Kahin pyar na ho jaye! last part pg 35 - Page 2

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While arguing they forgot that they had to go for drama class;

[They both entered the class, they were late]

Mrs. B: Ranbir, Kanya You are late!

R: woh actually ma?am radha ma?am ne mujhe rok liya tha,..

Mrs. B: Ranbir, Radha ma?am yahan pehle hi achuki hain, mujhe batane ke topic kya hoga,

R: [confused]

Mrs. B: ok anyways, maine abhi abhi ek announcement ki hai jot um don one miss ki, wel here goes we are going to be doing a project, in which u all with your own ability will have to write a play, direct it, and act in it!

R: oh wow that?s cool!

Mrs. B: abhi aur bhi hai, I have told all the classmates to make jodis, one girl on boy, who will be in one team, bcoz u and Kanya weren?t here everyone has submitted their mnames so u and Kanya have to be in one team!

K: no way, ma?am main aur Ranbir? No way! Plz ma?am

R: haan ma?am main aur yeh chipkali, ewwwww, mera to play hi bigar jayega, I will look like a fool, the hottest hunk in town with the thinnest chipkali? No way!

K: shut up! Main chipkali nahin hoon, samjhe! Infact Saandh aur itni khoobsurat ladki no way kitni ghatya jodi banega,

R: Just shut u?

Mrs B: shut up! Ab tum dono jagarna bandh karo, agar tum is class me rehna chahte ho to tum dono ko ek team ban kar yeh project complete karna hoga, aur haan pass bhi hona parega, aur hum is project ke liye tum sab ko 7 dino ke liye goa le ja rahein hain, to tum sab ek saath time bita sagein aur yeh project complete kar sago, aur ek aur baat is play ka topivc ho ga pyar!

K: [thinking] oh god ab main kya karoon, main dram class to nahin chod sakhti, I think is saandh ko convince karna parega, ke sirf is project keliye hum saath mil kar kaam karein

Mrs. B: samajh gaye?

R: yes ma?am. Hum kab ja rahein hain?

Mrs. B: kal,

R: wow! That?s cool.

K: [thinking] lakta hai Ranbir drama class keliye meri mada d karega, itna utavla jo ho raha hai, but btw is saandh ke saath 7 din? [upset]

The bell rings, everyone is discussing their play, everyone runs out of the class.

K: ehem ehem,

R: yes, Miss Godbole?

K: ummm Ranbir kya hum sirf in 7 dino keliye ek team ki trhan kaam karsakhte hai?

R: wat tum pagal to nahin ho gayi? No way, tumhare saath!

K: [ughhhh] par abhi to tum bohot utavle ho rahe the!

R: well yes ab bhi excited hoon, ke mujhe ek hafte tak, tumhara chehra nahin dekhna parhe ga, aur rest bhi ho jayega! Cant wait to go!

K: Ranbir please main drama class maise nahin nikalna chahti hoon, Please meri help karo! Warna ma?am humein class se nikaldengi,

R: mujhe koi farak nahin parta, mera to last year hain!
K: [getting worried]

R: waise agar tum mujhe sorry kaho to shyad ho sakhta hai!

K: [hesitating] so?orry

R: kya mujhe to kuch sunai nahin diya,

K: Sorry

R: kaho I am very sorry Ranbir, tum sahi the aur main galat,

K: no way, main aisa nahin kahoongi,

R: thikhe to bye!

K: nnnnahin Ranbir, I am really sorry, maine jobhi kiya, usme sirf meri galati thi. Ab khush?

R: yeah wateva, kal miltein hain, bye! [goes to his room] [she goes to her room too]

They all pack their bags and are ready to go,

Kanya is wearing this cute pink t-shirt and blue denim paddle pusher, hair tied up high.

R: hey Kanya, main nahin janta tha ke tum bhi aise kapre pahen sakhti ho, [being sarcastic]

[Walks away]

K; uggghhhh, [frustrated]

They sit in the bus and start moving.

All the friends decide to play truth or dare [spin the bottle]

Kripa truth

Angad asks her to tell them if she ever loved anyone?

Kripa: ummmm? haan!

Angad: who is that?

Kripa: sorry ek hi sawaal aloud hai,

Shanaya- dare

Aayan: tumhe dance karna hoga,

Shanaya: yahaan? Okay!

shanaya dances on pappu cant dance saala, and aayan joins her.

Aryan- dare

Tina: to run around the us 10 times!

Then bottle stops on Kanya, Kanya ? dare they all tell Ranbir to challenge her.

R: ummm, kya dare karoon? [thinking] is bus main?

Aryan: I know Kanya should kiss Ranbir, after all use sorry to kehna chahiye,

Everyone [except from Kripa and angad] starts shouting Come on Kanya, Kanya!

K:nahin main aisa nahin karsakhti,

Aryan: but tumne dare choose kiya tha to tumhe karna hi hoga, itni jaldi har mangayi?

Everyone: haan, Kanya, u have to!

So Ranbir says no thanks mujhe mela karne ki koi zaroorat nahin hai! Mujhe tumhari kiss wis nahin chahiye,

K: haan to waise bhi tumhe kiss karne kaun waala tha? Huh patinahi kya samajh te ho apne aapko!

While they are arguing bus suddenly stops and they fall;

K: aaaahhh [closes her eyes]

R: [Kanya is on top of him, and he sees her with her hair on her face and eyes closed]

She opens her eyes and their eyes meet, they get lost into each others eyes?

Kripa: Kanya tum thikh to ho na?

K: [comes into her senses and stands up] hhh?aan [hesitating] main tikh hoon

R: to itni der kyun lagai khade hone mein? Uffff, kafi wazni ho,

K: [frustrated] uhhh

They reach goa, and reach their resort everyone goes to their rooms.

Angad, aayan and Ranbir get one room

Kanya, shanaya and Kripa get one room, they all go and sleep.

In Goa, Day 1,

All the jodis are gone to the beach to start their project, Its 10:00am and Ranbir is still sleeping,

K: yeh idiot abhi tak soya hai, oh god main kaha pas gayi?

[She takes the key card from angad]

She knocks on the door, but no answer, so she opens the door and goes in.

Ranbir is nowhere to be seen,

K: Ranbir, Ranbir! Kaha ho tum? [ab kaha gaya? Angad ne to kaha ke woh abtak so raha hai]

She knocks on the bathroom door, no answer, she knocks again, still no answer. Kanya tries to open the bathroom, its open she pushes it open and sees blood and starts screaming, Ranbir closes her mouth and pushes her to the wall,

K: [breathing fast and sweating]

R: kya hai, yahaan kyun ayi? Ek to khud mere kamre main ghoos thi ho phir chilati ho? Abhi sara hotel jama ho jata, ab bolo kya hai?

K: [still scared] Ranbir yeh khoon?

R: mera hai? koi problem, shave karte hue kat gaya.

K: sorry main darr gayi thi,

R: Itna sa khoon dekh ke darr gayi? Huh [laughs]

K: haan, tum he to bohot zor se laga hain, bohot khoon behraha hai, first aid box hai?

R: nahin, [in pain] ahhh

K: kya hua dukh raha hai?

R; obviously!

K; im sorry , chalo ayo yahaan, main kuch karti hoon,

R: wondering why is she sooo worried and wat will she do?

She goes out of the room then she comes back with cotton and cream

She goes to him and starts rubbing the blood, while she is doing that Ranbir is only looking at her, she has a feeling that he is looking at her and she looks back at him but he turns away, then she takes the cream and starts applying it and then Ranbir starts screaming like a child,

K: yeh bacho kitaran kya shor macha rahe ho? Huh?

R: dard ho raha hai,

K: I know par agar tum nahin lagao ge to infection ho jayega,

Shes still applying the cream and Ranbir is staring at her and he can hear, AA AA AA AA AA AA AA AA AA AA AA

K: chalo hogaya,

R; huh [still lost] tumhe kuch sunai diya?

K: nahin to? kyun

R: kuch nahin! [Confused]

R: main change kar ke ata hoon,

K: thikhe,

They leave the room,

They also go to the beach; they can?t concentrate on the script as they are too busy arguing and making fun of each others ideas,

The others start having fun as they were working from long, so they go in the beach and start playing like children, Kanya is just watching all of them, aayan and shanaya, Kripa and angad etc. shes getting bored

R: tumhe beach main khelna pasand nahin?

K: nahin mujhe salt water se allergy hoti hai, eww I just hate it, [lying]

R: acha, main abhi aya,

Ranbir picks Kanya up

They come back to their senses and go back to the resort.

Ranbir and Kanya go into their own rooms,

Kanya?s room

Kanya is sitting there on the window and looking at the moon, thinking about what happened today between Ranbir and her?

When she was applying cream to him, and he was staring at her, then she thinks about the beach how they were playing and then that eyelock, she also remembers the eyelock they had in the bus?

K: [thinking] yeh kya horaha hai mujhe? Main kyun uske bare main soch rahi hoon? I don?t know, anyways ab sona chahiye. Kal jaldi bhi uthna hai.

Originally posted by: yogitz

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Originally posted by: miss.sonia

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