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Posted: 15 years ago

Very nice update Arwa...

Liked the new entries...Varun and Shaina...
continue soon....
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Posted: 15 years ago
that was really good
plz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Arwa - hey Suhana

How r u??? - I'm gr8

Update was really gudπŸ‘πŸ‘- Thanks very much

Naina really love Raj a lot..She knew that Raj's anger is self destructive so she asked him to give up that..Raj knew dat he will give anything to her and he was happy to promise her .. - yeh they both have this gr8 understanding

Varun's entry was too funnyπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† .. - hehehe I'm glad u liked it Every1 is busy teasing Raj n Naina ..The groom n bride can't rest in peace till their marriage is overπŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜† - hehehe hamesha aisa hee to hota hain
Shaina seems too b too beautiful coz every1 round Naina's house is busy staring at her..πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰ - yeh for sure she is a beauty queen
Naveen is too speechless after his encounter with Shaina she didn't leave a single chance to flirt with him..Ritu was so annoyedπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† - yeh poor Navin
Raj was missing his mom so very much..😭😭 - he was as she hasnt been in his life to share anything and this is the biggest thing happening really
He wanted to share his pain with some1 nad when Naina called him he was too eager to pour out his heart.. - ab wohi to hain jo oski baat samjhegi
Will he really go n meet her?? - hmmm lets see Varun was so lost after seeing Shaina..I think he has fallen hard for herπŸ˜†πŸ˜† - yeh u cud say that
But Shaina tried to play smart with him..How will he pay back her?? - just wait and watch ke kuch karega bhi ke nahi
Raj n Naina's big day will b specialπŸ˜ƒ - yes it sure wud be
Continue soon
Bye

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

awesome updt dear..... - thanks very much

loved entry of varun and shaina.... - i'm glad u did

RN were as usual cute.....
- they always are

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πŸ‘ - thanks once again

hey arwa - hey

nice update dear - thanks very much for liking it
waiting for the big day to come cont soonnnn - sure it wud come soon
update was awesome - thanks once again
fantastic
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

Very nice update Arwa... - thanks very much

Liked the new entries...Varun and Shaina...- i'm glad u liked them as more is in store
continue soon....

Originally posted by: rituka7

too good
great part
update soon

thanks very much for loving the part
I'm glad u luved it ad hope u continue enjoying it

Originally posted by: prerna1

that was really good
plz continue soon

Thanks very much for luving it
Edited by arwa72 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Update was very good.

Naina knows that she is the only one who can change Raj. She knows that Raj losses his senses when he gets angry and is not only bad for other but prove to be self destructive for him as well. And so she asked him to give it up. Raj as usual cannot refuse Naina for anything and promises her that he will not get angry any more.

All the guests are busy teasing the new bride and groom…and poor naina and Raj cannot find the time to even talk to each other. Raj is missing his mom very much. The scene where he sees his mom in his sister was very emotional. He wants to share his sorrow with naina and so when she calls him he is unable to hold back his emotions.

The flirting scene between Naveen and Shaina was too funny. Poor Naveen bechara dono tarfa se phas gaya….first Shaina flirts with him and seeing this Ritu gets annoyed.

Varun's entry was very funny….who pehli nazar mein hi Shaina se impress ho jata hai.

Waiting to see how Raj will come and meet naina

Please continue soon

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hii Arwa...
lovely part
Varuns entry was too funny....Shaina n varuns scene is so nice
Every one is teasing Raj naina a lot...bechare raj naina ko ek dusre se baat karne ka mauka bhi tikh se nahin milraha
Raj was missing his mom a lot...naine ne bhi sahi waqt pe phone kiya usse ..now he wants to meet her.....waiting to see how raj will meet naina
Plz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!! - thanks very much

Both Raj and Naina prayed for each other's happiness and strength to keep each other happy!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 - yeh they love each other a lot and care abt each other too

Naina really loves Raj a lot and she knew that she is the only one who can change him!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ - for sure

Naina knew Raj loses his senses when he gets angry which is not only bad for others but proves to be self destructive for him as well!!!!! - yeh as it has been a lot of incidents now to make her realise. He was even injured badly last time due to it

So she asked him to give up that!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 - ab to oska haq banta hain na

Raj is ready to give Naina anything and realised that she wanted to save him!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 - He knows his Naina cares abt him a lot

He promised her ke woh kabhi gussa nahi karega and she was really happy!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 - oski baat jo maani to khush hogi na

Raj is sad as he knows after they go back he would be separated from Naina for a week!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” - yeh as there wud be too many villains in between hehehee

Naina reassured him magar Raj ke liye toh Naina se ek pal bhi juda rehna dushwaar hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - haan ab wo to deewane ki hadd se ziada pyaar jo karta hain

Naina knows ke Raj ki packing bhi usse hi karni hogi!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 - abhi se practice karahee hain

Raj prevented her from doing anything and fooled around but she pushed him away and continued with her packing!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - all men r the same

All of them returned back and Raj and Naina cherished the last moments they had with each other!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - haan jitna samet sakte hain samet le phir najaane kab mile

Naina's parents asked for forgiveness again but he said they don't need to and everything was resolved between them!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 - yep didnt want to stretch this matter any further

Gehlot is happy to have his children back and felt bad for how he had behaved with Raj!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 - yeh he is a father after all and cares for his children a lot and their happiness means a lot

Varun's entry was too funny and he is a total nautanki!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 - hehehehe I'm glad u found it funny or kya kare it runs in the family I guess

All the guests are busy teasing the new bride and groom!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - onka yehi to kaam hain

Poor Naina and Raj cannot even talk to each other or rest in peace!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” - yeh poor them

Shaina's entry was dramatic and very stylish!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ - hmmm yes she is something else

Everyone is busy staring at her and her beauty and she ignored them all!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍 - ab khoobsurti ka ghamund hain to aisa hee hoga na

Shaina is a lot like Poo of K3G!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - hehehe sure there r similarities

Naina is happy to see her best friend and hugged her squealing with joy!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€— - haan itne saalo ke baad jo milee waapis

Shaina purposely flirted with Navin to tease him aur Navin ghabra gaya and doesn't know what to say!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - ab kya kare apna Navin bechaara aisee situations me phas hee jaata hain

Navin is behaving a lot like Shahrukh in K3G on seeing Shaina's short dress!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - ab koi bhi hawa chak hojayega aisa dekh kar jo wo jaan bujke dikha rahee hain

Ritu was so annoyed with Navin on seeing him with Shaina!!!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑Yeh Navin toh dono taraf se phas gaya!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - for sure. As I said bechaara Navin πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

The preparations are in full swing in Raj's house!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - shaadi jo hain

In the middle of all this, Raj is missing his mom very much as its the biggest day of his life!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 - yeh he misses her a lot as she had never been there when he needed her

He sees his mom in his sister doing the exact same thing!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍It was very emotional!!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 - haan oski Sam bhi oske maa jesee hee hain

He needed to share his sorrow with someone when Naina called him in answer to his prayers!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - oske dil ki baat jo jaanti hain

Naina Raj ko Raj se zyada jaanti hai and knew he was upset about something which he won't tell her on the phone!!!!! πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” - definitely she knows him through and through

Raj wants to meet her and said he will come to meet her!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 - of course wo her baar koi na koi nahi zidd karta hain

Knowing Raj he probably will come to meet her as its useless to argue with him!!!!! - yep kyu ke ek baar osne commitment karli to wo khud ki bhi nahi sunta hehehehe

Shaina heard Naina telling Raj I love you and teased her about it!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊 - aakhir sab ka yehi to kaam raha hain raat din

Shaina managed to get Naina to show her Raj's photo!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ - yeh finally someone succeeded

Naina is very possessive and wants it back soon but Shaina ran off with it!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› - koi bhi apne khoobsurat se hone waale pati ko chupaake rakhna chaheega dusro ki buri nazar se

Shaina had the intention of showing it to everyone who had died to see him for days as they had given her the task!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - hehehehe yeh only she managed to get it done

Naina desperately ran after her to snatch it back and it created a riot!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 - ab yeh to hona hee tha

Naina eventually managed to get back the photo and pulled it out of her hands making Shaina loose her balance!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 - excitement me aksar yehi hota hain

Shaina collided with Varun and landed on the floor!!!!! - pehli takraar to hoti hee hain

Varun is lost after seeing Shaina and completely bowled by her beauty!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍 - ab filmo me to aisa hee hota hain na πŸ˜‰

He kept staring at her but Shaina knew how to handle him and I loved her comment khoobsurat ladki dekhi nahi kabhi!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - i knew u wud like it isiliye to rakha

She took him with her and he followed her like lamb to see what she would do with him!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 - ab wo to kho jo gaya hain oske andar to kuch or nahi dikhai deta

She lured him and he ended up in the pond in the garden which brought back to his senses!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 - aakh band karke chale to aksar yehi hota hain and i guess its the best way jaadoo utaar ne ke liye

Varun kept staring at her with awe and just sighed and laid back on the water!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍Yeh toh gaya!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - ek or gaya bechaara pyaar ka maara

Naina remembered ke yeh toh Raj ka cousin hai jo kuch kaam se aane waala tha!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - is larki ko sab pata hota hain kya kare

None of the men are Shaina's type and she hates them and Naina asked her ke uske type ka kaisa hai aur kab aayega!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 - for sure she is a total feminist

Shaina said ke woh kahi se aur kabhi bhi tapak sakta hai and just at that moment Varun said from behind excuse me!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊 - ab kya karu cant stay away from the typical flimi scenes

Shaina was irritated and Varun said ke ab toh lagta hai jeevan bhar saath rehna padega!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 - He is not one who wud leave her so easily

Shaina bhi kam nahi hai aur usne ek overweight female servant Sundri ko Varun ke peeche laga diya!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ - she definitely is smart

Varun was stuck as Sundri leeched onto him and he ran from there saving his life!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 - hehehe bohat hee buri tarha se phas gaya wo

Ab dekhte hai yeh Varun kya karta hai!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - sure wud be coming up soon


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Part 36

Evening at Ahluwalia's residence

The whole house was hustling and bustling with women from all over the neighbourhood. It was the mehndi function and the ladies were just dancing and singing along. Naina wasn't ready yet so she remained upstairs in her room.

Shekhawat's palace

Varun: tu paagal hogaya hai Raj? Abhe saale apne saath mujhe bhi marwaaehga

Rajveer: kesa dost hai tu. Apne bhai ke liye itna bhi nahi karega? (tried convincing) dekh ziada kuch thori na karna hai. Mujhe Naina se milna hai to aaj raat sab busy honge to hojaehga. Phir mujhe apna waada bhi pura karna hai

Varun: waada? (curious) kesa waada?

Rajveer: (dismissed it) are kuch nahi. Tu bus chalna mere saath or kuch nahi hoga

Varun: Kuch nahi (made a face) itnee saaree aurtein hongee waha or onke beech jaake milega tu Naina ko

Rajveer: ha lekin hame koi dekhega nahi

Varun: Kya matlab?

Rajveer: hum waha hokar bhi nahi honge

Varun: (annoyed) tu kya bakwaas karaha hai?

Rajveer: Tu bus chal mere saath or khud ba khud samajh jaaehga.

Varun had no choice so he agreed to go with him and then he thought it would be a great opportunity to meet Shaina again.

Ahluwalia's residence

Rajveer along with Varun stood outside the house staring at all the people going in and out. They still hadn't figured out a way to get in.

Some more cars arrived outside and he recognized them. They were from his house so he quickly hid behind with Varun because if they got caught then they were history. He peeked through to see who had come and he found his aunties getting out and then there was Sameera. He sighed as they all walked in but still their problem had not been solved. How were they going to get in? Just then Varun noticed some fruit basket guys taking delivery inside.

Varun: (tapped Rajveer's shoulder) Raj dekh

Rajveer: (grinned) Bingo!

Sameera and the aunties entered the house with the shagun mehndi and just then Naina came down all nicely dressed. She wore a heavy worked cerise pink lengha with a blue and pink halter neck top.




She looked amazing and everyone couldn't stop praising how sweet she looked. She came and sat down on the decorated raised dias made for her. Neelu and Shaina sat beside her as the ceremony began.

Lady 1: are yeh mehendi waalee aayee hee nahi abhi tak

Lady 2: To abhi shagun ki mehndi to laga sakte hai na

Sameera came forward and applied the shagun mehndi on her and both of them just smiled with joy. Naina couldn't believe that the day had finally come when she was applying mehndi on her hands by Rajveer's name. It was too overwhelming.

Naina: Kya soch rahee hai?

Sameera: (shook her head) kuch nahi bus yuhi

Naina: Me jaantee hu tu kya soch rahee hai (tongue in cheek with a teasing tone) Don't worry bohat jald tere haatho me bhi me aise mehndi lagaungi

Sameera: (laughed and went beetroot red) will you stop teasing me

Both of them just continued pulling each other's leg.

Meanwhile Rajveer and Varun had successfully reached inside the house by the help of the fruit delivery disguise. No one noticed them and they went and stood behind the pillar. Rajveer peaked out to catch a glimpse of his Naina and when he saw her he just got lost. She looked amazingly sweet tonight and he just wanted to snatch her away from everybody. He just stood there staring at her forgetting everything else. Varun saw what he was doing and just shook his head at his madness. He also got busy in looking at the other lovely women especially one who had got his attention since morning.

It took some more time and all of them still sat waiting for the mehdni women to come.

Lady 1: yeh kya hai shaadi ka mahole hai or itna suna or phika. Chalo larkiya kuch hungama to karo

Everyone just giggled amongst themselves and thought of what to do. Then Neelu and Shaina got an idea and they pulled Naina along with them. She kept refusing but they didn't hear and pulled her anyways.

Neelu: Me to kehti hu Naina ko hee mehfil sajaanee chaheeye. Aakhir isse acha koun gaata hai yaha?

Naina: Are nahi (tried to go and sit back) mujhse nahi hoga

Lady 2: oh come on Naina aise kese chalega. Teree shaadi hai to dhamaal to karnee hogi.

Naina: mujhse nahi hoga

Everyone kept pleading whilst she kept refusing. Finally she was pushed so much that she had no choice. The ladies began to play tunes on the tablas whilst many danced along with the beat.

Chorus: Yeh mehndi yeh mehndi mehndi sagada di

Yeh mehndi yeh mehndi mehndi sagada di

Naina: Mehndi lagaungi me sajna ke naam ki

Naina, Neelu and Shaina joined the others in the centre and danced along too.

Naina: Mehndi lagaungi me sajna ke naam ki

Kuch na khabar mujhe ab subho shaam ki

Mein sun rahee hu yeh kesee sadaye

Sapno ka saajan mujhko bulaaye

Rajveer enjoyed the view to the most as she sang along for him.

Naina: Mehndi lagaungi me sajna ke naam ki

Kuch na khabar mujhe ab subho sham ki

They all continued teasing her and then Neelu came dressed as a guy and everyone laughed and then she pretended to be Rajveer. Naina just couldn't believe they were doing this and just played along denying her every time.

Naina: Ek baar aaye to saamne mere wo

Pehchaan lungi hai mere bus mere wo

They all laughed as she pushed Neelu away saying she was nowhere near her Rajveer

Naina: Ek baar aaye to saamne mere wo

Pehchaan lungi hai mere bus mere wo

Shaina came and hugged her from the back and teased her further with everyone else joining in.

Chorus: Baatein banaye chaahe koi samjaaye

Per teri chaahat badlaaye

Hoga sajan tera laakho me ek

Aakhiyan teri muskaaye

Rajveer just kept admiring his little nightingale as she continued entertaining all. She looked mind blowing and he died to go and take her in his arms.

Naina: Chaahe jo bhi ho

Parwa nahi hai mujhe kisee ilzaam ki

Rajveer imagined himself dancing along with her.

Naina: Mehndi lagaungi me sajna ke naam ki

Kuch na khabar mujhe ab subho sham ki

Chorus: Yeh mehndi yeh mehndi mehndi sagada di

Yeh mehndi yeh mehndi mehndi sagada di

Then midway he halted and held her hand. Then as she pointed each part he kissed it lightly.

Naina: Sone ka kangna sone ka jhumka,

Taro waali bindiya jaalindaar ghoongta

He took his beauty time to love every part whilst she felt shy and tried to get out of his grip

Naina: Sone ka kangna sone ka jhumka,

Taro waali bindiya jaalindaar ghoongta

His reverie broke as he noticed all the ladies gathering around Naina. He realized he still stood behind the pillar staring over at her and now he was dying to take her away.

Chorus: Sone ka kangna taro waali bindiya

Uspe tera sharmaana

Sone ka jhumka jalindaar ghoongta

Karenge sajan ko deewana

She had gone beetroot red now and her happiness had reached heights.

Naina: Chaahe jo bhi ho

Parwah nahi mujhe kisee anjaam ki

They all just continued dancing along

Naina: Mehndi lagaungi me sajna ke naam ki

Kuch na khabar mujhe ab subho sham ki

Mein sun rahee hu yeh kesee sadaye

Sapno ka saajan mujhko bulaaye

Rajveer had made the decision now that he was going to go and get her no matter what.

Naina: Mehndi lagaungi me sajna ke naam ki

Kuch na khabar mujhe ab subho shaam ki

Soon they all settled down again tired from the activity. They all sat amongst themselves waiting when finally the mehndi women arrived and the ceremony began. Two to three sat beside Naina and applied it on her whilst others sat around applying on themselves.

Rajveer and Varun kept changing places as soon as people came their way and made sure they remained hidden. But Varun was nervous that how long they were able to stay like this. He told Rajveer to quickly go and get his work done but Rajveer told him to be quiet and he'll do something.

Some time later two women dressed in burkhas arrived saying they also came to apply mehndi.

Lady 1: Itnee dair kese hogayee?

Burkha 1: Maaf kijyega lekin meree khaala pait se hai (pointed towards the pregnant lady in burkha next to her) isi liye dheere aana para

Lady 1: Theek hai ab jaldi se aake aap bhi mehndi laga dijye

Both the burkha ladies walked up to Naina. The pregnant one took her time to sit near Shaina whilst the other one just continuously kept staring at Naina. Shaina saw that and wasn't pleased.

Shaina: (annoyed) aise kya ghoore rahee hai aap?

Burkha 1: ummm…ummm (struggled for explanation) umm wo dulhan kitnee khoobsurat hai wo dekhrahee thi. Beechaare dulhe ka kya hoga (sighed) wo to tik hee nahi paaehga dulhan ke saamne

She sat down and took Naina's hand. At the touch Naina felt as if an electric current ran through her so she twitched slightly. Then she looked up towards the lady who in turn winked at her. Naina opened her mouth with amazement as she couldn't believe who it was.

Shaina: (still displeased) aapko yaha kaam karne ke liye bulaaya hai, bekaar ki baat karne ke liye nahi.

Pregnant lady: zara bhi tameez nahi sikhaayee tumhare maa baap ne ke baro se kesee baat ki jaatee hai

Shaina: (shrugged her off and rubbed her shoulder) Excuse me, I don't need you to tell me what I've learnt and what I haven't. Shaina jo bhi kartee hai sahi hee kartee hai, do you get that?

Pregnant lady: Bohat hee batameze larki hai yeh (shook her head vigorously as if very disappointed) pata nahi is nak chari se koi shaadi karega bhi ke nahi

Shaina: (flabbergasted) How dare you! (frustrated) Pata nahi kaha se do namune aagaye hai

Pregnant lady: Ham yaha tumaharee saheli ko sajaane aaye hai (sat up with excitement) Or namune ham nahi (pointed towards Shaina) Tum ho namuni (she didn't appreciate the comment and opened her mouth to say something but she didn't let her) ah ahaha mooh band karo warna macchar ghus jaaehga

She absent mindedly did as she said but then realized and felt like killing her. Naina told her to calm down and just forget about it. She knew who it was and she knew they were pulling Shaina's leg on purpose so there was no point in arguing.

Now the burkha lady applied mehndi on Naina's hands and secretly kept squeezing her hand and she kept signaling to let go. She still couldn't believe that no one had realized that the person sitting in front of her was none other then Rajveer. His touch was enough for her to realize his presence. She saw how he made some very amateur designs but the thing she loved the most was that he made a heart and wrote his name in it indicating that his name was pasted forever on her heart. They spoke through their minds again.

Naina thought: tum yaha kyu aaye Raj?

Rajveer thought: kaha tha ke tumse milne aaunga to pohoch gaya

Naina thought: sach me paagal ho. Ab yahase jaldi jao isse pehle ke koi sach me pakar le

Rajveer thought: chale jaaenge chale jaaenge. (he continued to finish one hand off with his rather funny designs) pehle apna waada to pura karlo

Naina thought: kounsa waada?

Rajveer thought: bhool gayee? Waada liya tha tumse maine ke jab tum meree dulhan banogee tab tum mujhe hee sajane dogi khud ko. To phir me kese nahi aata aaj?

Naina thought: Sach me Raj tum paagal hee ho (she laughed making others beside her wonder what happened to her all of a sudden. Rajveer joined in too)

Soon they stopped and Rajveer reluctantly excused himself signaling her that he was waiting for her.

The pregnant lady remained where she was and gradually leaned her weight against Shaina. It didn't please Shaina at all as it just increased on her agitation.

Shaina: (shrugging her off) yeh kya karahee hai aap?

Pregnant lady: kamar me thora dard horaha tha, isliye thora taika le rahee thi

Shaina: (moved further away) To wo taika aap kahee or jaake dhoondhye

After sometime the pregnant lady moved in further near Shaina and she made a disgusted face. This lady was getting on her nerves more like freaking her out. She wanted to escape her but she wasn't leaving her alone.

Lady 2: are aap ki tabiyat kuch theek nahi lagrahee (to the pregnant lady)

Lady 3: Shaina tum inhe upar lejao or kamre me aaraam karne do. Kuch dair ke baad wo chalee jaaehgee

Lady 2: Ha yeh theek rahega.

Shaina: (displeased) Of course not! Me koi delivery girl lagtee hu

Lady 3: Inhe madad karogi to punya milega. Jao jaldi jaake chore ke aao

Shaina had no choice as the ladies kept persisting so she stood up with a humph and tried to pull the pregnant lady but it felt as if she on purpose put all her weight on Shaina. Finally she stood up but her weight still remained on Shaina making it difficult for her to walk. Shaina found the woman too heavy and couldn't imagine any woman being so, but then again she was pregnant. The lady kept laughing in her mind as she enjoyed what happened.

It took her some time before she reached upstairs and then took her to the first room that came and then she desperately wanted to leave.

Pregnant lady: Are betee zara hame bistar tak sahara to de do

Shaina: (under her breath) itna bhaaree wazan hai ke ise sahare dene ke liye sahare kee zaroorat hai. (out loud with an exaggerated smile) Kyu nahi

She pouted with anger as she helped the lady get to the bed and on purpose the lady took her beauty time much to her bad luck. The lady kept grinning behind the burkha as she enjoyed Shaina's red furiated face. Anger made her cuter.

Naina's mehndi had completed and was told to go to her room to dry off and get away from any disturbance. She obliged and slowly made her way back upstairs and had just reached inside the room when a hand literally pulled her inside without warning. She opened her mouth to yell but it got covered and her eyes went wide after staring at her captive.

Rajveer: Sssh…Me hoon Naina

She calmed down as he removed his hand from her mouth. Then he took both her hands and made her sit down on the bed.

Rajveer: Wa meree dulhan sach me bohat khoob sajee hai. Aakhir apne piya ke naam ki mehndi jo lagee hai to khoob to hogi.

Naina: (surprised) Raj tum yeh?

Rajveer: Kya? Are itna khoob gaana gaarahee thee tum to kya me compliment bhi na karu

Naina: To tum ne wo dekha? (felt embarrassed) kabse bethe huwe the tum. My God sach me Raj you're too much

Rajveer: (laughed) are isme bura maane kee kya baat hai. Ab jiske liye gaarahee thi wo hee na ho to kya fiada. Isliye maine socha ke dekh hee leta hu (saw she was still disappointed) Acha baba wo choro. Sach me Naina mujhe tum complex hee dene waali ho.

Naina: Or nahi to kya. For your kind of information shaadi me sab dulhan ko hee dekhne aayenge.

Rajveer: kiskee majaal hai jo meree dulhan kee taraf aakh uthaake dekhe (pretended to be all possessive) kisee ne kiya to wo oska aakhri din hoga. (shrugged his shoulders) ha per agar koi dulhe ko dekhna chaahe to I've no problem.

Naina: aa ha haha (made a face) bare aaye no problem waale. Pehlee baat to yeh ke dulhe kee taraf koi dekhega bhi nahi or agar dekhega to me oski aakhe noch lungi

Rajveer: (chuckled as held her tight from the back) Ab koun horaha hai possessive

Naina: ha hu me possessive (rested against his chest) or me saari dunya se kehdena chahti hu ke Rajveer mera hai sirf mera

Rajveer: Baap re phir to mujhe do baar sochna parega. Kahi me koi ghalati to nahi karaha

In the beginning it didn't register to her but then she realized what he meant and got irritated with him. She came out of his embrace and tried attacking him

Rajveer: (burst into splits of laughter) are sambhaalo sambhaalo puree mehndi kharaab hojaaehgee. Phir aisa na ho ke shaadi kee raat mujhe Naina ke bajai churail miljaaye

Naina: Raj tum! (gritted her teeth and continued attacking him not caring about her mehndi) Jao mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karnee (turned away cross with him)

Rajveer: are come on Naina (tried turning her back) me to sirf mazaak karaha tha (she still didn't budge but he pulled her back towards him again) Ok baba I'm sorry. Wo kya hai ke itne dino ke baad mila tumse to socha thoree chere khaanee kardu. Ab itna to haq banta hai mera

Naina: Bohat bure ho tum. Aaj khushi ke moke pe bhi mujhe rula diya

Rajveer: (cupped her face in his palms and wiped her tears with his thumbs) Tumhaare yeh aasoo bohat keemti hai mere liye, inhe aise kharch mat karo. Me to kehta hu bachaake rakhna inhe warna kya pata bidaai ke waqt glycerine lagana pare

Naina: RAJJJJJJJJJJJJ! (she became the assailing self again but soon he stopped her and both just burst into fits of laughter)

Back into the other room the pregnant lady had become adamant and wasn't prepared to leave Shaina's hand.

Shaina: (desperately tried to free her hand) Mera haath chorye

Pregnant lady: Or agar nahi chora to

Shaina: Kis kisam kee aurat hai aap. Aise zabardasti kyu karahee hai mere saath?

Pregnant lady: zabardasti kaha (sweet talked) yeh to hamara pyaar dikhaane ka andaaz hai

Shaina: (completely furious) mujhe aapse koi pyaar nahi chaheeye. Now leave me!

Pregnant: Are thoree dair hamare paas to betho

Shaina: Mujhe aapke paas nahi rehna now leave me!

She struggled with the lady and shrugged on her burkha and held on it tight pulling it for her to let go. In the pulling eventually she got free and with her the burkha also came off. Then she just stared with shock as she didn't know how to react. Whether to be surprised to find the person, or to completely go red hot with anger.

Shaina: TUM!

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Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Ahluwalia's residence is bustling with activity as it was the mehendi function!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj wants to go to meet Naina and is convincing Varun to go along with him!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Varun thinks Raj has gone mad aur woh apne saath saath usse bhi marwaehga!!!!

Varun had no choice but to go with Raj and he thought it would be a great opportunity to meet Shaina again!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj and Varun finally figured out a way to get into Naina's house with the help of the fruit delivery disguise!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

Naina is looking beautiful and everyone couldn't stop praising her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Sameera applied the shagun mehendi on her and Naina is overwhelmed to be applying mehendi on her hands of Rajveer's name!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina teased Sameera ke bahut jald woh bhi uske haatho mein aise hi mehendi lagayegi!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Raj was just lost in Naina's beauty and stood staring at her forgetting everything else!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍

Varun also got busy in looking at the other lovely women and especially one who had got his attention since morning!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

Neelu and Shaina got Naina to sing and Naina finally had to sing!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

The song is very nice and well suited to the situation!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Everyone teased Naina as she sang for Rajveer!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is really something, he took the risk and was awarded well!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

He saw his beautiful wife to be performing at her mehendi ceremony and is lost in her sweet voice as she sings out her emotions and love for him!!!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

He imagined himself dancing along with Naina and romancing her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍

But soon he realised he was still standing behind the pillar staring at her and now he was dying to take her away!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj aur Varun are so naughty aur burkha pehen ke aa gaye and Raj kept staring at Naina!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Naina instantly recognised Raj even in that burkha when he touched her!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Shaina is sharp and caught Raj staring at Naina!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

But then Varun dressed as the pregnant lady began to irritate Shaina as finally usse badla lene ka mauka mila hai!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣

Varun actually said pata nahi ish nak chari se koi shaadi karega ya nahi!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†Haan haan line mein sabse pehle toh wahi khada hai!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊

Varun tried his level best to make her angry and Shaina was fuming with anger!!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 Angry Angry

Naina tried to stop them as she knew they were pulling Shaina's leg on purpose!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj even applies mehendi on Naina's hands and secretly kept squeezing her hand!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

He made a heart and wrote his name in it and Naina loved it!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ ❀️

Aakhir Raj ne Naina se milne aane ka apna waada pura kar hi liya!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

They spoke through their minds and Naina told him to go but Raj reminded her of her promise ke Raj usse sajayega jab woh uski dulhan banegi!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Varun now kept leaning on Shaina and he was getting on her nerves!!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry

Poor Shaina!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”The ladies sent her to take the pregnant lady to rest in the room!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Varun on purpose put all his weight on her and Shaina found the woman too heavy!!!!!

Shaina's comment ke itna bhari wazan hai ke isse sahara dene ke liye sahare ki zaroorat hai was too funny!!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣

Raj was already waiting for Naina in her room when Naina went there to dry her mehendi and pulled her inside!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj praised how Naina was looking and her singing!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina was embarrassed but Raj said jiske liye gaa rahi thi woh hi na ho toh kya faida!!!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Naina said sab dulhan ko hi dekhenge toh Raj acted possessive!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

But then Naina also became possessive and said she wants to tell the whole world that Rajveer is hers and only hers!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj teased her by saying ke kahi woh koi galati toh nahi kar raha and Naina got irritated and began attacking him!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Naina naraz ho gayi toh Raj usse manane laga but then he teased her again!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Naina became her assailing self again but soon he stopped her and both burst into fits of laughter!!!!!!🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣

Here Shaina is helping Varun to rest on the bed and he is making advances at her!!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

He isn't prepared to leave her hand and this led to a struggle in which Varun's burkha came off!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣

Shaina stared with shock on seeing Varun and didn't know how to react!!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

She said the most cliched dialogue in hindi movies ............. TUM!!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Ab jab Shaina ko pata chal gaya hai toh Raj aur Varun ki khair nahi!!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳


Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago

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