An Eternal Love Story last part updated 28.09.08 - Page 2

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!Awesome!!!!

thanks Shai 😃 😃 😃 😃

Choube ne ush insaan ko bata deta hai ke ab Naina ko Abhimanyu ne uske peeche laga diya hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛

haan bhai ye us ki duty hai.😃 😃 😃 😃

The song was very nice and very suitable for Raj!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Karan ka gaana!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉

hmmm i love this song n Karan too.😉 😉 😉 😉

Naina Navin ki tasveer ke saamne khadi hai!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Akhir ish ladayi mein usne Rajveer ko jo kho diya tha!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

kya kare vo bhi jis se pyaar karti hai vahi us ko chod k chala jaata hai.😭 😭 😭 😭

Only Aalekh knew where to find her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊He really understands her very well!!!!!

are bhai vo us ka sab se accha dost hai na.😊 😊 😊 😊

The Sword of Honour is given to the Best Cadet!!!😕 😕 😕 😕It is not dfiiferent!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕 😕

It's ok yaar.😛 😛

Kya tumne sab ko kuch na kuch de diya!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒What are you doing??😕 😕 😕 😕 😕

nahi yaar bus Ali, Alekh aur Naina ko hi.😛 😛 😛 😛

Raj aaya tha waha!!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Thats great!!!!😃 😃 😃 😊 😊 😊 😊

nahi aisa to kuch nahi hai.😕 😕 😕 😕

But he is proven innocent now!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Why does he need to hide??😕 😕 😕 😕 😕

abhi hai koi baat bus aage dekho.😕 😕 😕 😕

I loved it when Naina mentioned him in her speech!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊And he was also thinking about Believe in yourself because I believe in Cadet Naina Ah Singh!!!!😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

yeah our fav. dialo.😆 😆 😆 😆

Ab jaldi dono ko mila do!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

dekhti jao.😉 😉 😉 😉

Originally posted by: riyaa_1985

Sorry Vertika for late reply!!!
Main dono updates ke liye ek saath comment de rahi hoon.
absolutely beautiful.Very interesting.
The second one is sooooo emotional dear.
A very good work done.
Take care.




love
Riya.

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Update was very touching n emotional... So Raj is alive but why is he hiding his identity????

Do reveal in the next update

@ Versha

thanks darling

@ Prerna1

thanks a lot for comment

@ Fantatic 21

thanks dear

@ Rityu

thanks dear

"Hello Captain Shekhawat mai bol raha hoon."

Rajveer said,?"Haan kahiye Major.?"

"Par sir abhi bhi main victim to pakda nahi gaya hai jo Lala Gehlot se ye saare kaam kara raha tha." Rajveer said.

"Hum jaante hain Captain par ab aap k is mission me Captain Nandini aur Captain Abhay Verma k alawa aur bhi do log shaamil hone hain."

"Vo kaun hai Major?" Rajveer asked.

"Vo aap ko yahan aane k baad pata chalega Captain aur haan aap sab k saamne kaise aayenge ye mai decide karoonga. Theek hai I think ab aap samjh gaye hain mai phone rakhta hoon."

"Ok sir good bye jai hind." Rajveer hung the phone.

"Kitne dino baa dab mai Naina k saamne jaoonga. Naina se milonnga aur is baar mujhe Naina se koi bhi door nahi kar paayega aur haan is baar mai Naina ko jaroor bata doonga ki mai us se kitna pyaar karta hoon." Rajveer was overwhelmed.

He was on cloud nine now. He opened his lap top n started watching the pics of Naina who Bunty bought for him. Naina ki aankhon me Raj ko ek ajeeb sa soona pan dikh raha tha. 'Nahi Naina ab mai tum ko aise nahi rehne doonga pehle Naveen aur baad me meri wajah se tum ne bahut kuch saha hai par ab nahi Naina mai apne aap se vada karta hoon aur tum se bhi ki ab tumhari in jheel se aankhon me meri vajah se kabhi aansoon nahi aayega.Mai tumahri poori zindagi khushiyon se bhar doonga.'

"Kya hua sir ji kya soch rahe hain aap?" Chaubey asked.

"Are Chaubey tum kab aaye yahan?" Rajveer turned n found him standing at the door.

"Mai to bus abhi aaya sir ji jab aap apni Cadet Naina Singh ko dekh rahe the." Chaubey said in teasing tone.

"Ahhhh vaise she is Lft. Now Chaubey." Raj said n smiled.

"Haan pata hai sir ji par aap k liye to vo huemsha cadet hi hai na."?Chaubey again said.

"Pata hai Chaubey aaj Major ka phone aaya tha ab mai sab k saamne jaa sakta hoon unhone kaha.?"Rajveer k chehre ki khusi saaf pata chal rahi thi.

"Kya sach me?" Chaubey was also surprised.

"Haan par Cahubey Major ne kaha hai ki vo batayenge ki kab kya kaise karna hai." Rajveer ki ankhon me Naina se milne ki khushi dikhi Chaubey ko.

"Mai bhi yahi soch raha tha, vaise sir ji Naina ko vakai me aap ki jaroorat hai mujh se us ki ye halat nahi dekhi jaati hai." Chaubey said.

"Pata hai Chaubey jab hum kisi apne ko khote hain na to kaisa lagta hai mai jaanta hoon.?"Raj took a small sigh than said, "accha chalo apna pla discuss karna hai aage ka."

Here in Academy all guys were busy in Abhi's surprise farewell party. Naina n Alekh has taken charge for decorations ; Pooja n Ali are arranging food n Huda n Yudi were inviting all staff members.

Here Abhi was unaware of all that so he decided to give a treat to all Cadets now turned into Lft. He called an orderly.

"Yes sir", Ordely came in n asked.

"Cadet umm Lft Alekh ko bulaiye kahiyega ki hum ne bulaya hai." Abhi instructed n he went.

After some time he returned, " Sir Lft Alekh abhi free nahi hain. Vo koi jaroori kaam kar rahe hain.To vo abhi nahi aa payenge." Orderly informed him.

"Aisa kaun sa jaroori kaam hai?" Abhi asked.

"Pata nahi sir." Orderly replied.

"Accha aap Lft Naina Singh ko bula k layiye." He again send him n he too retuned with same answer.

"Aisa kya ho raha hai aaj bhai?"

Par beech raste me hi Abhi ko Major Vaibhav (Hussain ) mil gaye.

"Hello Captain how r u?" Vaibahv asked.

"Hum theek hain aap bataiye Major. Kaisa lag raha hai aap ko humara KMa?" Abhi asked.

"Interesting hai kaafi ye jagah aur yahan k log bhi." Vaibhav said.

"Mere kehne ka matlab hai ki yahan jo dikhta hai vo hota nahi hai." Vaibhav said in double meaning statement.

"Hum abhi bhi nahi samjhe Major." Abhi again said.

"Oh common Captain aap itne na samajh to nahi lagte hain." Vaibhav said.

"Vo to aap ki baat apni jagah sahi hai par yahan aisa kya hai jo aap ko aisa sochne par majboor kar raha hai?" Abhi asked.

"Mere kehne ka matlab hai yahan koi kisi par bharosa nahi karta hai. Sab k sab apne aap me confuse hain. Kuch ko to ye tak nahi pata ki kya karna hai un ko aage life me." Vaibhav k words bahut bure lag rahe the Abhi ko.

"Aur aisa kya dekh k laga aap ko?" vaibhav asked.

"Accha ye bataiye Captain Abhimanyu Rai Chauhan jab aap ka dost Naveen arrest hua to aap ne kya kiya, jab aap k dost Rajveer ko charge kiya gaya us ka court marshal kiya gaya tab aap ne kya kiya?" He asked looking straight in Abhi's eyes.

Abhi k paas shayad koi jawab nahi tha Vaibhav k swaalon ka.

"Agar Cadet I'm sorry Lft. Naina Singh na hoti to shayad aap sab mil kar bhi Lala ka kuch nahi bigad paate."Vaibhav said.

Vaibhav ki in baton ne Abhimanyu k andar k jhakmo ko kured diya. Vo sochne laga ki kuch had tak sahi hai in ki bhi baat. Vo galat tha kai baar , kai jagah us ne galti ki hai.

"Kya hua Captain aap k paas jawab nahi hai na koi? Aisa hi hota hai." Vaibhav said n was about to leave when Abhi said.

"Hum ne apne doston ko bachane ki koshish kit hi par us samay ek sipahi hone k naate humare haath bandhe the ki hum sach aur aanhkon dekha bata k Kanoon ki madad karein." Abhi said.

"Oh to aap kehna chahte hain ki aap ne jo dekha vo sahi tha?" Vaibhav said again.

"Hum ye nahi keh rahe hain Major par humare kehne ka matlab ye hai ki hum ko apna farz bhi nibhana tha." Abhi said.

"Aap ko pata hai na Captain ki koi jaroori nahi hai ki annkhon dekha sach ho?" Vaibhav asked.

Tabhi un dono ko gun shot ki awaaz aayi .Without wasting a single minute they both ran in that direction.

When they reached there they found no one there.There was complete silence n darkness.

Suddenly the lights goes on n Abhi was puzzled to see the whole hall decorated beautifully. Everyone came behind pillars with clapping sounds.

"Are aap sab logon ne ye sab kiya hai?" Abhi smiled n said.

"Haan sir hum chahte the ki aap k jaane k pehle aap ko ek chota sa aur pyaara sa farewell de dein." Yudi said.

"Taaki aap ka network permanently hum se juda rahe." Pooja said smiling.

"Thank u all ."Abhi said with happiness.

"Sir aap ne jis tarah humare saath khada reh kar hume sahara diya hai us k aage ye kuch bhi nahi hai." Naina said finally.

"Aur haan sir hum sab aap k humesha bahut bahut shukhra gujar rahenge." Ali said.

"Accha chalo ab saare k saare yahan aise hi khade rahoge kya; party hai enjoy karo."Huda announced.

Soon BC came himself to bid a final good bye to Abhi n all faculty members too.

"To ho jaaye ................." Huda shouted.

"Haan ho jaayeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee" Yudi also said.

Huda started:-

Dekho dekho hai shaam badi deewani
Dheere dhere ban jaye na koi kahani

Dekho dekho hai shaam badi deewani
Dheere dhere ban jaye na koi kahani

Yudi sang:-

Dilbar hai dilkash hai dildaar nazare hain
Aaj zameen per utre kitne sitare hai

Atlo hosh na mi danam
Hum hai dil hai aur janam
Bas deewangi deewangi deewangi hai
Na koi rahe sam rahe per
yeh ilzaam lage kisper
Bas deewangi deewangi deewangi hai

All of them started dancing now.

All hot gals put ur hands up and say
Om shanti Om

All cool boys comon make some noise n say
Om shanti Om

Shaam gazab ki Humgamna Khez ai
Iska nasha hi gehra hai tez hai

Shaam gazab ki Humgamna Khez ai
Iska nasha hi gehra hai tez hai

Zulf khuli hai resham resham
Saans ghuli hai madham madham

Yeh to ishaare hain

Atlo hosh na mi danam
Hum hai dil hai aur janam
Bas deewangi deewangi deewangi hai
Na koi rahe sam rahe per
yeh ilzaam lage kisper

Bas deewangi deewangi deewangi hai

[All hot gals put ur hands up and say
Om shanti Om

All cool boys comon make some noise n say
Om shanti Om]2

Kehene ko waise to sara sukun hai
Phir bhi yeh dil hai ki isko junoon hai

Kehene ko waise to sara sukun hai
Phir bhi yeh dil hai ki isko junoon hai
Pal do pal ko khwaab saza de
Isko usko sab ko bata de
Raaz jo sare hain

Atlo hosh na mi danam
Hum hai dil hai aur janam
Bas deewangi deewangi deewangi hai
Na koi rahe sam rahe per
yeh ilzaam lage kisper

Bas deewangi deewangi deewangi hai

[All hot gals put ur hands up and say
Om shanti Om

All cool boys comon make some noise n say
Om shanti Om]2

When the song stopped all of them insisted Abhi to sang something. After a lot of hesitation he sang:-

Sab ki aanhein bhar aayi thi Abhi k is song par.

it was fabulous...waitin hw raj makes entry................

nice convo btwn vaibhav n abhi.....

also d idea of surpirse party n songs wer good......

updt soon