Kahin pyar na ho jaye! last part pg 35 - Page 6

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey very nice update. Really good storyline and the best thing is your updates are quite long. Update soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i loved it...
slow love... aw Kanya falling in love
pls continue sooon
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Awesome update!!!!!😳 It's getting very interesting. Please update really soon. Thanks.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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loved it and u better continue coz u write beautifully
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plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz udate soooooooooooooon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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THANK YOU! To everyone for all the awesome comments. reli appreciate it, Im just little busy but will try to update today!

xxMwahxx
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thank u
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sorry for the delay, heres the next update: hope u all like it😳
Day 5

Everyone is off again for their project.

Ranbir and kanya also go, they go the beach.

R: Okay kanya, aaj se hume apna kaam shuru karma hoga,

K: ya ranbir, [worried] im so worried we only got two more days!

R: don't worry kanya, humara play sabse bast hoga!

K: Complete hi karle wo bhi bohot hai

R: tum hamesha negative hi sochti ho, anyways lets roll!

R: first of all, humein thodi research karni hogi, like interviewing the lovers at the beach..

K: cool chalon,

R: lekin baat main karoonga, okay tum sirf likhna!
K: how mean, main kyun baat nahin karsakhti?

R: kyunki tum unse bhi argue karne lag jaogi, love ke bere mein, tumhari wajah se they'll start hating love, itne side effects jo batati rehti ho!

K: ugggh, ab chalein!

They see a old couple sitting and holding eachothers hands, looking at the beach, and go up to them.

R: hello uncle, hello aunty!

Old couple: hello beta, [confused]

R: Uncle, aunty hum ek play likhrahe hain aur bas apse thodi si madad chahiye thi,

Old couple: Hum kya karsakhte hain?

R: kuch sawaalon ke jawaab dene honge,

Uncle: Pucho beta!
R: Aap milein kaise the?

Uncle: [laughs] Hum college mein mile the, aur pehli baar se ek doosre se nafrat karne lage

K: NAFRAT! Par phir apki shaadi kaise hui?

Aunty: bas beta dheere dheere nafrat pyar mein badal gayi, aur hum dono ne shaadi karli, aur aaj bhi ek doosre ke bina ek pal bhi bitaana bhari lagta hai, chote mote jagde to hote hi hain lekin pyar itna hai ke in jagdon mein bhi pyaar hi jalakta hai, [laughs and looks at her husband lovingly]

K: [confused] aisa kaise ho sakhta hai? Nafrat phir itna pyar?

R: tum phir shuru ho gayi na, maine kaha than a chup rehna!

K: [irritated] yeh project hum dono ka hai, aur mujhe pura hak banta hai, ke main bhi apne confusions door karoon

R: oh really? Tum sirf likho samjhi! Warna yeh project kabhi khatam nahin hoga.

K: uffff, tumse to baat karna hi bekar hai, main bhi research karahi hoon to tum ab chup raho

Ranbir going to say something but interrupted by Old couple

Uncle: tum dono ko dekh ke mujhe apne purane din yaad agaye, hai na

Aunty: haan, sach hum dono bhi isitarhan lad te jgarte the, lekin phir pyar kab agaya pata hi nahi chala, raaton ki neend haram ho gayi, din ka chen, khana bhool jati thi, aur hamesha khoyi si rehti thi. [laughs]

K: [thinking]

Aunty: Waise tum dono ki jodi bohot achi lagti hai,

R: EWW, plz aunty main aur yeh chipkali, NO WAY!

K: Waise bhi tum jaise saandh ke saath kise jodi banana hai? Huh,[really irritated]

R: Ignore her! Waise Aap ka pyar ke bare mein kya kehna hai?

Uncle: well I would say, pyar ki pehli siri [step] nafrat hai, and love is sooo pure that nothing can remove it from ur life!

R: Thank you so much uncle aunty, kya hum apka ek photo khich sagte hain?

Uncle: Why not, son go ahead!

Ranbir takes a picture

R & K: Bye Uncle, Aunty!
Old couple: Bye beta

and then they move on. They meet a young couple, in their teens (18-19)

R: Hi

Girl: Hi,

Boy: koi problem hai kya?

R: No no, tells him the exact same thing and asks them how they met and what they think about love?

Girl: well I think love for me is a game, so just play it!

Boy: yeh, whatever u say love, and starts kissing her

K: aha aha [coughing for attention] Kyun ranbir to yeh hain tumhara pyar! [grins] Im impressed

R: Watever! Ab chalein!
They go to another couple in their late 20s.

R: HI,

Man & woman: hi, how can we help u?

R: tells them the exact same thing and asks them how they met and what they think about love?

Woman: well, we met in a train, my day was going so bad I never thought on that train I would meet someone who would sweep me of and make me fall in love.

Man: yeah, she was like so frustrated, she wasn't looking around and we both fell she was on top of me, and our eyes met and the same moment I knew I was in love.

Woman: ya, because wen you love someone you just wana get lost in his/her eyes!

K: [Thinking] how she always gets lost in rannus eyes, is this love???

R: Wow, That's soooo sweet! Can I get a picture!

Both: SURE!

He takes a picture and asks them what they think about love?

Both: Humara mann na hai, that love is an ocean of emotions, so just get lost in it!

R: THANK YOU! BYE

BOTH: BYE!

K: BYE!

Then they spot a White guy and indian lady

Ranbir: hey

Lady: Hey

Man; Can we help?

Ranbir: tells asks them the same questions

Man: we met, in college, and just had something for eachother since then we're together, because love is blind, it doesn't see colour or religion! she was like the most beautiful thing I've ever seen,

Lady: And I changed my religion for him coz I love him sooo much.

K: shocked to hear how much people love each other how? Why?

Lady: I lost a lot, my family, my religion, my name but I had love so I was happy. And then my family also accepted our love.

K: wow, that's truly a lot u lost, still u were ready for it?

Lady: ya, because love is way higher then the side effects.

R: WOW! that's Awesome love, I say, what do u think about love?

Man: I think love is the song of the soul, its really beautiful to be in love!

They speak to other people as well, some say really stupid things about love so kanya mocks ranbir when they are going around.

Then there done, they catch a taxi to go to the resort.

Kanya is thinking of wat all the people said about love; its an ocean of emotions, song of the soul, its pure, loves first step is hatred, tum dono ki bohot achi jodi banegi,Ranbir saying: its irresistible.

R: hello, phir se kho gayi kya?

K: [still lost] sorry ranbir, kya hua?

R: you are really wiered anyways, woh writing pad mujhe do, i think humne research kafi karli hai, na?

K: Ya, [handing him the writing pad]

In the taxi the song tum mile… from my name is Anthony gonsalves, starts playing!

Kanya gets lost again, thinking about ranbir:

tum mile jaane dil ko mere kya hua?
jaane mere dil ko kya hua?
bekhabar har dhadkan tadapne lagi
jaane mere dil ko kya hua?

main to hui khud se juda
hai tera kaisa asar
hai bheed mein tanhaiyaan
hoon main kis mod par
teri nazar ko is kadar meri nazar ne chhuaa
bechainiyaan aisi badhi mera sukoon gum hua
har gahdi ek ajab sa chaya nasha
jaane mere dil ko kya hua

hum dono to chup hain magar
bole hai khamoshiyaan
aate nahi hum hosh mein
kaisi ye madhoshiyaan
hum ko nahi kuch bhi pata kaise deewane hain hum
kya kaise bhi ab na ruke deewanagi mein kadam

na thame dhadkano ka haseen silsila
jaane mere dil ko kya hua

tum mile jaane dil ko mere kya hua
jaane mere dil ko kya hua?

K: [thinking] yeh mujhe kya ho gaya hai? Har waqt sirf or sirf ranbir mere dil aur dhimak main hai, kyun ho raha hai aisa? Jabse ranbir mujhe mila hai, jaane mere dil ko kya hua hai, Im I in LOVE? NO way Kanya, tum pyar nahin kar sakti, pyar kanya godbole ke layik nahin hai, pyar mein bohot dard hai, sirf dard, aur kanya godbole khush rehna chati hai, Yes I don't love RANBIR!

The resort comes and they get off and go in their own rooms,

Kanyas room:

Trying hard to sleep, but cant sleep so she decides to go take a walk

While going she sees ranbir lying down on the sand and talking to the stars.

K: Ranbir, Tum yahan?

R: [embarasse] Tum yahan kya kar rahi ho?

K: Mujhe neend nahin arahi thi, to socha walk kar ati hoon, lekin tum akele akele baatein kar rahe the?

R: Akele nahin,

K: to?

R: never mind, [sits up]

Kanya sits next to him,

R: to kanya tumne kabhi apni family ke bare mein nahin bataya?

K: tumne kabhi pucha hi nahin,

R: Well, go on…

K: okay, meri family mein hum 4 log hain, Meri mum, shes very sweet and always after me to get married, Chaota Bhai Harpal (18 years)- the sweetest bro anyone can ever have, and pooja di- meri badi behen, hamesha hum sab ko apne sadehue serials ki kahanian suna rahi hoti hain, woh serials likh ti hai, aur main. That's it!
R: OH that's cool, aur tumhare dad?

K: [little upset ignores the question] aur tumhari family mein kaun kaun hai?

R: meri family to bohot badi hai, Well here go's first of all: MUM- Mallika nanda- very sweet, mujhse bohot pyar karti hain, iklota jo hoon, tumhari mum ki tarhan meri shaadi ke piche always, BIG D: meri dadi, she loves me, and loves to party. Aditya bhaya: mere cousin brother aur mere best friend, early career mein kuch flop filmein ki hain, [laughs], unki wife, ASTHA Bhabi: bilkul Indian serials ki vamp jaisi, kuch na kuch plan kar hi rahi hoti hai, reva bhabi ke saath. Reva Bhabi: Sidharth bhaya ki wife, apne aap ko abhi bhi jawaan samj ti hain. Sid Bhaya: sweet, but reva bhabi se bohot darr te hain. Ayaan: tum to use janti ho, Sid bhaya ka beta, aur uski behen, Aliya- really sweet, Aditya bhaya ke bete: Kunal aur kabir- really sweet, butlove partying and troubling big d, aur unki behen: Riya: bohot hi bewakuf, akal to hai hi nahin jo kaha kardeti hai, [laughs] and I think that's about it!

K: WOW! Itni badi family, kitna maza ata hoga na?

R: Ya, Nanda mansion is like a mad house [laughs] but everyone their loves me a lot and only want me to get married and settle down.

K: [laughs] to karlo na!
R: still waiting for my princess to come, my dream girl!
K: oye hoye, dream girl, huh? Anyways tumne apne papa ke bare mein nahin bataya?

R: Bataya kya ao main tumhe unse mila ta hoon,

K: [shocked] yahan?

R: who dekho, woh tara dekh rahi ho? Who hai mere dad!

K: [confused] ???

R: mama kehti thi ke jab koi is duniya se chala jata hai, woh ek tara ban jata hai,

K: oh, Im sorry!

R: its okay,

K: Par kaise, kab?

R: ek accident mein, main sirf 5 saal ka tha, [tears in his eyes] tabse meri mum hi mere liye sab kuch hai, aur tabse main dad se baat karta hoon roz, like a diary u know. Log diary likhte hain, main dad ko apne pure din ki kahani sonata hoon.

R: paanch dino se unse baat nahin ki, isliye aaj socha dil halka karloon, unki bohot yaad ati hain, I miss him sooo much!

K: Im sorry ranbir,

R: Its okay, tumne mere sawaal ka jawaab nahin diya?

K: kaun sa sawaal?

R: yehi ke tumhare dad ke bare mein tumne kuch nahin bataya?

K: [sad] mere papa, hmmm, well woh hum sab ko chod ke chalegaye, main 12 saal ki thi aur harry 11 saal ka,

R: IM really sorry,

K: Its okay, im used to it now, mujhe bhi papa ki bohot yaad ati hai, I used to love him, he used to love all of us sooo much phir achanak kya hua kuch samaj hi nahin aya, ek din who ghar aye, niki aunty ke saath aur humein kaha [crying] ke woh niyati aunty se pyar karte hain aur unke saath apni zindagi bitana chahte hain,

R: [shocked]

K: Tab main pyar mein vishwas karti thi, humesha sapne dekhti thi, k eek din mera raj kumar ayega, mamma aur papa jaisa pyar chahti thi main, lekin jab papa humein chod ke chalegaye, to mera pyar pe vishwas uth gaya, I started hating the word love! Mamma papa, ki love marriage thi, aur phir bhi, [starts crying]

Ranbir consoles her and hugs her

R: kanya, I know jo hua bohot bura hua, lekin isme pyar ki ghalati nahin hai, kyat um khush nahin ho? Kya tumhari mum khush nahin hai? Har cheez jo is duniya mein hoti hai uski koi wajah hoti hai, isiliye tumhe dukhi nahin hona chahiye shayad isme bhi koi bhalayi ho, main nahin janta ke kya hua tha, kyun hua, lekin har insaan same nahin hota, har love story same nahin hoti, to pyar ko mat thukrao kanya, usse apnao phir shayad tum is sab ko bhul pao.

K: [still crying] Thinking wat he said.

K: [rubs her tears] thank you, ranbir! I feel so much better thank you sooo much. [and kisses him on his cheek]

R: [blushing😳] Ur welcome.

They both go in their own own rooms,

R: Thinking about the kiss

K: [thinking about the whole conversation] ranbir is so loving and understanding, he is so cute,

Wow kanya is in love! Does ranbir love her? If you want to know more, please comment! Quickly Quickly!😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
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ME FIRST

THAT WAS AWESOME
FANTASTIC......BRILLIANT......SUPER
AWESOME CONTINUE SOON 👏
I LOVE THIS LINE: R: Thinking about the kiss
R: [blushing😳] Ur welcome
Edited by sweet cherry - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Great update Loved the whole dialogue and theri research

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