Definitely Yes, Maybe I- (AR) pt1- 13 - Page 19

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Posted: 16 years ago
di,its fantastic,super,mind blowing,history all himesh words in saregamapa,so good i realy dont want to stop reading,and continue reading it,thanks for pm.
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Posted: 16 years ago
awwww lovley prt..
i loved it how u described each n evry thing!!!!
gr8 job...
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Posted: 16 years ago

Wow Bheegi, loved the part👏. I just finished reading it a couple of hours back and I went back and kept re-reading it again and again, it was so good.

I'm determined that the same thing wont happen here as happened with "To Err…" there I was so caught up in exams at the time and you kept updating so fast that I lost the thread of the story. I'm waiting for the winter break to chill out and read it at leisure.
Armaan as David…amazing 😳. And the way you fleshed out ridz's character in this part was just fantastic. Angie's character too is so sweet, I mean a boho, chilled out Angie is too cool. And Armaan of course was mind-blowing.
Wow ridz's sub-conscious is surely working over-time isn't it? 😉 😆I loved that naughty challenge of Angie. Ridz needs someone to help her get out of the rut. But that final part was one hell of a cliff hanger…I mean how the hell did Armaan get there?
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey sangeetha di😊
thanks for the pm sweety😉
this was a superb part👏
i enjoyed this one throughly
it was brilliant di
esp armaan's description by ridz was mind blowing
im sure u must have captured many hearts of ur ff fans by armi😳😆
lovely description of his looks oh man it was like mesmerizing putiing ksg in our imaginations😳😆
quite a hot armaan uve have portrayed😆
n im sure many ppl would like to switch places with ridz very soon with me being one of them
i also like to mention that line what u mentioned abt eyes it was superb👏
n then ridz is cautios abt her looks soo soon only after one brief look at "her david"




n then comparing the statue or portrait to him😆 i think here she crossed the levels of sanity into a pure insane woman😆
but i guess we all will surpass her😆
i guess now ill put an end to my tacky jokes😕😆
update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey bheegi!!!!!!!!!!
awwww!!!!!!!!! i loooooved it!!! i was smiling all through while reading it!! i cud actually imagine the whole thing in my mind as i were watching a movie!!!!! OMG!!! im speechless!!

why do u write sooo well!!!!!! i seriously love ur style of writing...its not too complicated but yet brings out the true feelings and emotions of the situation perfectly!!!!


ridz's character shows that inspite of having lived all her lyf in america she's an indian at heart...she's feeling soo guilty about even thinking about 'armaano'!!! hehe....


i really like anjali's character who u've portrayed way better than in DMG....she knows what she is n what she wants n what she's doin.....her character's really nicely etched out in the story....


im very curious about 'armaano' now....i want to know more about him and obviously im very excited about how he's goin to turn our 'miss perfect's' life all topsy turvy....i think she is craving for some adventure in her all boring life and mr. boring rahul!!!!!


i cant wait for the next update now....seriously not!!! i hope u're updating really soon coz u've got me all excited....i'm not gonna be able to sleep!!!!!!!!!!


and the first person thing is very very good!!! this story actually needs that...we need to know how ridz actually feels as soon she will have to make a choice between 2 of the most important people in her lyf...(i hope im right!!)....u're doin it very well...like a pro!!!! i hope i can capture my readers the same way u can when i write......u are tooooooo good!!! way to go!!!!! keep it up!!!
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pls update sooner than soon!!! cant wait for the next part!! seriously....all of us asking u for the same thing!!!! pls do it!!! 😳 😳


love u!!!!!
Niyati....
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Posted: 16 years ago
Wow.. srry 4 commentin soo Late...bt mst say dis is mah 2nd favorite FF after To Err is Human..seriously!!
I don really lykk Rahuls character.. hes a bit too concerned .. I mean over-concerned!! Awl he thinx of is makin money n bcmng a sucsessfull person in lyf... okay tatz gud..bt too mch is too bad!! He dusnt eva enjoy the goodness of life!! This Rahul is soo diff 4m our DMG Rahul!!
Anjali is a chweetheart... I love her character.. shes got good sense of humour..shes straightforward.. she is gutty... she lives lyf 4 herself n nt nebudy else...
Yeah I noticed tat u rote dis FF wid Ridhimma narratin it.. well tats kinna gud... Lol..shes a bit complicated gal I feel.. I dunno y she ever acceptd Rahuls proposal... I don thnk she made a gud decision.. n newy I wanna c AR love story blossomin.. I hope tatll hppn soon...
I wznt shocked 2 hear tat Ridhimma wz smitten by Armaan or Armaano!! Nebudy wud g8!! Im surprised Armaan lukz lykk an Italian!!Bt he dus hv killer lukz!! Armaan jus rawks in dis too lykk alwys bt his character 4m To Err is Human n Definately Yes,May Be are soo diff
I thnk dis FF has an edge over ure oda FF in the style of ritin.. itz a bit betta.. nt tat u wer eva bad!! Cnt eva thnk abt tat!! Chweet FF... Im also lukn fwd 4 Shall We Dance??
Wunnerful FF
Im glad dis tym I wz able 2 give u a lng comment!! Lol
Thnx 4 d PM... odawise I wud hv missed such a wunnerful thng!!
Plzz cont soon... I'm desperate 4 more!!
Aishwarya
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: missypatel

bheegi!!!!


i luved it yaaar!!! i absolutely luved it!! tis is ntn like ive ever read bfr...bt i can totally feel ridz dreams..crystal in ma eyes!!! oooohh!! deja vu ...its happened to me!!lol m sure its happened 2 every teen!!! LMAO!!

aww thanks missypatel...i bet a lot of young gals have felt like this before😳

i feel lke sum1z electrocuted me...bt m still alive..n breathin high volts!!!
well that's armaan's fault then😆

ahhaha!! m dazed!!craZy abt yur tis fic countin now!!!
thanks dear....let's see what magic armaano has on Ridz's perfect life😉

lol!! wat more can i say..yaar!!!!!! bas..samkha karo..kuch kuch hota hai!!
well ridz is def feeling kkhh right now😆

LMAO!! i luv ya!!

ps ...ive been 2 italy..its beautiful!! bt i missed on david..hve blurry memories of it..i so wanna go ter again..wil do sumday!!i can betcha m gonna think of tis wen i do!!!
for me that was the highlight of their art and contribution to the world....u can imagine i was as smitten by David as Ridz is😆

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Posted: 16 years ago
bohot galat baat hai pehlay nhi bataya na that u are starting on 22nd main kab say keh rahi thi start karo tu batana tha na 🥺......

welll app ki writing skills ka tu koi jawab nhi awsum yaaaaaaaaar bohot zabardast i had a frown on my face after reading first part i thought wat RAHUL N RIDZ NONONO but after reading 2nd i was oooooooooooooohhhh thank God i was relieved lolxx very nice i wonder agey kia hoga plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
continue soooooooooon sorry sorry SUPER soooon lolx

luv
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Posted: 16 years ago
AWESOME part.....i absolutely love the character of Anjali.......
cant wait for u to continue.......its getting very interesting!!
pls continue soon......n thank u very much for the pm!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ~Rinki~

ahh so she meets armi ☺️ hehe

ridz is so different than angie, i love angie btw, her attitude and way of always sounding so chipper yet cerebral [dang it, my eng teach is getting to me 😡] was awesome!! 👏 i love her character, it suits her 😆
thanks Rinki...yes anjie is a free spirit ...let's see if she helps Ridz in future or not
ridzie ridzie ki kya baat hai? she doesnt care abt her looks or anything, well atleast she didn't until "armaano" stepped in 😆 btw is that rlly how u say armaan in italian? 🤔😆
no idea😆...i just made up the Armaano part...i thought if there is an Armaani, there could be an Armaano😆
but loved their little interaction in the plane, shoo cute! i could imagine armi all care-free while ridz watched him like a stalker from far away 😆😆
the bit of advise that angie gives ridz abt looking in someone's eyes and then finding whether or not they're indian was just wow 👏👏 i think its somewhat true no? besides gives ridz another excuse to look into the hottie's eyes 😍😆 i think it is true...has always worked for me...my hubby gave me this funda when i moved to the US😉
aah her luggage is lost 😆 i feel bad for her, but then its just plain funny 😆😆 ah i hope that never happens to me 😆 i would be busy cursing the pplz out then worrying abt my ride though i should 😆 aah their second meeting 😳😳 ah i loved it, she's stuttering 😆 ah armi sounds like the complete "cool dude" 😳 ah ridz doesn't wanna show him her weakness? but i think he could've given her a ride ah getting to far in my mind 😆 well...he did not want to appear too eager at that point😉 but let's see what he does in the restaurant
haila ridz is dreaming of armi while being engaged with rahoool 😆 but with rahul being like he is, i can totally understand ridzie dreaming of smexy armi 😉😃 he he...we are all allowed to dream😳
aah shopping time!! 😆 am glad angie is changind ridz style, with more meetings coming up btwn her and armi her dresses need to be gorgeous like her 😉😆
aww ridz stopped writing poetry cuz of her parents? im not liking em too much rite now!
well...that was Ridz's impression...let's see how her parents actually are??😕
but when armi made his entry, ☺️😍 gosh am sure he can be her inspiration 😉😆
may be she will even start writing prose then😆
he's different now eh? went from the cool dude to a smexy hottie 😆 that's our armu😳
cant wait for the next part di! 😳
srry for rambling on and on, i do that a lot -sheepish smile- hehe loved the long comment...no sweat
rinkz

[quote=coolpal]oh bheegi di, i am just blown away by this part..it was nothing short of amazing, how do u manage to write so well, it's a brilliant talent of yours!!! 👏 I loved the whole scene in the airplane when she first saw him, could totally imagine it, and the armaano name was funny!! Oh god, u ended at such a good part, i am already addicted to this FF, just like To Err, i loved the whole thing about Anjie's advice saying that u can tell whose desi by the eyes and loved the whole comparing to David. Very, very very well written!! Now i am kind of regretting reading so early cuz it means i'll have to wait longer [/quote]
Thanks coolpal....awww thanks for ur compliments...Armaan inspires me😉 that's all i will say😆....hopefully i won't make u wait long...will try to update in a couple of days....with readers like u I want to keep writing 24/7😃
Edited by bheegi - 16 years ago

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