Kahin pyar na ho jaye! last part pg 35 - Page 5

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Day 4

In the morning kanya wakes up her head feels really heavy but she still gets up and gets shocked seeing that Ranbir is holding her hand and sleeping and that they are in a room alone!

K: [head still heavy] RANBIR! How dare u?

R: [still drowsy] huh kya hua?

K: tum puch rahe ho kya hua? How dare u Ranbir? Maine kabhi socha bhi nahin tha ke tum aise niklo ge. Lekin main yahan phohochi kaise? [Cant remember anything]

R: Kany..

K: shut up Ranbir, just shut up, [starts crying😭] main janti thi ke tum bohot arrogant ho lekin aisi harkat maine kabhi sapne main bhi socha nahin tha. How dare you Ranbir? [Puts her hand up to slap him]

R: [holds her hand] JUST SHUT UP! Tum patanahi kya samaj ti ho apne aap ko, Itne unche sapne dekhna chor do. Okay. Mere piche hazaaron ladkian pagal hai, kuch bhi karne ko tayar hain aur main tumhe pa ne kelie itni mehnat karoon ga, NO WAY! Tum mere layik hi nahin ho, Samjhi. Naahi meri dosti ke layik ho. Har bar galati khud karti ho aur phir shak mujhpe karti ho! Kal raat ko tum mujhe aur tina ko dekh ke jal rahi thi, aur isiliye tumne sharab pi aur phir behosh ho gayi, aur mujhe tumhe yahan lana para, phir jab main ja raha tha to tumne mujhe rok liya, maafi mangi, dance kiya aur phir behosh ho gayi, jab phir se main ja raha tha to tumne mera haath pakar liya aur kaha ke plz mujhe chod ke mat jao, aur tumhari wajah se maine puri raat bhetke (sitting) bitae hai, lekin tumhe to bas dusron pe shak karna ata hai , Apni galatian to kabhi nahin dikti na, Huh, maine bhi tumhe maaf kar ke bohot bari galati ki, anyways ab nahi karoonga, huh. BYE! [walks out angrily and shuts the door😡]

K: shocked trying hard to think but her head feels so heavy. She can?t think but she tells herself Ranbir sach nahin bol raha, main kyun usse aur tina se jaloongi?

[She also goes out of the room]

Kripa, angad, aayan and shanaya are looking for her all over the resort.

Tina sees kanya

T: Kanya sab tumhe doond rahe hain tum kaha thi?

K: Woh main,

T: I hope ab tumhari tabiat thikh hai, kal raat tum bheki bheki baatein kar rahi thi,

K: [confused😕] Kyun maine kya kiya?

T: she tells her the whole thing

K: [shocked to know that Ranbir was saying the truth😲]

They go where everyone else is then kripa gives kanya lemon juice.

She feels better now, after having the lemon juice and tells everyone

K: main kuch der akele rehna chahti hoon!

They all say okay and go out for their projects.

Kanya is sitting in the room and thinking, trying hard to remember what happened yesterday. She remembers bits and pieces and realises that whatever Ranbir was saying was true.

K: oh shit! Ranbir sach keh raha tha, woh bechara to meri khatir yeh sabh kiya aur maine usi pe shak kiya, oh god woh kabhi mujhe maaf nahi karega;

Then she goes to Ranbir, but he is just entirely ignoring her, she can?t take it she has to talk to him!

Then she starts following him wherever he goes, but he just doesn?t listen so she starts to say sorry by action,

First she writes it on the sand at the beach where he is passing, he just walks over it.

Then she gets a whole lot of balloons saying I am sorry! So he takes them and leaves them so they fly away!

Then she sends some kids to go and give him yellow roses and cards attached, but he sees her standing their so he throws them without reading them.

Then she sends him a bouquet with a whole lot of I am sorry cards. But he just keeps it aside.

K: usse mana ne keliye main kya karoon? Who to mujhe dekh bhi nahin raha!

R: [thinking] bohot bura lag raha hai na kanya, good I think u need it! Itni asani se to maaf nahin karne wala!

Then wherever he goes he sees her holding her ears and saying sorry!

Then they all go for a boat ride. Now was kanyas golden chance, he cant dodge her now.

K: Ranbir,

R: [starting to walk off]

K: Ranbir please meri baat suno, I know maine bohot ghalat samja tumhe par aaj main sab ke samne tumse sorry kehna chahti hoon! Im really sorry Ranbir, Please mujhe maaf kardo.

Everyone is listening. Ranbir is still ignoring

Angad: Ranbir, ab itna bhao kya kha raha hai, ek ladki tusse maafi maang rahi hai, comeon man just forget it now!
Aryan: Ya Ranbir come on forgive her.

Tina: Ranbir, tumhi to hamesha kehte ho, forgive and forget.

Aayan: haan Ranbir ghalatian to hum sab se hoti hain lekin is tarhaan se maafi mangne keliye himat chahiye!

Shanaya: come on just forgive her,

Kripa: haan Ranbir, please usse maaf kardo, kanya bohot achi ladki hain aur jante ho usne subha se kuch nahi khaya, sirf tumhare piche bhagti rahi! Come on be a sport usse maaf kardo!

Ranbir: [thinking] why didn?t she eat, she totally mad!

R: Okay, Maine tumhe maaf kiya, happy! [smiling😊]

K: thank you Ranbir😳

R: ab chalo kuch khalo!

R: I know kanya main zara over react kar gaya tha, but now can we forget it!

K: nahi, Ranbir ghalati merit hi maine tumpe kitna ghatiya ilzam lagay,

R: ya, actually tumhari hi ghalati thi, and mujhe tumhe thoda aur bhagana chahiye tha, shit

K: ab itna bhi uncha mat udho, okay apni ghalati kya manli to tumto asman mein pohoch gaye,

And they keep arguing.

Then they all go to the resort, the rest of them go to their rooms and ran-kan go for dinner.

K: ufff mujhe to bohot bukh lagi hai, I just cant wait to eat, subha se kuch nahin khay,

R: Kyun? I mean main tumse baat nahin kar raha tha to is ka matlab yeh to nahin ke tum khao na, I mean tumhe kya farak parta hai, agar main tumse baat karoon ya na karoon?

K: [thinking] sach hi to keh raha hai, main kyun itni pareshan ho rahi thi? Mujhe bhukh bhi nahin lagi?

R: anyways chalo ab khalein,

While their going to the restaurant kanya faints and gets hurt on her leg and hands. Ranbir helps her get up and takes her to the restaurant. They go and sit down in the restaurant. They both order, the food comes.

K: trying hard to eat with her left hand, because she got hurt on her right hand.

R: Main help kardoon?

K: [thinking]

R: he takes a spoon and starts feeding her. While hes talking about the whole day and telling her that she must take care of her self, tumse hi starts ringing in kanyas head:

K: shes staring in his eyes and thinking about all the moments they spent together, aa aa aa aa aa aa aa aa aa aa aa aa aa [shes staring at him and day dreaming]

ankhon mein ankhein teri, [the bus scene]

baahon mein baahein teri, [the beach scene when he catches her]

mera na mujh main kuch raha, hua kya? [staring at him while he is feeding her]

Baaton mein baatein teri, [seeing him talk]

raatein sogatein teri, [the times she stayed up whole night thinking about him]

tera hi sab yeh hogaya hua kya?

R: Hello, kanya kaha khogayi? Whats wrong with u? main yahaan kehta hi jaraha hoon, apna khana chod ke tumhe khilaraha hoon aur tum ho ke bas gum hi ho gayi ho,

K: Im sorry Ranbir, actually mujhe bohot chakkar arahe hain, [lying]

R: anyways ab khalo to chakkar kam ho jayenge,

He feeds her, and then eats himself. Then they both get up to go to their rooms, but kanya got hurt so she cant get up, and walk, so Ranbir carries her.

While hes taking her to her room their eyes meet and they both get lost in each others eyes. They have a long eyelock.

Kripa: hey, hello tum dono ko kya hua? Main yahan 2 minutes se khari hoon aur tum dono ho ke fursat hi nahi,

K: shut up, kripa, aisi koi baat nahin, woh actually..

R: actually yeh madam aaj pura din upwas rakh rahi thi aur inka chipkali sa badan yeh pressure nahin le saga to yeh faint ho gayi,

K: main upwaas nahin rakh rahi thi okay aur agli bar mujhe chipkali kaha na to main tumhe nahin chodoongi,

R: lekin main agar tumhe chod doon to?

K: tum aisa nahin karoge,

R: aur karoon to?

K: ugggh okay sorry! I think tumne kasam kahi hai ke jab tak mere mun se sorry nahin sunte, tumhara din nahin guzarta,

R: tumhe kaise pata chala, [grins]

K: [looks at him naughtily]

Ranbir puts her on the bed.

R: Now look after yourself, okay, Good night

K: Thanks Ranbir, tum bhi apna khayal rakhna, Good night! [smiling😊]

He goes out of the room,

Kripa: aahaan, Kanya yeh sab kya ho raha hai? Hmmm, Ranbir ki ankhon mein kho jati ho, ab tumhe bhook nahi lagti, woh jab yahan hota hai tum mujhe bhi bhool jati ho, hmmm something is happening,

K: no way, ur impossible kripa, main aur Ranbir sirf dost hain, okay, aur tum to janti ho ki main pyar wyar mein believe nahin karti,

Kripa: tum kuch bhi khelo main janti hoon ke yeh pyar hi hai! Okay madam godbole!
K: just shut up kripa,

Kripa: [starts irritating] Kanya is in love! Kanya is in love! Kanya is in love!

K: shut up kripa!

Kripa: still continues? Ranbir and kanya sitting on a tree, K I S S I N G!

K: [really irritated]

They start a pillow fight, Kanya struggling with her broken hand, but still fighting.

Kripa; good night kanya, good night Ranbir, look after yourself, u too! [Mimicking them]

K: ugggh kripa, ill kill u!

Kripa: kanya bach ke rehna, Kahin pyar na ho jaye! [laughs]

K: NO way, Kanya and love it?s just impossible!

They continue their pillow fight and then the both go to sleep.

ME first that was awesome

Originally posted by: sweet cherry

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