FF:Ek Anokha Rishta part 24 pg.48 Note on Pg.49

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Subha

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#201

Originally posted by: meghaparti
Thanks for the lovely update...Oh my god the garland feel on both VA & Ananya not saying anything to veer😆Pls. post the next part soon.....

thanx 4 liking it dear.

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#202

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it was mind blowing

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Posted: 16 years ago

#203

aw subha muah for dedicating this lovely part for me.....🤗🤗

loved it...

lolz Veer and Ananya..made for each other..

Dharam sia..

n agni he was so cute n shy..

loved it a lot...........😛

plz update soon..🤗🤗

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Subha

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Originally posted by: Rash2cool
aw subha muah for dedicating this lovely part for me.....🤗🤗

loved it...

lolz Veer and Ananya..made for each other..

Dharam sia..

n agni he was so cute n shy..

loved it a lot...........[IMG=smileys/smiley17.gif" height="17" width="17]Tongue[/IMG]

plz update soon..🤗🤗

Thanx a lot dear 4 ur valuable comments.
Will update it soon. 😊

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Posted: 16 years ago

#205

brillant part once again Subha Di xx

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Subha

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Originally posted by: CutieA
brillant part once again Subha Di xx

thanx dear. 😊

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sweetest girl

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Posted: 16 years ago

#207

hiiii

brillant parttt

it wass justtt greatt i luveddd ittttt

and i reallly enjoyed it

plz update soon

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silverlinesky

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#208

i enjoyed every word of it...rockingggggg update...plz update soon

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Subha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#209

As I am busy so hardly hv time to update my fic so I will try to end this asap.So jis tarah dv ki story fast ja rahi thi,my fic will also start moving fast. 😆

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Subha

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Part 17

Yatra begins.In d afternoon,all d yatris rest at a place.
Ananya:"Mujhe pyaas lagi hai."
Dharam:"Saara pani khatam ho gaya hai,hum kahi se lekar aate hain."
Ananya:"Nahi ananya lekar aayagi."
Ananya searches for water.She finds veer taking water frm a well.Veer notices her.
Veer:"Aapko pani chahiye?"
Ananya:"Haan."
Veer:"To yeh lijiye."
Ananya takes d water.
Kamal who was following ananya sees all these things.When ananya was returning kamal stops her.
Kamal:"Rajkumari ananya ek shramik ke haath se kab se pani pine lage.Woh to shramiko se nafrat karti hai,khaas kar veer se,kahi veer tumhe pasand to nahi aa gaya."
Ananya:"Bakwaas band karo kamal,ananya hamesha veer se nafrat karti rahegi."
Kamal:"Phir yeh sab?"
Ananya:"Ananya yeh sab veer ko sabak sikhane ke liye kar rahi hai.Maine vaada kiya tha main veer ko barbaad kar dungi,main sabse pehle usse apne pyaar ke jaal mein phasaungi aur jab woh poori tarah mere jaal mein phas jayega,uska woh haal karungi ki woh poori tarah toot jayega,bikhar jayega aur uss din meri jeet hogi.Tum bas dekhte jao kamal ananya veer ki kya haalat karti hai."
Ananya leaves by saying this.
Kamal:"Tum bhi dekhti jao ananya kamal tumhara kya haal karta hai,uss din ka thappad main bhoola nahi hoon."
Sia was waiting for veer sitting under a tree.Dharam also comes there and sits besides her.Suddenly dharam's hand touches sia's hand.Both look at each other for a while then sia gets up and leaves.Dharam feels a little hurt.
Dharam:"Yeh achanak sia ko kya ho gaya?Pehle to humein dekhkar muskurati thi aur ab muh pherkar chali gayi."
Meanwhile agni is having his lunch.He finds a gal watching him.She is d same gal whom he met in d temple.
Agni:"Tum yaha?"
Gal:"Main sumaina ki rajkumari antara hoon,yatra mein aayi hoon."
Agni:"Main bhi yatra mein aaya hoon.Aao baitho.Kuch logi?"
Antara:"Haan"
Slowly antara ate all d food.Agni kept on looking at her while she was eating everything.
After finishing everything,she looked at agni,blushed and ran away.
Agni:"Arre isne to saara khana kah liya,kuch bhi bachakar nahi rakha.Ab main kya karu,sabko yehi lagega ki maine saara khana kha liya,waise woh ladki bahut pyari thi."
Ananya was roaming and stood on top of a cliff.Suddenly she slipped,she was abt to fall down when she hold a bush.She saw there was only water beneath her.
Ananya tried to come up but failed.
Ananya:"bachao"
Sia was passin frm there when she found ananya hanging frm d cliff.She told her to hold her hand and tried to pull her upwards.
But ananya was going down as d cliff was wet and suddenly both ananya and sia fell frm d cliff into d river.
One small boy saw all these and reported this to the yatris.Dharam and veer reached d place and decided to save sia and ananya.

Edited by subha2601 - 16 years ago

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