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Posted: 17 years ago
NJ dear sorry gor not commenting earlier

i m so glad u started new one................i was eager to read one from u as days were almost bored without the updates

and i read the intro and Part 1

Oh my, first i thought its Riddhima................may be Armaan Riddhima already married..........but what....Lovely😆😆😆...........i was like😲😲😲....the same old our lovely ji came to my mind as always but then u said imagine someone thin.......but seriously............This is not working....i almost laugh out thinking Lovely and Armaan😉

but i m glad that armaan ridz had a past and i so so luv gappu Riddhima's interaction

Ur style of writting is really high and i m glad, iwill get chance to learn something new😳😃

ok dear

i will comment on ur second part in morning

luv ya lots dear

lolz
ana👏

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: cool_SK

NJ dear sorry gor not commenting earlier

i m so glad u started new one................i was eager to read one from u as days were almost bored without the updates

and i read the intro and Part 1

Oh my, first i thought its Riddhima................may be Armaan Riddhima already married..........but what....Lovely😆😆😆...........i was like😲😲😲....the same old our lovely ji came to my mind as always but then u said imagine someone thin.......but seriously............This is not working....i almost laugh out thinking Lovely and Armaan😉

but i m glad that armaan ridz had a past and i so so luv gappu Riddhima's interaction

Ur style of writting is really high and i m glad, iwill get chance to learn something new😳😃

ok dear

i will comment on ur second part in morning

luv ya lots dear

lolz
ana👏

thnx ana...glad u like the parts uv read, hope u will like the track ahead as well!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Wow Nj just read it all .....man i wish u had completed it for the comp!!
Ok back to the story love Riddhima ...can relate to her somewhat lol
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Catwoman

Wow Nj just read it all .....man i wish u had completed it for the comp!!

Ok back to the story love Riddhima ...can relate to her somewhat lol
Love Kat

oh boy...u can...hmmmnow thats interesting...teme as i buld her character if u still stick to that statement, its nice to accidentally stumble upon real ppl in fictional characters!!!
ps:wud have ;ooved tp be in the comp myself....but dont get me started abt aug!!!
pps:hope ur son is doing better!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: spln

oh boy...u can...hmmmnow thats interesting...teme as i buld her character if u still stick to that statement, its nice to accidentally stumble upon real ppl in fictional characters!!!
ps:wud have ;ooved tp be in the comp myself....but dont get me started abt aug!!!
pps:hope ur son is doing better!

yeah somewhat...i guess hehe....
Lol nothing calpol cant fix hehe😉
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Posted: 17 years ago

Hey NJ, part 2 was intriguing, loved the way you gave some details of the past but not much!!!

At the end of his freshman year at University of Ilinois-Chicago, in April, rumor had it that his current form had not escaped unnoticed by the coach, and he was likely to be selected to UIC's varsity soccer team. Gappu had confirmed to her a strong possibility of more substance to this news than could be overlooked. His dedication to the game had been unshakable, in Ridhima's opinion.

Sounds like Gappu was a high school stud, dedicated to sports.

she spoke her thoughts out loud "No kidding! Here I have had my share of misgivings about his capability to even spell the word 'chivalry' and now I am reintroduced to the character of Don Quixote in the post 20th century times, dressed ironically as Twain's crass creation, Sawyer!...Wow! He really must love..." Ridhima stopped mid sentence biting her tongue, and turned hastily towards the girl by her side, to observe the damage done.

Hearing the words Minnie turned a bright shade of red, and lowered her eyes as a reflex, although the sparkle in them was as hard to miss as the dimples of her smile which had certainly widened at the intended remark of a possible alliance between her and the boy who had stubbornly occupied her thoughts over the past few weeks. Ridhima did not miss this reaction as regaining her composure

lmao at Ridz a total analysis freak! Taking everything in to account! And then when she is supposed to be thinking says it all for the rest to hear her!

don't understand why in the first place you shoved this case at me, YOU OF THE ALL THE PEOPLE KNOW THE WHOLE STORY..."

errm but we don't??? wonder when you will unfold the big mystery of misunderstanding??

Armaan Malik. Reading the name on her client list she had this urge of desperation to do something, ANYTHING, which would hurt him the same. She put herself to the task.

Her motive was no longer to seek vengence on behalf of her suffering friend but to relieve her of the pain altogether, the panacea was bringing Armaan back.

So Ritu was all out for revenge on Armaan?? Interesting, she has changed her view

Lovely, suffered from Schizophrenia - Wow! That was something different!

He had never shared anything beyond a common surname with her as a married couple, but in her happy thoughts she believed they had and did, and he let her. When she was normal she would yearn for a usual married life. In mutual consent with her doctor and his mate from Cambridge, Chirag, they had prepared fake reports which declared she could never be a biological mother.

he could not break this last cord of fidelity he still maintained for the woman he loved, for her whom he had dreamed of sharing his life with, a home and a family.

In quiet resignation, he just decided to stay out of this as far as possible, he certainly was not capable of bearing Ridhima's presence ever so frequently, designing a home for him, his home, what could have been their home.

Poor Armaan, really felt for him here, just shows how much he cares for Ridz, and how it is eating him up aswell

waiting for part 3,
Sania
Edited by ArmiandRidz4eva - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
hi😊
thks for the pm
lovely part
so lovely is a patient omg
i am so happy ritu is helping bringing them closer😉
update sooooooooooon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 17 years ago
@ san! thanx hun!....it really sweet of u to post those detailed comments....like alwaz loved reading it!!!

@saridena!!thanx dear...glad u like the part!!!

will try to update asap!


Edited by spln - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hi Naseem,
I loved this part ..... I think the whole affect of the start was a bit too heavy for me as I didnt knew at all the hcarters and plays books u were mentioning.. Dont laugh at me.. but I havnt read a single novel by an English author..and school books yup I do.. i need to check about these in it.. but glad U mentioned few things abotu them in the end..which made me knowleadgeable about them...
Comign to the later part.. where u have beautifully writen and took the story abotu how Lovely is suffering from a disease and I must say psycholigical pyschiatric disorders r the worst to handle... and the way to did the writign with the part initialy aout Ridzi and her friend ritu and how the conversation is takena nd Armaan and his element is added..later the revelation abotu Lovely hirign for that reason.. It was so well written I loved that floww really a lot... It was perfect to say..
I am waitign patiently for the next one..and i think this Armaan is very very cute .. and aww I do feel for him.. Ur trick workign haan.. U have taken me to feel for Armaan ...lol...
Keep it up..great story .. writign skills excell..must say...tc
Bhoomi
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey NJ😃!!!!!!!!! i noe i'm late as ever still luving d story 😊 itz definitely sumthing new n bit different😉 i mean quite unlike ur usual style of writing naa... i mean first of all d armaan here i imagine him a little shy n innocent😆😆😆 n ridzy too quite strong-headed n interesting would love to read d next prts wid dis blend of characters yaar!!!!!!! ohk cuming back to GAPPU-MINNIE😆😆 man gappu so adorable yaar n minnie his new found lady love u made dem play tom n becky😆😆😆 gr8 imagination must say!!!!! though i've read it ,i didn't like tom a bit quite whacky .... newaz ridzy n gappu share a wonderful bond 😳😳n now i even liked ritu's POV here 😉can't wait to c wat happens wen she'll actually redesign his "home"... ouch ...lovely suffers frm "schizophrenia" awwww.. n watz armaan upto actually😕????? ohhh NJ stop being evil😉 n open up d cards nowww😆😆 i'm dying to c actually read armaan "unleash wat remained unsaid" b/w d two of dem yaarrrr n yea thnks a lot 4 ur PM😛
Luv ya
aravi
Edited by aravi - 17 years ago

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