Shall We Dance- AK ff- part 15(end) pg 128(3/17) - Page 37

Gr8 part. Lol…Angad is so curious to see Kripa……and because of that he took Rhea early making all kinds of excuses. Looks like Angad's changing… for once he even talk to Shabbir. Eager to read the next part…

Sangeeta Di…

I knew this was coming…Remember I told you in my comment to the last update that I kind of know how you are going to take this story forward---Well, I was right! YAY!!! I'm starting to think on your terms now…lol…I knew that there would be a situation where Prithvi would be held-up and Angad would have to come to the rescue and be Kripa's dance partner….I think I have a hinch of how your going to further this story also…lol…So far, I'm on the right path…Let's see if I am right the next time! LOL…

Great job Di! Seriously, although there was very less AK interaction in this update and more of Angad's thoughts and emotions, it was STILL beautifully penned down by you!

Thank God that Rosie is out of the story for the time being! LOL..

Awww, Rhea and Radhika bonding..So sweet!

You know Di, for some strange reason, I imagine Sunaina (Anjali from DMG) as the Kanan in this FF…I think it fits her persona for some weird reason..I love Sunaina though..lol..

Explaining that she had dyslexia and that she was not dumb, just different, could be an arduous task as she had learnt through her last few years in school.

I agree..I imagine it to be a very hard task too! It takes a lot to make people understand!

Eww…I hate Mishti…She needs to get a life…Making advances on Angad…Right now Angad's thoughts are wandering only on Kripa so Misthi needs to stay away..LOL…Mishti puts her personal benefit above anything else..Disgusting…

Like I said before in DYM from Ridzi's point of view, Angad can't run away from Kripa…Something or the other will always pull him more closer to her! Kripa could keep on being rude with him—which is justified---but sooner or later she is going to be drawn to this arrogant jerk..LOL..

Angad, stung by her nastiness one more time, was rendered speechless and wordless yet again. The more she nipped at him, the more he wanted her.

Dialogue(s) of the Update:

"Aise ghoor ghoor kar kya dekha rahe ho?" Kripa snapped her fingers in front of his face, "Ladkiyaan tho bahut dekhi hain tumney…..main koi ajooba hoon kya?"

"Why…why," he was all flustered, "why would I want to look at you? How can you be so presumptuous? How do you know what I am thinking?" His nostrils flared angrily.

"Mujhey kya pata? As far as I know….men only think from below their waists….not their heads…..mujhey kya pata is dimaag mein tumhare kitna bhoosa bhara hua hai?" She scorned at him.

"YOU HAVE NO RIGHT TO SPEAK TO ME LIKE THAT!" Angad was offended by her constant jabs at his intelligence and thinking, "tum apne aap ko samajhti kya ho?"

"An intelligent, smart and brave woman who men like you can never intimidate or get…..got it Mr?" She snapped her fingers again, turned around and slithered away like a serpent after spewing her venom.

LOL! So I loved this convo..I could so imagine Neha Bamb and IQ doing this scene Perfectly!!! I LOVED LOVED LOVED this line you used--- She snapped her fingers again, turned around and slithered away like a serpent after spewing her venom---so creative…I could never think in terms like that! I like how you compared her to a serpent! I would have never thought of that! LOL…Great job di!

Okay Di, I read this update in school and hence I was able to comment on it today itself..lol…Now, I have like Baylor Uni deadline approaching…Just need to apply and request my transcript from my counselor…and IM DONE! LOL…

Okay, see you in DYM now

Continue soon!

Love

Anita

P.S- This one favorite reader of yours—among the other favorites you have—will continue to give you detailed comments!😊

Yeahhhhh! Finally some action :P!!! Loving it!

🤗Awwww di.......it sveryyyy cute part.....😉👏

just oe word:FANTASTIC!! loved it all dii!!

aww...such an adorable part di!! i simply luv this song!!! im really srry fr not replying lately....in fact even the AR ff's latest update was fab!!!!!!!!! lols...i hav to rush rite now but i luved each and every bit of both ffs.........angad's back talks at mishti....nd thank goodness prithvi is already engaged...(lols i dunt think i have left a comment fr a while so i need to back track a lil)

Hey awesome job huns! Loved it. Thanx for the pm. :)

Originally posted by: monikaseth

Hahahahaha angad is

really joker .

thanks monu....yes angad is funny😆

Angad kripa ko dekh ke gaya kaam se phir bhi nahi samjahta 😆

Wow kripa kya baat hai she is too good i think for him , misty she is tooooooooooooo much chipkoooooooooo.

kripa usey aasmaan se zameen par le aayegi😆

Awesome update sangeeta .

Originally posted by: kvn1983

waoh👍🏼 bheegi di its mind blowing⭐️ superb😊😉 angand is changed so much👍🏼😎 he behave properly with reah🤗 and also save to give excuse to radhika😳 that she can't read properly😊 and also reply to shabbir so suprising😆😆😆 and Ak is omg😊 they always fight life tom😆 and jerry😆 so cute👍🏼❤️ plz continue it soon😊

"why Do We Close Our Eyes Wen We Sleep - Wen We Dream, Wen We Kiss?
This Is Becoz The Most Precious Thing In The World Is Unseen.
when I Close My Eyes I See You!"

"when You Love Someone Truly,
You Don't Look For Faults,
You Don't Look For Answers,
You Don't Look For Mistakes.
Instead, You Fight The Mistakes,
You Accept The Faults And Overlook The Excuses."

Originally posted by: arwa72

ooooooooh this so funny I can't help but laugh at the humour you've included in here.

This Angad has seriously gone mad I think after Kripa that he keeps gawking at her and then going into a day dream. And what sensuous dreams he has.

Cool part and now Iguess it'll be even more fun to see him dancing well atleast trying to dance with Kripa.

ANd this Mishti......oh hate the very sight of her.