Shall We Dance- AK ff- part 15(end) pg 128(3/17)

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aishwarya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#381

Hey bheegi..cute part...

I'm happy Angad tld Rosie on d face tat hez nt intrested in her!! bt she wz a funny character!! 😆... Angad is g8n attracted 2 Kripa alryt... I lykk d AR relationship.. n no m nt tlkn abt Armaan-Ridhimma 😆

n guess wt..eva I study in DPS!! nt in Mathura bt in B'lore... I'm happy our skool got a mention in ure FF...tatz such a honour!! Rhea too studyz der n Angad also lykkz d skool!! BTW bheegi do u also study in DPS tat u've mentioned it in ure FF?? 😉

Rhea is such a cute character..she aldready made frnds wid Radhika n Shabbir too!! She has dyslexia bt it dusnt seem lykk @ awl!!

Mishti is soo wantin Angad... bt he wanz Kripa... Mishti actually asked Angad 4 awl tat crap!! weird lady I tell u... shes soo afta Angad!! bt gud Angad is tryn 2 ignore her

d dance sequence wz gud...btw itz Amrita rao nt Amrita Arora...newy it dusnt rilli matter

Mishti had 2 disturb Angads dreams!! bt newy 4 gud... he suddenly bcame soo chweet 2wrdz her afta hearin d gud news!! tho she dint wan him 2 do tat!! I'm rilli xcited 2 c AK dance 2geta...gonna b awesum!! rilli lukn fwd 2 it.... thnx 2 Prtihvi nt cmng tat AK can dance 2geta!!

Plzzz cont soon... itz gonna b an awesum prt I noe

Thnx 4 d PM...i cudnt miss dis wunnerful update!!

Aishwarya

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bheegi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#382

Originally posted by: anitamalik

Sangeeta Di'

I knew this was coming'Remember I told you in my comment to the last update that I kind of know how you are going to take this story forward---Well, I was right! YAY!!! I'm starting to think on your terms now'lol'I knew that there would be a situation where Prithvi would be held-up and Angad would have to come to the rescue and be Kripa's dance partner'.I think I have a hinch of how your going to further this story also'lol'So far, I'm on the right path'Let's see if I am right the next time! LOL'

thanks anita...yes ur😃

Great job Di! Seriously, although there was very less AK interaction in this update and more of Angad's thoughts and emotions, it was STILL beautifully penned down by you!

u know just like DYM is ridz's story, this one is becoming angad's story😆...will have more kripa scenes in coming parts

Thank God that Rosie is out of the story for the time being! LOL..

at least 4 the time being😉

Awww, Rhea and Radhika bonding..So sweet!

You know Di, for some strange reason, I imagine Sunaina (Anjali from DMG) as the Kanan in this FF'I think it fits her persona for some weird reason..I love Sunaina though..lol..

yes she could suit this role too but here it is gauri just like in the show she was his manager too

Explaining that she had dyslexia and that she was not dumb, just different, could be an arduous task as she had learnt through her last few years in school.

I agree..I imagine it to be a very hard task too! It takes a lot to make people understand!

yes unfortunately a lot of kids are labelled dumb because of it😕

Eww'I hate Mishti'She needs to get a life'Making advances on Angad'Right now Angad's thoughts are wandering only on Kripa so Misthi needs to stay away..LOL'Mishti puts her personal benefit above anything else..Disgusting'

yes, she is a typical business woman😕

Like I said before in DYM from Ridzi's point of view, Angad can't run away from Kripa'Something or the other will always pull him more closer to her! Kripa could keep on being rude with him'which is justified---but sooner or later she is going to be drawn to this arrogant jerk..LOL.. let's see when and how

Angad, stung by her nastiness one more time, was rendered speechless and wordless yet again. The more she nipped at him, the more he wanted her.

Dialogue(s) of the Update:

'Aise ghoor ghoor kar kya dekha rahe ho?' Kripa snapped her fingers in front of his face, 'Ladkiyaan tho bahut dekhi hain tumney'..main koi ajooba hoon kya?'

'Why'why,' he was all flustered, 'why would I want to look at you? How can you be so presumptuous? How do you know what I am thinking?' His nostrils flared angrily.

'Mujhey kya pata? As far as I know'.men only think from below their waists'.not their heads'..mujhey kya pata is dimaag mein tumhare kitna bhoosa bhara hua hai?' She scorned at him.

'YOU HAVE NO RIGHT TO SPEAK TO ME LIKE THAT!' Angad was offended by her constant jabs at his intelligence and thinking, 'tum apne aap ko samajhti kya ho?'

'An intelligent, smart and brave woman who men like you can never intimidate or get'..got it Mr?' She snapped her fingers again, turned around and slithered away like a serpent after spewing her venom.

LOL! So I loved this convo..I could so imagine Neha Bamb and IQ doing this scene Perfectly!!! I LOVED LOVED LOVED this line you used--- She snapped her fingers again, turned around and slithered away like a serpent after spewing her venom---so creative'I could never think in terms like that! I like how you compared her to a serpent! I would have never thought of that! LOL'Great job di! thanks 4 appreciating the dialogues...and yes she is like a nagin right now😆

Okay Di, I read this update in school and hence I was able to comment on it today itself..lol'Now, I have like Baylor Uni deadline approaching'Just need to apply and request my transcript from my counselor'and IM DONE! LOL'

baylor is a gr8 premed program....good luck

Okay, see you in DYM now

Continue soon!

Love

Anita

P.S- This one favorite reader of yours'among the other favorites you have'will continue to give you detailed comments!😊 always my pleasure😊

thanks aarohangel, harjot😊

[quote=masin]aww...such an adorable part di!! i simply luv this song!!! im really srry fr not replying lately....in fact even the AR ff's latest update was fab!!!!!!!!! lols...i hav to rush rite now but i luved each and every bit of both ffs.........angad's back talks at mishti....nd thank goodness prithvi is already engaged...(lols i dunt think i have left a comment fr a while so i need to back track a lil)

as fr AR.....haaii!!! lols...im surprised ur using shilpa as ridz instead of suku...jus wondering tho...any reason fr tht?? ...i mean i like both of them thts why...........

plzz keep writing and do keep me updated

im really srry fr leaving such a lame reply but i have to go study fr three tests!!!!!!!!

awesome updates!! 👏

Luv

Samra

[/quote] thanks masin. i prefer shilpa as ridz as suku looks too kiddish IMO....sorry suku fans. no, don't worry -i am glad u could read both ffs...good luck with ur tests😊

[quote=rima791]

kripa is like super strong in this one

i think this time kripa will bring down angad

get ready angad khanna, she is a hard nut to crack

can't wait to see how she break khanna's huge gigantic ego lolz

do cont soon when you can[/quote]

yes rima....she is a toughie in this one...it will take a lot for her to melt😳

Edited by bheegi - 16 years ago

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bheegi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#383

Originally posted by: cheeky_pari
Hi,

Thanks for the PM...

Part was great! Enjoyed reading it!

***Edited**

Sorry i posted the wrong reply...😕😕😕 😆

Anyhow....yeah as i said it was a lovely part!!!

Angad wanted to see adult dance practice...actually Kripa!!! Angad is getting attracted towards Kripa...

Do continue soon...

Can't wait to read the next part...I really want to see Angad dancing with kripa...Lets see what will happen as he doesn't know any dance moves...

Take care

Pari

thanks apari......i am glad u edited the comment as i got worried when u asked the question. I was like? did i not write what kripa was doing?😆😆 yes, let's see how pappu manages to dance with kripa😉

[quote=sonihinnu]what song is that u wrote at the begining????

that song was continued from part 4...thoya thoya by athma...the link is in part 4
haha shame rosie gt told!!!!
haha good riddance....lmao
awwww angad caring for rhea so cute!!!!
yay i hope angad and shabbir clear the differences coz of the kids!!!

kids can help bridge differences
uffff mishti again!!!!! shez lyk the brick wall between AK haha
mishti is jealous of kripa????

she is just a self centered obnoxious woman😡...kinda a female version of angad😕
i hope angad wont use mishti to make kripa jealis or somehting
omg......why does mishtis character remind me of rani in saawariya??? loooooool

rani was a nice character but ur right...they are both u know what
i hope mishti realizes angads love for kripa and helps him!!!!

well she will end up helping them but not because she wants to😆
i love that tumse milke song!!!!
before it woz rosie who joplted him outta his dream...and now mishti...its always someone that he doesnt like haha yes...precisely😆
hahaha woooo ak being dance partners....how will kripa accept this???? wait and see wo pappu ka kya haal banaati hai😉
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Edited by bheegi - 16 years ago

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Rima

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Posted: 16 years ago

#384

well before he starts on breaking her.. he has to come down from sky and let go his ego, right??

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bheegi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#385

Originally posted by: rima791
well before he starts on breaking her.. he has to come down from sky and let go his ego, right??

u bet he will have to....but wait and get ready for a roller coaster ride with AK😆

[quote=mahi-lover]

Nahinnnnnnnnn ... ok, that was dramatic ... you cant do this to me .. even Pallavi there does the same. How about my b-day gift? update, update a long one for me? 😳

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OK...that i'll do and i m sure ur waiting to 'see' pappu dance😆😉

[quote=aspatel2]HYey Bheegi diiiiii Awesome PArtS I love them a lot...... Kripa is such a strong girl i like her answering back to Angad and I think he deserves it at this point of the time..... may be not later... Reha is such a cutipie.... waiting for some more AnRe scenes...

I have question for you, "I need a man!" Kripa stated, "because the step involves lifting …..I can't expect a woman to do that." how can kripa not find a man for her adult group... didnt you said in 3rd part that couple were dancing... and too if the step involves lifting, how come she expects "couple" (two woman) to do it... u know what i mean...if she is teaching to all femal sutdent than why can't she except woman to do lifting eventually they have to do it.... Just wondering.....

Pls update soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon

Axita....

[/quote] thanks axita...yes she will melt but when and how??? wait and see😃

yes she said she needed a man as all the other couples just follow her and her partner's lead. normally, it's her and prithvi and everyone else just copies them but today she wants to show them a new step....but ur right, she could have asked one of the other students to hep lekin phir kahani kaise banti??😆😆😆

Edited by bheegi - 16 years ago

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Niyati Joshi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#386

wooow!!!!! cant believe what just happened!!!!! hehe....angad's gonna be kripa's partner!!!! wow!!! im serously waiting for that now!!!!

angad's already dreamin bout kripa!!!! woohoo!!!! that was pretty quick!!!! so it wont take much tym before angad is a 'deewana' of kripa!! hehe....

he's gettin attached to rhea though he wont acknowledge the fact....seems like rhea will help bridge the gap between angad and shabbir too!!!! im betting on it!!! hehe....

AK dancing together is gonna be a treat to read!!! and i know u're gonna put full justice to both their feelings in that part....so cant wait for it!!!!!!

pls update soon!!! im guessin u'l do it in 3-4 days max....right???

love u!!
Niyati...

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...anshu...

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Posted: 16 years ago

#387

thanx for d pm di

sorry for being late

bt my sem exams r in a month nd i hav nt studied a jot in dis sem 😭

so time 2 study now😆

as for d update

rhea is definitely a star

she alonwid krips r changing angad for gud

polite for d first time to shabbir

nt reacting to mishty inappropriately

breaking up wid rosie well cum 2 think of it can it b counted among gud things😉

so he is now dreaming abt krips gud going angad keep it up nd u will b in love sooner rather den later

nd i m real excited abt d dance pairing

waiting di

update soon

anshu

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bheegi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#388

Originally posted by: coolpal
hey bheegi di, this part was just amazing! First of all u made my day by kicking that Rosie out!!!LOL, then the interaction btwn Angad and Rhea was great, also Angad not being so mean anymore to ppl, the way he said bye to shabbir and his daughter. and then my favorite part was the end when angad saw kripa as the egyptian princess, and yeahhh so looking forward to Angad being her dance partner!! was waiting for that, update soon!!!

thanks coolpal....yes that was kripa's 4th roop he saw😳...wait and see what happens😊

[quote=aish_punk]Hey bheegi..cute part...

thanks aish....i know u mean angad-rhea😆

Rhea is such a cute character..she aldready made frnds wid Radhika n Shabbir too!! She has dyslexia bt it dusnt seem lykk @ awl!! dylexia just effects their reading, not their intelligence😊

Mishti is soo wantin Angad... bt he wanz Kripa... Mishti actually asked Angad 4 awl tat crap!! weird lady I tell u... shes soo afta Angad!! bt gud Angad is tryn 2 ignore her mishti is just a greedy small business owner😡

d dance sequence wz gud...btw itz Amrita rao nt Amrita Arora...newy it dusnt rilli matter

oh did i write amrita arora? sorry..i meant Rao...thanks 4 the correction

he he....kahani aage badhaani jo thi😆

Plzzz cont soon... itz gonna b an awesum prt I noe

Thnx 4 d PM...i cudnt miss dis wunnerful update!!

awww...thanks....will update in 1-2 days

Aishwarya[/quote]

[quote=noyonika]wooow!!!!! cant believe what just happened!!!!! hehe....angad's gonna be kripa's partner!!!! wow!!! im serously waiting for that now!!!!
now the fun starts😆....thanks niyati

angad's already dreamin bout kripa!!!! woohoo!!!! that was pretty quick!!!! so it wont take much tym before angad is a 'deewana' of kripa!! hehe.... he already is😳

he's gettin attached to rhea though he wont acknowledge the fact....seems like rhea will help bridge the gap between angad and shabbir too!!!! im betting on it!!! hehe.... she already has started😃

AK dancing together is gonna be a treat to read!!! and i know u're gonna put full justice to both their feelings in that part....so cant wait for it!!!!!! i hope so....thanks 4 the confidence😊

pls update soon!!! im guessin u'l do it in 3-4 days max....right??? maybe 1-2 days

love u!! love ya too😊
Niyati...
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[quote=someanshu2008]hi

thanx for d pm di

sorry for being late

bt my sem exams r in a month nd i hav nt studied a jot in dis sem 😭

so time 2 study now😆

thanks anshu....go study...what ru doing here??😆

as for d update

rhea is definitely a star

she alonwid krips r changing angad for gud

polite for d first time to shabbir

nt reacting to mishty inappropriately

breaking up wid rosie well cum 2 think of it can it b counted among gud things😉

ye she has started changing but just started....let's wait and see when kripa will melt towards him

so he is now dreaming abt krips gud going angad keep it up nd u will b in love sooner rather den later

nd i m real excited abt d dance pairing i bet angad is anxiously waiting too😆

waiting di

update soon

anshu[/quote]

thanks Hinnu😊

Edited by bheegi - 16 years ago

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Rima

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Posted: 16 years ago

#389

i def am ready for the roller coaster ride di

can't wait for it

i guess the fun just begans now

do cont soon

will simone be showing up anytime soon??? or no??

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armaghan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#390

fascinating and exciting concept loved it all everythings great though i dont like angad very much right now till he reforms and behave everything else was great wow angads daydreaming dancing with kripa was just wondering will kripa dance with him everythings just great do con soon