A RAHUL MUSKAAN STORY! - Page 30

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First of all I am really really sorry to have kept u guys waiting 4 such a long time.....really sorry.....fell really ill so i coudnt update the story and when I felt better and tried to update the story my internet connection failed me...so I coudnt update...

Heres the next part ( hope u like it ) ---
* Muskaan felt a hand on her shoulder...she turns around to see who it was *
Muskaan - Ashish bhaiyaa ??? ( Ashish was her cousin bro...they both loved each other a lot )
Ashish - haah main muskaan ! ( in a stern voice ) orr yeh tu kya karne jaa rahi hai Muskaan ???
Muskaan - main Rahul se bahut pyaar karti hu ...plz mujhe jaane do
Ashish - Nahi Muskaan tu nahi jaa sakti...
* Muskaan fell silent...she was hurt..she dint expect her brother who she loved the most did not let her go*
Ashish ( laughs ) - arrey pagli! main mazaak kar raha tha !! Tujhe kya lagaa ??? main tujhe jaane nahi dungaa ??
* Muskaan is relieved ....she hugs him *
Ashish - abb jaldi jaa....Train platform 6 par hain....
Muskaan - mummy papa...??
Ashish - tu fikar mat kar...main un logon ko samjhane ki koshish karungaa...( giving her a slight push ) ...abb jaldii jaa...warna train choot jayegii *
*Muskaan hugs him once more and calls the rest of the gang on her mobile 2 inform them about the train *
* She waves a quick goodbay to Ashish and runs to Platform 6 *
* The rest of the gang was already waiting for her on the platform *
* They all get into the train *
IN the compartment -
Armaan - Phew !!! finally yeh drama khatam ho gayaa..
Rahul - haah !! finally...
Ridzi - yeh drama tab nak nahi hogi jab tak in dono ( pointing at Rm ) ki shaadi nahi hoo jaati
Atul - arey haah....in dono ki shaadi Mumbai mein karva de ??
Rahul - na....too risky...Muskaan ke mummy papaa jante hoge ki hum Mumbai jaa rahe he...
Anjali - haah ye baat sahi he ! to orr fir kahan ??
Ridzi - Dont worry....I have a solutuon for this problem...
Armaan - kya ?
Ridzi - Fasalpur....
* The gang excahge confused looks *
Ridzi - Faslapur yaar ! wohi chota sa gaau.....
Anjali - oooh !!...good idea ridzi
Muskaan ( confused ) - tum loag kya bol rahe ho ?? kuch samjh mein nahi aa raha ...
Ridzi - fasalpur ek gaau hain jahan hum tum dono ki shaadi karwa sakte hain..
Rahul - lekin hum wahan jaaye kaise ??
Anjali - Iss train se hi !!
Atul - kya ??
Anjali ( rolling her eyes ) - Yeh train falsapur ke platform mein thodi der ke liye ruk jaayegii...tab hum loag utar jaayenge..simple !
Atul - lekin humne toh mumbai ki tickte le rakhi hain...
Anjali ( shrugs ) - atul......!
Armaan ( thinking ) - impressive...lekin tum dono iss fasalpur ke baare kaise jaante ho ??
Ridzi - hum dono papa ke saath Falsalpur gaaye te...papa ne wahan ek chota sa medical camp khola hain..
Armaan - oh !
Ajali - so falsalpur final ??
Muskaan - final !!
* All of them cheer *

Thats it guys...I know iits not all that impressive...but plz read on ....
P.S Ignore the spelling mistakes plz !

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