Afsana pyaar ka part 27 pg98 updated

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Twinkle

@Twinkle23

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Posted: 17 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: aandhanika
waw really good part..... finally the love story between antra and veer will start..

Update soon

thanx a ton will update soon

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seema

@heaven princess

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Posted: 17 years ago

#72

No wrds to descirbe it was just mind blowin and fanstacis...Veer and his co...decided to scare antara😆...nnnn n dahram dressed as ghost,......if im not rong lol...cnt imagine him liek dah..

continue riting...👍🏼

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Twinkle

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Posted: 17 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: heaven princess
No wrds to descirbe it was just mind blowin and fanstacis thanx dear...Veer and his co...decided to scare antara😆...nnnn n dahram dressed as ghost,......if im not rong lol...cnt imagine him liek dah..thanxxxxx dear for ur beautiful comment

continue riting...👍🏼thanxxxxx i will update asap

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Twinkle

@Twinkle23

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Posted: 17 years ago

#74

guys sry to keep u all waiting for a long time

here is my next update

Part-9

dharam veer ke kamre mein jata hai
dharam:antara aap jakar dhoda aaram kar lijiye hum veer ke paas bethte hai
itne mein ek sipahi aata hai
sipahi:rajkumar dharam aapko maharaj bula rahe hai
antara:dhram aap jaiye hum theek hai
dharam:theek hai agar kisi cheez ki zaroorat pade to bahar sevak khade hai unhe keh dijiyega
antara:ji
dharam chala jata hai aur tabhi veer ko pani ki pyas lagti hai
veer:pani............pani
antara:ye lo
antara veer ko pani pilati hai aur veer ko hosh bhi aa jata hai
veer:tum......tum .....yahaan kya kar rahi ho..........aur.........................

.aaaaaaaa
antara:kya hua
veer:kuch nahi
antara:ye lo veer ye dawa pi lo
veer:hume tumhari koi zaroorat nahi hai hum khud pi lenge
antara:to theek hai pi lo
veer finds that his hands are badly injured and he can not hold the glass but still he tries but fails then
antara:rehne do apni takat kisi aur din dikha lena lo ab chup chap ise pi lo
veer:antara ko dekhta rehta hai aur tabhi vo notice karta hai ki antara ke hatho se khun nikle raha hai
veer:tumhe to chot lagi hai jakar lep laga lo nahi to ghav aur bad jaega
antara:hume tumhari nasihat ki zaroorat nahi hai aur haan hum abhi aate hai tum bed se mat hilna theek hai

jaise hi antara jaane lagti hai veer bed se uthne ke liye try karta hai aur gir jata hai
veer:aaaaaaaaaaaaaa.....
antara comes running
antara:kya hua .................humne mana kiya tha na ki bed se mat uthna .............kya tum kabhi humari baat nahi maan sakte
par veer ke sir se khun niklne lagta hai aur antara dar jati hai aur jaldi se dharam ko bulati hai

aaj ke liy itna next update will be on wednesday

precap: veer recovering n nok jhok of veer n antara

ciao till me next update

Edited by itemshera - 17 years ago

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Megha

@meghaparti

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Posted: 17 years ago

#75

Thanks for the update will wait for the next part as VA nok jhok would be there 😆

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Twinkle

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Posted: 17 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: meghaparti
Thanks for the update ur welcome dear will wait for the next part as VA nok jhok would be there 😆ok will try n update asap

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Ams

@CutieA

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Posted: 17 years ago

#77

fab update babez!...Veer is nt gettin any better! atleast Antra is helpin him...hes so subborn dou lol...waha a gr8 pair doou lol brill! cnt wait for der nok-jkes! waitin for ur nxt part! mwahhh

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Twinkle

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Posted: 17 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: CutieA
fab update babez!...thanxx Veer is nt gettin any better! atleast Antra is helpin him...hes so subborn dou lol yep...waha a gr8 pair doou lol brill! cnt wait for der nok-jkes! waitin for ur nxt part! mwahhh ya will update asap

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