my new ff'frm my soul' - Page 2

wow shriya....that was a stunner...the emotions were so beautiful and evocative....i swear i didnt realize i was holding onto my breath for the last of moments....i guess the best of endings, the deepest ones i mean can alwayz be the happiest ideal ones...great part girl loved it immensely!

wow shriya! that was soooo amazing! it was definitely a different type of ff but it was written so well!! u definitely have a way with words and i hope u choose to continue!!! amazing job sweety!!

hey Shriya

just got a recommendation on the story
but funny enuf i had read it already by then
oh well
this is one awesome short story
i just cud feel it all?
how dont ask,i havent been dead before of course
but her expressions and his emotions all so real and awesome
i must say it was a brave concept to see the souls POV
well i can surely say the end was the best ,so deep and intense
cheers for the start to some cool concepts
do write further if u can and if not here,may be another
u got a cool style of writing
love
Hina

thanks a lot everyone who commented...swansea,rani,nj,avanti,hina n suv.patki.....alll ur cooments mean a lot to me..m glad u all liked it thanks a lot....!!

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dat was jst amazing 👏 👏 👏

that was totally a gr8 piece of work!