An Eternal Love Story last part updated 28.09.08 - Page 13

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

update was gud..really ..sorry for replying so late...But i was bit stuck..Raj n Naina r finally 1 ..

do update soon..

pls do update your other 2 fiction Zindagi n Unknown desire..I'm waiting for the updates of these two fictions..Just loved the concepts

Originally posted by: nihatri

pls update soon yaar i am waiting anxiously😃

Originally posted by: sweta2005

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Originally posted by: Shree85

Hi Vartika,

I read ur fic and slowly and steadily I m becoming ur fan as well. i liked ur fics especially this one and Zindagi bas u hi. Please update both the fics as soon as possible. I m dying to read both the fic's next updates.

With Lots Of Love

Shree

Originally posted by: varshita

Ab karo bhi update kab hoga update?

Here goes the eight part of story

Guys Saumya Tandon ko liya hai maine Nandini k role k liye na ki jenny ko.

Next Day morning:-

When Naina woke up she found Raj no where. She became surprised for a moment n searched him here n there. Soon she found him standing at the window. She covered herself with sheet n went to him.

"Good morning Raj." She hugged him from back.

Raj tunred n saw her standing there. "Good morning jaanu." He said sweetly but Naina found that something is disturbing him.

"Kya hua aap ko Raj?" Naina asked concerned.

"Mai soch raha tha kal raat me jo hua kahin tum mujhe galat to nahi samjh rahi ho na?" Raj was still confused about Naina?s thoughts.

Naina's face expressions became serious now n she said making a face, "Haan galat to mai samjh rahi hoon aap ko."

Raj was shocked. "Dekho Naina maine aisa jaan moojh kar nahi kiya pata nahi kaise ho gaya." He was feeling guilty now.

"Kaise ho gaya Captain Rajveer? Aap ek soldier hain aur aap apne par kaboo nahi rakh sake. How could u?" Naina's tone was getting hyper now.

"Naina meri baat samajho mai.......".pata nahi kya ho gaya tha mujhe tum ko aise dekh kar." Raj has a loss of words now.

"Kaise dekh kar?" Naina asked naughtily.

Now Raj understood that she is playing with him so he decided to do the same with her, "Haan batata hoon kaise dekh kar." He tried to catch her but Naina understood his plan n ran from there.

Soon they both fell on the bed n Raj was on top of her. He said, "Bataoo kaise dekh kar kya hua?"

"Nahi hatiye mujhe jaane dijiye." Naina said quite knowing his intentions.

"Wait I show u." Raj said n rubbed his nose against her bare shoulder with sent shiver in her body n she stopped protesting him. He kissed her chest than shoulders. Soon he removed the sheet she wrapped on her n said, "Aise dekh kar."

Naina blushed really hardest this time.

"U know Naina tum bahut khoobsurat ho ye to mujhe pata tha par itni khoobsurat ho ye kal raat hi pata chala; isiliye mai apne aap ko rok nahi paaya aur........" he stopped to see Naina was getting totally red. "Oh to Lft. Singh ko sharam bhi aati hai kya?" Raj teased her.

He slowly started making love her again. Naina also enjoyed it again and didn't protest. There love making stopped after an hour when the clock struck 8 a.m. Naina said, "Ab chodiye Raj bus."

Raj said, "Abhi nahi thodi der aur Naina."

"Nahi Raj aap apne room me jaaiye agar kisi ko pata chal gaya to accha nahi lagega."Naina said kissing his chin.

"Tum bhi na kitni unromantic ho Naina."Raj said making a fake n anger n still kissing her tummy.

"Poori raat kiya hai na romance phir bhi mai unromantic hoon. Nahi Raj ab pls jaaiye na varna agar koi jag gaya to problem ho jaayegi." Naina ne phir koshish ki Raj ko manane ki.

"To kya hua all of them know that I love u." he said now kissing her shoulders.

"Raj..." Naina gave him a loving look n said, "Mujhe pata hai ki sab ko pata hai. Par koi hum ko aise condition me dekh le to?" she quaried.

"To kya hua?" Raj asked naughtily.

"Kuch nahi hua, bus." Naina said ab vo jaanti thi ki Raj se zid karne se koi fayda nahi hai vo maanega nahi.

He started again kissing her everywhere with same passion as he had in night.

"Raj, Nandini mam aane waali hai na aaj." Naina reminded him.

"Oh shit mai bhool gaya." He quickly got up n started making him self dressed.

Naina too got up n started searching her clothes but didn't find. "Kahan gaye mere kapde?" Naina asked herself in confused way.

"Tum aise hi acchi lag rahi ho kapdo ki kya jaroorat hai.? "Raj said naughtily.

"It's not that funny Raj." Naina said.

"Accha mai is shart par jaoonga; jab aaj raat phir tum mujhe aise hi pyaar karne dogi jaise kal raat karne diya tha." Raj has a mischievous glow in his eyes.

Naina blushed but said, "No nothing aaj kuch nahi; Nandini mam yahan hongi kuch nahi hoga aaj; kuch bhi nahi hone waala samjhe aap."

"Mai samjh gaya par tum dekhna mai kya karta hoon aaj raat. Apne kapde chahiye to karo promise." Raj said hugging her.

"U naughty kapde tum ne chupaye mere?" Naina asked with fake anger.

"Haan kyounki mujhe pata tha ki tum aise to manogi nahi." Raj hugging her tightly.

"Ok baba kapde de do mai maan gayi aur ab jao." Naina pleaded.

He handed over her clothes to her n kissed her deeply she responded too.

"Ok ab jaata hoon mai." He consciously went in his room.

At 12'0 clock in same day Nandini arrived there.

"Hi Nandini ", Raj wished her hugging.

"Hi Raj kaise ho ab?" she too hugged her back . Naina who was coming from another direction."Acche hi hoge, Naina jo hai yahan." She taunted.

"Aur batao Abhi kaisa hai?" he asked it intentionally.

"Raj tum bhi na?.Accha hai aur Naina aap kaise hain?" she asked.

"Abhi k saath rehte hue abhi do hi din hue hain na tum ko aur abhi se ye hum kehne waali aadat aa gayi tum me." Raj commented.

"Tum aaj mere peeche kyoun pade ho? Naina hai na wahan us ko dekho." She teased.

It made both of them blush. Finally after some time Raj said, "Naina in se milo ye hain Captain Nandini Singh, Captain Abhimanyu ki hone waali biwi."

"Kya? Abhimanyu sir shaddi kar rahein hai hume bina bataye." Naina shocked.

"Oh Naina ye Raj bhi na is ko aaj pata nahi kya ho gaya hai meri leg pulling karne par tula hua hai. Hello," Nandini gave a sharp look to Raj and it made him smile.

"Mai sach keh raha hoon Naina tum mano ya na mano." Raj again said.

"Raj tum jaante ho na ki vo bus tumhari baat hi maanti hai aur kisi ki nahi . By the way tum dono kab kar rahe ho shaddi?"Nandini pulled his leg now.

"Bus bhi kariye na aap log." Naina said blushing hard.

After some time they were seen discussing some action for day after tomorrow. Nandini told that Abhay and Vaibhav will join them in trapping Eagle. He is coming here on 25 th whereas today is 22^nd.

Here in Delhi:-

"Captain Chauhan, in se milye Major Abhay Verma." MG Vidyarthi introduced them.

"Hello Major, aap k bade charche sune hain hum ne." Abhi said.

"Hello Captain, I hope acchi hi cheejon me sune honge buri me nahi," Abhay said smiling.

"Off course Major," Abhi said with a big grin on his face.

"So may v start the meeting?" MG Vidyarthi said.

"Officers hum ne kal Eagle ka ek conversation record kiya hai us k according parson vo Ambala pahch raha hai aur hum chahte hain ki kal aap dono Ambala k liye nikal jaayein." MG Vidyarthi said.

"Theek hai sir hum kal hi nikal jaayenge." Abhay said.

"Aur ek baat officers mai chahta hoon ki is misson me hum .... (aage ki conversation secret hai vo baad me pata chalegi). I think u both understood what I said." MG Vidyarthi said finishing it.

"Yes sir," they said in chorus.

"Aur haan Captain Abhimanyu aaj se aap apne cell phone se kahin bhi call nahi karenge. It can be dangerous for our mission." MG Vidyarthi instructed.

"Fine sir," he said.

"Ok leave and all the best officers." He said and meeting is dismissed.

Here in Ambala:-

"Raj.......Rajveer sir kahan hai? Kahan khane nahi aaye vo." Naina asked.

"It's ok Naina hum jaante hain tum dono k relation k bare me u can call him Raj, no problem at all." Nandini winked.

Naina blushed, "Nahi aise koi baat nahi hai. Par sir hain kahan?"

Alekh entered and said, "vo apne room me hain kuch study kar rahein hain Eagle se related. Vo aap logon ko sir ne batane ko bola tha ki koi bhi ab cell phone use nahi karega Chaubey k alawa."

"Par Chaubey kyoun hum kyoun nahi?" Naina asked.

"High command se aaya hai order Naina." Nandini said, "Mujhe bhi kuch der pehle Abhi ne msg kiya tha."

"Oh," Naina said.

"Chalo khana ready hai Naina Raj ko bula lao." Nadini sent her.

Naina entered in Raj's room silently. He was busy on his lap top reading an important email. She just stood behind him and was about to say something when Raj said, "Bolo Naina kya baat hai??"

"Naina tum mere dil aur dhadkano me basti ho bus isine ye ehsaas karaya ki koi mera apna andar aaya hai aur tumhari khusboo ne ehsaas kara diya ki ye tum ho." Raj said looking at her.

Till now Naina was seated in front of him. "Kya kar rahe the vaise aap?"She asked.

"Huda ka ek important mail aaya hai bus vahi check kar raha tha aur us ko reply kar raha tha." He said and again got busy in his work.

"Kya Huda ko pata hai aap k bare me?" Naina again got confused and asked.

"Nahi us ko bus ye id di gayi hai mail sent kar ne k liye kaha gaya hai is par us ko, par user kaun hai ye us ko abhi nahi pata hai.?"He told but suddenly thought something and said, "Vaise ek baat hai maine dekha hai Huda ka naam aate hi tum kaafi excited ho jaati ho." He teased her.

"Nahi aisa kuch nahi hai." Naina said , "Aap ko abhi bhi mujh par trust nahi hai kya?" she asked looking him blankly.

"Oh come on Naina, I was just joking." He smiled.

"Rehne dijiye aisa joke. I don't like it," she got up to leave, "Khana lag gaya hai aa jaiyega." She was about to exit when Raj caught her wrist,

"Naina mera paet aise nahi bharega", he pulled her closer.

"Chodiye mujhe, mujhe jaane dijiye abhi agar koi aa gaya to?" she said innocently.

"Nahi tum ne kaha na khana lag gaya hai to ruko." He pulled her closer and just touched her lips with his. Soon the kiss deepened. He was moving his hands on her back.

"Naina kya kar rahi ho jaldi aao." Nandini called them.

They parted breathing heavily, "Chaliye", Naina said n was about to leave when Raj said, "Abhi khane k baad ki sweet dish baaki hai along with so many things." Raj said it naughtily.

Naina turned red but she ran away from there and stood behind a wall she said, "I love u Raj. I really can't live without u." n smiled.

Soon after lunch Raj got MG Vidyarthi' s mail in which the duties of all officers were divided now that what they have to do really on 25^th. Raj was tensed about that list. He called Nandini to his room, "Kya hua Raj tum kuch pareshaan lag rahe ho?" Nandini asked him.

"Haan Nandini ye dekho." He showed her the list.

After seeing it Nandini took a deep breath, "To is me hum kar kya sakte hain Raj. Hum Army officers hain humara kaam hai apne desh ko bachana hum is dar se to nahi baith sakte ki hum ko kitni dangerous duty di gayi hai."

"Haan Nandini jaanta hoon par Naina.........vo abhi itni bhi jyada mechure nahi hai na. Mujhe dar lag raha hai us k liye." Raj was too tensed for Naina.

awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggggg for next asap.

Update aws really very romantic n hot....

mind blowing yaar