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Posted: 16 years ago
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t's gr8 both parts were gr8 but plz put it in same thread
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi guys this is m next part n pls do tell m how boring it is

n A BIG THANK U FR ALL UR BEAUTIFUL COMMENTS

RECAP : sia entry n dharam feels bad when he see sis weeping

N Here Dharam goes silently inside the palace ...he was searching for sia....who was sitting far away on the couch watches the dancers .....she had stopped weeping ...

n other rajkumaaries were looking at her but no body went near her . Dharam wondering why goes near her.....Veer's gang was trying to do their usual mischief . but veer was noting his bro's behavior ....................

Dharam goes to sia n smiles : Mai ....Mai .... rajkumaar dharam hoon ........vo aaj mera he janam....din ..hai ....

sia (smiles at his innocence ) N GOD Dharam's heart was going to burst.........
..


She moves bit aside n asks him to sit beside he was so handsome n calm she couldn't let him stand n disrespect him''

She turns to him n says : mai nahi janti thi kit tum hi rajkumaar Dharam ho'''vo'' tumse kabhi mile nahi na isliye '. Mujhe nahi pata ki tumhe aur tumhare bhai Agni ko kya pasand hai''.

She takes out the gift which she has got fr them from near by'..

Sia : yeh tumhare liya'.

Dharam takes It n looks at her graceful face smiling: shukriyaa'..

Taking it n wondering what it could be '. But what ever it is '..it is really precious for him''

D : vayse app yehan akeli kyun bathi hain? Appka koi doost nahi hai kya yahan? ''..

Sia ( enthusiastically) n with attitude : nahi mera koi doost nahi hai yeha 'main kise arye ' gayer ko apna dost nahi banati'.aur vayse bhi mujhe kese dost ki jaroorat nahi hai''.

DL felt bit awkward : meri bahen aur jootikaa ( her another frd) hi meri sabse doost hai '..aur unki jagha koi nahi lesakta'.

D( turns to her disagreeing her ) : nahi ayse thodi hi hota hai '.ase bhi to hoo sakta hai ke app apne kisi khas doost ko kho rahi hoo'

Sia turning to him angrily( bit loudly) : Ayse nahi ho sakta '. Aur vayse bhi mai tum se yeh se yeh sab kyun kah rahi hoon'..

Dharam thought hr messed every thing : mai'. mai to bas uhi keh raha tha '. Mera appke dil ko jhot pahuchane ka koi matlab nahi tha''.

Sia ( still angry): toh theek hai ''Tum kya chahate ho aur kya nahi iyse mujhe koi farak nahi padta '.. Behtar hoga agar tum apne kaam se kaam rakho'..

She goes away frm him'.

Dharam was feeling very hurt nobody ever spoke to him like this '''he was only trying to do frdship vit her but sheeeeee'''''

He was feeling as though he had lost some dear one '..he was looking onto her who sitting away on the couch n was sometimes glancing at dharam angrily '''''.

Sia:Here was confused that y did she tell him all these things y did she even speak to him'.. she never normally speaks to a stranger '.that also soooo sweetly?/////////////

Veer vas observing Dharam from long time n calls his frds nfinding him alone n sad he goes to him''. He keeps his hand on dharams shoulder

He turns back n smiles at him..sadly'..

V: kya hua dharma?????? (in serious tone)kya use rajkumaari ne kuch kaha hai'''

D: nahi toh bas ase he''

Sanjam ( sarcastically):Kyun kahin tumne use appna dil to nahi de dyaaaa'.

Chand pokes him'.

V: Agar kuch nahi hua to tum etne udaas kyun hoooo//////////

Pundeer( folding his sleeves ) agar use ne kuch aysa vasa kaha toh mai uski'''''

D: Nahi pundeer '. Ismai unki koi galti nahi hai '.vo main e he use kuch jyda suna diya'.

Everybody looks at each other

D tells everything'.

V: Dharam tum hamesha ayse he karteho '.tum apna koi ghatiya sa bhashankyun dete ho''''?

Pundeer: koi baat ho yeh na ho lakin tumhare paas lamba chauda bhashan jaroor tyaar hoota hai'.

Arjun : aadat se jo majboor haaiiiiii''''

Veer: abb bas karo tum sab''''..( every body taken aback'..they knew this tone of veer'''which was reall serious n determind'''''thy were not allowed to cross it '.)

V: looking at D: tumhe usse pyaar toh nahi ho gaya hai na??????????

D:looking into his bro's eyes n smiling lightly: pata nahi veer'..lakin vo mujhe pasand hai '''.( D knew that he actually liked the girl'..or may be he likes her more than liking''..looking down again )

Mai unhe'..(n stops)''

Veer cannot let this happennnnnnnnn'''''.

PRECAP: dharam: mujhe unse milna hai baat karni hai ,,,,,,

Sia hugs him'''''''.



thank u all fr ur comments n inspiring mee..........








Edited by junglli billi - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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youve got a great fanfic update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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mind blowing plz cont....
esha
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Posted: 16 years ago
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great goin love...cool update! im xcitd abt ur ur precap! Sia forgave him :S xxx
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Posted: 16 years ago
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xoxcuddlesxox




thanks a loads ssssssssssssssss buddy
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hiri


Thank uuuuuuuuuuuuuu soooooooooooo much fr uu comment

Edited by junglli billi - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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CutieA

thans a load m sweety cutie Pi ................
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Posted: 16 years ago
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reserved...
wll comment later dear..
actually i was waiting for all parts together.....
thanks for posting them here..
also ask lashy di to update d link..😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Rash2cool

THANK UUUU n do comment in future too buddy

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