FF:Ek Anokha Rishta part 24 pg.48 Note on Pg.49 - Page 20

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: subha2601


I will update it tomorrow,hv patience.😊

okie..
lekin tomoro ho gaya na 😕😒
any ways u must b busy..
take ur own time dear...🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
Yes dear I am busy this week,tomrrow pakka I will update. 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
I am waiting for ur next update subha 😛
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: subha2601

Yes dear I am busy this week,tomrrow pakka I will update. 😊

ok subha i'll wait for u update 😳😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
This update is dedicated to Rashmi(Rash2cool). 😊

Part 16

Next day,Dharam,Ananya,Agni and Kamal reach the place frm where the yatra starts.
Dharam:"Saamne devi maa ka mandir hai,kehte hain ki yatra mein jaane se pehle yaha devi maa ke darshan ek baar kar leni chahiye isse yatra sukhad hoti hai.Hum sab bhi mandir chalte hain."
Kamal:"Mujhe mandir nahi jana,main bhagwaan mein vishwaas nahi rakhta."
Dharam(angrily):"Agar tum bhagwaan mein vishwaas nahi rakhte to phir yatra mein aane ke liye raji kyun hue?"
Kamal:"Tum logo ke saath masti karne ke liye."
Dharam:"Hum log yatra men masti karne ke liye nahi ja rahe hain,agar tumhare man mein bhagwaan ke prati vishwaas nahi hai to tum wapas laut jao."
Agni:"Chodo na dharam,hum log mandir chalte hain,isse yehi rehne do,kamal,tum hamare samaan ki rakhwali karna,aur haan,khane par nazar bhi mat daalna."
Kamal stayed outside and the rest of them went inside the temple.
D:"Mandir ki sidiyan bahut purani aur oonchi hain,aap log sambhalkar chadna."
All of them pray inside the temple.
Agni:"Dharam,tumhe woh aadmi dikh raha hai jo waha kone mein baitha hai,suna hai ki woh bahut bada jyotish hai,logo ke chehre dekhkar bhavishya batata hai,chalo na hum uske paas chalte hain."
Ananya:"Ananya yeh sab baaton mein vishwaas nah akhti,mujhe to yeh dhongi lagta hai."
D:"Humein bhi."
Fortune teller:"Bachho,hum tum logo ki baaten sun rahe hain,aap logo ko humpar bharosa nahi hai par bahut jald bharosakarne lagoge kyunki hamari bhavishyavani kabhi galat nahi hoti,aao bachho,hum tumhara bhavishya batate hain."
Ag:"Dharam,chalo na."
Dharam:"Yeh aadmi bekaar ki baatein kar raha hai,bhala koi chehra dekhkar bahvishya bata sakta hai kya?"
Fortune teller:"Aap log aazmakar to dekh lo."
Agni:"dharam chalo na bas ek baar."
3 of them stand in front of the fortune teller.
Ananya:"Ab bataiye,kya likha hai hamare bahvishya mein?"
The fortune teller looks at their faces and with a smile in his face,says,"Bachho,tum logo ke iss mandir se nikalne se pehle hi tum logo ki mulaqat apne apne jeevansathi se hogi."
All 3 are shocked.
Dharam:"Shukriya par hum aapki baaton par vishwaas nahi karte."
Fortune teller:"Abhi nahi karte par bahut jald karne lagoge bete."
3 of them come outside.
Ananya:"Main to puja karna bhool gayi,tum dono yehi ruko ananya puja karke aati hai."
Agni:"Mujhe bhi bahut pyaas lagi hai,main pani pikar aata hoon."
Dharam:"Tum dono jao,hum yehi tumhara intezaar karte hain."
After agni and ananya left,veer entered the temple.
Dharam:"Veer,tum yaha?Yatra mein aaye ho?"
Veer:"Ji maharaj."
Dharam:"Humne tumse kitni baar kaha hai,humein maharaj mat bulao,hum tumhare dost hain."
Veer:"Maaf karna bhool gaya."
Veer went inside the temple whereas dharam was sitting on the stairs waiting for ananya and agni.
Inside the temple,ananya was praying.Veer stands besides her,he couldn't notice ananya was standign there.Both were praying.Then both of them neeled down and bowed down in fromt of the Goddess at the same time.Suddenly,a garland which was hanging frm the Goddess hand fell on both of tthem.When they looked up,they found the garland in both their necks.Both looked at each other shockingly.
Panditji:"Aap dono ko iss tarah dekhkar lagta hai aap dono ko devimaa ne aashirwaad de diya hai,ab aap dono ko koi alag nahi kar sakta,yeh mala aap log sambhalkar rakhna."
Veer and ananya looked at each other.Ananya then got up.Now tthe garland is on veer's neck.
Ananya:"Panditji,aap humein galat samajh rahe hain,hamare beech mein koi rishta nahi hai."
Veer:"Jane dijiye na rajkumariji."
Ananya(smiling):"Veer,tum bhi yatra mein aa rahe ho?"
Veer:"Haan."
Ananya:"Achha."
Ananya started praying again and veer kept on looking at her lovingly.
Panditji:"Beta,tumhari pooja ki thali kaha hai?"
Veer:"Panditji,meri behen usse lekar aa rahi hai."
Sia is climbing down the stairs with pooja ki thali on her hand.Dharam looks at her and for a second,his heart skips a bit.When sia looks at him,her heart too skipped a bit but then she remembered jv's words and the promise to herself that she will forget dharam.
Suddenly,the pooja ki thali fell frm her hands.She started picking up the things.Dharam came there and he too started helping her in picking the things.
Sia:"Aap takleef mat kijiye maharaj,main khud utha loongi."
Dharam:"Isme takleef ki kya baat hai,humein doosro ki madat karna achha lagta hai."
While picking up things,dharam noticed that one hair has got inside sia's eye due to the breeze due to which sia was feeling uneasy.Dharam then gently without touching her face,took out the hair frm sia's eye.
Now sia looked at dharam.She saw her face in dharam's eyes,for the first time she felt dharam's eyes were telling something to her,she saw Love in dharam's eyes.
But sia ignored dharam and picked up all the things and kept them in a bag.She then bought everything again.
Dharam:"Tumne saara samaan phir se kyun kharida?"
Sia:"Kyunki neeche zameen pe girkar saari cheezen maili ho gayi aur bhagwaan ko maili cheezen chadana paap hota hai."
Sia went inside the temple and dharam kept on looking at her.
Agni is still searching for water.Suddenly someone threw a bucket full of water on him.
Agni:"Hey bhagwaan,maine pani peene ke liye maanga tha,nahane ke liye nahi."
When agni looked at the person who threw the water,he saw a beautiful gal standing in front of him with a bucket in her hands.
Agni looked at her funnily.He felt he has never seen such a beautiful gal in his life.
The gal came near him,she was apologising to him but agni was lost in his thoughts.The gal touched him and then...
"Aaaaaaaaaaa"
Gal:"Kya hua?"
Agni:"Jab aapne chua mujhe aisa laga jaise......"
Gal:"Jaise?"
Agni:"Jaise kuch nahi,aaj ta pehle kabhi kisi ladki ne muje chua nahi hai."
He then started blushing.The gal started laughing.
Agni:"Jab aap hasti hain to aisa lagta hai jaise ped se aam gir rahe ho,aapki aankhein bilkul kale angoor ki tarah hain,aapke daant kheer ki tarah safed aur aapke gaal jaise...."
The gal started laughing again.
Gal:"Aaj tak kisi ne meri bhi itni tareef nahi ki."
The gal blushed and ran away.
Agni too blushed and ran away like her.

Precap:DV sensing trouble
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Posted: 16 years ago
what a wonderfull update subha.....👏
kitna romantic tha.......❤️
veer and ananya under that one garland was just soooooo sweet.....aur unka aapas mein interaction bhi perfect tha.......
and dharam sia ki toh kya baat hai.......i love the way sia is trying to ignore dharam......and on the other hand hand, dharam isn't at all sharmaing in showing off his love........kitne pyar se sia ke hair ko... uski ankhon se hataaya.......
and i really like ue agni......bada sweet hai.....so sharmila...and shy-shy😆.......bahot cute hai......especially in this part....us ladki ka naam jaanne ke liye main betaab hoon......
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Posted: 16 years ago
subha wonderful,louvd tis part especially dharm n sia interaction,dharm is surely romantic,pls update soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanks for the lovely update...Oh my god the garland feel on both VA & Ananya not saying anything to veer😆Pls. post the next part soon.....
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: kiran_baidya

what a wonderfull update subha.....👏

kitna romantic tha.......❤️
veer and ananya under that one garland was just soooooo sweet.....aur unka aapas mein interaction bhi perfect tha.......
and dharam sia ki toh kya baat hai.......i love the way sia is trying to ignore dharam......and on the other hand hand, dharam isn't at all sharmaing in showing off his love........kitne pyar se sia ke hair ko... uski ankhon se hataaya.......
and i really like ue agni......bada sweet hai.....so sharmila...and shy-shy😆.......bahot cute hai......especially in this part....us ladki ka naam jaanne ke liye main betaab hoon......

thanx kiran 4 ur comments.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sugarpie_26

subha wonderful,louvd tis part especially dharm n sia interaction,dharm is surely romantic,pls update soon!

thanx meher for liking it.

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