tum se hi(short ff).... the end! - Page 10

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!Mindblowing!!!! thanks dear..

Raj hamesha Naina ke saath hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊hamesha tha aur rahega

They had gotten married and now had a beautiful daughter Riya!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Thats great!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is a perfect husband and the most wonderful father too!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 always a perfect human

Naina's speech was too good!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏It was so emotional and touching!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 i think that way even navin would earn peace...

From every word of Naina flowed her love for Raj!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ she is madly in love now thats y

Raj is now the happiest man with Naina and Riya with him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 he sure is

Naina ko uski book 'Tum se hi' ke liye award mil raha hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Wow!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 book likha kisne hain😉😆

Raj ne Naina ki diary dekkhi toh he persuaded her to publish it as a book!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Thats great!!!! 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 he is someone who respects talent dear

The book topped the bestsellet charts and she was nominated for an award!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Thats really too good!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 haan us jury member mein main bhi thi 😉😆

Raj aur Naina ke saath ab jo bhi hoga sab accha hoga!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Ab kuch galat nahi ho sakta!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 i wont let anything happen...

Raj is getting naughty!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳ab tho shaadi ho gayi na tho chaltha hai...

Raj and Naina are so romantic!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

The song is very nice and suits them perfectly!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 thanks again

The song actually reminds me of another of my favourite pairs jinpe yeh gaana hamesha hota rehta tha!!!!!😊 😊 😊

They were a very strange pair................Ranbir and Kanya in Kucch Ish Tarah!!!!!😊 😊 😊u know na ki i am lil weak with all k serial characters but i am glad that it reminded u of someone u like😃

Raj and Naina are remembering their wedding,their first meeting,etc!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊So sweet!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Their journey is incomplete without each other and their destination is same for sure!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Muskilon mein bhi they have each other!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 ab yeh saath nahi chootega

Raj ne Naina se kaha usse kabhi chhodkar naa jaane ke liye kyunki Naina ke bina woh adhura hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊So romantic!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Naina also said ke kabhi nahi jayegi!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊And Raj was happy!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 now everything is complete....

Their lives begun and ended with each other!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️Tum se hi.......... 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

what a beautiful way to end dis fic.................

fabulous.......absolutely wonderful

dis fic was marvellous n awesome.....

cont writing n give us yet another frm ur collection soon

Originally posted by: rituka7

damn cool
the ending is superb
the fiction is awesome

Originally posted by: Nishttha

it was really really delightful to read this ff.. thanks again..

so sweet of u dear...glad that i have readers like u....pls do support my works...

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Really amazing end yaar. 👏

It's good to know that Naina ko vo award mila aur saath me do awards aur as being a good mom and a superb wife.😛

Originally posted by: Deeya

hey dear..... the ending was beautiful... all i can say about ur fic is short nd sweet...

im off to studying right now... but will come back later and edit my post... with he answers to ur questions!!!!!

awww sweety u took time from ur studied to read this, i am so touched....

okie im back... nd considering ur questions now....

1) what (which part) did u like the most in this fic?

To be very frank with u.... i liked the fic on the whole...... all the parts were good... since there wasnt much description about any particular scene except the beginning and the end part i cant realli tell u which scene i liked..... i jus loved the fic... it gave us RN fans a nice feeling..... we cud neva see RN together on screen but wid ur fic v cud atleast imagine a logical ending to the pair of them.....

2) what (which part) did u not like in this fic?

Well... there was no part that i didnt like... i think u r talented nd must continue to entertain us....

3)what do u think about the ending?

the ending was perfect... no flaws no bloopers... jus perfect...... and i loved it..... esp Naina's speech...

4)what would u like to change about this particular fic?

Nothing at all..... it was jus fabulous... and lovely.... so continue entertaining us

Originally posted by: *Rajeevian*

excellent ff.loved the end👏

Originally posted by: saridena

very sweet ff

and short one too

nice ending

plzzzzzz updat ur other ff asap

plzzzzzz pm me

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Thanx for informing dear...I didn't knew dat fiction is ending cos i never read the second last part..I didn't knew abt it..It was truely outstanding ..way Raj helped Naina in every step n hardships without caring for himself..Where do we get such kinda people nowadays.Every1 around is so selfish...he got shot just to Save Naina ..He didn't care for his own life...👏..Wat a love..Thank God Naina realized her feelings n confessed her love for him...😊

ya when i did not see ur reply for that part i thought may be u lost interest but am glad ki i liked the whole thing....

Now abt the last part..It was brilliant too👏..Very subtle n cute..So Naina is married to Raj n she has a daughter too..such a cute fairytale romance..😛She is been awarded for the Book she wrote..gr8..👏...The song u chosed was 1 of my Favourites..Just perfect for the moment..😃

thanks again...

Now coming to your questions...

1) what (which part) did u like the most in this fic?

They were too many..When Raj met Naina for the first time... But she felt something in her heart, something which said that he was not a stranger, 'woh ajnabi hoke bhi ajnabi nahi lagthe' ..Too cute..It was all over.

Den the 1 in which all those who were behind trapping navin had been arrested and put behind bars all thanks to rajveer. He had fulfilled his duty as a friend.
But something else also had happened during this time. Rajveer had revealed the truth to naina about navin, about how helpless he was to take the step that he was forced to take.
Naina was dumbfounded over this confession. But slowly she accepted that Raj was not at fault..

When she met him at the graduation day n they both wanna say so much but cudn't say in words..

Den he got shot just to Save Naina ..He didn't care for his own life...👏..Wat a love..Thank God Naina realized her feelings n confessed her love for him...😊..Then the whole last update where Naina n Raj r enjoying their married life

2) what (which part) did u not like in this fic?

i think i enjoyed reading every bit of your fiction..Not a single part was boring..😃but i just wanna know wat happen to the other 5...Wat was their future like..???

3)what do u think about the ending?

It was perfect for the readers..I just loved the simplicity of this fiction..u expressed emotions in a real beutiful way..Hats off to u👏

4)what would u like to change about this particular fic?

nothing cos u r the writer of this fiction..Its your baby n u have really shaped it well.Story was very gripping n i enjoyed every bit of it..U r n exceptional writer dear..

wow i am thankful for such a detailed feedback dear...thanku for the support...

Hope u like my comments no they were just compliments😛

ofcourse dear...i loved ur comments....thanks again..