JTJTYJNAA------ part 6 updated PG 3

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JANNE TU JANNE TU YEH JANNE NAA

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Maharaj Aryavardhan: King of Aryanagar i.e (Aryanagar +DELHI+AJMER) Dad of Dhram.

Jayavardhan: Bro of Aryavardhan he went beyond every limit of evil and cruelty. Father of Agni n arjun.

M Kamalavati : Sister of jay n aryavardhan and mother of Veer Agasthya N Maharani of ( Delhi n Ajmer )= Pithoir ( mom of rajat from prc)

Maharaj someshwar Agasthya: Husband of Kamalaviti n veers dad . Died long ago in war.( Survanshi) (dad of rajat from PRC.)

M. Nivriti: Adopted sister of Somashwar Agasthya love veer terribly as her own child.

Rajkumar veer: son of somashwar n kamalaviti. A very handsome n cool dude. Does everything which is correct according to him. Listens both to his heart n mind.He is bit naughty only if the situation is to be n also haughty. He is very attached to Dhram. N his best frds are R: Arjun, Pundeer, Chand and Sanjum (same from PRC). N falls in love with shera cum Ritika ( theres a twist)

R: Dhram: Son of Maharaj Aryavardhan a handsome dude.Wants everything to be perfect. Never thinks from his heart. He trys to listen to his mind most of the time but veer never leaves him to do so.

R. Agni: son of jay. Very haughty thinks too much of himself. Falls with shera.Agni looks like new chand from prc.

MAYANK: is shera's frd looks like Rajkumaar samar shing fr prc

R Arjun: son of Jay( fr prc) cool dude always runs after girls. Almost is a same age of veer.

Shera : Is a daughter of a dakoo.Does every thing that the boy does. But never hurts any innocent. She is very sweet n bubbly. Loved by every body. She is haughty n naughty too. She learnt every thing in order tokill her moms killer. But leads a royal life n very beautiful indeed. OUR MUGDHA of course.)( her frds vashali n chamki fr prc)

SIA: Naughty ,beautiful , always makes trouble fr her sister . But loves her too much. ( fr DV OLD)

Roopmati: dadi mom of shera. (Dadi of mug fr prc)

M . Ankoor: father of sia ( jai chand from (old) prc)

Mr. Rukmini : mom of sia .(Frm Prc (old) sayno's mom)

Sarkaar Bhima : dad of shera. .(Fr DV)

VILLAN: M Anash Gadval {Bhimdev frm prc }

Sumyukta :Opposite of veer.

Thank uuuu very much buddies fr all ur comments.
N thank u all fr the comments.šŸ˜›

N here goes m first part........

It was a very beautiful morning n rays of light lit the large beautiful room all decorated room with gold n gems.....

A large bed was there in between of the room on the carpeted floor. beautiful paintings were hung on the walls.....

And a handsome boy was sleeping on the bed with a smile on his face a ray of light hits his face . He wake's up n then smiles n thinks that
"yes today is a special day , really special.HE gets up n baths and does suryanamaskaar dresses himself up (black n white rajkumaar's robes)

Then only his mother comes calling for him.
Its Maharani Kamalavati in her yellow colour sari
she was was some of the ornaments too.Her hair vas wet n vas front she was carring n an aarati plate.


M.Kamalavati: KYa tum uth gaye bate?

Veer was in front of the mirror :
Kabka maa. Kya appne mujhe.. Arjun aur Agni samajh rakha hai?

M. kamalaviti: kya humhe toh yaad hai na ki ajj kya hai?

Veer: haan maa ...... AJJ DHRAM mare sabse bade dhai ka janmdin hai............... (he turns looking dashing )

m.k : Sirf dhram ka nahi bate Agni ka bhi.

Giving him prasaad.

Veer: taking it says: Haan laken uske hoone yeh na hoone se koi farak nahi padtaa ..... Ghamandi kahe kaa. Har baar apni manmanni karta rehta hai Lakin Ajj mai use nahi Chodunge . App ko pata hai maa Kal vo mujhese aur Dhram ko kya...

MK : getting bit annoyed :Abb bas bhi karo veer.... vo tumhara Bada bhai hai.

Veer (smirking n saying more to him self): pata hai . Varna use mai pure mahel me Bhaga bhaga ke maarta "

MK hears some of this : KYA?

veer: kuch nahi maa bus Agni ke tofe ke bare mai soch raha tha.
mk: Acha .. abb badbadana bass bhi karo bate .Aur jaa ke apne Dhram ko uthao...

veer : kya ? kya vo abb tak so raha hai maa...

Mk: haan vo Kal Raat ko Bohat Batte karte karte daer ho gayi thi naa isliya .

SHE EXISTS

LAGTA HAI AJJ PHIR VO APNI ANNE WALE RAJKUMAARI KE SAPNE DEKH RAHA HAI:::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::

SAYS the CREW

Crew enters Laughing Veer also starts laughing with them.

They r his frds SAMJAM ,PUNDEER ,CHAND n RAJKUMAAR ARJUN.

Veer after greating them happily : Aree vaha Arjun tum ajj itni jaldi tayar ho gaye. ....
EVERY BODY LAUGHS >>>.

Arjun spends lot of time in bathroom actually so his bathroom is very beautifully maintained,

Thus dharam na veer some times goes to his n makes mess of his bathroom.

Arjun;hain vo kya hai na ki ..... hai ajj bhaiya aur dhram ka janam din hai na yo.... zera ...zaldi tyaar ho gaya.... pani se kusheti nahi ladi,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Every body turns to him :::;;;; all together >>>>>>>>>>>>.

Achaaaaaaaaaaa?

A : hangs his head

Pundeer : Yeh to ghode bech ke so raha tha veer ,Humne ise jake Uthaya

.
Veer laughs

Sanjum: yeh to kuch bhi nahi tha veer .

CHAnd hai aur hummne ise snan ghar jabardasti bhaja toh yeh soo raha tha .

Sanjam Garam pani ke maze le raha tha yeh.

Pundeer: hummene ise bahar nikalne ki koshish ki.
veer :koshish matlab?

Veer bit confused

Pundeer : (smirking) MAtlab ka kya matlabhai veer. Hum ise pani mai se kich rahe the aur yeh snan ghar mai rekhi hui kursi ko ..... phir vo tuut ke haath mai aa gaya .🤣

Chand: hum to thak gaye the aur sanjum ne ise yaad dilaya ke ajj bhut saari ladkiyan( rajkumariyan) aane valli hai. Tab jake yeh pani se bahar ..............
🤣

Arjun : dekho tum ab bas karo chand varna mai.........

Sanjam: varna kya? phir se gir javoge
Abb ruk mai thumhe

he starts chasing

Sanjam running : thumhe pata hai veer....... jab .. maine raj...kumariyeh .. kaha to ....to yeh ......jhet se bhar nikla aur.... bhagam bhag mai do..... baar gir pada................

every body.
🤣


then a hansome young man enters n saysssssssss....... Kyun veer tum aur tuhari toli phir se shuru ho gayi?............

PART 2

a handsome young man enters.... with his hair slapped back. perfectly dressed wearing orange color robes n looking cooolllllll......

he says:
Kyun veer tum aur tuhari toli phir se shuru ho gayi?............

Veer still laughing beautifully says : array dharam tum sunoge to tum bhi bhot hasoge.... yeh... yeh arjun....

arjun attacks Veer both laughing n trying to close veers mouth

Dharam: acha ab bus bhi karo tum sab .

trying to pull them off . he himself was laughing .But no use

Dharam stands up straight n shouts: AJJ MERA JANMADIN HAI AUR TUM LOG MUJHE BHADHAI DANE KE BAJAY JAHAGD RAHE HO\\\\\\\\\\\\\\

THUMHE SHARAM NAHI AATI KYA????????

including veer every body stood up n stood silently.
Dharam turns in satisfaction n says : Thick hai abb chalo neche chalte hai .

veer (with a mischief smile on his face) : Dharam ek baat kahu to humme sharam nahi aati kyun ki na to hum ladkiyan hai aur nahi tumhari taraha seedhe sadde hai (dharam turns) aur dusiri baat yeh ki hum tumhe Bhadayi (congratulate) nahi dhenge kyunki thumhare dil ki ajj biddaii hone wali hai

veer gives five to his frds

Dharam confused : kyun?

Arjun: ajj Duniya ki sab se khubsuraat
-khubsuraat ladkiyan anne wale hai .

Dharam: : tum log kabhi nahi badloge .

sanjum : nahi Dharam sach mai

Dharam:: mujhe koi farak nahi padega

V:koi khubsuurat ladki tumhe pasand aa hi jaae giii dharam
Dharam: :blushing slightly : kabhi nahi

chand: kyun nahi ? ( in a sarcastic voice)

Dharam : Kyunki asi rajkumaari jo mujhe pasand hai vo kabhi nahi milegi.......................

Pundeer eyeing at veer says :kyun nahi milegi ..... ? zaroor milegi .....
acha bataoo tumhe kaysi ladki chahiye .... hum sab saath milke dhundenge ... kyun veer ...

veer: ha ha kyun nahi.....

Smiling naughtily

D slowly falls into the trap n starts dreaming ..........

veer: with a cruel smile asks :Dharam kaha khogaye ho tum? BAtavo kaysi ladki chahiye thumhe?

Sanjum: hain bolo jaysi bologe dhund ke layenge Langdi yeh..., luuli
yeh..., andhi yeh... behri ....yeh...,,,,,,,totli.........., yeh pagal.........

Veer smirks n runs n shuts his mouth dy keeping an hand on his mouth veer didnt want to miss this chance of discription of dharam's dream girl. after which he will get another opportunity to tease dharam whole his life n even he can tell it to Dharam's wife n children later or even he can torcher himto do some mischive

everybody pulls sanjum back at the same time
dharam says coming out of trans : sunjum ne jin- jin gundo (qualities) wali ladki boli hai un saari gundo wali ladki chahiye .
veer looks at sanjam angrily

Then veer smiles n goes near to dharam puts a hand on his shoulder n says in a serious tone .

v: nahi dharam hum sab jut nahin sach suna chahthe hai
tumhari rajkumaari ke baare mai. taki agar humme vasi koi mile toh hum use tumhe soup de,,,,,,,,,šŸ˜‰
arjun hai ... coming forward.... ayse ho sakta hai kiiiiii....... jo tumhe pasand aayehgii aghar vo humme se kisi ko pasand a gayi to?
pundeer (smirking ) toh kya Dharam hamme se kisi ka dil tod dega.
Chand : coming forward,,,, lekin agar tum pehle se hi batadoge to hum use duur rahenge .


they knew if they will emotionally blackmail Dharam he vill tell them

Seeing dharam dreaming again veer was happy that his frds atleast have learnt how to trap their victims.....
n now only the thing needed vas

Veer:(happily) bolo dharam......

Dharam walked in front to the balcony

Where was the beautifulterece with flowers ,,,, n trees touching them from the ground dharam was lost in its fragrance ,Every body gave five...

he started telling lik a parrot

D: Mai ek ayse ladki ko pasand karoonga jo duniya ki sabse khubsuraat ladki ho ....susheel ho...jese .... dekh te hi mera maan kahe ki hain yehi hai vo jes ki mujhe talash hai ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, yehi hai vo ... jis ke saath mai apni saari zindegi guzaar sakta hoon................

everybody smirks at his back
he turns back
everybody becomes silent

Dharam comes back n sits on the couch near by.... n ... continues....

"uskiaddamai jaadu hona chahiye aur masoom bhi ....... bhut hi payaarii...ghamandi bilkul nahi . aur jab bole to aysa lage ki uske muh se moti baras rahe ho. aur mera aur sabka pura- pura khayal rekhe ..........sabse pyaar kare... lakin mujhse sabse jyada..............

Dharam breaks suddenly........ he comes to originality seeing smirks on veer's n his frds faces . he came to know that they were boobing him(fooling him).he was trapped completely now......
then quickly trying to make it right ,,,, he was planing to say that he was joking...........

but veer n his toli were laughing at him .......

he knew he vas goneeeeeeeeeeee .......

dharam slowly n angrily : Dekho mai to mazaak kar raha tha ..
V still 🤣 mazaak gusse mei nahi has kar kiya jaata hai dharam
🤣

sanjam:
🤣 chodona ...veer... yeh dharam ...ke hasne ka tari ka hai ......
D: (controlling himself ); Sanjam aur veer chup ho javo vanna mai tumhari bajaunga..

v: hum log koi dhol nahi hai ............. jise tum bajane cale......
🤣

dharam knew it was coming so he started going ........

v: oiiii ....... dharam ruho
🤣hum sab sooch rahe the ki ajj tumhe tumhari rajkumaari say mila hi dete hai ......

sanjum : hai jo sunder ho suuuuuuuuu ......... sheelll ho.......suheel ki kya jaroorat hai hum use arjun ke snaan ghar ke pani mai daal dete hai khud ba khud panise susheel ho jayegiiiiiiiiiiiii..................(dharam chasi
ng sanjam.....)

veer:
🤣 n coming out of it aur kya kaha tha tumne jab.......(.dharam chasing veer.....) vo...... bolegii......to mukh se moti..... girenge...........?...Toh ek rajkumaari ki kya zaroort......hai tum tum. kesi.
D : chup...ho jao .tum..........

V: continues....... sone ki khan se shaadiiii......... kyun nahi kar late?..............

V: aur in sab se to achha hai ke tum apni perchayi se hi shaadi kar lo .......vo thumhara bohot.......... khayal rekhegi ....bal savarne mai tyaar hone mai
🤣.....................

while running hi dashes vith sone handsome rudy guy n the laughter dies.....................

thats it fr now.............

PRECAP: sia enters .........................


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part 2 was so funi n shweet...V n friends r so mean to Dharam! reali gd update hun...update soon xxx
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while running hi dashes vith Agni he dress like a perfect hero which he is not

A: Dekh ke nahi chal sakte ho tum '. Yeh is darwaaze ke aagge kyun bhag rahe ho tum '

laughter dies.....................

v: becomes angry mai anddha hoon kyun? '.. dekh ke tum nahi chal rahe the . mera kamre mai aake mujjhse takra ke mujhjhe hi data rahe ho tum?'''mai jo chahe karu thumhe k'''


Chand interrupting says: janne do na veer

Veer: lakin ,,,,,,,,,,

Dharam : Hai veer janee do

A: opening his arms : jannam din'''''

Veer: ruko ''. Har baar dharma ko mai hi janam ki bhadhai data huin aur ajj bhi mai hi dunga '.(showing attitude)


A: dekho tum '..

D:' nahi Agni . veer ab bohat '.pareshaan kar liya ab tonbhadhai dado

veer laughing goes near him n hugs him tightly

When agni comes near him''.

Arjun : ruko bhaiya abb meri bari hai '.

Nnnn hugs dharam

One by one every one hugs him '.. n dhram was the last one to do '''

Veer was eyeing on Agni as though telling him that it was a great humiliation for him

Dharam : abb bas bhi karo veer '.acha chalo hum sab niche chalet hai

Puja for his n Agni's long life will be done in few hours n the party will start after that

AAAAAAAAAAAnd some where far away in awadhi's palace

Sia was shouting at her maids '' who was standing with her back on them

Sia : tum log kesi kaam ke nahi hoo'.Janna ajj hai aur tum mujhe abb bata rahi hooo..

It was maharaj's order they cant do any thing

Sia turns '''' she was very beautiful those brown eyes ,masoom chera , lovely voice '. But looking haughty now ' '.. she was very proudy never takes care of her anything , but very cute '''.

She was wearing her red dress n was getting ready to go to Aryanagar '.. n she had very less time to get ready becoz her dad had atlast agreed her mom's request ''.he had loads of work

Sia : tum logon se kuch khena hi bakaar hai Maine tumse lal rang ka haar mangvaaya tha naa ki neela'''.. she vent on''''..

Sia : anne do meri bahen ko vo thumhe theek karegi Mera itna bada apmaan kar diya 'tum logone

Then she remembers that her sis is not vit her n her beautiful eyes fills with tears ''.

Her sis was her cousin sis SUMYUKTA far away frm her But they love each other very much .

She calls Sia's mum n dad as pitaji n maasa too . they too love her ' but sia did not see her from past two years she don't know how she looks where she is now n was very angry vit her

But if anything goes wrong vit her she trys to threaten every body saying that she vill complain to her sis''.. n she vill punish them''.

M. ranuka enters :Kya hua sis appin becharoo par kyun rob chala rahi hai?///

Sia coming back to reality trying to hide her tears : kuch nahi maasa bas ayse hi'

Turning to her mum

M R knows that sia wept fr her sis again but she too kept quite didn't want to open the convo again : accha ab jaldhi Kkijiye app tayar ho jaaiye hum sab appka intajar kar rahe hai

At laast she comes out looking gorgeous

Her mom asks: aagayi app kabse app ka intazaar ho raha tha ''

Sia (taken aback ) pitaji naaraz toh nahi hai na maasa'????????????

M rukmani : nahi toh '.. apko toh pata hai na vo bas humme chodne a rahe hai '..

Sia n her mum grts in paalki

M Ankoor :chaleya

They reaches Aryanagar boundary '.

And here the havan was over they were inviting guests '.

Even Dharam veer n his toil were inviting to there surprise '''they were getting introduced to the families ''.

And on other hand Agni was showing attitude ''..n some stupid raajkumaaries n girls were really impressed n smiled '.. n nnn added fuel to it'''''.n started over acting '''''''..

DV were trying hard not to laugh n were happily greeting them ''''.. some girls were eyeing on them''.n '''.smiling

Veer: smiles n says frm the corner of his mouth : dharma abb tumhare liya achha mauka hai apni rajkumaari dhundne kaaa ''''..varnna vo dekho arjun kahi tuhariwali na legaye''''.

PRECAP : Dharam could not bear tears in sia's eyes n goes to her




I m really sorry fr late n this bouring update next one will be better than this



Pls do comment n let me know how bad it is ...................

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awwwwwwwww so nice loved the precap do cont....
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lovely update huni...da bday greeting was veri funi lol....Agni is veri stuck up lol...Veer showed him didnt he lol...no need to apologise dear...update wen u can xxx
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Hi guys im back again vit m part 4

Recap: intro of sia''''' n havan is over n arjun flirting .

Here it goes'.

Arjun wasf flirting with the girls bit far away'.

Dharam laughed at his bro's innocence :Chinta mat karo Veer mujhe in ladkiyon mai koi dilchaspi nahi 'hai ''koi bhi meri sapno ki rajkumaari ki taraha sunder nahi hai ''.

Veer:Pyaar mai umar aur khubsuriti nahi dekhi jati''..

Sanjam comes from his back smiling : Aarya vaah tumhe payaar ke baare mai bhi pata chal gaya hai .?????? (Smirking)

When every body has come n Dharam n agni has got everybody's blessings ''''..

Jayvardhan: Abb jashan shuru kia jaye'.

Then the royal dancers comes in n starts dancing n other programs..

Dharam ,Veer n his gang starts getting bored So they decides to escape '

But were caught by JV( i.e Jayvardhan) N went back to sit . they tried again' actually all the guests were eating.

Sanjam shouted pointing his hand down towards a legs of the girl saying: Dekho ' dekho chuhaa'''''''..

All the girls jumped at this n started shouting n running here n there ''

One girl shouting : CHUHAA>>>>>>>>>>>>>>CHUHAAAAAAAAAA>>>>>>>>

JV heard this n ran towards them . he knew that it was one of the Shararat of veer's toli ..

After assuring those Girls that every thing is right '. When he came back '.every body was missing expect Agni'.

He eyed angrily at Agni n asked : yeh sab kahan gaye'?

Agni: PAta nahi pitaji abhi tak toh yehi the '.vo sab'.

Jv( Angrily) : tum se toh puchna hi bakaar hai ( pushing him aside ) hato yahan se '

Agni : abb maine kya kiya''

Agni feels as though Jv doesn't love him . every time he will be shouting at him fr no reason''.

And here Veer n his toli with dharam came to the garden Laughing n imitating their poor terrified victims (girls).

Sanjam🤣 :vo laal rang phene hue rajkumaari ko dekha tum logo ne ?//// Pehle kayse ghamand se keh rahi thi''''. (imitating her voice >>>>''while others vere laughing'.)''.. MERe rajya mai toh mai, sirf phoolo beche hua chadar pe chalet hunnnnnnn'..Yahan toh sirf chadar (Carpet) pe ,mere payar mai chub raha hai ''''''.

Chand : mera bas chalta toh mai use kanto pe chalvata '

Dharam🤣 : Chalo humnne ' use phoolon se na sahi lakin chuhoo se jaroor kar diya ''''''Vo kayse uchal rahi thi'''.. HA 'ha..ha'.Every body was laughing '

(some times dharma also ascts like a kid with them..)

They were walking around in their beautiful garden where so many bushes trees were there . so that their could not find them' Many more guests N their daughters OFCOURSE '.. were coming Veer n gang were encouraging dharma infact teasing Dharam to choose one of the gfirls amoung them'

They were all commenting they were hiding on some height so that they can see the entrance. NNNNN there it comes <<<<<,

Maharaj Ankoor ki jai'''

Maharaj Ankoor ki jai'''

Maharaj Ankoor ki jai'''

Everybodies attention was there '

Dharma n veers parents were close to them . but they themselves never met them'

Dharam : chalo 'ajj avadhi ke raja aur rani ko dekh late hai 'Ajj tak sirf unke bare suna hai '

Chand Naughtly: Tum sirf raja aur rani ko dekhna chaha te hoo????

Dharam n veer : kya matlab

SAnjam: in dono ko to kuch bhi nahi pata 'Avadhi ki do rajkumaariyan hain Ek ka naam sia hai aur dooseri ka naam ''''.. Pata nahi kuch hai lakin dooseri vaali pehli se bhi zayaada khubsoorat hai'''.Kaha jata hai ki vo duniya ki sab se khubsoorat hai . lakin kuch saloon se vo gayab ho gayi hai''Shayaad uske parivaar valon ko pata ho''.

Maharaj Ankoor ki jai'''

Maharaj Ankoor ki jai'''

Maharaj Ankoor : gets down fr the horse n hugs M arayavardhan M rukmini gets out out of her palki n arti is done by M. kamalavati'.

(nivriti calls her didi''..m. rukmani)

M.k : kayse hai app sab aur hamari dono rajkumaariyan kahan hai ?

M R: rajkumaari sia toh pass hi ke male se raajkumaaron ke liya kuch tofa lane utri hai

Nivriti (eagerly) : aur Unki behan'?

M R : bit taken Aback : Pata nahi vo khan hain kaysi hai ''..Lakin kuch saalon ke baad vo hamesha ke liya hamare paas aa jayengiiii'.Dreaming''.

M K: cutting in between : chaliya andhar chalet hain''''.

Going inside'.

M r : vayse 'dono. . rajkumaar kahen dekhai nahi de rahe hain'..

Veer : dekha'hamare bagaar tih yeh sab rah hi nahi sakte DHAram''

But dharma was looking at the enterence where a palki has just landed n a beautiful girl in rer red dress steps out '. But now she was looking Haughty''

Sia : yeh kya mere liye koi nahi ruka?//////

*(as v all know to girls it is the manners that a boy or a person givesr his /her hand to hold to give respect)

Sia : aur mera itena bada apmaan ''mai apne bahan ko zaroor battanungi '..( THEN HER USUAL BLA ''BLA'''BLA''''')

But she starts weeping remembering her sis'''''..

Pundeer : Baap re baap kitni Ghamndi hai yeh ladki'''

Pundeer: Aysa lagta hai 'aysa lagta hai ki yeh behri hai aur sab ko apne jaysa hi samajhti hai ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, varna eitne zoor se kyun chelaa rahi hai''

Veer ,arjun , chand n sanjum : hai''''.

But dharm was gazing at her lik anything ..

Veer: kya hua dharma'?

CHand : lagta hai DHArAm dar gaya'.

But veer was feeling odd,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,may be Dharam started liking her ''' but how come??????????????????? She is just opposite of the girl which dharma described''''''.

M R n niviriti comes there ( dharma also goes there)

M R : app theek toh hai na'

Sia runs n hugs her mum : maasa mujhe ek baar'' sirf ek baar usse milna hai ''

D was feeling very sad ,,,,,,,,,,, it vas as though something solid fell into his stomach >>>>>>>>>. He never felt lik this before''' He couldn't bear this he wanted to something to ''.say some thing to her ,,,but '''..

She embraces her n takes her I n

Dharam was upset she didn't even look at him While he was soooooooo concerned about her '. He vas acting too odd he went inside '.. leaving all of them there'''''

Veer : dharma '''.

Chand kitni mushkil se hum bahar nikle han aur tum?////

D: In strong voice >: nahi chalo'.

Every body : kya hua hai iyse?

Veer knows probabali what might hav happened''''

PRECAP:SIA : (turnig angrilily at Dharam loudly :; AYSE NAHI HO SAKTA .. AUR VAYSE BHI MAI TUM SE YEH SAB KYUN KEH RAHI HOON''''


sORRY FR THE DELAY N PLLSSSSSSSSSSS DO COMMENT

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Edited by junglli billi - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Moderator's Note:
thanks for the lovely efforts at your FF but please continue updating the remaining parts of your ff in this thread only and please dont open new threads for the ff with every part.... a sincere request 😳 you can edit the title of your FF every time you update a new part and this is how all the other 14 members who write the stories do so too.. thank you so much for your co-operation...


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Posted: 16 years ago
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oooooo....kuull...lol...da mouse trap was soo funi hehe...update soon huni! im eager to find our wer her sister went! xxx

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