An Eternal Love Story last part updated 28.09.08 - Page 5

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Posted: 16 years ago
#41
YES !
Raj is backTongue am so happyBig smileBig smileBig smile
Abhi got a shock for his lifetime but hopefully nice one........LOL
i hope Nandini Abhi ko maff kar de Confusedpoor guy
am sure Naina n Alekh recognised the owner of that voice of mistry manShocked
well waiting for the movment when Naina saw her RajShocked
am waiting..................................................urgley
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Posted: 16 years ago
#42
Hi!!Vertika!!
Hope u are fine dear.
A very nice piece of update.
Loved it......
Continue soon...
take care.



love
Riya.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

WOW....fantastic update...

thanks darling 😊😊
first of all..............Yippeeeeeeeeee raj is back.🥳
haan it's party time.😉😉
Nandini and abhi's conversations were superb......raj may forgive abhi but what he did with raj was wrong....i agree with nandini.
Haan galat nahi bahut galat tha.😡😡
How come you have left the other 5 of our gang out from this mission....they should also be a part of this mission.....i think it will be more fun that way.....
ok mai kar rahi hoon koshish us k liye.😃😃
And last...the scene between all the young Lt.. about Vaibhav .....bought back memories of the old LRL scenes...
thanks agar meri choti si koshish aap sab ko aachi lagi to.😊😊
Waiting for the next part...update soon.

Thank u so much.😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#44

@ Versha

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@ Fanatic 21

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@ Prerna1
Thanks darling.
@ Suhaana_dixit
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Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: ~~ashi~~

Iv only started reading it!

But from whtever I hv read so far....... xcellent!!!!!!

i wait for ur comment soon darling.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: vvdn

YES !
Raj is backTongue am so happyBig smileBig smileBig smile
Abhi got a shock for his lifetime but hopefully nice one........LOL
i hope Nandini Abhi ko maff kar de Confused

poor guy
am sure Naina n Alekh recognised the owner of that voice of mistry manShocked
well waiting for the movment when Naina saw her RajShocked
am waiting..................................................urgley

thanks ki aap ko maine happy happy kar diya.😉😉
Haan Abhi ko jhatka to lagega hi aakhir Nandini ka vishwaas jeet gaya hai na.😆😆
Poor aur always confusing hai vo.😆
Haan dekho kya hota hai ab.😊
thanks for comment Namita.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: riyaa_1985

Hi!!Vertika!!
Hope u are fine dear.
A very nice piece of update.
Loved it......
Continue soon...
take care.



love
Riya.

hi Riya haan yaar mai acchi hoon.😊😊
Thanks for liking the update.😃😃
i am updating it know.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#48

Kahan ho Shaina?

Mai tere comment ka wait kar rahi thi par nahi aaya vo.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#49
Here goes the next update for all of u lovely people:-

Nandini ka dil shayad Abhi k aansoon se pighal gaya n she hugged him instantly, "Maaf kar diya hum ne aap ko." Saying this she buried her face in his chest.

Abhi hugged her tightly as if he will never let her go off from his grip.He said finally, "I love u Nandini."

"Mai jaanti hoon Abhi n I love u too." Nandini replied.

Aaj Abhi ko lag raha tha ki us ki barson ki tamanna poori ho gayi. He held her chin with his hand n kissed her forehead, than her both eyes, than her nose n after that he placed his lips on hers she gladly accepted it n started responding with all her passion.

He was rubbing her back smoothly n she held his back tightly.After ten minutes they apart n Nandini smiled shyly seeing in his eyes. He too smiled back. "I want more" Abhi said naughtly.

Nandini lowered her eyes. He pushed her on the wall n started kissing her each n every uncovered body part with full passion.Nandini was enjoying it. She was responding equally his shower of kisses.

Raj entered in the room to inform them something but when he saw this scene he came out of them room immedieatly.He took a small piece of paper wrote a message on it n gave it to an orderly to hand it over to Nandini n left.

After some time he took Nandini in his arms n placed her at the bed n lay on top of her. Nandini's eyes were signaling him to make her complete n love her with each n every possible way. Abhi understood her desires n started removing her clothes one by one. Nandini too took out his shirt n their bare bodies entwined. He loved her every where. He kissed each n every body part of her's n caressed her. Finally both were happy.As the time was passing their passion was getting wilder n wilder. Soon the room was filled with Nandini's moarns.

That night Abhi completed her with him n they both became finally one. Now Abhi was relaxed that Nandini will never leave her n viceversa.

Next morning:-

When Abhi woke up he found Nandini still sleeping in his arms peacefully. He started thinking how his life changed in some hours, how he got the love of his life n his friend back.

Nandini ki bhi aankhein khul gayi. "Good morning dear", she said sweetly.

"Good morning darling", Abhi said n took all the clothes from ground"?Ye lo apne kapde n wear it."

Nandini blushed because she has covered her body with a single sheet. "Ok mai washroom me jaati hoon." She stood but Abhi pulled her back, "Ab kya?" she asked.

"I want a good morning kiss n once more." He winked her n before she can say something he pulled her to him n started again.

Here in KMA:-

Pooja,Ali n Yudi are leaving today. Pooja got posted in Jaisalmair, Ali in Jaipur n Yudi in Kashmir.

Alekh , Naina n Huda were sad because their friends are going away from them.

"Oye Punjaban kyoun muh bana k rakha hai tune"Ali rahega na tere aas paas.? Huda teased her.

"Oye missed call mujhe tum sab k sim card ki chinta hai mere bina kaise hoga recharge tum logon ka card?" Pooja's eyes filled with teares.

"Haan bro I will miss u all." Yudi itna hi keh paaya us ki bhi aankhein bhar aayi theen.

"Hum aap sab ko bahut yaad karenge." Ali said.

"Oye Usool mai dekhta hoon kaise yaad karega tu hume " Jab Punjaban ko yaad karne k alawa koi kaam hoga na tab yaad karega hum ko.?"Huda teased him.

"Kya Huda bhai aap bhi na." Ali blushed slightly.

"Oye tu us nautanki ki baton me aa. Apun bhi tum logon ko bahut yaad karega." Alekh said now.

"Haan guys mujhe lagata hai hum jaldi hi milenge."Naina said hugging all three one by one.

"Oye theek theek hai hum ab chalte hain, tum sab apne handset ka khayal rakhna aur inbox khali rakhna mere liye." Pooja said hugging Naina back.

After a sentimental good bye all left. Ab bache Huda, Alekh aur Naina.

Tabhi Alekh ko kuch dhyan aaya aur us ne Naina ko kuch ishara kiya.

They both left the place n reached a silent corner.

"Kya baat hai Alekh kya hua?" Naina asked.

"Are tujhe yaad nahi hai kya? Aaj Chaubey us aadmi se milne jaa raha hai jis k liye vo kaam karta hai." Alekh reminded her.

"Oh haan yaad aaya accha hua tune yaad dila diya mai bhool gayi thi." Naina said.

"Theek hai to plan kya hai?" Alekh asked Naina.

"Plan ye hai ki pehle hum Chaubey ka peecha karke us jagah pahuchenge fir dekhege ki vo kaun hai aur agar jaroori hua to hum KMA se kuch soldiers ko wahan bula lenge varna hum akele hi us aadmi ko pakad lenge." Naina explained him.

"Theek hai Naina jot ere ko theek lage tu voich kar." Alekh said n both left.

Idhar Chaubey ne Raj ko phir call kiya, "Kahan hai sir ji aap?"

"Haan Chaubey mai abhi bus Ambala pahuch hi gaya hoon." Rajinformed.

"Sir ji major aap ka phone laga rahe the par mila nahi phone to unhone ye inform karne ko bola hai mujhe ki Eagle ko pakadne k liye ek plan ban gaya hai . Us k liye Abhay, Nandini ji parson tak yahan aa jaayenge." Chaubey said.

"Theek hai Chaubey aur kuch?" Abhi aur Nandini k bare me yaad kar k Raj k face par smile aa gayi.

"Haan sir ji ek baat aur hai........" he took a pause than said, " Vo aaj sham ko 6 baje mai aap se mile aaonga vahin."

"Par kyoun Chaubey? Tum ne to mujhe saari jaroori info de di hain na I hope." Raj got confused.

"Kyounki Major ne kaha hai ki ab vo waqt aa gaya hai ki aap Naina k saamne aa jaayein." Chaubey said naughtily.

Raj started thinking some thing so he didn't respond.

"Kya hua sir ji?" Cahubey asked.

"Kuch nahi Chaubey.Ok theek hai fir shaam ko milte hain." Raj said.

Both of them hung up the phone. Raj soch me doob gaya ki Naina jab us ko apne saamne dekhegi to kaise respond karegi. Ek baat to tay hai ki Naina gussa bahut hogi aur Raj ko us ko manane k liye bahut mehnat karni padegi. Yahi sochte-2 Raj k face par ek pyaari si smile aa gayi.

Aaoge Jab Tum O Saajana - 2Angana Phool KhilengeBarsega Saawan, Barsega Saawan Jhoom JhoomkeDo Dil Aise MilengeAaoge Jab Tum O Saajana, Angana Phool Khilenge [ Aaoge Jab Tum O Saajana ?????? Naina Tere Kajraare Hai, Naino Pe Hum Dil Haare HaiAnjaane Hi Tere Naino Ne Waade Kiye Kayi Saare HaiSaanson Ki Lay Madham Chalein, Tose Gaye(Barasega Saawan - 2) Jhoom Jhoomke, Do Dil Aise MilengeAaoge Jab Tum Ho Saajana, Angana Phool Khilenge Chanda Ko Taaku Raaton Mein, Hai Zindagi Tere Haanthon MeinPalkon Pe Jhilmil Taarein Hain, Aana Bhari Barsaaton MeinSapnon Ka Jahaan, Hoga Kela Kela(Barasega Saawan - 2) Jhoom Jhoomke, Do Dil Aise Milenge (Sargam)Angana Phool Khilenge - 2 (Sargam)

Here in Delhi:

At 10'o clock, Abhi n Nandini are ready for their duty. Tabhi MG Vidyarthi ka call aata hai un k liye.

Orderly says, "Mam aap ko aur sir ko MG Vidyarthi bula rahe hain."

"Ok chalo hum aate hain." Abhi said.

"Sir vo Rajveer sir ne jaane k pehle ye diya tha aap logon k liye." He handed over a chit to Abhi.

Abhi opened it n started reading it:-

Mere dost aur meri hone waali bhabhi mai aap dono k liye bahut khush hoon.Abhi MG Vidyarthi ka call aaya tha mere paas aur unhone mujhe wapas Ambala jaane ko bola hai to mai vahan jaa raha hoon hope to see u both soon.?

Abhi smiled at the letter.

"Kya hua kya likha hai is me?" Nandini asked.

Abhi handed it over to Nandini she read it n blushed .Abhi moved towards her n was about to kiss her when she said, "MG Vidyarthi ne bulaya hai I hope hume chalna chahiye."

Poor Abhi he made a sad face.Nandini gave him a small peck n they both moved towards MG Vidyarthi's room.

"May v come in Sir?" They asked in chorous.

"Come in Captains, good morning." MG Vidyarthi said.

"Good morning sir".

"Officers aap ko yahan ye batane k liye bulaya gaya hai ki Eagle ko trap karne k liye ek full proof plan bana liya gaya hai aur plan ye hai ki................" MG Vidyarthi explained them the plan.

"Ab kya orders hain sir?" Nandini asked.

"Aap ko parson yahan se Ambala k liye nikalna hoga. Abhimanyu yahan reh kar mission operate karenge." MG Vidyarthi told.

"Ok sir" Nandini replied.

"All the best officers.Dismiss", MG Vidyarthi said.

Here in KMA:-

1730 hrs same day:-

"Kya hua Naina chalein?" Alekh asked.

"Huda kahan hai us ko kuch batana hoga na." Naina asked Alekh.

"Vo abhi Sameera k saath busy hai, accha mauka hai chal nikalte hain jaldi." Alekh pulled her hands.

They both chased Cahubey silently whereas they were unknown that he already knew that thay are chasing him. Soon he reached in a cottage out from main Ambala nearly 20 kms.

"Jaa kahan raha hai ye mujhe to samjh hi nahi aa raha hai." Naina said.

"Chup kar kahin us ne sun liya to gadbad ho jaayegi Naina." Alekh said.

Chaubey turned his face to make them shure that thay are doing a correct action; but he found no one. Jab ki vo jaanta tha fir bhi he turned forward smiling n entered in that cottage n rang the bell.

A servant opend the door Chaubey instructed him to leave so he did n left the place.He entered inside n closed the door.

"Aa gaye Chaubey tum?" Raj asked.

"Haan sir ji aur saath me aap ki Naina aur Alekh ko bhi le kar aaya hoon." Chaubey replied smiling.

Raj was confused why his heart started beating faster when he heared that Naina is around. He was unable to think how should he react with her when she will be in front of him. Don one decide kiya ki jab tak vo dono saamne nahi aa jaate hain tab tak kuch screat baatein dicuss kar lete hain.

Naina n Alekh hid themselves n tried to listen what Chaubey was talking with that man. Naina soon felt that something is wrong so she signaled Alekh to enter in the house n both of them went towards the door.

Alekh hit the door n found it opened. He entered inside pointing his gun.Soon Naina entered too.But they found no one there.

They silently moved towards that room from where two voices are coming.

Alekh stood there silently n opened it n to his surprise it was opened too.He entered n saw Chaubey standing their n talking to some one.

He pointed his gun towards that man n said in a loud voice, "Kaun ho tum?".

The man turned to listen Alekh's voice n smiled.Naina entered listening Alekh's voice n saw in that direction.

Both of them got an utter shock of their lives.

"Welcome Cadet Naina 'Ah' Singh", he was Raj who said so.

Naina was unable to say anything. Her legs started shaking n soon she fainted n about to drop on ground when Raj came holding her in his arms screaming her name, "Nainaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa".

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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OMG......wat an entry of raj.....really liked the update...updat the next part soon😃

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