OMG!
Was I right or what...LOL...Di, im like seriously beginning to think on your terms now..I knew Angad--being a temporary dancer would have to turn into a non-temporary substitute dancer...I was positive that Prithvi would get hurt somehow after reading the fourth update for some reason..It was a sixth sense or something..and I was right..YAY! LOL...If only I could figure out how you are taking DYM---I don't think that I could figure out what things are going to happen in DYM as ANYTHING can happen..LOL..I'll let you suprise me with that one...
Di, you did a fabulous job with the whole update, as always... The way you portray emotions and all--I swear, that has to be your forte in creative writing! It is awesome..I get soo attached to a character when I read the description of thoughts and emotions...Kudos!
Kripa muttered angrily to herself, "pole? He is probably worse than a pole!"
LOL! Although I might agree he might be worse than a pole since he has played only cricket in his life, Kripa should give him a chance...LOL...I love Kripa's one-liners Di! Have me laughing for a LONG time...You have that affect Di on us readers with your characters = D
The places Angad's imagination is taking him..He is prob feeling like he is in heaven..LMAO!
Angad observed intently and imagined holding Kripa just like the other dancers were holding each other. In his imagination, they were twirling with each other-him holding her close to his body, his hands on her waist, and their eyes glued to each other.
An embarrassed Angad lowered his eyes as the other dancers broke into splits, "Oh…sorry…..I..I didn't realize." She slid off his arms, but something strange happened inside her- a strange inexplicable feeling she had never felt before- as their bodies touched each other and his fingers brushed against her waist on her way down from his arms. She lowered her gaze and turned around to play the music. Angad in the meantime was still delirious from her fragrance and the feel of her bare waist on his fingers. It was not any perfume, but her natural scent that had him all aroused.
Wonderful detail...That sure must have been heaven for him! LOL.
I loved the way you handled the whole Press-Reporter scene...It was commendable...All the news reporters fishing for the masaledar news as that really happens in real life with huge stars...Loved how you portrayed it with that real aspect and then Angad having to act normal in front of the press, although being furious for a moment...Lovely!
I miss Kanan! Although I initially start out imagining Gauri playing her, my mind somehow goes to Sunaina...I can't help it..lol.. Bring her back Di! LOL...
LOL..I liked how for one moment Angad hated how Mishti acted with Kripa and then he is like..
Angad smiled at Mishti's statement, "this chipkali is not that bad…..mujhey kitni achchi tarah samajhti hai."
LMAO!
LMAO--Kripa made him dance on Pappu can't dance saala...WOW...She gots guts to be messing with a egocentric star like him...lol..
Dialogue of the update:
"LISTEN YOUNG LADY….ENOUGH IS ENOUGH…….AAJ TUMNEY MUJHEY BAHUT BADHA CHALLENGE DIYA HAI……YOU DON'T KNOW THE REAL ANGAD KHANNA…….AGAR MAIN KUCH HAASIL KARNA CHAAHOON THO KAR LETA HOON…….I AM A QUICK LEARNER TOO…….IF I AM AT THE TOP IN CRICKET TODAY …….IT'S BECAUSE OF MY NEVER SAY DIE ATTITUDE…….AB DEKHNA DANCE MEIN BHI MAIN PAPPU SE MICHAEL JACKSON BANKAR KAISE DIKHATA HOON……..BAHUT GAROOR HAI NA TUMHEIN APNE HUNAR PAR……..DEKHNA YOU WILL BEG ME TO DANCE WITH YOU ONE DAY……YEH MERA VAADA HAI……YOU CAN'T SCARE ME OFF WITH THESE PAPPU TACTICS……IF YOU ARE STUBBORN….SO AM I MS KRIPA SHARMA!"
I so want to see the real Angad Khanna.I bet Kripa sort of wants to see him too...They were passionate dialogues on Angad's side...Great Job Di...
This was not how it was supposed to be- she would have to make sure not to lose her self control in front of him ever again- he had no right to see her tears, nor her weaknesses…….
Awww...I wonder what her financial situation and weaknesses are...hmm
Great update Di..I was fast this time..LOL..you posted SWD fast this time.---or so I think...lol
Continue soon! DYM's turn coming this week... = D
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