Afsana pyaar ka part 27 pg98 updated

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Twinkle

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Posted: 17 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: CutieA
👏👏👏Awsome part 6...but wers part 7😕😕...im lil confused😕😕 as i cnt find it 😭😭😭...DVS propa scared Antra...lol dis dharam nah...spoild everifin loool....🤗...cant wait for nxt part...xxxxxxx

sry i wrote it by mistake 7 instead of 6 i have corrected it

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Twinkle

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Posted: 17 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: starpisces123
dharam in sadi...omg!!!...aur sia bhi kitni notty hai!!!
good update yaar...keep going....

thanxxxxxxx n here is my quota🤗

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Twinkle

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Posted: 17 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: meghaparti
very nice update pls. continue

thanxxxxxxx meghaparti will update asap!!!!😛

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Twinkle

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Posted: 17 years ago

#54

here goes my next update

Part-8

vo dono chale jaate hai aur subah jab sabka lunch karne ka tym hota hai antara kitchen mein jaati hai aur veer ke khane mein bahut saara namak aur mirchi daal deti hai par veer us se maafi mangne ke liye uske peeche aata hai aur ye sab dekh leta hai aur vo apni thali badal deta hai
sabhi kahana khane bethate hai

antara:veer lo khana khao
sia:kya baat hai aaj to....
antara:kyon tum dharam ko khana khila sakti ho to hum veer ko nahi khila sakte
dharam:hume kab khilaya
sia:to ab khila dete hai lo dharam khana khao
antara ne jis khane mein namak aur mirch milayi thi vo dharam ke pass chali jati hai aur antara ka plan fail ho jata hai aur doosri taraf dharam ka mirchi ki vajah se boora haal ho jata hai veer apna khana khata hai

veer:dharam mein soch raha tha ki itne dino se horse riding nahi ki kyon na aaj chale
dharam:haan veer theek hai tum chalo mein aata hoon
veer:mujhe bhi abhi kuch kaam hai thodi der baad chalte hai

antara phir se ek plan banati hai vo jakar veer ke ghode ko kuch khila deti hai jisse vo veer ko apne upar se gira de

veer aur dharam dono nikalte hai aur ek khai ke paas aakar veer ka ghoda bekabu ho jata hai aur veer ko girane ki koshish karta hai par veer puri koshish karta hai apne aap ko bachane ki par ghoda use gira deta hai aur vo khai mein gir jaata hai

dharam:veeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr..........

veer ko bahut chote lagti hai aur vo behosh ho jata hai dharam veer ko lekar mahal pahuchta hai aur usi waqt sia aur antara apne kamre se bahar niklte hai aur unhe dekh lete hai
sia:dharam ye veer ko kya ho gaya
dharam:pata nahi aaj veer ke ghode ko kya ho gaya usne veer ko ghai mein gira diya aur dekho na veer ko abhi tak hosh bhi nahi aaya
sia:dhram tum chinta mat karo veer ko kuch nahi hoga
dharam veer ko lekar uske kamre mein jata hai aur vaid ji ko bulata hai

dharam:vaid ji veeer ko hosh kyon nahi aa raha
vaid ji:beta iske sir par bahut ghari chote aayi hai
dharam:veer theek to ho jaega
vaid ji:beta abhi kuch bhi nahi kaha jaa sakta ab to bhagwan hi kuch kar sakte hai
antara vahaan se bhaag kar mandir jaati hai
antara:bhagwan veer ko theek kar dijiye humari galti ki saza hume de dijiye par veer ko theek kar dijiye .humne to sirf mazak mein aisa kiya tha humara veer ko nuksan pahuchane ka koi maksad nahi tha
aur jor jor se ghanti bajane lagti hai jis se uske haatho se khoon aane lagta hai tabhi sia vahaan ati hai
sia:antara tum yaahaan kya kar rahi ho
antara:veer kaisa hai
sia:abhi bhi use hosh nahi aaya
antara:bhagwan hum kasam khate hai ki jab tak veer ko hosh nahi aata hum na to kuch khaenge aur na hi kuch pienge

dono mahal ki aur jaati hai

antara veer ke room mein jaati hai
antara:dharam tum jaakar aaram kar lo hum veer ke paas rukte hai
dharam:theek hai

dharam chala jaata hai
antara veer ke paas bethti hai aur vahin so jaati hai
subah jab antara uthti hai aur vahaan se jaane ke liye khadi hoti hai to dekhti hai ki veer ne uska haath pakad liya hai
antara ke dil mein kuch kuch hota hai aur vo vahin veer ke pas beth jati hai

(yahaan se shuruat hoti hai ek aur luv story ki)

plzzzzzzzz do comment

ciao till my next update

Edited by itemshera - 17 years ago

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esha

@bunny007

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Posted: 17 years ago

#55

hai antra ko kuch ho gya ha yaar that was brill..

esha

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kiran

@crazy_kiran

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Posted: 17 years ago

#56

thanks for the lovely update, this sia is so notty and likeable

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Twinkle

@Twinkle23

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Posted: 17 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: crazy_kiran
thanks for the lovely update, this sia is so notty and likeable

thanxxxxxxxxxx dear

here is my quota 🤗

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Ams

@CutieA

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Posted: 17 years ago

#58

aww bless...lovely part 7 huni...antra was playin around n veer got hurt veri badly...n she stayd da whole nite wid him...tkin care of him...so shweet! cnt wait for der lovestory! mwah 🤗

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Twinkle

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Posted: 17 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: CutieA
aww bless...lovely part 7 huni thanxxxxxx...antra was playin around n veer got hurt veri badly thanxxxxxx a lot again ...n she stayd da whole nite wid him...tkin care of him...so shweet! cnt wait for der lovestory! mwah i will try to give their lovestory asap 🤗

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