An Eternal Love Story last part updated 28.09.08 - Page 16

Originally posted by: nihatri

fabulous update yaar. i just love reading it. u made RN scenes dam romantic.

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Originally posted by: *Rajeevian*

awesome👏.cont soon.......

Originally posted by: vvdn

Hello Vertika,

Hello Nami darling😊😊

Thnki uuuu dear for such wonderful n full of Romantic update.

ur welcome dear.😃😃

Raj n Naina r so Romantic. i must say Raj is shooo Noughty😳
kitna tang karta hai Naina ko.

Kya kare pyaa jo itna karta hai ki tung karna bhi lazmi hai.😉😉

accha khasa blackmail bhiu kar leta hai 😉 kapre chupata hai uff, he is impossible.

Pyaar me aadmi ho jaata hai aisa.😛😛

so Nandini also join them cool, they r proceeding with thier mission but am also worried about Naina 😲

Don't worry Raj hai na us k paas.😕😕

hope usse kuch na ho😕 ek toh itne mishkilon ke baad RN ek dusre ke itne karib hai but i guess Khatron ke bina jindagi bekaar hai aur kya pata isse woh aur bhi karib aa jaye.............

Mushkilo se nikal kar aage jaana hi zindagi hai na.😊😊

so u know what am going to say now 😆update asap

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!Mindblowing!!!!

Thanks Shaina ji.😊😊

I loved it when Raj called her Jaanu!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

so sweet of him na.😉😉

Raj is worried ke kahi Naina usse galat toh nahi samaj rahi hai!!!😔 😔 😔 😔And Naina hearing it started teasing him!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉

haan pata nahi Naina kya sochti.😕😕

Raj also started teasing Naina!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊Naina toh sharma gayi!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

haan sharma jaati hai vo galti se kabhi kabhi😆😆

They were so romantic!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️It was very hot and passionate!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

thanks for liking it.😃😃

Raj toh chhodna hi nahi chahta!!!!😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️Puri raat romance ke baad bhi Naina ko unromantic kaha!!!!😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

kya karta vo bechara he wanted more.😉😉

Raj is getting very naughty!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊Haaiiii!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

kya kare control nahi hota na us se.😉😉

Naina ke kapde chupa diye!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Aur tabhi diya jab usne aaj raat phir se usse pyaar karne ka wada kiya!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉Raj is so naughty and cute!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

haan aise hi waade lega ab.😆😆

Raj aur Nandini toh ek dusre ko tease karne mein lage huye hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

haan thoda to karna bhi chahiye na.😛😛

I loved the way Raj introduced Nandini to Naina!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

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Nandini yeh toh sahi kaha ke Naina sirf Raj ki baat hi manti hai aur kisi ki nahi!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

😉 really aur kisi ki sunti hi kahan hai Naina.

Abhay and Abhimanyu met!!!😊 😊 😊 😊They discussed the plan and its ready!!!! Thats good!!!!👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

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Raj ne khana nahi khaya toh Naina is so worried!!!😊 😊 😊 😊She behaves just like his wife!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉

Hone waali biwi hai na to abhi se practise kar rahi hai. 😉😉

Nandini is teasing her now Raj ko naam se bulane ko lekar!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

haan pata hai to leg pulling karegi hi.😛

Raj samaj gaya ke Naina aayi hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Haaiii!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳His words were so sweet and romantic!!!!😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

ab us ko itna jyada pata chalne laga hai ki bhagwaan bacahye us se.😉😉

He was joking about Huda with her but she got offended!!!! Aisa karega oh naraz toh hogi hi naa!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

haan jab kuch nahi hai to kahegi hi na.😆😆😆

Raj was again being naughty!!!!😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️He was so romantic!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

bahut accha lag raha hai Shai tujhe naughty Raj kya baat hai?😉😉

Raj is worried about the duty assigned to Naina!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Raj woh tumari Naina hai and woh kuch bhi kar sakti hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

hmmmm abhi bhi vo us ko itna strong nahi samjhta hai na.😕😕

Originally posted by: varshita

Hey dear how ru? 😛😛

First thanks for sweet p.m. u do regularly to me.😃😃

how r u?😊😊

it was really an awesome update.👏👏

I just liked the way u expressed Raj's naughtiness.😳😳

Naina was also not so shy na.😆😆

Par Raj ka Naina k kapde chupana just terrafic.😆

Phir jab us ne promise kiya tab kapde diye, how cute na.😳

Raj bhi na ek baar shuru ho gaya to cony hi rehta hai kehta hai ki tum ko aise dekh kar control nahi hua, naughty guy.😳

Nandini ki acchi leg pulling ki Raj ne aur Raj ki bhi leg pulling ki Nandini ne.😉

Kitni care karta hai na Raj , Naina ki duty ko le kar pareshaan ho gaya na.😕

update soon.

Hey Guys mai fir se yaad dila doon Nandini Samuya Tandon hai.

Here goes the next part of update:-

"Raj ye tumhara dar tumhare pyaar k liye hai Lft. Naina Singh k liye nahi." Nandini said.

Raj looked at her , "Nandini u know mujhe lagta hai ki Abhi se jyada tum mujhe samjh leti ho. Haan shayad tum sahi keh rahi ho par agar Naina ko kuch ho gaya to mai nahi jee paoonga…………." Raj was now in tears.

"Oh Raj kuch nahi hoga tumhari Naina ko. Dekho mai jaanti hoon aur samjhti hoon par mujhe lagta hai ki us se jyada tuff tumhari responsibility hai na." Nandini said.

"Par Nandini mai kya karoon mera dil nahi maan raha hai." Raj said.

"U r mentor of a g8 protge Lft. Naina hai na? So trust her." Nandini said.

Naina was listening all this conversation from hiding her behind the door. She knew Raj loved her a lot but she knew it too that Raj has taught her always that country comes first. She thought to assure Raj but not now.

"Ok ab vo baat karte hain jis k liye mai aaj aayi hoon yahan." Nandini said n after listening all their convo Naina's eyes widened.

"Kya baat hai Naina tu yahan khade ho kar kya kar raheli hai?" Alekh asked coming from another direction.

Raj and Nandini understood that Naina knew everything now. They called Naina in.

"May I come in sir?" Naina asked.

"Come in Lft. Singh", Raj said n Naina saw his face in amusement whether she heard is right or not.

"Sir vo apun ne Naina ko aap k kamre k bahar khada dekha to socha ki kya kar rahi hai poochta hoon bus vo…….." Alekh couldn't complete.

"Silent Left. Sharma aur Lft. Singh aap" he turned towards Naina and said, " Aur Lft. Singh, aap ko itna bhi nahi pata hai ki kabhi bhi kisi k room k bahar khade ho kar us ki baatein yu sunna galat hai Ab aap ko batana aur sikhana hoga ki kya sahi hai aur kya galat hai." Raj was almost shouting at her now.

Naina didn't say a single word, her eyes filled with tears soon and before Raj could say anything she ran away from there. Nandini saw Raj in shock and Alekh was still confused that what is going on.

"Dismiss Lft." Raj said n Alekh left . He went to Naina who was crying like hell.

"Naina bole to sorry hai apun. Meri hi wajah se Captain sir ne datan na tere ko." Alekh was feeling guilty.

"Nahi Alekh aisa kuch nahi hai teri wajah se kuch nahi hua hai." She said crying.

"Naina please chup ho jaa na." he said ruffling her hair.

Naina hugged her tight and still crying.

Here Raj and Nandini:-

"Shit", he hit the wall with his hand.

Nandini moved towards him and said, "Relax Raj . Everything will be fine. Par ye galat tha agar tum pareshaan ho to is ka matlab ye nahi hai ki tum Naina ko is tarah daatoge."

"Pata nahi Nandini kya ho gaya tha mujhe." He said holding his head.

"Jaoo us ko mana lo."Nadini said to which Raj nodded and left.

When Raj reached there he found Naina still sobbing in Alekh's arms. He entered in the room quietly.

"Naina," he said meekly.

"Alekh in se keh do ki mujhe koi baat nahi karni hai in se." Naina said while turning her face in opposite direction.

Alekh didn't say a single word and left. Raj move closer to her and said softly, "Naina meri baat to suno."

"Kya kehna chahte hai aap Captain Shekhawat? Yahi ki aap ko mujh par bharosa nahi hai ya ye ki aap ko apni di hue training par bhi bharosa nahi hai." Naina has a fire in her eyes when she asked this question to Raj.

Raj saw her pain in her eyes his heart also ached with same pain. He said softly, "Naina I am sorry if I hurt u."

"Kyun sorry bol rahein hai aap? Aap ko kya lagta hai ki aap ki de hue training me kahin koi kami hai jis ki wajah se aaj aap ko mujh par vishwaas nahi ho raha hai?" Naina was shouting now.

"Nahi mujhe bharosa hai apni cadet par aur apni traning par……" Raj said, "Par mai apne pyaar ko khona nahi chahta hoon kisi bhi keemat par na." he said it holding her shoulders and making him to look into his eyes.

It was too much now for Naina she hugged Raj and said, "Mai bhi tum ko khona nahi chahti hoon Raj par mujhe is mission ko har haal me karna hai join." She said with determination in her voice.

"Tum bahut ziddi ho Naina kabhi kisi ki baat nahi maanti ho pata nahi aage kya hoga mera?" Raj said it dramatically which made Naina smile.

"Aap aage se kabhi mat kehna ki aap ko dar lagta hai mujhe mission par bhejne me." Naina said in almost warning tone.

"Ok baba I am soory, aage se nahi hoga aisa." Raj said holding his ears which made Naina giggle.

"Raj u look funny like this u know." She said.

"I know aur kal raat kaisa lag raha tha ye to tum ne bataya nahi." Raj asked with mischievous grin on his face.

Naina was blushing but she said, "Bilkul jungle,".

"To aaj raat bhi is jungle ko jhelna hoga tum ko." Raj said winking.

"Vaise tum flirt karne ka koi mauka nahi chodte ho na Raj." Naina asked still in his arms.

"Pata nahi tum saamne hoti ho to flirt kahan se apne aap aa jaata hai." Raj said.

"Accha varna……….."

"Varnamaine aaj tak kabhi kisi ladki se flirt nahi kiya' na baat ki." Raj told.

"Haan pata hai Nandini mam batarahi thi." She said.

"Aur kya kya bataya aap ko Nandini mam ne?" he asked.

"Not much." She said, "Haan ye jaror bataya ki u was very shy towards girls."

"Haan vo to abhi bhi hoon except one that is u." he said.

"Kya hum andar aa sakte hain?" Nandini and Alekh were standing at the door.

Raj left her immediately and said, "Yeah pls."

"I hope maine jyada disturb nahi kiya tum logon ko." Nandini said.

"Off course not." Naina said blushing slightly.

"Raj saara intezaam ho gaya hai dono cheejon ka."Nandini said.

"Kaisa intezaam Raj?" Naina asked.

"Saare arms aur ammunitions ka aur tum dono ki shaadi ka." Nandini said.

"Kya ? shaadi?" Naina got surprised.

"Haan Naina aaj mandir me shaadi hai tum dono ki. Maine sab prepare kar diya hai bus tum log chalo Chaubey wahan wait kar raha hai. Naina tum mere saath aaogi aur Raj ko Alekh le kar jaayega." Nandini said.

"Par achanak kaise kyoun?" Naina asked.

"Vo tu baad me samjhna pehle chal bus." Alekh said n Raj smiled. Both left the place soon.

"Naina ye hai tumhara wedding ka joda is ko jaldi se pehno hume niklna hai." Nandini said n moved out.

Naina made herself ready soon and as usual she was looking gorgeous in it. It was dark pink bridal joda and with it all the necessary make up and jewellery.

She reached temple on time and found Raj already there. Raj saw her and was got struck by her beauty. She was looking revalishing today. He was unable to take his eyes off from her.

"Raj idhar dekho na varna kaise honge saare rasm aur riwaaj." Nandini teased him.

Naina embarrsed at Nadini's statement n Raj too. They both completed all the rituals soon and marriage got over soon . They were on their way back when Chaubey called them. "Kahan hai sir ji aap log jaldi aaiye na."

"Haan Chaubey bus raaste me hi hain aa rahe hain." Raj said.

They came back at the same place. It was now ten'o clock in night. Chaubey welcomed them and Nandini did Naina and Raj's aarti. Now she placed a kalash of rice in front of her and said Naina to hit it down with her leg, she did so now Chaubey placed a thali of wet roli and said Naina to keep her leg in it and move in. Naina did as she was told.

"Aisa hai ab pehle khana khaya jaaye." Nandini said , "Raj aur Naina tum dono baitho hum khana lagate hain."saying this Nandini left and Raj caught her hand under the table.

"Kya kar rahe ho Raj? Koi dekh lega." Naina said shyly.

"Isiliye to ki hai shaadi ki koi kuch na bol paaye." Raj said winking.

"Haan mujhe yahi poochna tha ki tum ne achanak se shaadi ka faisla kaise kiya?" Naina asked.

Raj took a small breath and continued, "Naina kal raat jo hua tha humare beech bhale hi humare liye vo pyaar tha humara; par mai jaanta hoon ki shaadi se pehle log is ko galat samjhte hain." He took a pause than, "Mujhe aur tumko ek mission par jaana hai bhagwaan na kare agar mujhe kuch ho gaya …………" he couldn't continue, Naina placed her hand on his mouth.

"I warn u don't u dare to say it again." Naina said strictly.

Raj kissed her hand and said, "Mai nahi chahta tha ki agar future me kabhi tum maa ban jao meri wajah se to tumhare baache k paas batane k liye apne baap ka naam na rahe jis se log use ……." His eyes moist, "aur sab se jaroori baat mai tum se bahut jyada pyaar karta hoon to mai mission par finally jaane k pehle apna hur ek pal tumahre saath khoobsurat banana chahta hoon.Aur aise vo ho nahi paata." He completed.

"I love u Raj." Naina finally could say this only.

"Me too Naina," he said n was about to kiss her when all three of them came there.

Naina and Raj's room was decorated nicely. Nandini made her sit on the bed an closed the door. After a few minutes Naina dozed off because she was extremely tired.

After an hour Raj entered in the room, he found Naina sleeping. He smiled at her. He moved closer to him and kissed her. Naina opened her still sleepy eyes; she saw Raj there and responded him with equal passion.

"So gayi thi na? Par aaj ki raat sone ki nahi pyaar karne ki hai. Maine kaha tha na ki aaj raat tum meri saath hogi." Raj said.

Naina smiled and got up. She tried to take off her jewellery but Raj stopped her. "Let me do it this time." He said.

First he removing her dupatta form her head and he kissed her forehead. Than he removed her maangteeka and kissed it. After that he removed her neck less and kissed her neck which made Naina shiver. "Kya baat hai dar lag raha hai kya?"

She smiled and said, "To isiliye aap meri jewellery utarna chahte the."

Raj smiled and continued, he removed her nuth and kissed her nose. He removed her ear rings now and kissed her both ears. He moved at her back and kissed her back with full desire, "Raj please".

"Kya Naina?" he placed his hand on her back and opened her choli.

A moarn escaped from her lips. He rubbed his hands smoothly on her bare back, he took off her choli kissed her back every where it aroused Naina's desires. Soon he turned her towards him. Naina lowered her eyes with shyness, "Maine kaha hai na jahan jahan utaroonga wahan wahan kiss karoonga."

She was enjoying it too so she accepted it smiling. He kissed her nipples with passion. Naina was moarning a littlie. He continued pampering her nipples and kissing it. He moved down and kissed her tummy still holding her breasts with his hands and pampering her nipples. After doing it a while he moved downwards and removed her lehnga.

"Maine kaha tha na ki tum bahut khoobsurat ho aur bina kapdo k bahut acchi lagti ho." Raj said moving downwards and still looking in her eyes." Par ye nahi bataya tha ki tum bahut sexy bhi lagti ho." He said.

"I know. Just continue ur work I am enjoying it." Naina said closing her eyes tightly this time.

"Ab dekho mai kya karta hoon." Raj said.

"Jo bhi karo all is yours." Naina said.

This permission made him really wild n he didn't stop whole night. He continued making her love with more and more passion. When he entered in her body Naina screamed in pain lightly.

"Kya hua Naina? Dard hua kya?" Raj stopped.

Tears came out from her eyes, she said, "Raj mai bahut khush hoon ki tum mujhe itna pyaar karte ho. Mai chahti hoon aise hi karte raho pyaar Ye to meetha sa dard hai pyaar ka." She said pulling him in her.

Raj saw her desires were rising more and more. He kissed her lips and caressed her nipples with his hands and entered in her body completely. Naina and Raj enjoyed that moment and their bodies sticked.

That was the moment for which Naina and Raj waited the most. They were now completely one and they have also taken its permission from the society by doing marriage. Now they are "One soul and two bodies".

Subah k 6 baje. "Bus Raj subah ho gayi hai ab bus." Naina said whispering.

"Nahi abhi nahi once more." He said n did it again as he wanted.

Now it was 8'o clock in the morning. Raj was still playing with her body. "Ab bus utho mujhe nahane jaana hai."

"Bath with me today na." he said.

"No way r u mad?" she said n ran away in wash room and started bathing but soon she realized that she has not taken her clothes. She called Raj, "Raj jara mere kapde de do na." she pleaded.

"Yeah just wait."he said and he took her clothes in his hands and said "Ye lo".

She moved her hand out but he pushes the door and went in. He saw there Naina bathing and her bare neat bathed body made him crazy. He started kissing all water drops on her bare body by pinning her into the wall amd after enjoying the bath with her some time. He took her in his arms n laid her on bed and was about to love her when Alekh knocked at the door, "Naina utho jaldi neeche aao."

"Haan aa rahi hoon." She replied and both of them soon dressed and came downstairs.

"Naina tum to badi fresh lag rahi ho aaj." Nandini teased her.

Suddnely the door bell rang and Chaubey opened it. Abhay and Abhi has came.

"Hello Raj.Kaise ho?" he asked hugging him.

"Mai theek hoon tu kaisa hai?" He hugged her back.

"Hi Naina……..ye kya sindoor aur chudiyaan?" Abhi got a shock.

"Raj aur Naina ne shaadi kar li Abhi kal shaam ko." Nandini said.

Kuch shikve shikayaton k baad Major Vaibhav bhi aa gaye aur ye decide hua ki four groups honge. First me Abhi aur Alekh, second me Naina aur Vaibhav, third me Chaubey aur Abhay aur last me Raj aur Nandini. Ye plan pehle ka hi bana tha.

Agla din kaisa hoga sab k dimaag me yahi chal raha tha. Kya hoga, sab wapas aa paayenge ki nahi, bahut kuch aisa tha jo na kehte hue bhi sach tha.

That day and night was tuff for all ppl who were there.

Vaibhav was missing his family and Abhay was missing Shona. Vo dono abhi apne pyaar se mil kar aaye the par ab mission jab start hone waala hai to sab khamosh hain sab apne dil me ye soch rahein hain pata nahi kal apni family se mil bhi paayenge ki nahi.

Raj aur Naina ek doosre k paas, ek doosre ki bahon me hain ek doosre k saath shayad aaj last time vo time spend kar rahein ho. Nandini aur Abhi bhi ek doosre k saath physically to hain par mentally shayad kahin aur hain.

Alekh bhi aaj baar baar Neelu ko yaad kar rah tha pata nahi kyoun us ko lag raha tha ki shayad vo ab Neelu se kabhi bhi nahi mil paayega.Chabey bhi apni family ko yaad kar raha tha ki pata nahi kal mil paayein ya nahi.

Next day morning:-

"Naina pehle hum nikal rahein hain us k kuch der baad tum niklogi , tab tak hum us jagah ko cover karne ki koshish karenge." Abhi instructed them.

"All the best Captain Chauhan." Vaibhav said hugging him and soon all of them hugged Abhi and Abhay.

He gave a loving look to Nandini and left. Nandini's eyes were moist that time.

They reached there with in half an hour. They parked their jeep in a silent corner, taking out their revolvers they walked carefully to that secluded area.

"Sir vo log aa gaye hain." A man said to his boss by dialing a number on his walky.

Alekh heard it. He went back to him and hit him silently at his head and it dropped him unconscious.

Abhi dragged him behind a shrub and Alekh and Abhi started examining them. "Hum me lagta hai ki in logon ko pehle se pata tha ki hum aane waale hain yahan." Abhi said.

"Voich to sir is ko apun ne apne is phone par baat karte hue suna tha", achank Alekh ne ek plan socha.

Idhar Abhi k jaane k baad Naina aur Vaibhav ko jaana tha ab. Raj was really depressed but he knew that duty is duty and it has to be completed at any cost.

They soon left after hugging one another. They took another path and move in same as Abhi and Alekh did. Naina was behind Vaibhav, "Bach k Left. Singh". Vaibhav screamed. He shoots a guard who has pointed his gun towards Naina.

Naina switched on his talky, "Alpha reporting…alpha reporting mausam kaisa hai Gama?"

Alekh received it but Abhi responded, "Mausam accha nahi hai Gama, mejbaan ko pata hai ki hum yahan aa gaye hain."

"Over and out," Naina disconnected it.

"Kya hua Lft?" Vaibhav asked.

"Sir dushman ko pata hai ki hum yahan pahuch gaye hain. To aage kya karna chahiye?" Naina asked Vaibhav.

"Kya?" Vaibhav shocked, "Is ka matlab hum me se koi mila hai un se. Par kaun ho sakta hai vo?" Vaibhav didn't understand what to do.

awesommeeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part

it was romantic n very good.....

Hello!!Vertika!!

Originally posted by: riyaa_1985

Hello!!Vertika!!

hmmm a very nice update....

waise shaaadi bhi ho gayi...too good!!!

It was definitely a very romantic and passionate update...

Great.

Take care

continue soon.

Love

Riya.