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Posted: 17 years ago
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HI BUDDIES I M BACK WITH M NEXT PART😉

PART:6

RECAP: DHARAM TROUBLES SIA ''''' BY GIVING HIS COOL LECTURE😆

v: (cannot let this happen cannot let his bro to be sad on his birthday ........)
he knew that his bro was falling in love or may be fell in to it ...n would never joke in these matters ......
V:(sitting beside on the couch ..............in dharam): bolo dharam kya chahiya tuhmhe ......?
Sanjam : hai dharam tum jo kuch bhi mangoe thumhe ajj milega ...tumhare janamdin ke tofe ke roop mai ...........
Dharam looking into his determined frds face says: mai unse baat karna chata hoon .....unse dosti karna chahata hoon..... par vo to .....
V : vo sab tum hum pe chod do.....hum koi n koi tekhdam(martar or magic ) karke use manalenge....bas tum vohe karo jo hum kehte hai
D:rukoooo......... ( in what r u going to do look )
Chand : bharosa rakho dharam ....
Arjun:hum tumhari pari ko kahi nahi lejayenge'.

Sanjum : vayse bhi vo humme bilkul pasand nahi hai '.

Everybody starts going away from there 'to make a plan

Veer: dharam tumne to kaha tha ki tumhari raajkumaari susheel honi chaheye'.

Dharam:blushing slightly:abb vo meri kab se hogayi'.? Mai to bas unhe pasand karta hoon'.pyaar nahi'

Veer : in his mind: samay ' samay ki baat hai dharam''.jab ho jayega bada maza ayega'

Sia :there found her old frd jootikaa '..she is also very pretty n sweet'not lik other raajkumaaries 'they were chatting sitting ..

Veer n gang comes down' as sia speaking to jotikaa a dasi goes there '.

Dasi: raajkumaari sia app se koi milna chahata hai'

Sia: koi'.????? Uska koi naam nahi hai kya?

Dasi(frightened): ji '..vo,''

Sia (makes up her mind ) : theekhai chalo''.

Jotikaa: pulls her down: tum theek to ho na sia ?

Kahan jaa rahi ho tum'veer n his toil was hiding behind the curtain near by '..n dharam was standing away in some channel type of way,,,,,,,

Veer: mai is e nahi chodunga'.

Pundeer : sia to uthke anne hi vali thi '.lakin yeh ladki'..( in frustration)

Sia : kyun kya hua??
Jotikaa :tumhe nahi pata ?? ki is tarah kesi ke bulane par nahi jana cahiye'..aur aryanagar mai to bilkul bhi nahi'.
Sia : kyun?
Jotikaa:hai kyun ki yeha ke rajkumaar aur unke doost bohut shaytaan hai '..Yahan tumhe bohut savdaan rehna hoga ''
Arjun:mujhe lagta hai 'ki abb tumhe bach ke rahna hoga ''.
(uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu)
veer: kuch na kuch to karma padega abb'
.veer calls the dasi backn says something to her n she goes ''
veer goes ahead '..coming out of hiding ''
Arjun: trying to catch him'.: veer kahan jaa rahe ho tum?
Veer: abhi batata hoon''(turning n smiling graciously )
He goes near the two chatting girls 'n asks Jotikaa with a charming smile on his face '.

Veer: rajkumaari jootikaa ji mai hoon rajkummar veer ji mujhe appse kuch baat karni thi''. Kya app mare saath baahar aasakti hain??????
Veer knew he had done it cleverly'..he knew it that he was so charming that '..he could make any girl fall with him'n his akhiri teer was his killing smile'..
Jotikawas beautiful herself ''.when she saw veer her heart started pounding heard
Nnn her brain stopped working'.he is such a dashing guy ''..how could she refuse him'still loking at him she gets up '. N looks at sia
Jotikaa: mai abhi atti hoon''''.
Sia (confused) : par''

N leaves with veer

Dasi: rajkumaari sia 'apkoo koi sandesh dene aaya hai'.
Sia: to le avo'
Dasi nahi '.rajkumaariji'. vo sandesh vaahak sirf appko sandesh dena chahata hai
Sia (confused ) ': theek hai '..
She goes there '..
Veer was walking far from them'with jotikaa'.
Veer glances at his frds 'n signals'.they pushes pundeer front into the channel'.( where dharma was hiding'.)
For them always pundeer was the easy person to hold on coz'.he was not interested in girls'..at all'.n'there was no need a=of making an image or impressing'.. any one so''
Pundeer:to sia: rajkumaari sia '..Aayiyee - ayiyee mai app'.hi 'ka'intazaar kar raha tha'.
Sia :turning : kya'''' kyun ho tum? Aur '.aur kya' chahate ho yum?
Pundeer walking straight into the channel'' to her'.in a sarcastic way'.(like a gunda rajkumaar'..)
Sia:bit frightened :kaun ho tum'..aur 'aur 'kya' cahate ho tum????? Mujhe yahan kyun bulaya'..???
Pundeer bit confused '.n she is so pretty he didn't want to hurt her 'or make her weep: vo mai '.tum kyun ''..kahan '.aur''
Dharam vas hiding behind the curtain n was getting very angry'..
N veers frds were hiding on the other side of it ..
Sanjum:yeh pundeer kya kar raha hai'..
Chand : pagal ho gaya hai yeh'.Rajkumaari ko dekh ke'.
Arjun:agar iski vajha se hummari yojana kharaab hui toh mai isko appne snaan ghar mai duba 'duba ke maarunga '.nahi''eysa karne se to mere snaan ghar ganda hogayega''Me to ise kitched mai'..duba kar'.
Sanjam: bas karo '..
Sia :comes to halt she recalls jotikaa's talk about Aryanagar's'rajkumaars'.)
As pundeer was also wearingrajkumaarr's costume'.she thought 'if this is any prank played on her then she wont leave them'.
in a bold sort of voice)kya chaheye tumhe ????....... aur dekho'..LSia
Pundeer(coming to sense he should not be so smooth to her'.):tum'.
Sia shouts :kya????????
Pundeer(in tough voice n moving towards her'.): jabse tumhe dekha hai'/ dil mai kuch kuch hota hai''
Sia (walking backward): tum'.mere..paas mat anna'.varna mai'.
Pundeer: varna kya????karogi..tum'..yehan to koi bhi nahi hai'..na tumhare pitaji'..aur nahi tumhari vo '..gumnaam behen'..
Sia : tumhe m'..meri'..behan ke bare mai kyse pata chela'.

Pundeer himself don't know y he he said it or may be he knew'' it would come'.to frighten him she would definitely say that'.
Pundeer : tum uske chodo aur appne bare mai socho''..socho raajkumaari''''''''..kabse mai tumhe bula raha tha aur tum ho ke mere paas aa he nahi rahi thi'.
Sia : matlab'.tumne juht bola'.
Dharam was getting worried '..seeing her frightened like this''
Pundeer: hain'to''.abb to tum bhi yahi ho'.to bataavo mai kaysa lagta hoon tumhe''dekhne mai'..
Arjun: slowly: bavakuuf sa'.(n gives five to chand.)
Sia : mai kyun bataauuu
Pundeer :reaches her n stands exactly infront of her '..
Pundeer: kyunki mai '. Tum se shaadi karme vala hoon'
Sia (frightened ''shouting'..)kya?????
Pagal ho gaye ho tum''..janne do mujhe'.
Then she turns to walk back'.
Pundeer's hands were trembling'.to do this but any thin for veer ,,,'..he holds her hand'.
Sia :starts weeping'. :dekho tum '.chod do'..mujhe''.dekho 'tum''.
Pundeer: dekh he to raha hoon'

Dharam could n't bear this '''how could he let her weep'..or hurt her because of his selfishness'..
Sia was struggling'
Sia chado,'''''cha=odo mujhe'..
Arjun : bas kuch daer aur pundeer'..bas dharam ke anne ki dari hai''
Dharma wants to end this'. He comes out'.
In tensed voice ,,,,,,,,,,Pundeer chood do use'mai kuch nahi cahta''

Chand: is dharma ka demaag to theek hai na '.kya keh raha hai yeh'.
Arjun: yeh sab kuvch beegaad ke rakh de ga'.veer kahan gaya'.chalo hum he kuch karte hain'.

Sia : weeping trys to go near him'..

Dharam : feeling guilty : pundeer chodo unhe'..tum

Pundeer Knows him n cuts him'.:tumduur raho dharam'..yehan tumhara koi kaam nahi hai'..jao yehan se

Dharam thinks cant he understand ''its not right'his lady was weeping'.

Dharam : angrily : pundeer tum'.

Pundeer :signaling dharam.,''to give him( pundeer himself ) a light slap'.

While which sia was looking at dharam'.

Dharam: in frustrastation'.

Pundeer knew it was coming'.n dharam will mess every thing up'.

He slaps dharam withhis free hand'

Sia: dharam'.

Dharam : dekho unhe pundeer mai bilkul maazaak nahi kar raha hun'..bevakuuf'.

Dharam moves forward'to force pundeer '.leave sia'.he didn't want to beat his frd '''for his stupidity'..how can he do that?

But pundeer gives him another blow tightly'.

Dharam in frustration '..gives him a blow'.in return '..thinking'. cant he understand''
Veer n toil were enjoying this seen n laughing'..

Pundeer falls down at dharam's one blow'.n sia also falls with him'.

Sia gets up ,,,,,,,,,,,,,, runs,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, her savor nnnnnnn hugs him''

Dharam was lost when she did that

Sia :was weeping

:dharam '..dharam'..

Dharam : bas 'sia ' mai '..

When pundeer's frds came there Dharam n sia comes to their senses'' n the couple separates ''''''.

:Dharam : pundeer mai' darasal'..

Arjun : acha kia tumne '.dharam'.( while other's were giggling)

Dharam : nahi mujh ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, vo''''

Sanjum: jao dharam'..aur apni sia ko bhi lejao'''..

Chand: varna pata nahiis pundeer jayse loog kahinse tapak na pade'.(sarcastically)'..

N glaring at pundeer who was still on the ground'..nthroughs an angry look at him'. His left eye was all red''''..

They pushed dharam '.n asks him to go''n sia to move'..as dharam turns to ask pundeer sorry'

Then dharam also accompanies her walking thtough the channel but keeping distance '.sia was still weeping a bit '.. she was shocked,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Arjun(smiles naughtily): itne paas lakin itne duur???????

Sanjam : at this throws the show case near by'..

Sia jumps slightly n runs to dharam n holds his arm'..

She did not dare to look back'..n dharam too didn't look back he knew that his frds did it'..

A+S+C gives five happily'.rejoicing'.

When dharam n sia disappers they turns to pundeer''''''''..

''''''''''''Thank u'''''''''''.

Next part next time''''''..

Edited by junglli billi - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#22
oh dear..
one request..
i have already read first two parts..
n i loved them..
but m not able to read it as i can't search the thread..
plz ask lashy di to edit the ff post..
n pass her link of this thread..
so that it would b easy to..find...this thread 😃 🤗
n yes i'll comment again after reading rest parts...😳
Edited by Rash2cool - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg...wah a plan...Veer is veri cheeky...poor punder....lol gettin beaten up by his friend for a girl he doesnt even like haha...wkd!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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it was out standing do cont
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Posted: 17 years ago
#25
Rash2cool
CutieA
hiri


THANKS ALOADS BUDDIES FR U COMMENTS
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Posted: 17 years ago
#26
update soon huni! still waitin to no wah ahppens next...wen is Veer's rajkumari gona cum!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#27
plz update soon...waitin 4 d entry of sia's sis
Edited by silverlinesky - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: CutieA

update soon huni! still waitin to no wah ahppens next...wen is Veer's rajkumari gona cum!



very soon missy but i m afraid it ll take sometime coZ i m bit busy wit m exams........................ i m really sorry fr not replying to ur PM dear .......i m really busy

thanks again fr ur comment ...... i C U missy😉

i think u did not read this part
JTJTYJNAA------ freash part has been updated
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: silverlinesky

plz update soon...waitin 4 d entry of sia's sis i ll try to do it soon dear i m really glad tht u liked it ...



pls live ur comment here .......after reading it ...this is the 7th part .....
thank u....................
JTJTYJNAA------ freash part has been updated
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Posted: 16 years ago
#30
ummm plzzzzzzzz do update soon and yh plzz add shera and veer track faster....m very eager and yh 1 question: wht will samyukta and veer relationship be.....i mean, will they b paired togetha in dis FF?😕

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