Afsana pyaar ka part 27 pg98 updated

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Twinkle

@Twinkle23

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#41

part 6

sia:woh hume maaf kar dijiye humse pehachan me galti hogayi
dharam:nahi iski koi zarurat nahi hai galti ho jati hai
sia pull antras hand n tells antra tumhe nahi lagta tumhe mafi mangni chahiye
antra: pagal wagal ho gayi ho kya antra ne na kisise mafi mangi hai aur nahi kisi se mange gi
veer interfiors in between yeh ghamndi kya mafi mangegi
dharam veer chupkaro yeh humare mehman hai
siya rehane dijiye galti antra ki hi thi
dharam nahi galti veer ki thi use aisa nahi kehana chahiye tha
siya nahi.....antra interfiors ab hum chale andar
dharam ha chaliye hum apko batate hai aap dono ka kamra
veer par galti meri nahi thi
dharam interfiors ab chale

WHEN THEY WERE LEAVING
dharam and siya were staring each other and walking then veer cums n interfiors age dekho wo kehate hai ha ha maaf kardo chal rahe hai
AT that time antra holds veers hand and pulled him backwards

ANTRA tumhara dimag kharab hogaya hai. TUM undono ko akela nahi chod sakte kya,dekh nahi sakte wo dono kitna khush hai ek sath

then veer pull his hands backawards and says
Tumse acha mujhe pata hai ki wo dono eksath bahut khush hai par maharaj ne dekh liya to.....
antra cut his words

YEH hume bhi pata hai par unhe ek din to pata hi chalna hai na ki wo ek doosre ko chate hai

n then VEER try to speak some words but ANTRA laughs n says alwida with gr8 attitude

veer says in his mind JAB HUM TUMHARE MEHAL AAYE THE TAB TUMNE MUJHE BAHUT PARESHAN KIYA THA NA AB AGE AGE DEKHO HOTA HAI KYA

Ciao till my next update

Quote

uighyuihui

@starpisces123

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#42

ooooow age age ab hota hai kya???veer and ananya are soo nouty.....
dharam sia are very lovely...
update it soon yaar......

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Ams

@CutieA

Navigator

Posted: 17 years ago

#43

woow kul update...cnt wait for nxt part...cheers

Quote

Rashmi

@aandhanika

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#44

Hahaha veer and antra as uassal alwas with there noke joke..... but finally they meet after so many years and veer still remembers all that happend when they were young.

Veer and Antra are so smart to understand what veer's brother and antra's sister were feelling for each other.. Well i loved this part..... do update soon

Quote

esha

@bunny007

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#45

it was fantastic yaar do cont...

Quote

Twinkle

@Twinkle23

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#46

thanxxxxxx dear for ur comments will try n update soon

Quote

Twinkle

@Twinkle23

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#47

hey guys i am back with my update

here it goes

Part-7

veer along with sia makes a plan to scare antara but unfortunately when they were planing dharam hears each and every thing

dharam:veer hum tumhe aisa nahi karne denge
sia:par dharam hum dono sirf mazak karenge
dharam:rajkumari sia aap bhi is nalayak ki baaton mein aa gayi
sia:hum to sirf maza lene ke liye ye sab kar rahen hai
dharam:par hume ye sab kuch theek nahi lag raha
sia:dekho aap ko agar hum par bharosa hai to aap bhi humara saath denge
dharam:par.........
sia:par var kuch nahi haan ya na
dharam:theek hai par ek baat bataiye ki aap pehle to itni seedhi thi ab aap itni natkhat kaise ho gayi
sia:vo kya hai na antara humari behen hai to uski aadate hum mein bhi aati jaa rahi hain
dharam:acha ye batao hume kya karna hoga
veer:kuch jyada nahi ek saadi pehnani hogi
dharam:veer kya tum pagal ho gaye ho hum aur
sia:dharam humare liye
dharam:theek hai
veer:to tum aur sia andar antara ke kamre mein jaoge aur mein bahar se darawani aawaj nikalunga

in the night sia gets ready and veer is waiting for dharam and then dharam comes

veer:kahaan reh gaye the itni der laga di
dharam:saadi pehnane mein tym lag gaya
veer:vaise dharam..................................tum kaafi ache lag rahe ho ek kala teeka bhi laga lo kahin kisi ki nazar na lag jaye
dharam:veer tumhe to hum baad mein dekhenge

all three of them goes towards antara's room

on dat night sia was looking very beautiful and all the way dharam was just staring her aur tabhi ek hawa ka jhoka aata hai aur sia ke baal uske muh par aa jate hai dharam apne haatho se uske baal hatata hai aur sia bhi uski aankho ki gaharai mein doob jati hai

on the other side veer aage chalta jaata hai aur kuch der baad use pata chalta hai ki sia aur dharam to uske saath aaye hi nahi aur vo unhe doondne ke liye nikalta hai veer dhekta hai ki vo dono ek doosre ki aankhomein khoye hue hai

veer:oooooooooooohhhhhhh
dharam:veer tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho tum bhool gaye hum yahaan kisliye aaye hai
veer:achha bache hum bhool gaye aur tum jo..........
dharam:nahi veer chalo chalte hai
sia:dharam vaise tum to aaj sach mein achhe lag rahe ho ek dam cartoon
dharam:aur ye sab is veer ki vajah se
veer:meine thode hi na kaha tha haan karne ko(khud to ladki pe flat hokar haan kar di aur ab hume keh raha hai)
dharam:(he bhagwan khash humne sia ki baat na mani hoti to aaj hume ye saadi to nahi pehnani padti)
sia:dharam kya soch rahe ho
dharam:kuch bhi to nahi..........................chaliye chalte hai

teeno antara ke kamre ki aur jaate hai aur veer antara ke bed ke neech chup jata hai aur darawani aawaz nikalne lagta hai jis se antara ki neend khul jati ahai aur uth kar beth jati hai aur tabhi do auratein safed saadi pehne uski aur aati ahi dono ka chehra unke balo se dhaka hota hai

aurat:chalo antara hum tumhe lene aaye hai
antara:par ...........par tum log.............ho kaun
aurat:tumhari maut
antara:par.............tummmm......hume kyon marana chahti ho
aurat:kyonki tumne humare kamre mein aakar hume pareshan kiya tha
antara:humne kab........
aurat:ab chalo

aur veer neeche betha betha darawani aawaze nikalta rehta jis se mahol kafi darawana ho jata hai

tabhi achanak dharam ko cheenk aa jati hai aur unka khel bigad jata ye dekh kar dharam to bhag jata hai apr veer vahin phans jata hai aur sia bhi vahin ruk jati hai

antara:sia tum ............ tumne ye sab kyon kiya ........... humne to kabhi socha bhi nahi tha ki tum aisa karogi
sia:humari baat to sun lo
antara:tumhe pata hai na hume kitna dar lagta hai insab cheezo se phir bhi tumne aisa kiya agar hume kuch ho jata to
veer:par isme sia ki koi galti nahi hai ye sab humne kiya hai
antara:veer par kyon kiya pata hai hum kitna dar gaye the
veer:hume maaf kar do hume pata nahi tha
antara:veer hum tumhe kabhi maaf nahi kar sakte
veer:par antara
antara:veer chale jao yahaan se hum kuch anhi sunana chahte aur haa ab kabhi huse baat karne ki koshish nat karna
sia:antara vo maafi mang raha hai na maaf kar do
antara:sia hume is waqt akela chod do

ciao till my next update

Edited by itemshera - 17 years ago

Quote

Ams

@CutieA

Navigator

Posted: 17 years ago

#48

👏👏👏Awsome part 6...but wers part 7😕😕...im lil confused😕😕 as i cnt find it 😭😭😭...DVS propa scared Antra...lol dis dharam nah...spoild everifin loool....🤗...cant wait for nxt part...xxxxxxx