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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi Hiii

the up good and also very romantic Thank you...
so finally raj aur naina ke shaadi ho gaye aur raj aapne suhaagrat maane aaya par naina jee usse toh gift chaheye ab gift ka haq toh naina ka banta hai na...
aur raj usnne woh naina ko satne laaga aapne baato se bacchare kitna darr gaye
par jab raj ne usse sach mein gift tab naina gets really happy ab gift pa kar toh sabhi khush hi hote hain...toh naina kyoun nahi...
the ring is really
the honeymoon gift which naina's dad gave them is so sweet
raj nainai se toh gussa hone laaga par jab woh log darjeeling gaye they made their honeymon perfect sath me the toh sab kuhc perfect toh hoga hi...
i loved the whole part but feeling lil sad that it is ending koi gaal nahin tu aase he dusre koi new fic suru kar de aapne hero heroinee par Ankahi hai na...
plz cont soon and pm me ab yeh cont soon kis khusi me...fic toh khatam ho gay na...

Thanksss Ria...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

Happy Holi
Brilliant, beautiful part. loved it.
missed this ff.

Thanksss Rakhi...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Sumi_162710

Arre wah...tumne to mera 'reserved' hi 'like' kar liya...then now I dont need to comment!! 😆😆arey aise kaise comment nahi karogi...!!! aur agar nahi ki toh zabardasti comments karwana aata hai mujhe...he he he...!!! aur rahi baart tumhare'reserved' par LIKE karne ki toh mujhe pata hota hai na...ke apni AB...real me bhi AB hi hai...😆😛

Aisa ghalti se bhi mat sochna...apne iss Raj ko praise karne ka ye aakhri (😭) mauka main chhor dungi 😈...Achha pehle...Raj ko meri taraf se bahut se hugs and kisses 😳😳...he is the sweeetest heart!! 😆 de diya...tumhare sare gifts...bichara baht khush tha...par sharma bhi baht raha tha tumhare iss gifts ki wajh se...aur tumhra uss ek liye jo spl comment tha uss wajah se bhi...😆

I knew the suhaag raat scene is gonna be a lil hatke...as its Priya wid the pen...I mean keyboard!! 😆😆 he he he...main apni aadat se mazbur hun...aur ek mazbur writer kuch bhi kar sakta hai...😆And meri hassi to Mr. Noorani ke naam lete hi shuru ho gayi...😆😆...and then watever followed was aweeesum!! I wud not really say much abt it all...but tumne jitna kiya mujhe utna hi achha laga...(ab tum to janti ho main khud romantic scenes likh nahi pati hu...thats why its perrfectly f9 for me 😉)... jitna bhi likha...utne me hi mere hath kaamp rahe the...aur mere dimagless dimag ka door bhi auto-lock ho gaya tha...jo khulne ka naam hi nahi le raha tha...😆aur tum toh mera sath dogi hi...kyoun ke hum ek hi chakki ke chatte-batte jo hain...😆

Next day Raj ki naughtiness shuru ho gayi...wid "Kahani sunao"...🤣..ye Raj bhi na...Bada CUTE hai!! 😳😳😳😳😳 koi shaq...!!! arey yaar...cuteness toh uss ke face se hi tapakta hai...😆

And wo khane ke table wala scene...awww...mere Raj ke khilaaf wo log gang up kaise kar sakte hai?? 😲😲 Dekha duniya kitni zalim hai...itnaaa cute sa to hai mera Raj...uske khilaf bhi sharyantra??😲😲😲😲 Very bad...very bad!! 😆 But uska sab kuch khaake ruth kar chale jana...😆...that was SMART!! 😉 As I always say...he is born smart along wid being handsum, cute, adorable, dashing...😆😳😳😳😳 bass...aur kuch nahi...sirf itni si tarif...😆

And next Darjeeling wali segment...again very beautiful!! 👏👏 Raj kitna pyaara hai na...I mean...why on earth he is sooo lovable?? 😳 iss ka jawab na tumhare paas hai aur na hi mere paas...kyoun ke hum kitna bhi dhundh le...iss ka jawab toh nahi milega...par ek hi baat par hum atak jayenge ke...' sayad hum ise behad pyar karte hain...isi liye...!!!'EmbarrassedAnd hey...am not saying this coz of Rajeev...its the character u see..😳 ohhh God...maine toh socha ke tum ne Rajeev ke bare me bola...aur maine wohi samajh kar rply kiya kar diya...bole toh apni dil ki baat bata di yaar...😆Kabhi kabhi sochti hu (and mann hi mann janti hu) ki tum bhi bahuuut sweet si ladki hogi...isiliye to itne sweet characters create kar sakti ho!! 😳😳 lagta hai tumhari yeh galat faihmi jaldi hi dur karna padega...!!! ek fic likhti hun jiss me Raj ko villian ban deti hun...phir dekhte hain...tum mere bare me itni pyari baitain kaise karti ho...😆vaise sach kahun toh...haan..main itni buri nahi hun...PAKKKA😆

Ending was superb...but of course leaves me wid the fact that its the END!! But again...I do have sum other Rajveer to relish...😉😆 haan...apne Maj saab hain na...apne actions ke sath...😆

And well...aapko main yaad ayi Adil ki wajah se...😲...meri pehchan ab bas Adil se??? 😲😲 ab Adil se tumne hi toh pehchan karwayi hai...!!! jab se mili hun uss se main khud ko bhul chuki hun...aur phir bhi tum toh meri dost ho...!!! aur haan...blame mujhe nahi karr sakti tum...kis ne kaha tha Adil ko itne achhe se potrey karne ki...main toh baithe baithe (ab update toh main baith kar hi padhti hun na...😆) hi puri fida ho gayi uss par...😆

WAH!! 😆😆Adil se pehchan hona is a gud thing!! 🤣 dekha...maine kaha tha na...ab maani na tum ne...😛😆

Achha now...over all fic pe...main ek aur reply karne wali hu...at the end...chk that now!! 😉😉okay...😃

Luv, (for Raj) haan haan...pata hai...mujhe tum se yehi umeed thi...😆
Sumi.😳😆😆😆😆😆

Thanksss Sumi...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanksss Prerna...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18

First of all Happy holi to you and

How are your exams ???????? achhe hi the...par mere teachers ko kafi mehnat karni padi thi iss wajah se...😆
now coming to the update ... finally you did manage to complete the ehsaas and a big congrats for that👏 yupe...finalllyyy😆
but i'm gonna miss this fic😭 as it is written wonderfully as it says ehsaas it is written with all the feelings of rn so thnx for writing it very wonderfully from the very first part of their first night till their darjiiling trip 😃 yeh meri 1st fic thi RN par...aur meri life ki bhi pehli fic jise maine kisi web site par likha...warna aaj tak maine sirf dairy me likhe aur bhul gayi...!!! meer liye sab se jyada khusi ki baat yeh hai ke maine apna first fic mere fav RAJEEV par start ki thi...aur ye main kabhi nahi bhulungi...😃
now i'm speechless and writingless😆to write comments on the last update so in short a fab and awesome ending of ehsaas... koi baat nahi...main samajh sakti hun...he he he...😆
bye cya and take care also
and once again a very happy holi to you...

Thanxxx Shreya...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: lallulal2010

That was a very beautiful ud...

am sad that the fic ended...
net down to itna hi bada comment likh sakti hoon...
vidushi

Koi baat nahi Vidu...tune yahan aayi n itna comment kiya wohi kaafi hai...Thanksss sweety...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana.dixit

Hi Priya hiii suhana...

The last part of Ehsaas was just mindblowing and that was very much expected as u took a long time updating it..👏👏 Thank you...ab tum se jyada better meri condition aur koun pahechanega...😆
It was through this fiction we became friends and I dont believe that 3 years have passed..Time is really running like anything..😊 haan...aur inn teen salon me kafi kuch ho chuka hai...Nahi...
Now coming to this part Raj will never change..his nautanki continues even after his marriage.kehte hain na ke inshan ki fitrat kabhi nahi badalti aur raj ko main kyoun badlun..waise bhi yeh raj mujhe bhi kafi achha lagta tha...yaar,,,😆i knew it from the start that he is trying to fool Naina by talking nonsense and she was so very nervous to hear him talk like this😉😆😆😆 ab dekh lo...tum use padhte padhte jan gayi ke Banda karr kya raha hai...par naina uss ki gf+wife ho kar bhi jaan nahi payi...!!! use tum se kuch sikhna chahiye...😆
He was enjoying Naina's discomfort and he knew the effect of his words on her..😆😆😆 he is too naughty😉 yeh toh fic ke starting se dikha hi raha hai...😆That milk scene was too hilarious🤣..Naina really needed it coz she had to open so many gift wraps to finally reach for that ring..Raj is really a very considerate hubby but he loves to tease Naina a lot.. tabhi toh raj ne use badam ka dudh peelaya tha...😆
He embarrassed her infront of all in the morning also but thankfully his mother came forward to rescue Naina..😆😉 ab yeh apni aadat toh nahi chod sakta na...isi liye uss ki mom ko naina ko bachane aana pada...😆
This part was just too funny ...he he he...thank you...😆
"Rajveer ko ajeeb lag raha tha...us ne phir kaha:-"dad...aap jo yeh dal chawal aur sabji bagaira kha rahe ho na...voh kya khane ke layak chiz hain...!!! hamesha aap mujh par hukum chalate the...aur aaj dekhiye...aap kahan hai aur main kahan hun... (diwar...film ka dail) ...!!! aaj mere paas sab kuch hai...dum-aloo...badam ka halwa...deshi ghee ke parathe... paneer ke pakode...aur na jane kya...kya...aur aap ke paas kya hai...
us ne Amitabh Bachhan ki tarah bolte hue kaha...
K.k jee ne use gaur se dekha...phir Sashi kapur ki tarah bole:-"mere paas... mere paas...teri maa...aur tere honewale bachhe ki maa...dono hain...samjha...!!! dekhega..."😆😆🤣🤣🤣🤣
he is never going to change but when his parents and Naina made him a fool he was quite upset😆😆 ha ha ha...😆
Raj is really different from others but his feelings for Naina r quite sincere..he loves her more than life and Naina is really lucky to have him..his whole life revolves around her..shayad yahi ehsaas un dono ko itne kareeb le aaya..😊 haan...aur yehi ehsaas ne Naina ko raj se confess karne ke liye mazbur bhi kiya...
Their romance was indeed beautiful and that song was just perfect with the situation..😊 Thank you...
Naina was too shy to face Raj in the morning and he knew it and thats why he made up that funny dream so she cud b comfortable with him..😆😆 ab bande ke dimag me kya chalta rehta hai...kisi ko pata thode hi na hota hai...😆
Life is just so perfect if your life partner loves u so much😃😃 so true...😃
Finally the journey of Ehsaas ended on a happy note but I'll really miss it.. me too...😊
Raj's character was so funny in this fiction but he was the only one who brought joy in so many lives..his chirpy self was enough to make anyone laugh..😆😆 But his feelings for Naina were really deep and he completely changed her views regarding love..😊 arey waah...tum ne toh kafi sahi baat bol di...
His relationship with his father was also strange.😆😆😆.They were always fighting like kids but their bond as really strong..😃 he he he...haan yah toh hai...
😛
Pls do continue writing more Priya..u have a brilliant comic sense👏👏 Thank you...😃
Bye🤗

Thanksss Suhana...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanksss Rituka...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: PrincessFlavia

Hi Priya...Hiieee


Awesome fic darling... superb ending... Thank you...

Mai janti hun ki tujhe romantic scenes likhne me problem thi... tune jitna bhi likha hai na mai usse hi shocked thi ki Priya ne ye kaise likh diya... par jo bhi likha achha likha... bahut hi pyaara tha... tu kya...main khud hi shocked thi...😆

Aur kisi bhi writer ko apni fic ki story change nahi karni chahiye...kyunki aisa karne se uski khud ki creativity khatam ho jaati hai... likhne ka mann nahi karta... aur agar writer ko likhne ka mann na kare to fir readers ko kaise achha lagega... Jaisa ki mere saath ho raha hai... I appreciate ur stand... mujhe pata hai tu aisa kuch nahi karegi..kyoun ke Rocket Singh ko main janti hun...!!! wo wohi karti hai jo use thik lage...😃

Fic khatam ho gaya iss baat ka dukh hai mujhe.,... par start karne se jyada shuru na khatam karna hota hai... bahut hi pyaari story thi...aur bahut hi pyaara sa safar...aur iss story ne hume humari sweet lioness jo di hai... aur isi story ke through mujhe tum sab bhi toh mile...🤗hala ke tu thoda late aayi...par aayi toh sahi...😆

Excellent job... ab baaki ki fics bhi update karti raho... wo toh main karr hi rahi hun...par aap ka update kab hoga...

Love
Guglu

Thanksss Guglu...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanxxx Dear...😃

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