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afreen

@Afreen22

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Posted: 16 years ago

#351

guys u all r doing a very gud job....keep it up

Pankhuri welcome here dear😃

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pankhuripg17

@pankhuripg17

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Posted: 16 years ago

#352

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Ridz -in her mind : hmmmmmmmm I luv u!

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In Angel's room

Ang : pa pa
Ar- HI PRINCESS!!!!! he goes towards her cot
ang - pin...cess...pa pa
ar- so cute........ aapko pata hai....ab aap big sister banne wali ho...he kissed her cheek
Ang - she let out a cute giggle...she seemed to be blushing
Ar- oyye hoyye angel.... tum bhi? he laughed
Ang - made a face and slightly kicked him
Ar - owwww.....bilkul maa pe gaye hai...har bar me hi pitha hoon..he stuck his tongue out at her and
put her down so she could walk holding his finger
Ridz - angel!!!!! she held her arms out....she teared seeing her little princess walk to her.
Ang - ma!!....she held armaan finger and wobbled over to ridhima.
Armaan went and sat next to ridz while ridz picked arima up to her lap.

riddhima kissed angels face and said "tum tho bahut badi ho goyi ho meri bacchi"

Ar - tabhi tho dusra baccha aa raha hai...jab wo bada ho jayega tho...he said naughtily

Ridz - looked at him and said SHUTUP!!!!

ang - ma! and giggled

Ridz - accha armaan tum ise pakro main iska dood lati hoon

Ar - nahi main lata hoon....tum baitho

Ridz - maine kaha na armaan...main la rahi hoon...waisey bhi tumhe nahi pata hai kya lana hai

Ar - dekho tumhari tabiyeth kharab ho jaayegi....main laa tha hoon

Ang - pa!

Ar - dekha! angel bhi yahi chahati hai....aur mujhe pata hai kya karna hai

Ridz - hmph....papa ki chamchi..... dekhte hain tumhe kitna aata hai armaan.....jao..lao

Ar - watch me.

5 mins pass.....10 mins pass..20 mins pass..now angel starts crying..😭.. ridhima tries to calm her down..but she just cries louder

Ridz - ARMAAN!!!!!!!!!

Ar - no response

Ridz - hud hogayi.....she gets up and goes down....she doesn't take arima because she getting cranky and now was too heavy for her to pick up since she was pregnant😡

she goes to the kitchen and sees armaan talking on the phone to some college friend

Ridz - she was fuming...she goes and snatches the phone out of armaans hand and says to the caller' armaan abhi busy hai bbad main baath karega" and she hangs up😡

Ar - looks at her with slight anger.... ridhima! ye kyun kiya tumne? aur tum uthi kyun?

Ridz - kyun kiya? TUMHARI BETI 10 MINS SE BHOOK KE MARE RO RAHI HAI AUR TUM YAHAN BAITH KE BAAT KAR RAHE HO???? 😡

Ar - riddhima dekho gussa mat karo.... main tho....wait WHAT? ro rahi hai?😕

Ridz - YES DR. ARMAAN MALLIK! ro rahi hai..... bhook ke mare....

Ar - just runs upstairs to get his daughter and sees that she has fallen asleep

Ridz comes with a bottle of milk and sees arima sleeping. the tears had dried on her face... she looked worn out

Ridz - fuming

ar- extremly guilty....he starts to ssay "wo main'

Ridz - wo main kya armaan? so gayi na...rote rote bhooke pait? ab kush?😡

Ar - jaan main.... tries to wake angel up😕

Ridz - DONT! rehenedo... and leave us alone.... main khud use dekh loongi

Ar - extremly guilty.. pls riddhima...dekho gussa mat karo.... tum beemar ho jaogi

Ridz - OUT ARMAAN!!! and then she suddenly faints....

THANK YOU SOO MUCH FOR THE SUPPORT!!!! it means a lot to me..... can someone else pls continue???????

pls someone else continue...my fingers hurt 😛

do comment and sorry for the mistakes

love u all!!!

luv pankhuri <3

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pankhuripg17

@pankhuripg17

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Posted: 16 years ago

#353

everyone pls comment on my part wriiten above!!!!!!!

and can someone else pls continue......my fingers are hurting .... 😛

luv u all!!!

luv

pankhuri <3

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Nruti

@arshluver_15

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Posted: 16 years ago

#354

recap: Ridz - OUT ARMAAN!!! and then she suddenly faints....

armaan gets realy worid for ridhima n he calles the docter

D: dont worry armaan she is fine its just coz of lot of stress she need reast......n he leves

ridhima is still not awake armaan is realy worid about her n araman start crying

A:[to himself] meri bajese ya sab hua hai nahi main apna doska phone utha tha nahi main arima ka dudh lana bulta jiski wajaese who ro ro ka bina dudh piya so gay ur nahi ridhima gusamin ati ur ys adb hota its al my falt

then he holds her hand and cont....

A: i realy sorry ridhima mare wajase tum aj asi halt main ho plz plz uth jao main esa dubara kabhi nahi karunaga i promish i will not do things that u dont like but plz just wake up if u want u can hit me n scold me al u want but for now wake up plz n then he break down n start shobing realy beadly

arima wakes up at the sound

ari: pa...pa......pa......

araman hear her call him so he instantly wake up n take her in his arma n kiss her chikes n give fher the botal of milk

A: i m soooooooo sorry princess mere wajese ap ko rona pada but papa promiss he will never do this agine

n he kiss her agine on her chikes n forhead with this she started gigaling n that made armaan lil better but he was still not in gud shape but start playing with arima whitout noticing that ridhima was awake n was looking at this beautiful father daughter scean

then she calles out for him

R: armaan....

armaan instenly go to her n

A: ridhima r u felling ok now?? i m realy sorry its all me fault n i shud have to done that i m realy sorry.................

ridhima cut him off by kissing him on his lips to shut him up

R: armaan i know it was ur falt n u are sorry for it but it was my fault too i shud have not yealed at u like that but........ araman looking at arima crying i cud not take it so.........

A: its ok ridhima but plz noe u take rest i was so scared for u u faint n then u were out for so long that i got so paniced n a thought of lossing u was just killing me.........

then they both look at arima sleeping very quitly in her pa's arma felling safe n secure

then armaan put her on the bed n went to bed holding ridhim's hand............

how was it guys i hope u al liked it its quit a long part

i promish that i will updat so her u go

plz plz do coment

nruti

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Hey pankhuri

it was just an amazing part i realy loved it

nruti

Edited by arluver15 - 16 years ago

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ridzie4u2nv

@ridzie4u2nv

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Posted: 16 years ago

#355

kwls parts guys do continue

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Neha

@Neha-KSGian

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#356

gr8 part yaar updaTE SOOON

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shonaveer

@shonaveer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#357

HELLO FRIENDS,

I AM NEW TO THIS PLACE...

I JUST FINISHED READING SKL-1 TO SKL - 8 (TILL WHERE COMPLETED)

REALLY LOVED IT A LOT....

PLEASE SOME ONE CONTINUE SOON....

WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART TO COME...

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afreen

@Afreen22

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+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#358

wohoo pankhuri u rock dear......loved ur parts

nruti....i loved ur parts too😃

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pankhuripg17

@pankhuripg17

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#359

HEY EVERYONE!!!!!!!😊

thank you all so much for the support and comments.....it really means a lot to me!😃😃😃

i will surely update tomorrow!!!! A-R scenes coming up 😳

luv

Pankhuri <3

ps - anyone pls feel free to continue

pss - nruti, luved ur parts

psss - is everyone okay with the name ridhaan (if yes than please continue to use it in later updates)

pssss - ok i'll stop with the ps's now 😛

psssss - sry couldn't resist..i'm done now! goodnight! :P

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shalini jain

@yachna

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#360

hey pankhuri wow yaar u wreawesom u r new na nd seriously ur prts wre amazng yaar nd wowridz pregnant u all guys waitng frm soooo long hahahaah nd tht happnd seriously nd ar carng fr her sooo mch awwwwwww chooooo chweeeeet nd all d guys thoise who hv writtd superb..........yaar i know i hvn't continued since sooooo long bt dnt wrry i'll cont sooooooooon as i am vryyyy busy bt i'll surly try 2 cont tdy evening.....shorrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyyy................yogi,afreen,swancy,salima whre r u nd rukz hmmmm u also vryy busy all r busy..........nd all d people......
luv u all......
yachna