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Posted: 16 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: mystified

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Posted: 16 years ago

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sofia

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Posted: 16 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: Nishttha
ud soonnn......

thanku so much nishtta...it feels so nice to have readers like u😳....

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sofia

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Posted: 16 years ago

#74

Tum se hi…

Two years later…

She was startled out of her thoughts by the roaring cheers. For a moment she couldn't understand where she was or what she was doing. But a hand came and touched her and she was brought back to reality.

She was glad that she always had him beside her. He was there to support her, to scold her, to care for her, to protect her, to guide her and to love her the way she was.

He smiled at her to assure that everything was alright. She smiled at him too telling him that she was okay. He was convinced and continued his work.

He was now busy playing with their eight month old daughter. Yes, they both got married and had a beautiful daughter. They named her Riya..Riya Singh Shekawat.

Riya was the darling of their lives. Riya loved to play with her father. She loved kicking him with her small tiny legs and he was enjoying every bit of fatherhood.

Naina loved the bond between raj and riya. She knew that he was the perfect husband and was now assured that he was the most wonderful father too.

Suddenly there was an announcement for Mrs. Naina singh shekawat to come on stage. She smiled and went towards the stage. She was asked to speak a few words. She went towards the mic and began,

" I am not good at making speeches. I would like to thank God almighty for being with me in all stages of my life, for giving me wonderful people in my life who love me for what I am. I am thankful for receiving such a wonderful husband as raj, who I know will support me in all my decisions and love me more than himself..and my daughter riya who has made our lives complete by her presence." raj was smiling at her and she was at a loss of words.

Soon she regained herself and continued "I want to thank this association who considered me worthy enough for receiving this award…this book… 'tum se hi' is the experience of a simple girl whose life changed dramatically due to destiny and the one person who supported her in all walks of life.

This is my tribute to my mentor, my husband raj who loved me even in my hatred and embraced me even in my revolt. I am thankful to my husband Major Rajveer singh shekawat, who gave me the encouragement to publish this book.

I dedicate this book to the fond memory of my brother, Captain navin singh ahluwalia, who was a martyr. Thanku all for appreciating my work and I feel myself blessed to be receiving such an honour for my first venture." She finished saying with tearful eyes.

She came and sat beside him and he held her hand with one of his while the other held riya. He was the happiest man now that he had the two most important people in his life with him

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Naina was awarded by the bookers' association for the 'realistic portrayal of human emotions', a special award from the jury for her book titled 'tum se hi…'

She had penned down all the events that had happened in her life. The day when she came to kma, her meeting with raj, her friends, her mission, her relation with raj and many more things in her diary. Raj accidentally noticed it one day after their marriage.

He was surprised at the talent that naina possessed as she seemed to have an extraordinarily beautiful way of describing her feelings. He persuaded her to publish it as a book.

She was reluctant at first considering it as a teasing from raj. Later when she saw the sincerity in his eyes, she decided to publish it. The book topped the bestseller charts and she was nominated for an award.

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In the night…

Naina put riya to sleep. Raj was already lying down in the bed. Naina came and sat down beside him.

"I was very proud of u today naina"

" I am the one who should be saying that…not everybody gets a chance to have someone so understanding as u raj…what would have happened to me if I didn't meet you."

"Well now that we have met and are together I don't want to think about anything negative"

"u r right…from here on everything will be positive and I can't wait to embark on this new journey….i have all that I need…two people whom I love more than my life….my husband and my daughter…nothing can go wrong now"

" I will not let anything wrong happen naina, I promise…u know why" he asked smiling with a twinkle in his eyes.

"why?" she perfectly knew what was about to happen now yet pretended to be unknown.

"bcoz…", he closed in on her.

"bcoz" she found herself blushing profusely.

"bcoz I love u.." he said and kissed her eyelids and descended towards her cheek.

She sighed in contentment and whispered "I love u too raj…I love u too…more than myself" as he continued to caress her.

This song at the moment could compliment the couple who were very much in love…

Naa hai yeh paana naa
khona hi hai
tera naa hona jaane
Kyun hona hai yeh

She released herself from him and began to run from there. He caught her hand and gently pulled her towards him. She still had her back towards him and he kissed her on the shoulder.

Tum se hi din hoti hai
surmayi shaam aati hai
tum se hi tum se hi
Har gadi saans aati hai
Zindagi kehlati hai
tum se hi tum se hi

He turned her towards him and made her look at him. They were gazing at each other with so much love and adoration.

aankhon mein aankhen teri
baahon mein baahein teri
mera na mujhme kuch raha
hua kya
baaton mein baatein teri
raatein saugatein teri
kyun tera sab yeh ho gaya
hua kya
mein kahin bhi jaata hoon
tum se hi mil jaata hoon
tum se hi tum se hi...

shor mein khamoshi hai
thodi si behoshi hai
tum se hi tum se hi...

They remembered their marriage. The day when they promised to be together forever. As they took their circles around the fire, they promised to do everything possible to keep each other happy.

aada sa vaada kabhi
aade se zyaada kabhi
jee chahe kis tearh karoon wafa ka

The day when they met for the first time and how he wished her good luck in completing her mission and how he had turned the night to day to fulfill his promise.

chode na choote kabhi
thode na toothe kabhi
jo daaga tum se jud gaya
wafa ka
mein tera sar maya hoon
jo bhi mein ban paya hoon
tum se hi tum se hi

On their last day at kma they had thought that this was the end and may be they were not meant to be together but fate had other plans for them.

With time they realized that their journey was incomplete without each other and their destination was the same.

raastein mil jaate hai
manzilein mil jaati hai
tum se hi tum se hi (they hugged each other)

Thus naina and raj were together again and secure with each other.

Life is beautiful when lived with the ones we love. They faced too many tribulations to reach to this point. From now on all they could hope was for things to get better and better.

Even in the worst situations they have each other and that is all that matters.

Raj took naina in his arms and moved towards the bed. They were dozing off quickly as they had a very eventful day today. Before drifting off to sleep completely raj said to naina "naina mujhe kabhi mat chodna, kyunki tumhare bina main adhoora hoon" naina's eyes were closing out already due to tiredness but she managed to say "kabhi bhi nahi chodoongi raj" and the next words of naina, brought a pleasing smile on raj's face and they both went into deep slumber in each others' arms.

"tum se hi shuru hoti hai meri zindagi aur tumhi se khatam...tum se hi..."

The end.

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sofia

@mystified

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Posted: 16 years ago

#75

hey guys....

finally this fic is over...i had great time writing this and i am glad to have readers like u who supported me throughout😃...i am really thankful to all of u😳....

now i need one more favor from u alll....i need u all tell me ur sincere opinion about the following😳.....

1) what (which part) did u like the most in this fic?

2) what (which part) did u not like in this fic?

3)what do u think about the ending?

4)what would u like to change about this particular fic?

pls do say guys as it will be very useful for me to improve myself in the future....

until then

take care

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Yasmin

@Yazzi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: mystified

in a way i am sad that this fic has ended, but then again all good things come to an end ... i really enjoyed reading it, and Sofi truly speaking, hun you've got an amazing talent ...

now before commenting on the last update i will answer the questions ...

1) what (which part) did u like the most in this fic?

the part i liked the most was the parting scene ... when Naina came to say the final goodbye, (unknown to her that she'll meet him again), it was really well written, and the understanding between them was so sweet, that it brought tears to my eyes .. 😭

2) what (which part) did u not like in this fic?

lmao ... when you shot my Jaanu .... just kiddin, 😆 😆 i liked every part of your fic ... and speaking the truth .... i will tell you if i spot any mistakes or anything from your fic because i'll know you'll do the same for me ... 😃

3)what do u think about the ending?

fantabulous .... seen i just made a word up, specially for you 😆 😆 i loved the last part ... especially the last sentence ... it was so sweet ... 😳

4)what would u like to change about this particular fic?

i wouldn't change anything but i will defo give the other characters importance as well, i know it's an RN fic ... but the other characters should have their parts as well, but because this was just a short story i understand that giving other characters importance would have made this a long story lol

and now for the comment for the last update ... it was amazing hun ... liked RN scene, and Naina's speech was very cute .... the way she spoke about Raj, one could tell that she is madly in love with her mentor her husband ....

btw Riya is a very cute name ... i can't believe my jaanu has a kid .... that cheat 😆 😆 dokebaaz, daagabaaz and all the other baaz in the world 😆 😆 main lut gayi main mit gayi .... lmao .... okay i'll stop my rona dona .... i'll do that in my spare time ... with box of tissue in my hand ...

LOVED the song ..... 😳 😳 and it was so apt for them ... and now i know why you used that title ...

anyways over all the whole fic ... was BRILL 👏 👏 👏 <---- i could have give you more off these but i'll be here all day ...

take care 😃

yasmin

p.s now i am heading off to your other fic ... it better be long .... i've got that belan ready ....
😆

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

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Posted: 16 years ago

#77

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!Mindblowing!!!!

Raj hamesha Naina ke saath hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

They had gotten married and now had a beautiful daughter Riya!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Thats great!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is a perfect husband and the most wonderful father too!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Naina's speech was too good!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏It was so emotional and touching!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

From every word of Naina flowed her love for Raj!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Raj is now the happiest man with Naina and Riya with him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina ko uski book 'Tum se hi' ke liye award mil raha hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Wow!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Raj ne Naina ki diary dekkhi toh he persuaded her to publish it as a book!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Thats great!!!! 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

The book topped the bestsellet charts and she was nominated for an award!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Thats really too good!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Raj aur Naina ke saath ab jo bhi hoga sab accha hoga!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Ab kuch galat nahi ho sakta!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is getting naughty!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj and Naina are so romantic!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

The song is very nice and suits them perfectly!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

The song actually reminds me of another of my favourite pairs jinpe yeh gaana hamesha hota rehta tha!!!!!😊 😊 😊

They were a very strange pair................Ranbir and Kanya in Kucch Ish Tarah!!!!!😊 😊 😊

Raj and Naina are remembering their wedding,their first meeting,etc!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊So sweet!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Their journey is incomplete without each other and their destination is same for sure!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Muskilon mein bhi they have each other!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj ne Naina se kaha usse kabhi chhodkar naa jaane ke liye kyunki Naina ke bina woh adhura hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊So romantic!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Naina also said ke kabhi nahi jayegi!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊And Raj was happy!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Their lives begun and ended with each other!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️Tum se hi.......... 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

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Posted: 16 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: mystified

I can't believe it has ended!!!But I guess all good things come to an end!!!!😊 😊 😊

1) what (which part) did u like the most in this fic?

Raj and Naina's parting scene!!!!It was very emotional and well written and the end of the story!!!!

2) what (which part) did u not like in this fic?

None!!!!All the parts were very nice!!!!

3)what do u think about the ending?

It was very sweet!!!!Perfect ending to a perfect story!!!!

I really liked Riya!!!!Raj as great dad and their happy family!!!Wow!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

4)what would u like to change about this particular fic?

Well actually nothing but I would have liked it in more details!!!!I uinderstand it is a short fic and writeen like that!!!but I would have liked more detailed RN scenes!!!!

But its nice!!!!

Hoping to see another fic on RN from you soon!!!!

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fanatic 21

@fanatic 21

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#79

what a beautiful way to end dis fic.................

fabulous.......absolutely wonderful

dis fic was marvellous n awesome.....

cont writing n give us yet another frm ur collection soon

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Rituka

@rituka7

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Posted: 16 years ago

#80

damn cool
the ending is superb
the fiction is awesome

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