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Nishttha Nath

@EimenEnchanted

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: mystified
hey guys....

finally this fic is over...i had great time writing this and i am glad to have readers like u who supported me throughout😃...i am really thankful to all of u😳....

now i need one more favor from u alll....i need u all tell me ur sincere opinion about the following😳.....

1) what (which part) did u like the most in this fic?

parting scene.. it was truly beautiful..

2) what (which part) did u not like in this fic? none

3)what do u think about the ending? it was really really sweet.. raj with altogether new emotions!!

4)what would u like to change about this particular fic? nothing.. its good the way it has been created..

pls do say guys as it will be very useful for me to improve myself in the future....

until then

take care

it was really really delightful to read this ff.. thanks again..

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#82

Really amazing end yaar. 👏

It's good to know that Naina ko vo award mila aur saath me do awards aur as being a good mom and a superb wife.😛

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago

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Deeya

@Deeya

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#83

hey dear..... the ending was beautiful... all i can say about ur fic is short nd sweet...

im off to studying right now... but will come back later and edit my post... with he answers to ur questions!!!!!

okie im back... nd considering ur questions now....

1) what (which part) did u like the most in this fic?

To be very frank with u.... i liked the fic on the whole...... all the parts were good... since there wasnt much description about any particular scene except the beginning and the end part i cant realli tell u which scene i liked..... i jus loved the fic... it gave us RN fans a nice feeling..... we cud neva see RN together on screen but wid ur fic v cud atleast imagine a logical ending to the pair of them.....

2) what (which part) did u not like in this fic?

Well... there was no part that i didnt like... i think u r talented nd must continue to entertain us....

3)what do u think about the ending?

the ending was perfect... no flaws no bloopers... jus perfect...... and i loved it..... esp Naina's speech...

4)what would u like to change about this particular fic?

Nothing at all..... it was jus fabulous... and lovely.... so continue entertaining us

Edited by Deeya - 16 years ago

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saivarsha

@*Rajeevian*

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#84

excellent ff.loved the end👏

Edited by *Rajeevian* - 16 years ago

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soumya

@saridena

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#85

very sweet ff

and short one too

nice ending

plzzzzzz updat ur other ff asap

plzzzzzz pm me

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#86

Thanx for informing dear...I didn't knew dat fiction is ending cos i never read the second last part..I didn't knew abt it..It was truely outstanding ..way Raj helped Naina in every step n hardships without caring for himself..Where do we get such kinda people nowadays.Every1 around is so selfish...he got shot just to Save Naina ..He didn't care for his own life...👏..Wat a love..Thank God Naina realized her feelings n confessed her love for him...😊

Now abt the last part..It was brilliant too👏..Very subtle n cute..So Naina is married to Raj n she has a daughter too..such a cute fairytale romance..😛She is been awarded for the Book she wrote..gr8..👏...The song u chosed was 1 of my Favourites..Just perfect for the moment..😃

Now coming to your questions...

1) what (which part) did u like the most in this fic?

They were too many..When Raj met Naina for the first time... But she felt something in her heart, something which said that he was not a stranger, 'woh ajnabi hoke bhi ajnabi nahi lagthe' ..Too cute..It was all over.

Den the 1 in which all those who were behind trapping navin had been arrested and put behind bars all thanks to rajveer. He had fulfilled his duty as a friend.
But something else also had happened during this time. Rajveer had revealed the truth to naina about navin, about how helpless he was to take the step that he was forced to take.
Naina was dumbfounded over this confession. But slowly she accepted that Raj was not at fault..

When she met him at the graduation day n they both wanna say so much but cudn't say in words..

Den he got shot just to Save Naina ..He didn't care for his own life...👏..Wat a love..Thank God Naina realized her feelings n confessed her love for him...😊..Then the whole last update where Naina n Raj r enjoying their married life

2) what (which part) did u not like in this fic?

i think i enjoyed reading every bit of your fiction..Not a single part was boring..😃but i just wanna know wat happen to the other 5...Wat was their future like..???

3)what do u think about the ending?

It was perfect for the readers..I just loved the simplicity of this fiction..u expressed emotions in a real beutiful way..Hats off to u👏

4)what would u like to change about this particular fic?

nothing cos u r the writer of this fiction..Its your baby n u have really shaped it well.Story was very gripping n i enjoyed every bit of it..U r n exceptional writer dear..

Hope u like my comments no they were just compliments😛

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#87

I know everyone is saying about the other five but I don't think you are wrong in that aspect in this fic!!!!😊 😊 😊

This fic was about RN and it was a short fic!!!!😊 😊 😊

If you include the other five and show their future then it becomes a long fic!!!!

So its perfectly all right!!!!!

And about the others unke saath bhi jo huya hoga accha hi huya hoga!!!!😊 😊 😊

Kehte hai anth mein sab theek ho jata hai aur agar sab theek naa ho toh woh anth nahi picture abhi baaki hai mere dost!!!!😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#88

nice story dear

if u write any other fic plz let me knoe i would love to read that

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sofia

@mystified

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#89

*sob* *sob* *sob*

don worry guys yeh khushi ki aansoo hain....i am so overwhelmed by ur response guys....u all have made my day....and i am greatful for that.....

i think i should say something at this point...

this was initially not at all meant to be a fic...i just wrote it when i got frustrated of wat was happening in lrl with raj's sudden exit....but it is coz of u guys that i decided to post it here and i am glad that i did....

and yes i know that i messed up a lil bit by not showing all the other characters in detail....thats coz i thought it would be too stretching and don worry they are all fine and well settled😃.....

some of u have asked me to write another rn fic and i am honestly thinking abt it and when i do i hope to get the same love i got for both my ffs....

luv u all...take care...

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sofia

@mystified

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: iqbal-pallavi

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