A RAHUL MUSKAAN STORY! - Page 32

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Posted: 16 years ago
i love it thank u sooooooo much
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Posted: 16 years ago

I know its too early too post an uodate but I wanted to make up for the days I dint update...so heres the nxt part ....hope u like it ---

* Muskaan was lying comfortably on her bed in the compartment....It was 5 mins to 12 o clock and Muskaan, Riddima, Anjali were in the same compartment....The boys were snoring peacefull in the compartment next to their *
* Anjali and Riddima were deep in their sleep....Muskaan meanwhile was awake....she was scared...At 10 o clock in the morning...she woudnt be Muskaan Chadda anymore...she would be Muskaan Rahul Gerewal....*
* Muskaan wasnt the only one awake....Rahul was awake too.....he was also lost in his thoughts...he was finally gonna marry the girl he wanted...finally after so many problems and obsacles they both were finally gonna be together forever....soon in his thoughts Rahul fell asleep *
* Muskaan still lay awake...she coudnt sleep....she was too exicted...she also felt sick so she ran into the washroom *
* Once in the bathroom....she washed her face...and stared at herself in the mirror...She wouldnt be the same Muskaan anymorw...she would belong to Rahul after the marriage...she smiled...she liked the idea of belonging to Rahul *
* Suddenly interrupting her thoughts she heard people screaming outside, The train stopped...she quickly tugged on the handle of the door....but it dint open...she tugged on it harder...after about 5 mins of tugging the washroom door...she managed to open the door...and the moment she opened the door...she found herself surrounded by fire *
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* Rahul and the rest of the gang had already got off the train.....Ridzi and Anjali were nursing a wounded man....Armaan and Rahul on the other hand were waiting for Muskaan *
Rahul ( tensed ) - somethings wrong....all the people have got down except Muskaan...Mujhe andar jaana chahiye
Armaan ( scared that Rahul will get into the blazing train ) - No....Main tujhe nahi jaane dungaa....( Catches him by the arm before he could run into the train )
Rahul ( Deperate ) - ( screaming ) ARMAAN !! TUM KYA KAR RAHE HO ??? MUSKAAN IS IN THE TRAIN...MUJHE JAANA HAI...CHOD
Armaan - Nahi...Main tujhe nahi jaane dungaa Rahul...no matter what...
* Suddenly a scream is heard from inside the train....it was Muskaan's voice *
Rahul - ( screaming ) ..ARMAAN ! AGAR RIDZI ADAR HOTI TO TUM ADAR NAHI JAATE KYA ?
* Armaan then understands what Rahul said...with a sigh he lets go of Rahul's arm and Rahul jumps into the blazing train *
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Thts it guyz...tell me wht do u think abt it !
PLZ CHK BELOW.....MORE UPDATES !

Edited by I-luv-Mayank - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
omg a fire!! eek!! please please please update soon! really want to know what happens next!! :D
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Posted: 16 years ago
ple pls ple ple ple ple ple ple ple ple ple continue i reallly want to read wat happens next 😭
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Posted: 16 years ago
Welcome back. 😊
They keep encountering obstacles. Poor guys! 😔
You can finish off this FF if you want but you must write another one then. 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Will update now....lemme finish writing it...

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Posted: 16 years ago
Lolz...Like I said before I wanna make it up to u guyz...so heres the next part !!
* Muskaan was out of the washroom...She was surrounded by fire....she screamt for help...but it was of no use ...no one could hear her as the train was empty *
* Suddenly she herad a voice...the same voice her ears ached to hear...Rahul's voice *
* Rahul was running toward her...even though she was stuck betweeb the flames...she couldnt help but admire how handsome he was......his red shirt brought out the bright hazel colour of his eyes....*
* As she was thinking about Rahul...she suddenly heard Rahul yell.. *
Rahul - MUSKAAN !!! LOOK OUT !!
* But before Muskaan could do or say anything....and metal bar from above Muskaan broke loose and she was knocked out *
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Later in the hospital ---
* Rahul had succesfully saved Muskaan from the fire...but he unfortunatly coudnt save her from the metal bar that fell on her head....and she was currently in a serious condition *
* Armaan, ridzi , anjali, and Atul were sitting on the bench...while Rahul was pacing up and down the hall *
* Ridzi cpmes up to Rahul and places a hand on his shoulder *
Ridzi - Hume Muskaan ke parents ko phone karke unhe batana chahiye Rahul...
* Rahul does not say anything....he felt his tears stinging...he nods at Ridzi..*
* Ridzi gives Rahul a small smile and walks away to call them *
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( see page 46 for a small update )
Edited by I-luv-Mayank - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

* The next day *

*Muskaan was still critical...Rahul was desperate to see her but the doctor wouldnt allow him to meet her*
* Rahul paced franatically in the corridor...the rest of the gand was sleeping on the benches *
* Then suddenly someone yelled his name...he turned around to see who it was...MUSKAAN'S PARENTS ! *
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Posted: 16 years ago
AMAZING!!......very nice twist to the story.....hope that Muskaan will be okay......
pls continue soon.....cant wait to see wat happens next!,.....
thank u very much for the pm!
will be sad when ur ff is finished.....but pls do write another one if u can.......u write really nicely!
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Posted: 16 years ago
thxxx for update yaar i don't know u r name but i will call u mayank if u don't mind😉 but ur story is awesome i really liked it i hope muskaan will be ok .
plzzz update soon ca'nt waite to read more 😊

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