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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: pankhuripg17

HEY EVERYONE!!!!!!!😊

thank you all so much for the support and comments.....it really means a lot to me!😃😃😃
i will surely update tomorrow!!!! A-R scenes coming up 😳
luv
Pankhuri <3
ps - anyone pls feel free to continue
pss - nruti, luved ur parts
psss - is everyone okay with the name ridhaan (if yes than please continue to use it in later updates)
pssss - ok i'll stop with the ps's now 😛
psssss - sry couldn't resist..i'm done now! goodnight! :P




NICE PART
LEKIN MUJHE AISA LAGTA HIAN KI AR N RIDZ KO BETI NAHI BETA HONA CHAHIYE
KQUNKI JAB BHI KABHI AR-RIDZ KI NOK-JOK HUVI TO ARMAAN KI SIDE LENE KE LIYE ARIMA
AUR RID KE SIDE LENE KE LIYE EK LADKA HONA CHAHIYE NA
SO PLS UNDODO KO BETA HI HONE DO
HAAN LEKIN USKA NAAM TUM RIDHAAN HI RAKHNA


OK SO GUYS AGAR TUM MERI BAAT SE SAHMAT HO TO PLS BETA HONE DO
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: arlove




NICE PART
LEKIN MUJHE AISA LAGTA HIAN KI AR N RIDZ KO BETI NAHI BETA HONA CHAHIYE
KQUNKI JAB BHI KABHI AR-RIDZ KI NOK-JOK HUVI TO ARMAAN KI SIDE LENE KE LIYE ARIMA
AUR RID KE SIDE LENE KE LIYE EK LADKA HONA CHAHIYE NA
SO PLS UNDODO KO BETA HI HONE DO
HAAN LEKIN USKA NAAM TUM RIDHAAN HI RAKHNA


OK SO GUYS AGAR TUM MERI BAAT SE SAHMAT HO TO PLS BETA HONE DO

we r talking about the son
the name will be RIDHAAN
we are making sure that they have a son so dont worry
nruti
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Posted: 16 years ago
part coming up in 30 mins!!! wait for it!!!! 😛😛😛
SRY FOR THE DELAY!!!!!! ab pakka 30 minutes main aa raha hai
PART POSTED BELOW!!!!! ⭐️
😃
Edited by pankhuripg17 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: pankhuripg17

part coming up in 30 mins!!! wait for it!!!! 😛😛😛

SRY FOR THE DELAY!!!!!! ab pakka 30 minutes main aa raha hai



heyy.....jaldi se update kariye!!! aapke 30 mins tho kab ke khatam hogaye!! lol....waiting fr ur update😊
Edited by dmgluver01 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Recap:

then armaan put her on the bed n went to bed holding ridhim's hand............

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the next morning, the alaram rings at 6 and ridhima wakes up first. she sees armaan in deep sleep with arima sleeping on top of him. he had enclosed his arms around her. she smiled and went to get fresh... she came back to see armaan still sleeping.

Ridz - armman utho...late ho jaye ga..
Ar - hmmm jaan..sone do na....
Ridz - armaan comeon utho.... main arima ka dood lati hoon... jab main aayon to mujhe tum jag huye mille chahiyo.
Ar - watever..jao

5 mins later it rang to him..... SHE GOT UP????? Uski tabiyeth kharab hojaygi.

Ar - RIDHIMA!!!!!!!!!

Ridz - no repons

Ar - RIDHIMA!!!!!!!!! this time louder

she thought something was rong and she ran up.... KYA HHUA????????

Ar - tum uthi kyun?

Ridz - armaaan! chill! mujhe dara diya tumne...aur wese bhi....i'm fine..tum angle ye dood pila do main nahake aati hoon...phir breakfast bhi banana hai

Ar - pagal ho kya?...breakfast main banaunga....khud ka kyal to dur ki baat, mere Ridhaan ka tho dyaan rako!

Ridz - she blushed... and said....ok theek hai par phele dood pila do... and the she ran into the bathroom blushing

Ar - oyye hoyye

After 20 mins ridz came out

she saw armaan swinging arima to sleep and smiled.

Ar - se kya dekh rahi ho?

Ridz - kuch nahi....armaan aaj hum arima ko ma aur nani ke paas chode? wo sister lovely ke paas ab bilkul nahi rukhti....aur ohir issi bahane ma aur nani ko hamari aane wale....she stopped and blushed

Ar - smiled naughtily...hamaaaare aaaannnne waaalle???

Ridz - armaan..... shut-up

AR- ok theek hai..lekin aik shart pe

Ridz - kya

Ar - u know....he put arima down and slowy started to walk towards ridz.ridz started to walk backwards.

Ridz - armaan dekho..seede se bathao..pls

Ar - un-hun..se shook his head no...he walked towards her and pinned her to the wall

she turned her hear side ways..he went and kissd her neck, the her shoulder...she ran her fingers through his hair while he started on the other side of her neck...he moved her pallu and kissed her right in the front. ridhima was lost and so was armaan. then surprisingly, ridhima brought his face up and gently kissed him on the lips while he was caressing her waist nd she was running her hands through his hair.. the kiss became really passionate and when there was no end to this building passion, angle started to giggle loudly.

Ar - abey yaar!!!

Ridz - blushing really really badly, fixed her sari and ran out the room

Ar - kya angle? saara maza kharab kardiya. bad girl!

Ang - made a crying face

Ar - arre main tho mazak kar raha tha....stupid papa...hehe..rona math

Ang - papa..

Ar - accha chalo..... late ho raha hai..

down stairs, riddhima had already prepared breakfast...the ate with some coochi-coo moments and went to gupta residence.

Gupta residence

pyaare sasurji opened the door :P

shk - arre baccho tum?

ar - namaste papa..he touched his feet

ridz - hi papa..she hugged him and handd angle over to him

ar + ridz - hey anjie!tum yahan?

an - hey guys!haan...aaj pak phere ki rasam hai na...she blushed

shk - andar aao....subha subha yahan kaise?

ar - wo papa...hum arima ko chodne aaye the..... socha wo yahan rahegi tho jyada acca hoga...hospital main wo sister lovely ke paas nahi rukhthi hai.

Pd - ye tho ahut acca kiya... ab mujhe aur ma ko bhi iske saath rehena ka mouka mil gayega.

Ridz - haan ma isleye hum ne yahin pe choda hai...aur wese bhi mere paas tho dusra baccha...she stopped, blushing and realizing what she was out to say.

nani - kya kaha tumne? dusra baccha?

shk - iska matlab...

an - ridzi tum...

pd - firse maa banne wali ho?

Ar - haan ma..... ridhima phire ma banne wali hai..he hugged her sideways while she blushed

An - armaan what r u sayin...really?

ridz - haan di....my arima is going to be a big sister!

shk - ye tho bahut khush ki baat hai!

an - this calls for a party guys!

ar - abhi nahi...abhi sabko ko bata ke phir jamke party karenge

an- ok cool

ridz - tho hum chalte hain ma..... late ho raha hai

pd - ok..apna kyaal rakhna..

ridz and armaan kiss angle and go to the hospital

Sanjeevani Locker Room

everyone was already there...except anjali (who had the day off)

ar - hey guys

ra - hey armaan hey ridhima

at - hey ridzi! mera bhai! kaisa hai tu?

ar - all good and he hugs atul

Ridz - hey everyone..kya chal raha hai?

mu - kuch nahi...tu badi khil rahi kya baat hai?

Ra - tujse matlab...armaan arima nahi aaye?

mu - oye angle ke chacha...tujhe kya problem hai? hamesha mujhe hi botla reheta hai!

ar - oye angle ki chachai..shutup!..tum log kyun jhagad the ho itna?.... aaj angle ko papa ke ghar pe choda hai

Ra - oh..ok.....but why?

ar - woh... actually.... baath... kya hai na........ ki..........ridz.ma.banne.wali.hai (he said this really really fast)

at, ra,mu - KYA???? phirse bol...

Ar - arre......ridz.ma.banne.wali.hai

Ra - abey sale..dheee bol na

ar - tum log behere ho kya? maine kaha ridz is pregnant for the second time!!!!!!

mu - sachi?! she went and hugged ridz really tightly

Ridz - are muskaan..jaan le gi kya.....chod mujhe

Mu - are theek se milne tho de

Ar - oye muski, chod use...uske saath saath tu mere ridhaan ko bhi daba rahi hai

Ra + mu - kaun ridhaan

Ridz - guys..armaan pagal ho gaya hai..use lagta hai beta hoga.... aur ye uska naam ridhaan rakhega..

ra - wah re mere sher...tu tho bada aage nikla...naam bhi soch liya....winking

Ar - tu mujhe line maar raha hai..kaminey! kitna ganda hai tu..khud aadmi hai aur ek dusre aadmi pe line mar raha hai?

ridz to muskaan - chal in dono ka tho chal tha rahega...

mu - chal
they leave

rahul - "aadmi hoon aadmi se pyaa karta hoon" (it actually is a song)

ar - chi!!!!! tu meri izzat lut na chahata hai? mummy!!!!!! main ja raha hoon....bathata hoon muskaan ko...

rahul to atul - yeh dekh...... do bacco ka baap khud bacca ban gaya...hahahahah


alright guys....long part...SORRY SOO MUCH FOR THE DELAY!!!!!!!...i was having server problems... i know pura bakwas part hai...kuch samaj mein nahi aa raha tha kya likhun...sry for the mistakes..... someone pls continue now.....pls pls pls pls!!!!!!!!!!


also pls comment!!!!


luv
Pankhuri <3

btw........ i'm 15 years old...if ur older than me pls tell me.....i like to call u didi or di....... if its okay with u guys...😛
PLS PLS COMMENT!!!! PLEASE!!!!!😃
Edited by pankhuripg17 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
kisi ko pasand nahi aaya ka mera part?!😭 koi tho comment karo!! are criticize hi kardo agar comment nahi karn hai tho :P PLS comment on my above written part....... i'm waiting😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
heyy.....that was very cute and passionate in the beginning and then end was hilarious!! 🤣haha...they're so cute!! very nice part!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey wonderful nd romantic nd vry fnnnnny prt jst lvd it hmmmmmmmm armaan ko pura yakeen hai ki beta hoga hm uski ye icha bhi puri hojaygi hey guys today i'll also cont bcz tdy i am free kkkkkkk.....
tc
bubyeeeeeeee..
luv u all
yachna
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Posted: 16 years ago
grt updt contd guys pls fast
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Posted: 16 years ago
Awesome part dear..👏..

U jagaoed the writer instinct in me..i m gonna write next..😳

"Armaan.."Riddhima exclaimed as she came out from the bathroom..

"Haan?.."He said carelessly, playing with Arima..😳

"Ar..Armaan.."..She fumbled..

Her voice told him, something was wrong..😕He looked at her..

"RIDDHIMA?.."He ran to her as she held her head, trying to cope up with dizziness..

"Sambhal ke..sambhal ke..chalo..come with me.."He took her to the bed..

"Paani piyo.."He makes her drink water...

she felt relaxed.."Pata nahin kaise wo..nahate waqt achanak chaakar sa.."

"Sshh.."He makes her lie down with her head on his lap and massages her forehead..."Kisne kaha tha...garam pani se nahakar aane ko...tumhe pata hai..circulation mein problem hoti hai..aur..shaam ko kyun nahaya?.."He rebukes frivolously..😳

"Shorry.."she smiles, feeling really relaxed in his embrace..

"Say sorry to my baby too.."He caresses her tummy..😳

"Shorry baybee.."Riddhima whispers..😳

"That's better..dekho..Arima bhi so gayee na..?.."He looks at little Arima sleeping in her cot, peacefully..😳

"Chalo..ab so jao..😳"He wraps her with his arms..😳

And they fall asleep in a cuddled manner..😳

But, little did Armaan know, his sleep was going to be ruined soon..

"ARMAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANN..!!!!"..Riddhima screams..

Its 2:30 Am..

Armaan gets up with a jerk..

"Riddhima?.."she hugs him veryy tightly, crying bitterly..😭

The first thing he decides to do next morning is to take her to hospital for a thorough check-up....

"Riddhi..relax."He caresses her back, waiting for her heartbeat to be a bit normal..

Ok..now u all continue..😳😳i m really shy..after this part..i dunno y..

Love,
Sonali😳😛

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