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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: varshita

Hey Mahak ye batao tum itna romantic likh kaise leti ho yaar? 😳😳

Pata nahi yaar maine koshish ki aur ho gaya bus.😉😉
Mai to sharmai hi jaa rahi thi lagataar.😡😡
accha ab bus bhi kar sharmana.😆😆
Update was really supercool.😛😛
supercool ya super hot.😉😉
Naina aur Raj ne shadi kar li good.😉😉
Raj ka hi plan tha na shaadi ka.😛
Their wedding night scene was so beautiful yaar.😳😳
Thanks a lot yaar.😃
Kitna pyaar karta hai Raj Naina se na.😉😉
Haan vo to hai.😊
Nandini aur baaki sab ne bhi is me contribute kiya hai na g8.👏👏
Acche dost hain na Nandini aur Alekh.😃
Ab kya hoga ? dangerous mission shuru ho gaya hai ab to.😕
Dekho kya hota hai aage but don't panick.😕
Sab pareshaan hai ki laut kar bhi aa paayenge ya nahi, it's obvious na.😕😕
Haan yaar jab dushman samjhdaar hota hai na tab kahin na kahin thoda sa dar andar baitha hota hai.😲
update soon.

Thanks Varshita dear for reply.😛
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: prerna1

hey thats cool

Raj aur Naina ki shaadi ho gayi too good
bas ab vo mission khatam karke vaapas mil jaaye
plz continue soon

Thanks dear.😛
Haan shaadi karna jaroori tha na as Raj said.😉
Jaroor milenge mission khatam hote hi dono phir se.😃
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: pritib0

HII VARTIKA DEAR HOPE UR FINE SWEETY...................

Not fine yaar suffering from cold n fever.😭😭
THE UD WAS AWESOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOME DEAR...........
Thanks a lot dear.😛😛
SO FINALLY RAJ AND NAINA GOT MARRIED..................
Haan shaadi kar li dono ne.😉😉
AND THEIR WEDDING NIGHT SEQUENCE WAS SO ROMANTICALLY AND BEAUTIFULLY PORTRAYED BY U................HATS OFF TO U SWEETY FOR THIS..................
Thanks a lot i am overwhelmed yaar.😉😉
REALLY WONDERFUL UD.......................
Thanks again dear.😛
AND NOW THE TIME FOR THE MISSION IS ALSO FINALLY APPROACHING.....................THAT'S REALLY GR8................
Haan let's see what happens.😃

REALLY LIKE THIS PART A LOT DEAR................

UD SOON............

WITH LOTS OF LOVE,

AND GOOD WISHES,

PRITI.

Thanks a lot dear for ur sweet comment.😃
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: vvdn

Hey Vertika,

😲 Raj n Naina ne shadi kar li.........

Haan kar li yaar they were missing u.😉

🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳

Raj n Naina ne shadi kar li.........

are tujhe aana chahiye tha vo tere ko bahut yaad kar rahe the na.😆

😳They r so Romantic😳
Haan vo to vaise bhi hain dono.😉

😕😕
😕😕😕 Dushman ko pehle se pata tha ! kaun hai ye gaddarr😡
Dekho abhi kya bata sakte hain.😕

😕😕😕

Thanks for such beautiful reply dear.😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hi
I read the update thanx for informing..It was really very hot.I cudn't stop blushing..How can u write such romantic piece..Waiting for the action but dont separate dem
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Posted: 17 years ago
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T

oo good!!!!Awesome!!!!Mindblowing!!!!

Thanks Shai .😛
Nandini ne sahi kaha ke Raj ka darr uske pyaar ke liye hai Lt.Naina Singh Ahluwalia ke liye nahi!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
Haan kyounki us ko apni di gayi traning par bharosa hai na.😛😛

Poor Raj!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭He is so scared!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Naina ko kuch ho gaya toh woh jee nahi payega!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Vo ye nahi samjh raha hai ki jab tak vo hai Naina k paas , Naina ko kuch bhi nahi hoga.😕
Nandini bhi usse accha samjhati hai!!!! She understands him very well!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
haan more than Abhi.🥱

Naina ne bahar khade ho kar sab sun liya!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛She wanted to comfort Raj but not now!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Gandi ladki.😡
Bad timing Aalekh!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Raj aur Nandini ko pata chal gaya ke Naina ne sab sun liya hai!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔
Haan ye pata chal gaya ki Naina chip kar baatein sun rahi thi dono ki.😛

Raj Naina par aise chilaya!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Very bad!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Naina rone lagi!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Kya karta vo bhi vo itna frustrated tha na.😕
Aalekh went and comforted her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊He is so sweet!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
Akhir Alekh us ko itna maanta jo hai.😉😉

Ab Raj khud upset ho gaya Naina ko daat ke!!!!!😊 😊 😊Nandini ne accha samjhaya usse aur kaha Naina ko manane ko!!!!!!

Haan Nandini jaanti thi kyounki vo Naina k bina nahi reh sakta hai.😆
Aalekh ne sahi time pe exit mar li!!!! 👍🏼Smart boy!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊
Bhai ab dono saath hain to thodi privacy to chahiye na.😉

Naina toh bahut gusse mein hai!!!! Raj ko bhi Naina ka dard ka ehsaas hai!!!!😊 😊 😊

Akhir pyaar me dard hi to hota hai na.😭
Naina hugged Raj finally aur maan gayi!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Raj now started teasing her!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
Hmmmmmmmm mood theek karne ka accha tareeka hai na.😛😛😛
Raj sorry bol raha hai kaan pakad ke!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛So cute!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
Kya karein humari Naina itni se maanti hai nahi na.😉
Raj toh phir se tease kar raha hai Naina ko aur uske saath flirt kar raha hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Haaaiiii!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
Kitni khush ho gayi aap to.😆

Naina saamne hoti hai toh flirt apne aap aa jaata hai warna kabhi kisi ladki se flirt nahi ki aur nahi baat ki!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛So sweet!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Thats so like Raj!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Kya karein Raj bhi Naina hai hi aise.😛
Aaj hi Raj aur Naina ki shaadi hai mandir mein!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Thats great!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏
Jaldi me karni thi na shaadi.😕😕😕

But I wanted a big and grand wedding for them!!!!😔 😔 😔

Vo doosri fic me poori ho jaayegi aap ki tammana.😆
Naina is looking really beautiful in her dark pink bridal wear!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Raj toh usse dekhe hi jaa raha hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
Tabhi to Nandini ko beech me bolna pada na.😉

Nandini is again teasing Raj and both Raj and Naina got embarrased!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

😆
Raj ne Naina ka haath pakda table ke neeche aur Naina ke kehne par kehta hai ke isilye toh shaadi ki hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉So naughty!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
😉

Raj ne jo kaha it was so emotional!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Woh kitna kuch sochta hai Naina ke baare mein aur unke future ke baare mein!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😊 😊 😊 😊

Kya kare ek baar Naina ko dard de chuka hai na dubara nahi dena chahta hai.😭
Raj aur Naina's room was decorated nicely!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Yeh sab zaroor Nandini baaki sab ne milke kiya hoga!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Haan aur kaun kar sakta hai.😉😉😉

The wedding night was beautiful!!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏Kitna pyaar karta hai Raj Naina se!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Thanks .😃
Raj and Naina were so romantic!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️It was very hot and passionate!!!!!😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
Thanks again.😛

They are now completely one!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️One soul and two bodies!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

completey one.😳😳
Raj ko toh Naina ke saath nahana bhi hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉Very naughty!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
Kuch pal hain na saath mile pata nahi kal ho na ho.

Kapde dene ke bahane ghus gaya aur shuru ho gaya!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

I love him in this way.😉
He was about to love her again when Aalekh came!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Bad timing again Aalekh!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒
Thoda wait kar k nahi aa sakta tha Alekh.😡

Nandini ki teasing phir se chalu!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Ish baar she is teasing Naina!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛

Dekho vaise bhi poori raat nahi soyi tab bhi itni fresh lag rahi thi to koi kya kahega.😛
Abhi toh shock ho gaya Naina ko aise dekh kar!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Phir Nandini ne usse bataya ke Raj aur Naina ne shaadi kar li hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Vo soch raha hoga kaash mai aur Nandini bhi aise kar lete shaadi.😆

Groups toh ban gaye hai!!!😊 😊 Too bad Raj and Naina are in separate groups!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔They should have been together!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊As well as Abhi and Nandini!!!!!!😊 😊 😊

Koi jaroori nahi hai ki saath ho har baar.😲
Vaibhav is missing his family and Abhay is missing Shona!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔
Vo to hona hi hai, aakhir they love them.

Raj aur Naina ek dusre ke saath hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Is this the last time they will be together??😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Pata nahi tum ko kaise pata ki ye last time hai.😕
Why is Abhi and Nandini together physically but not mentally??😕 😕 😕 😕
Soch rahein hain na ki pata nahi kal kya ho?

Aalekh Neelu ko aur Chaube bhi apni family ko yaad kar raha hai!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Haan sab miss kar rahein hai apne apno ko.😭
This time is really tough for all of them!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔
yeah really tough.😲

O no!!!! Dushman ko toh pehle se hi pata hai ke yeh log aane waale hai!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Koi mila hain na un me se.😡
Iska matlab unmein se hi koi gaddar hai!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Par kaun??😕 😕 😕 😕
Dekho kaun hai gaddar.😕

I hope Raj aur Naina sahi salamat wapas aa jaye!!!!😊 😊 😊

Ummed par duniya kayam hain na.
Thanks Shai for this longest comment.😃
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

AMAZING...SUPERB.....FANTASTIC....

Tooo Good....yaar...

Thanks Deep darling.😛

Raj and Naina have got married....that was an EXCELLENT and the BEST surprise.......

Haan and thanks for ur comment sweety.😊

And their wedding scene was beautifully protrayed.....simple yet divine.....

Thanks dear.😛

I would love to see how naina's freinds (our gang) will react when they find out that raj is not only alive but that raj and naina have also got married.

Haan aayenge vo jaldi hi yahan.😉

There are so many things that have happened in this update.....

Haan aur tum nahi thi so i missed u too dear.😭

Raj and naina's wedding....alekh and nandini supporting them and arranging for the wedding......abhi and the other arrival to join the mission....raj's concern about naina's duty in their mission and the dangers that she would have to face.....everyone remembering and missing their loved ones......all of them setting out for their mission.....the enemy knowing bout their arrival and plans.....WOW.....

Bahut saari cheejen ho gayi na.😕

i am sure that i might have missed a few things.....

Koi baat nahi aaram se padh lena.😃

There is a traitor amongst them.......Please keep all of them safe in this mission.....

Kuch nahi hoga un ko.Don't worry.😊

What i love about your FF is that you are showing them on the mission after raj and naina's union.....while most FF stop with them getting married.....this is what makes your FF special an unique.....so dear please continue.......you are doing a great job.....

Kuch to alag hona hi chahiye na , aakhir Raj aur Naina ki khawahish bhi poori ho jaaye finally.😉

waiting eagerly for the next part........please update soon

thanks for this sweet comment dear.😃
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: srojaleen

HIIIIIIIII VERTIKA, SORRY...SORRY....SORRY........SORRY.......
Itne saare sorry kyoun yaar, it's ok.😊
For late rply. waise main kafi khush hoon..........................kyoun k NAINA aur RAJ ne shadi karli hai.............🥳
waah waah ye to aap ko dekh kar hi lag raha hai.😆
aur waise bhi raj ka naina se naraz hona zayaz tha....kyoun k hum jis se pyar karte hain, naraz bhi to usi par hote hain na......well, romantic scenes k bare main kuch nahin likhongi bcz☺️...................
ohhhhhhhhhhhhh kitna blush kar rahi ho...............😳
by the way yeh gaddar koun hai...........????????????lagta hai aage kahani aur bhi jyada ints. hone bali ha!!!!!!!!!
dekho abhi mujhe bhi nahi maloom hai ki kaun hai vo.

and this ud is so gooooooood....., romantic & suspicious........

cont. soon dear..........

waiting for the next part.

LOVE & WISHES

PRIYA

Thanks a lot Priya darling for this sweet comment.😛
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi

I read the update thanx for informing..It was really very hot.I cudn't stop blushing..How can u write such romantic piece..Waiting for the action but dont separate dem

Mujhe bhi laga ki tu bhool gayi, isiliye maine kiya pm.😛
Thanks for finding it hot , yaar par ek baat kahoon ab mujhe sharam aa rahi hai .😳
Thanks for reply aur haan RN forever hain kisi ki bhi itni himmat nahi ho sakti DJ's k alawa ki un ko koi alag kar de.😆
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Posted: 17 years ago

Hello guys, it's not the last part of my fic, last part will be posted on Monday.

So u can consider it as second last part.

Here Eagle:-

"Mai jaanta hoon ki tum log bahut jaldi hi jaan jaaoge ki kaun hai vo jo Eagle se mila hua hai aur jis ne tum logon k bare me Eagle ko bataya. Par tum log ye nahi jaan paooge kabhi ki mai hi hoon Eagle.Ha ha ha ha…….." Eagle laughed.

Here rest of the group:-

Here Raj was getting so nervous with every passing second. "Do teams jaa chuki hain par abhi tak koi khabar nahi aayi hai."

"Relax Raj everything is fine, kuch nahi hoga Naina ko." Nandini said but she was still worried about Abhi.

"Mai bus Naina k liye hi nahi, baaki sab k liye bhi pareshaan hoon." Raj told her.

"Jannat calling 123, Jannat calling 123." Soon a voice is heared on walky.

Raj quickly picked it. "123 speaking Jannat, batao hawaon ka rukh kaisa hai?"

Us k baad Naina ne Raj ko jo bataya us ne Raj ki tension aur jyada badha di.After putting down he told Nandini everything. She also panicked.

"Ab humme ek ek kadam phoonk phoonk kar rakhna hai samjh rahe hain na aap log?" Abhay said after hearing it all.

"Par vo aadmi ho kaun sakta hai jo is baat ko Eagle tak paucha raha hai?" Nandini asked confused.

"Abhay ye baat kis kis ko pata thi ki tum log yahan kal aa rahe ho aur aaj hum yahan se niklenge in groups me." Rajveer asked.

"Ye baat bus char logon ko pata thi…………." Us k baad jo result nikla vo hairan kar dene waala tha.

"Good morning sir mai Abhay bol raha hoon." Abhay said MG Vidyarthi.

"Haan boliye major." MG Vidyarthi asked.

Kuch der k discussion k baad

"Major are u mad? Kya bak rahe hain aap?" he screamed almost on phone.

"Mai sach keh raha hoon sir."Abhay said.

"Aisa kaise ho sakta hai?" MG Vidyarthi asked.

"Hum ko permission chahiye sir, do or die. Marenge to Eagle ko maar kar." Abhay said with determination in his voice.

"Par major hume Eagle ko zinda pakadna hai, samjhe ki nahi aap." He screamed.

The phone got disconnected now and they all have decided what do they have to do for their country. They got ready in no time and taking all necessary wapons they proccded towards their destination.

"Abhay aap idhar se jaaiye aur dono groups me se kisi bhi group ko dhoondh kar mujhe inform kariye." Raj said.

They left searching the groups silently and consciously.Raj and Nandini were moving faslty killing some guards with their guns having silencer in it. Soon they found Abhi and Alekh both were dressed in guards dresses so that noone suspect them.Raj and Nandini too dressed them in the same way and left for searching rest of the group.

Here Abhay and Chaubey soon found out Naina and Vaibhav explained them the plan.

Here Eagle:-

"Kya bak rahe ho Major, aisa kaise ho sakta hai?" Eagle roared.

"Ye sach hai ki maine un ko koi orders nahi diye hain aise but they can be so dangerous." The man on other line said.

"Ab dekho mai kya haal karta hoon tumhare in sab captains ka, bahut desh prem chada hai na inko." Eagle said.

"Par Eagle tum ne vada kiya tha ki tum mere bete ko chod doge." That man said.

"Oh come on Major, agar hum wade nibhanyege to kabhi bhi aage nahi badh payenge samjhe tum, apne bete ko bhool jao ab." saying this Eagle put down the phone.

"Kameene, mai tujhe nahi chodonga….." par koi fayda nahi hai kyounki phone cut gaya hai.

"Are ye cameras ko kya ho gaya ye kaam kyoun nahi kar rahe hain?" Eagle said with irritation.

"Sir maine ye saare cameras deactivate kar diye hai." Naina said, "Yudi ko thanks karna chahti hoon ye tareeka sikhane k liye."

"Theek hai par yaad rakhna hum ne ye kaam temporary kiya hai , cameras k wapas theek hone tak hum ko is poore adde ko tabah karna hai chahe jaise bhi samjhi aap." Vaibhav said.

They silently walked in a corner and saw a board outside the room, "Control room." Four guards were there for all of them. They all handed over each and every guard without making a noise and killed them with their silencer revolvers.

Here Nandini was fighting with a man, he pointed a gun towards her head and said, "Apni guns neeche fek do varna mai tumhari saathi ko uda doonga."

They all Abhi and Raj droped down their guns slowly on the ground. Alekh saw this from a window. They all were surrounded by some guards. They tied their hands and Nandini's too.

"Welcome Captains in Eagle's area." A voice echoed. "Aap sab ka swagat hai yahan, mujhe pata nahi vishwaas tha ki aap sab yahan jaroor aayenge."

"Tum chahe kuch bhi kar lo Eagle par hum ko hara nahi paaoge, kyounki aaj humare sir par junoon hai tum ko tumhari asli jagah pahuchane ka." Abhi said.

Par is se pehle kuch aage ki baat hoti ek smoke bomb pheka kisi ne aur sab smoke me chala gaya. Jab smoke clear hua to ye jaroor dikha ki vahan koi bhi nahi tha sikaay Eagle k aadmiyon k.

"Shit ye sab to meri soch se bhi jyada intelligent hain." Eagle said.

Idhar Naina was about to move when some one covered her mouth and snatched her in one corner. Vaibhav ko kadmo ki aahat se pata chal gaya ki kuch hua hai, he turned and found Naina missing.

"Oh shit Naina kahan gayi?" Vaibhav said.

He heard a sound from a room , he quickly went in carefully but as soon as he was about to enter inside he saw Naina was signaling him not to enter inside.

"Welcome Major aao andar aao." It was Eagle's voice. Kya baat hai Major andar aane se dar lag raha hai kya? Chalo koi baat nahi itna samjh lo yahan ek taraf tumhari maut hai doosri taraf Lft. Naina Singh Shekhawat ki maut hai. Ab faisla tumhe karna hai ki kya karoge tum?"

Naina was not shure that what will be Major's decision but she was shure that Eagle knows each and every thing about them.

Here Alekh and Raj were now in control room. Raj was trying to deactivate the password of server but it was taking so much time. After half an hour he succeeded and changed all the settings and destroyed the whole network.

Nandini and Abhi were still moving in upward direction and soon they ruined the equipment room completely. Now they move in another room and the scene they saw in front of their eyes chuckled them.

Chauhan and Abhay entered in a room which was dark. They saw a lot of boxes in that room. Chaubey move forward and as soon as he opened the box he saw thousands of bombs and grandes there. Abhay too shocked to see it.

Here Vaibhav was taking the greatest risk to Naina. Finally he saved her. Actually poore room me electricity ki high voltage wire bichi thi jo kabhi bhi aadmi ka kaam tamaam kar sakti thi par Vaibhav did it nicely.

"Well done Major, par tum yahan se bach kar itni asaani se nahi jaa paaoge ye humara vaada hai tum se." saying this the door got closed.

Nandini and Abhi failed the power supply of the whole building.

"Oh ho kya raha hai ye baar baar?" Eagle said and dialed a number, "Kya kar rahe ho tum sab jara dekho power kaise fail ho gayi?"

Idhar Vaibhav aur Naina ne darwaaje me goliyon se daba sa whole kar k nikalne ka raasta banaya aur Naina aur Vaibhav nikal gaye bach k wahan se.

Jaldi hi power supply fir se chaloo ho gayi. Abhi and Nandini were on their way to Eagle. They reached their silently and soon Rajveer and Alekh joined them.

"Naina aur Vaibhav kahan hai?" Rajveer asked them.

"Dono ko hum ne yahan se door rehne ko bola hai taki agar hum fuss bhi jaaye to humari madad karne k liye koi na koi ho bahar." Abhi told.

"Apun ne bhi Major Abhay aur Chaubey ko bahar rehne ko bol diya hai." Alekh told.

They stood in front of the door and the door opened. They all entered in.

"Welcome Captains, kaise hai aap sab?" Eagle turned and his first sight made all of them shocked. Par sab se jyada shock to Rajveer hua tha.

"Kya hua Captain Shekhawat aap to itna chauk gaye ki jaise aap ne koi ajooba dekh liya ho."

Here Chaubey and Abhay were keeping an eye over all four. They found MG Vidyarthi's son from a deserted room and smartly brought him out from their.

Bahar aate hi kuch aadmiyon ne gher liya un ko. "Apne haath upar karo aur guns neeche daalo varna tum teeno ko bhoon dengee." A man said.

Here Naina and Vaibhav:-

Naina, "Par sir hum unhe youn akele nahi chod sakte hain na."

"Par Naina baat ko samjho hum se jo kaha gaya hai vahi karna hoga hum ko." Vaibhav tried to calm her down.

"Nahi sir mai aise nahi chod sakti un sab ko." She said.

"Par Naina humari ek galti se hum sab fuss sakte hain." Vaibav said.

They came out and tried their best to contact rest of all but their was no trace for all of them.

"Kahan gaye sab? Kahin kisi musibat me na fuss gaye hon?" Naina k dimaag me ulte seedhe khayal aa rahe the.

Something hit Naina and Vaibhav at their head and both lied there unconscious, aur us k baad kya hua ye shayad Naina aur Vaibhav ko bhi yaad nahi raha hoga.

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