Kahin pyar na ho jaye! last part pg 35 - Page 3

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Day 2

Kanya is still sleeping [she couldn?t sleep last night] so Ranbir came to call her, he?s knocking on her door, no answer, he knocks even harder and says chipkali kholo?

K: kya hai? [angrily😡]

R: chalo jana nahin hai? We are late again.

K Kahan jana hai?

R: tum pehle ao to sahi!

K: acha atti hoon, ufff yeh saandh to meri jaan leke hi mane ga, gets up angrily.

R: jaldi karo!

K: ab change to karne do!

Kanya comes out and they leave,

Today they can go anywhere they like so Ranbir goes shopping,

K: Ranbir hum shopping kaise kar sakte hain? Humne ab tak ek lavs bhi nahi likha hai, likha kya socha tak nahin hai,

R: so what, Ranbir nanda is with you, don?t worry babes!

K: yehi to tension hai [muttering]

R: tumne kuch kaha?

K: nahin to? Tumne kuch suna?

R: whateva main to shopping karne ja raha hoon bye!

K: Ranbir, [oh shit main akeli to nahin rehsakti, iske saath hi jaana pade ga]

R; kya hai?

K: main bhi arahi hoon!

R: to chalo, kya ab main tumhe utha ke lejaon?

K: tum sidhe mun baat nahin karsakhte?

R: nahin, [smiles] tumhare saath to bilkul nahin.

K: ugghhh, kaha pas gayi?

R: kuch kaha tumne?

K: nahin to, [being sarcastic] kuch nahin, ab chalein?

They start going around all the shops, Ranbir is shopping one way, and kanya is just getting more and more frustrated.😡

Then they both go into a clothing shop, and Ranbir goes and starts flirting with the sales girls and kanya is just looking and burning😡😡

K: [thinking] patanahi apne aap ko kya samajh ta hai, hottest hunk my foot! I think mujhe bhi thodi shopping karni chahiye, kya loon.

She starts looking at shirts and dresses, while she is looking at the clothes in the mirror Ranbir is commenting on them, by actions.

First she chooses a long top beaded one, more like an Indian one, Ranbir says its perfect. So she leaves it then she sees another one and he also says that?s good so she also leaves that one then while she is busy looking at Ranbir she takes another dress without looking at it. And he says nah its not good [in actions] so she takes that and starts heading to the fitting room while she is going she realizes how short the dress is and its also strap sleeves,

K: [oh no main yeh kaise pehnoon gi?]

R: isiliye to kaha tha ke tum is dress ke laike nahin ho, tum yeh dress pehen hi nahin sakti,

K: tumhe yeh kis ne kehdia? Main yehi dress pehno gi!

R: pehen to logi lekin mujhe nahin lakta yeh tumpe achi lage gi!

K: kyun [irritated] kyun nahin achi lage gi? Huh?

R; well? ummm Bcoz tum itni patli ho or tum me who class nahin hain jo is dress ko pehen ne ka liye chahi hain, [grins]

K: wat do u mean class nahin hain, huh, anyways main tumse argue hi kyun karahi hoon? I don?t know, main to chali is dress ko pehen ne,

She goes in the fitting room and looks at the dress and thinks,

K: ab to yeh dress pehen ni hi paregi after all mere ego ka sawaal hai, warna who idiot, gorilla, mera masak udae ga.

She wears the dress,

R: wow😲[mouth opened] waise yeh chipkali sach main bohot khoobsurat!

K: apna mun band karlo Ranbir, kya hua? Tum kya keh rahe the? Ke main yeh dress pehen hi nahin sakti huh? Aur kya keh rahe the ke dress mujhpe acha nahin lage ga? Well ab tumhara mun khula kyun reh gaya? Huh?

R: aisi koi baat nahin hai, ok aur by the way tum is dress me kafi hot lag rahi ho, [winks and starts walking]

K: kya matlab hai ho lag rahi hoon huh? How dare u call me hot?

R: tum decide karo ke tum kya chahti ho, ok, pehle tum isliye lar rahi thi kyun ki maine kaha yeh dress tumhe suit nahin karega aura b jab tareef karaha hoon to bhi tum lar rahi ho, whats ur problem?

K: Mujhe tumhari tareef ki koi zaroorat nahin hain ok, aur haan mera problem yeh hain k eke tum yeh bhi keh sakte the ke main achi lagrahi hoon, ya khoobsoorat lagrahi hoon, lekin nahin tumhe to bas har ladki ko galad nazar se hi dekhna ata hai na, hot lag rahi ho, huh.

R: eh hello miss godbole itni bhi mat urho, ok main aur tumhe gandi nazar se dekhoon, plz itne bhi bure din nahin aye hain mere, ok, aur haan jo laga who kaha, itni hi shareef ho to aisa dress pehna hi kyun? Huh?

[And he goes to the counter to pay for his items and kanyas dress]

K: hey, tumhe mereliye bhar ne koi zaroorat nahin hai, main khud bhar loongi, huh!

[She goes to pay for the dress]

counter man: hello ma?am, im sorry lekin humara card machine nahin chal raha, aapke pas cash hain?

K: [oh god itna cash to mere pas nahin hai] what, yahan aas paas koi atm to hoga na?

Counter man: yes ma?am hai, lekin aapko yeh dress yahan chod ke jaana hoga,

R: [laughing loudly😆]

K: [fuming😡] uhhh

R: don?t worry inka dress bhi mere saath hi ring kardijiye, mera pas cash hai [still laughing]

K: No thanks Mr. Ranbir nanda, main ake bad mein le jaoongi!

Counter man: ma?am, let him pay for u, phir aap inhe cash de dena,

K: okay! [Still fuming😡]

They leave the shop, kanya is still fuming she doesn?t say a word the whole time, not even to argue.

Then they leave the shopping mall, and go to the resort, everyone is sitting by the bonfire their.

They all decide to play antakshari,

They all play while kanya is still sitting with a big, pulled up face😔 and

Ranbir: [is just staring at her and thinking should he say sorry, did he say something that hurt her?] par maine to aisa kuch kaha hi nahin hai ke main sorry kahoon, lekin kanya bohot upset lag rahi hai, kya karoon?

Angad: kaha khogaye Ranbir tumhari turn hai,

R: huh [still lost]

Angad: chalo ab gao! tumhe pa se koi gana gana ho ga!

R: ummm, then he starts singing,

Papuu cant dance saala and dancing like and maniac,

Kanya is smiling now😊.

He goes up to her and pulls her in the center, then they both dance on the song.

Kanya is laughing😆, Ranbir is happy now!

Then they all go to their own rooms and Ranbir and kanya are also going:

R: tum haste hue bohot achi lagti ho, hamesha hasa karo!
K: thanks, aur tum dance karte hue bohot ache lagte ho [laughs]😆

R: [laughs😆] ya sure, who to bas tum upset thi isliye tumhe hasane keliye kiya tha,

K: thanks!

R: anyways kal milte hain, aur plz kal jaldi utth jaana! Okay!

K: good night!

R: good night!

They both go in their own rooms.

shanaya and kripa are sleeping Kanya is sitting on her window pane again, thinking about Ranbir, when he said he only danced to make her laugh, and when he was dancing and she starts laughing😆

Kripa: kya hua kanya tum thikh to ho na? has kyun rahi ho?

K: kuch nahi, ab tu soja tujhe aur angad ko to bohot jaldi hoti hai na roz, mujhe utha ti bhi nahin hai,

Kripa: nahin who kanya tum itni der se soti ho aur waise bhi Ranbir bhi late hi ut ta hai, isliye tumhe disturb nahin karti.

K: haan, chod na, tu to mujhe bhool hi gayi hai, sara din angad ke saath rehti hai aur jab hum milte bhi hain to tu usi se baatein kar rahi hoti hai,

Kripa: [gets up] im sorry kanya, sara din to hum sirf project par kaam karte hain, phir jab time milta hai to ek doosre ache se janne ki koshish karte hain, janti hai kanya woh mere dhimaak se jata hi nahin, I think mujhe usse pyar ho gaya hai!

K: [jumps up] what tu pagal to nahin ho gayi na? I mean tu use janti hi kitna hai?

Kripa: kanya, woh kehte hai na pyar anda hota hai, [laughs] aur kanya pyar karne ke liye ek second bhi kafi hota hai

K: tujhe kaise pata key eh pyar hai?

Kripa: kyunki jab bhi humari ankhein milti hain, hum dono kho jate hain, aur jab woh mere saath nahin hota to main usi ke bare me sochti hoon, uska naam likti rehti hoon, har waqt uske saath hi hona chaahti hoon, phir chahe hum jagre, baat kare, I don?t know kanya, I think im madly in love with him!

K: [gets lost and starts thinking] (while thinking aa aa aa aa aa is playing in her mind) when our eyes meet, she thinks about the time their eyes met, when hes not with me I think about hi, she thinks how everyday night she cant sleep because shes thinking about him, she fights with him but she still wants to be with him, WHY? WHY?

Kripa: KANYA! Kaha kho gayi?

K: huh [lost] nahin woh kuch nahin, tujhe kuch sunae diya?
Kripa: nahin to, Kanya mujhe lagta hai tujhe bohot neend arahi hai, akeli has rahi ho, phir kahin khojati ho, aur phir tumhe gane sunae dere hai? Tum pagal hogayi ho, chalo ab so jao!

K: [still thinking] Mujhe ho kya gaya hai? Main pehle to kabhi aise nahin kari thi?

[She also goes to bed]

that was super

you knwo wat i will say so muje kehbne ki zaroorat nahi hai👍🏼

superb, excellent, i culd picturise both kanya n ranbir, z dialogues r so apt for them!!!! really gud

that was excellent...
i loved it
pls continue soon

r u crzy do u think sum1 will criticise u? it is so awesome!

Thanx alot for the comments:

Day 3

Everyone wakes up and goes in the bus, even Ranbir and Kanya. Today they are going to a famous lovers spot.

Everyone starts their research, Ranbir and Kanya go and sit down somewhere to start their plot atleast.

K: Ranbir, humara plot kya hoga? Story kya hogi? Mujhe to kuch samajh nahin araha,

R: don't worry Kanya, tumhare saath Ranbir Nanda hai!

K: I know Ranbir, lekin usse kya hoga?😕

R: tumne us din dekha nahin, maine tumhari bolti kaise band kar di thi, yaad aya? Well maine love ke bare main kitna kuch kaha ke tum chup hi hogayi! Yaad hai na?

K: [making faces] haan yaad hai, ab MR RANBIR NANDA aap kuch sochne ka kasht kareinge?

R: mujhe lagta hain, humare characters ko humare jaisa hona chahiye,

K: To to hum Fail ho hi jayenge,

R: Kyun?
K: well because agar ladka, ladki itna larenge to unhe pyar kaise hoga?

R: ho jayega! U just don't worry,

K: worry kaise nahin karoon, Ranbir? Anyways mujhe lakta hai humein yeh kahani ek arranged marriage ke uppar banani chahiye, aur phir love kaise ata hai, what do u think?
R: no way, tum ne suna nahin, the topic is love not marriage!

K: I know lekin tumhari story se to hum gaye hi gaye.

R: Kanya agar tumhe mere saath kaam karna hai to mujhe sab karne do, okay!

K: Okay, age ki kahaani bhi sunao.

R: okay main characters ka intro likh deta hoon.

K: mujhe bhi suna hai,

R: Relax, suna raha hoon,

R: Ranbir Nanda- Hot, handsome and extremely rich, sab ladkian us par marti hain, lekin usse intezaar hain apni miss right ka, Love mein yakeen rakhta hai, aur bohot sweet hai.😆

K: huh, plz itna bhi jhoot mat bolo,

R: kya jhoot kaha maine? Rich hoon, hot and handsome hoon, ladkian mujhpe marti hain, love pe bharosa hai, miss right ka intezaar hai aur thoda sweet bhi hoon!

K: Plz Ranbir, yeh kisi aur se mat kehna who hasenge, tum aur sweet! No way!

R: oh really agar main sweet nahi hota to kal tumhari galti keliye tumhe hasa nekeliye itne papad nahin belta!

K: ya wateva, ab mera character bhi introduce karao.

R: suno, Kanya Godbole- sweet aur simple,

K: [blushing]😳

R: ab age bhi suno, Sweet aur simple lekin hamesha yeh sochti hai ke jo woh kehti hai, sochti hai wohi sach hai🤢

K: plz main aisa nahin sochti😡

R: tum ausa sochti ho, and agar tumne phir se interrupt kiya to main yahan se chalajaaoonga, samjhi😡

To main kaha tha, haan, Sweet aur simple, lekin hamesha yeh sochti hai ke jo woh kehti hai, sochti hai wohi sach hai, love pe yakeen nahi rakti, patlisi chipkali jaise hai, lekin khud ko hoor-pari samajh ti hai,😆

K: [fuming with anger😡]

R: I think that's it for u,

K: apne liye duniya ki sabse achi cheezein likhi aur mere liye, chipkali? Ughhh, main tumhare saath kaam nahin kar sakti, agar mrs briganza mujhe class se nikalde to thikh hain, huh😡😡 [walks away]

R: [are yeh to bura man gayi] Kanya… Kanya!

K: Kya hai?

R: main to sirf mazak kar raha tha,

K: acha, I don't care. [starts to walk]

R: Kanya, meri baat to suno

K: Mujhe kuch nahin suna,[still walking]

R: Kanya

[still walking away]

R: [goes up to her and holds her hand] Kanya, meri baat suno,

K: kya hai Ranbir? Wat is ur problem? tum patanahi apne aap ko kya samajhte ho, har bar meri basadi karne ki sochte hi rehte ho, actually tumhari galati nahin hai tum amir baap ki bigrihui aulad ho na, isliye,

R: Tumhara problem kya hain, huh, pehle mujhe force karti ho ke main tumhare saath is project par kaam karoon aur phir, bhag ja ti ho?

K: Ranbir, plz mujhe chod do, mujhe tumhare saath argue nahin karna hai, tumhe tumhare maa, baap ne ek ladki ki izat karna nahin sikhaya? [being sarcastic] Oh haan main to bhool hi gayi thi tum amir log to kisi ki izat karna aur kisi ladki se baat karna jante hi nahin ho!

R: [pulls her close to him😡😡] tumhara problem kya hai, huh? tum bas chahti ho ke puri duniya tumhare piche bhage, lekin tum khud is duniya se aur is duniya ki sabse badi sachayi se bhag ti ho, PYAR, Tum janti nahin ho tumhe kya chahiye! [angrily]Aur haan agli bar mere parents ko bich mein mat lana! [pushes her and goes away also throws the writing pad]😡

K: [dazzled, she was so close to him she could feel him,]

Picks up the book and reads it;

Ranbir Nanda- Hot, handsome, extremely rich and quite arrogant, sab ladkian us par marti hain, lekin usse intezaar hain apni miss right ka, Love is everything for him.

Kanya Godbole- Sweet aur Simple, jab hasti hain to aisa lagta hai ke sari duniya bhola ke usse dekhte hi jao, Ankhein aisi ke doob jaane ka man karta hai, aur itni khoobsoorat. Ke chand bhi sharmajaye, Lekin Pyar mein bikul yakeen nahin karti.😳

K: [thinking] oh shit, Ranbir to sirf mazak kar raha tha, maine kuch zyada hi boldiya, woh keh bhi raha tha ke sirf ek mazak tha, ab main kya karoon? Use kaise manaoon?

She goes to look for Ranbir all over, she doesn't find him, and so she goes to the resort.

She knocks on his door

R: [angrily😡] Kaun hai?

K: main hoon Ranbir,

R: ab kya chahiye? Aur kuch kehne ko baki raha hai?

K: Im sorry Ranbir! Plz mujhe maaf kardo, I know main zyada hyper ho gayi thi, Im really sorry!

R: Mujhe tumhara sorry nahin chahiye, apna sorry apne pass rakho! Okay

K: Ranbir ab itna bhao mat khao, plz maine kaha na, ab mujhe kaise pata hota ke tum mazak kar rahe the?

He doesn't answer, she waits there for a while and tries to talk to him but he doesn't answer.

She goes away. To her room

K: huh, itna bhao kyun kha raha hai, mujhe bhi uski koi zaroorat nahin hai,

But she can't stop thinking about him and also thinking what he wrote, she knows she's wrong, she said a bit too much.

Then at night they all sit together again by the bon-fire, angad and aayan convince Ranbir to come down.

They all sit together and decide on what they want to play; Ranbir is looking up at the stars and not even talking, not even looking at Kanya.

Kanya is sitting and staring at Ranbir, thinking why he got so upset.

They all decide that they can dance so they put music, everyone is dancing, Kripa pulls Kanya also. Then Ranbir decides why must he upset himself for her? Then he starts dancing and flirting with Tina and other girls. Kanya just cant concentrate on anything else, she is just looking at Ranbir and burning.

Its late at night now everyone goes in their rooms and Kripa, shanaya call Kanya but she says she will go in a while, Ranbir is still their with tina doing a close dance with her, Kanya just cant take it anymore and goes to the bar to have a soft drink but by mistake she drinks beer.

She goes up to Ranbir and tina while drunk;

K: eh, [drunk] kamini tujhe sharam nahin ati, huh? Kisi ladke ke saath itni der raat ko dance kar rahi hai?

T: Kanya, tumhe kya hua?

R: [shocked😲]

K: mujhe puch ti hai, kya hua? Tu is waqt yahan kya kar rahi hai?

T: tumhe ise kya?

K: Maine kaha jao, mujhe Ranbir se akele main baat kar ni hai, jao yahaan se!

T: [getting worried] im going Ranbir, gud luck!

[She goes away]

R: Kanya, yeh sab kya hai?

K: tum mujhe puch rahe ho kya hua? Tum yahaan tina ke saath dance karke kya sabit karna chahte ho? Huh? [shes falling]

R: Kanya, tum pagal ho gayi ho, main jo bhi karoon tumhe use kya?

K: Ranbir, I am sss…orr…y..

[She faints]

R: he catches her and carries her, [while walking he keeps staring at her] then he decides that he must drop her to her room, then he remembers that Kripa and shanaya must be sleeping, so he goes and takes another room.

He goes in and makes her sleep on the bed, then sits there for a while and thinks why was Kanya behaving like that? What's her problem? If he was dancing with tina wat is it to her?

He stands up to go and she stops him,

K: Ranbir, I'm really sorry, [crying] please mujhe maaf kardo,

R: okay baba maine tumhe maaf kiya!

K: nahin Ranbir, [still drunk] tum jhoot keh rahe ho!

R: nahin, Kanya maine tumhe maaf kardiya hai.

K: promise, [like a child😛]

R: haan,

K: to tumhe mere saath dance karna hoga!

R: Kanya bohot der hogayi hai, plz so jao

K: [starts crying like a baby😭]

R: Okay Kanya, par music.

K: ummm, mere phone mein hai,

She starts jumping like a baby, and dancing on the bed then she tells rannu to carry her,

Then they dance on kahin to hogi, JTYJN,

Kahin to, hogi woh duniya jaha tu mere saath hai,

Jaha main, jaha tu aur jaha bas tere mere jasbat hain,

Jaane na kaha woh duniya hai, jaane na woh hai bhi ya nahin,

Jahan meri zindagi mujhse itni khafa nahin,

K: [tears in her eyes] Ranbir, Im sorry, Plz mujhe maaf kardo,

R: Are kaha na , maaf kiya.

K: thank you, [and faints on him]

Then Ranbir puts her in the bed and starts leaving but she holds his hand tight.

And he has to sit there whole night looking at her and falls asleep, while sitting.

Please do comment and tell me if i should continue😉

👏👏OMD THAT WAS BRILLIANT I JUST LOVE READING THIS FF