Definitely Yes, Maybe I- (AR) pt1- 13 - Page 21

thanks aarora, Avanti, meow, saira, sweet Jay fan

No avanti...no love traingle between sisters here

saira...yes I love Italy...

Originally posted by: krina_17

oh.... DI... ridzi fall in love with My ARMAAN... instanlty..........😉

But yes... My Armaan has this charm to attract anyone... he is really good on impressing any one.....i always get mesmerzied by his attitude and style. As especially yours FF make me more and more mesmerized of his attitude, way to talking, expressing feelings; it is really the best.

thanks krina....i am glad my ffs make u love armaan even more😳

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Nice ridzi had infauation of Armaan and the the dream of plane was really good and fast. I always like the way Anjie and ridzi see things... think about others and it is nice. Wow ridzi write poetry. I think this poetry is one of link which bring AR together. THis 15 days will surely change her life: in way of looking at things. It looks like DDLJ... how kajol is engaged and she took europe trip and then fall in love with SRK. this is gonna be similar. u know it will be kinda like DDLJ...good point

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Di.... u are awesome, it liked is 'You know Ridz'in New York, one comes across so many people who like desis'..you know like Hispanics, Latinos, Italian, Greek'..but once you have eye contact with them, you know who is a desi and who is not'..it's something about our eyes which says it all'.remember this sis.' !!!!

It is true our eyes says all!!!... As in Live in Jersey, I know when i go to NY for work, every other person we see is desi... and some times we can get confuse btw hispanic and desi, but the way they say things or their facial expression tell who they are.!!!

yes, this pearl has always workled for me...i have to thanks my hubby for this one though

New york, is really different. Fast paced life, less talk more work.. but is expensive and dirty.... I don't like dirty. So i live in NEW Jersey.... Jersey is not that clean, but better than NY.... NYC is still the best IMO....at least for a visitor like me😃
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ALL the Best For Upcoming Parts..... thanks krina😊

take care, krina

Originally posted by: angullgrl91

omg!!!!!!!!!!!

i totally love how u ended that part! im soo excited to read more! gosh ur such an awesome writer..i get soo into all ur fan fics! plzzzzzzzzz cont soon...u make armaan sound like the perfect dream guy for me in this fan fic! lol

Originally posted by: sea_nyx

Wow Bheegi, loved the part👏. I just finished reading it a couple of hours back and I went back and kept re-reading it again and again, it was so good. thanks sea nyx...that's a gr8 compliment from a gr8 writer like u😊

I'm determined that the same thing wont happen here as happened with 'To Err'' there I was so caught up in exams at the time and you kept updating so fast that I lost the thread of the story. I'm waiting for the winter break to chill out and read it at leisure. don't worry, i have 2 ffs this time so won't be able to update that fast😆

Armaan as David'amazing 😳. And the way you fleshed out ridz's character in this part was just fantastic. Angie's character too is so sweet, I mean a boho, chilled out Angie is too cool. And Armaan of course was mind-blowing.

yes i am trying to recreate his Mr supercool image here😳

Wow ridz's sub-conscious is surely working over-time isn't it? 😉 😆I loved that naughty challenge of Angie. Ridz needs someone to help her get out of the rut. But that final part was one hell of a cliff hanger'I mean how the hell did Armaan get there? he he...i am glad u got that part😉 ur the first one to comment on that 'challenge'😃

Originally posted by: prernawaghray

hey sangeetha di😊
thanks for the pm sweety😉
this was a superb part👏
i enjoyed this one throughly
it was brilliant di
esp armaan's description by ridz was mind blowing
im sure u must have captured many hearts of ur ff fans by armi😳😆

Thanks Prerna....i hope everyone likes my Mr supercool armaan here😆
lovely description of his looks oh man it was like mesmerizing putiing ksg in our imaginations😳😆
quite a hot armaan uve have portrayed😆
n im sure many ppl would like to switch places with ridz very soon with me being one of them

u bet....and u can imagine how much i am enjoying writing about him here😃
i also like to mention that line what u mentioned abt eyes it was superb👏
n then ridz is cautios abt her looks soo soon only after one brief look at "her david"

see he is already inspiring her to think out of the box😉




n then comparing the statue or portrait to him😆 i think here she crossed the levels of sanity into a pure insane woman😆
but i guess we all will surpass her😆
i guess now ill put an end to my tacky jokes😕😆 naa...i enjoyed them😃😃
update soon thanks a ton😊
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Originally posted by: noyonika

hey bheegi!!!!!!!!!!
awwww!!!!!!!!! i loooooved it!!! i was smiling all through while reading it!! i cud actually imagine the whole thing in my mind as i were watching a movie!!!!! OMG!!! im speechless!!

thanks Niyati😊

why do u write sooo well!!!!!! i seriously love ur style of writing...its not too complicated but yet brings out the true feelings and emotions of the situation perfectly!!!!

i am honored by ur compliment esp coming from a person who reads so much!


ridz's character shows that inspite of having lived all her lyf in america she's an indian at heart...she's feeling soo guilty about even thinking about 'armaano'!!! hehe.... Definitely yes on that one!😊


i really like anjali's character who u've portrayed way better than in DMG....she knows what she is n what she wants n what she's doin.....her character's really nicely etched out in the story.... yes, she is a free spirit but a gem of a person as we shall see


im very curious about 'armaano' now....i want to know more about him and obviously im very excited about how he's goin to turn our 'miss perfect's' life all topsy turvy....i think she is craving for some adventure in her all boring life and mr. boring rahul!!!!! wait and see....i would actually love suggestions on some exotic romantic scenarios on this one😊


i cant wait for the next update now....seriously not!!! i hope u're updating really soon coz u've got me all excited....i'm not gonna be able to sleep!!!!!!!!!! u know i am still replying to comments...so will try to update tonite


and the first person thing is very very good!!! this story actually needs that...we need to know how ridz actually feels as soon she will have to make a choice between 2 of the most important people in her lyf...(i hope im right!!)....u're doin it very well...like a pro!!!! i hope i can capture my readers the same way u can when i write......u are tooooooo good!!! way to go!!!!! keep it up!!!
👏 this is my first full blown attempt at first person narration....it's kind of real life isn't it? We all live in first person😊

pls update sooner than soon!!! cant wait for the next part!! seriously....all of us asking u for the same thing!!!! pls do it!!! 😳 😳 Ok i will do it tonite even if i have to stay up late😊


love u!!!!! love ya 2
Niyati....