafi deer hojayega, agar kuch kaam hai tho aabhi bathayie." she replied, "Teek hai, jab tum wapas aathe ho mujse aakar milna, jo koi bhi waqth hai."

"Teek hai b- Yaash!" he heared her yell, there in the shopping mall Mukti yelled to her friend and waved, "Hai sweeti looking good."

"You too, so yeah bolo meri decorations kaisi hai?" she asked not aware of the line still being open, "Great, tho kuch madath chahiye?"

"Haan actually phool nahi aaye." she replied, "I'm on the job milady."

"Jaaz honey hamare khanna ke thiyari kaise ja rahe hai?" she asked, "So far so good, vo loog tho waqth main lekar aayenge use so no problem."

"Perfecto, servers ke saath right?" she asked, "Ofcouse dear, aur haan tumhare liye ek package aaya hai."

"Package mere liya yahan? Ky Thanks!" Karthcik had enough and cut the line, Mukti went to collect the package, "Thank you! Hai kise yeah... aare yeah tho, how nice of aunty. Main use baad main thank you bolthi hoon."

"Prithvi aab Janvi ke dress bhi thiyar hai, aunty ne bijwadiya." she handed it over to Prithvi who took it and nodded, "Great everything is going according to plan. Abhi abhi phone aaya Yaash se vo DJ se baath karliya aur use lekar yahan aa raha hai, ek do gante main pahonch jayenge."

"Iska matlab hai hai ke Janvi ke aana se at least ek ghante pehela saab thyar hoga right?" Mukti and Privhvi exchanged high fives, "Right, ar use bhi achi baath yehi hai ke aathe hi use ek supise party diya jayega."

"Dena tho padega, usne tho kithna bada kaam kya no wonder UN use ithna bada award de rahe hai." they were inturupted by Dhamini coming and telling them to do a few things, "Mukti tum yeah decorations jalthi daalo phir chalo aur natraj ke jo murthi order kia use lekar aana. Raj tere saath aayega beta. Prthiva, tume jakar vo gift lekar aana padega."

"Right mom." he agreed, "I hope use mere selection pasand aajay."

"Pasand aayega use don't worry. Aaj jao jaldi." he rushed to get the gift and Mukti laughed, "Aunty lagtha hai aaj Prithvi aaj bhi use uthna he chahatha hai jaise pehele."

"Zya bolo beta, pehle se bhi zyada." Dhamini corected her and Mukti nodded, "Aunty Sunaina kahan hai? Use tho aaj aana tha na?"

"Vo apne ek cosin ke shadi ke liya jaana tha." Dhamini replied trying to hide her disapoinment that Sunania was so close with Mukti, "Haan bhool gayi thi."

"Aare yeah kya kar rahe ho? Aise nahi... pink colour sheet ko pehele dikana padega phir cream, aise tiwst karo." she insturcted, "Sorry Mukti any ways yeah tho akri decorations hai."

"That's ok, kardo phir clean karna shuru kardenge." the boys agreed and Mukti went up to hand the last few decorations before going with Raj to collect the Natraj statue. When she was waiting for the men to get the statue a woman dressed in a formal dress stopped in the shop, "Excuse me, hamare ek bulk order ke liye aaye hai, kise baath karna padega?"

"Ji aap?" the salse person asked, "Mrs. Misti Khanna, Bose enterprises ke vice-president."

Mukti turned around, "Misti aap yahan?"

"Hai mere bacha, kase ho tum?" she asked hugging Mukti tightly, "Main teek hoon, aap kaise hai?"

"Main bhi teek hoon aaj subhan main lauti London se aru patha chala madam phir se goomne ke liye chale gaye the. Ek dhin bhi ghar par teherna terie liye tho na mumkun hai." she accused, "Ji aise kuch bhi nahi main ghar par baiti baiti kya karun?"

"Kyun chupane ke ke koshish karthi ho, janthi hoon ghar ka kyal." she added, "Aaj raath party hai?"

"Ji haan." Mukti replied, Misti though concerned never pushed her luck with Mukti, especially after she married Kartick, "Teek hai, zyada deer maath karna, agar koi problem hua tho apne koi dosth ke saath teherlo lekin please message bijwado."

"Karthi hoon." she replied, "Ms. Khanna, aap ke package."

"Thank you, by Misti." she waved and left the building, Mukti stood around longer looking for a possible gift that could be given.

Evening - the house of the party

Prithvi drove into the front drive with a young girl sitting on his side, "Chalo get down main tumhai bags lekar aatha hoon."

"Teek hai." she replied pushing her long hair back revieling green eyes, opening the door she placed a foot out revealing high heals and a knee length pink skirt and a cute little white tank top. She placed her hand out showing a set of white and pink bangles dangling...

Krishi
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Evening - the house of the party

Prithvi drove into the front drive with a young girl sitting on his side, "Chalo get down main tumhai bags lekar aatha hoon."

"Teek hai." she replied pushing her long hair back revieling green eyes, opening the door she placed a foot out revealing high heals and a knee length pink skirt and a cute little white tank top. She placed her hand out showing a set of white and pink bangles dangling she looked very devine with a great influence of being mordern with a machurity of age. Going up the stairs and opened the door when the lights came on and everyone shouted, "Surprise Tani!"

A large smile appeared on the girl's face, Taniya Bose, Dhamini's brother-in-laws daughter and Prithvi's cosin. (Played by Kashish of Kai Na Kai Tho Hoga) A woman who has just finnished her MBA in U.K with very good marks and an internship in a top company and got absorbed there. Despite this top class, success oriented outside inside Taniya was a woman with a secret that always stayed that way, a secret.

Mukti was among the first to come and huged the woman tightly, "Congradulations sis, main aap ke liya bahoth kush hoon."

"Thanks, let me buss, eyah party tumhari idea thi?" she asked hugging her back, "Haan actually maine socha ke aap ke liye kuch karun."

"Congradulations on the medical seat." Tani replied, "Aap kaise janthe hai?"

"I know manny things about you love, maine kisi ko promis kiya tha ke tumhari kyal rakungi." she added with a gentle smile. "Why don't we start rocking this pary? Hay D.J got some good moves ready?"

"Right on." he replied and started playing the songs for them to dance to, mostly Tani's favorite songs thanks to Prithvi. After two dances Mukti stepped out of the room saying there was a phone cal she was getting, "Abhi lauthi hoon... hello?"

"It's me, kaise ho?" there was a male voice on the other end, "Teek hoon, party main hoon by the way thanks case ko ithni aasani se close karne ke liye."

"Manthri saab mo mere liye ek favour karna baaki tha." he replied, "Acha hua hope vo tho waste nahi hua tha."

"Nahi, your much more presious than anything dear, aur haan main tumhari eighteenth birthday may ek car present karne ke baare main soch raha hoon. Kuch models main tume email main bijwa raha hoon, apne pasand ko bolo phir specifics ke baare main dekthe hai."

"Hay uske koi zarurath nahi hai, I know vo thode expensive honge I mean..." he cut her off, "Nisha you are our lucky charm, tume hum jithna kush rakenge hume uthna profit milega, vo sirf mere dad ke sentiment nahi mera bhi hai."

"Janthi hoon iseliye apne limits main thoda strong hoon." she replied, "Please Nisha hamare beech limits ke baath maath karo."

"MUKTI - AARE YAAR KAHAN HO TUM?" someone yelled, "Lagtha hai muje koi bula raha hai, got to go."

"Take care Nisha." she ecoed those words and cut the line ready to cut the head of who ever inturupted, "Kya hai Taniya? Bas ek phone atend karne aayi thi."

"Sorry love, lekin kya tum andar aasakthi ho? Yahan kafi tandi hai." she replied, "Yeah, listen main thak gayi hoon, going home."

"Need some one to give you a ride?" she asked, "Nahi I'll mannage."

Khanna House (Karthick's room)


Karthick stood by the window waiting for Mukti to return, a sports bike pulled up in front of the door and Mukti hopped of the bike and went into the house using her keys. Karthicik quckly walked down pulling his robes over him. "Hi Mukti!"

"Karthick aap ne muje daradiya. You were serious about the chat right?" she asked, he nodded, "Yeah, would you like some coffee?"

"Sounds good." she replied, "Great go wash up, kapde change karke aao, tab thak main coffee bana detha hoon."

"Thanks!" she went into her room when her mobile rang, "Hi biya."

"Hi baby sorry aaj main kafi bussy tha." Mukti smiled, "That's ok biya hum kal tho mil rahe hai right? Bahoth miss kar rahi hoon main aap ko."


"Main bhi love, actually main yehi soch raha... why don't you spend the whole day with me tommorow?" Mukti got exited, "Sachi breakefast se lekar?"

"Haan lekin you won't have my compleat attention." he added, "Koi baath nahi, muje baas aap ke saath waqth bithana hai."

Krishi

YES YOU GUSSED IT NEXT episode Mukti and Prem meet.


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