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Posted: 17 years ago
#61
Nice selection and yeah dear how are you feeling now...!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thnx , i m better ...still have cough ....
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: talkativetaurus

thnx , i m better ...still have cough ....


😲😲 Our writer is still having cough....!!!! Oho.... Anyways, I'll pray for your fast recovery...!!! 😳😳😳 Don't take me mean it's not for getting FF...!!! 😆😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#64
Affy yaar ur awesum !!!!
the FF is simply great...ur a mindblowing writer i must say !!
Keep up the good work 👏👏👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: born-leader


😲😲 Our writer is still having cough....!!!! Oho.... Anyways, I'll pray for your fast recovery...!!! 😳😳😳 Don't take me mean it's not for getting FF...!!! 😆😆



lol no yaar ...... thnx for the concern 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: SadButTrue1

Affy yaar ur awesum !!!!

the FF is simply great...ur a mindblowing writer i must say !!
Keep up the good work 👏👏👏



thnx a lot dear 😊🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 4

The minute Ranveer says 'leke uparwale ka naam' , his fingers are pointed towards his parents .. saying its their chance to sing first!

Vasundhara and Indrajeet are confused as what to sing.

Vasundhara - arey nahi nahi koi aur shuru karo pehle ... main nahi gaungi..

Ranveer - Mom, this is nt fair... chalo jaldi start karo ... Dad bhi to hai na...

Vasundhara lks at Aalekh , he just nods his head asking her to sing ...Vasu smiles and the music goes in the bkground of K3G..Vasundhara's eyes is filled with tears as she looks at Aalekh .. and she starts...

Meri saanson me tu hai samaya .. mera jeevan to hai tera saaya .. teri pooja karu main to har dam..(everyone else) Ye hai tere karam .. kabhi khushi kabhi gham .. na jooda honge ham .. kabhi khushi kabhi gham ...

Vasundhara walks towards Aalekh , Indrajeet follows her and Ranveer follows them..she starts ...

Subh-o-shyaam charno mein diye hum jalaaye
Dekhe jahan bhi dekhe, tujhko hi paaye
Oh, subh-o-shyaam charno mein diye hum jalaaye
Dekhe jahan bhi dekhe, tujhko hi paaye

She comes and sits on her knees in front of her ... Aalekh wipes off her tears..

In labon pe tera bas tera naam ho - 2
Pyaar dil se kabhi bhi na ho kam

Everyone else ...while Aalekh hugs his mom and she does too .. Indrajeet and Ranveer joins too .. and they all hug each other like a happy family ....

Yeh hai tere karam, kabhi khushi kabhi gham
Na judaa honge hum, kabhi khushi kabhi gham

All others get tears in their eyes... Ragini lks at this wipes her tears and starts singing to make the situation happy once again ....

Waah waah Ramji ... jodi kya banai ...

Ranveer says with his hand joined .. Bhaiyya aur bhabhi ko ..badhai o badhai ..
Both together .. sab rasmon se badi hai jagme dil se dil ki sagai ..

Ranveer starts teasing Aalekh ..

Mere Bhaiya Jo, Chup Baithe Hain
Dekho Bhabhi Yeh, Kaise Ainthe Hain
Aise Bade Hi Bhale Hain
Maana Thode Manchale Hain
Par Aap Ke Siva
Kahin Bhi Na Phisle Hain


Sadhana lks at Aalekh and hides her mouth while laughing ...

Ragini starts ..

Dekho Dekho Khud Pe, Jiji Itraai

Ranveer again with his hands joined...

Bhaiya Aur Bhabhi Ko, Badhaai Ho Badhaai

Everyone together ..

Sab Rasmon Se Badi Hai Jag Mein
Dil Se Dil Ki Sagaai


Kaushalya lks at Sadhana when shes laughing and suddenly cud feel her
daughter will be leaving soon ... therefore with tears in her eyes she comes
towards Sadhana and starts..

Mehndi Laake Gehne Phaake
Haye Roke Tu Sabko Rulaake

She comes and runs her hands on Sadhanas hair ..

Savere Chali Jayegi, Tu Bada Yaad Aayegi
Tu Jayegi, Tu Bada Yaad Aayegi...

Sadhana nods her head saying 'no' and wipes her tears .. They both hug each other ...
Everyone else claps ... Ragini goes towards her mom and handles her ..


Ranveer - AB , bhabs ab sirf aaplog bache hai ..


Aalekh lks at Sadhana and Sadhana in turn lks at him when he starts

Mehndi Laga Rakhna
Doli Saja Ke Rakhna

RagVir starts screaming and clapping while dancing...

Mehndi Laga Rakhna
Doli Saja Ke Rakhna
Lene Tujhe O Gori
Aayenge Tere Sajna
Mehndi Laga Rakhna
Doli Saja Ke Rakhna

Theres a silence for a while when Sadhana starts ...

O Sahra Sajake Rakhna
Chehra Chhupake Rakhna

RagVir r surprised ... they give a big smile to each other ..Sadhana lks at Aalekh ...

Sahra Sajake Rakhna
Chehra Chhupake Rakhna
Ye Dil Ki Baat Apne
Dil Mein Dabake Rakhna

Aalekh blinks his both the eyes saying yes like SRK from the film ..😉

Sahra Sajake Rakhna
Chehra Chhupake Rakhna

Otherss ..

Mehndi Laga Rakhna
Doli Saja Ke Rakhna

RagVir get excited and start doing 'balle balle' kind of movements saying ..everyone joins
them ..


Shava ..shava ..

They go near Saalekh and make them come on the floor to dance ... all the others join
them ..Aalekh starts dancing while Sadhana is shy and only claps ... Everyone is dancing
and r in their own world when suddenly Aalekh lks at Sadhana's hand where he lks at the
bracelet he gave her to wear ... Sadhana is clapping when he suddenly stops and takes her
hands in his own ... lks at the bracelet .. Sadhana understands ... Aalekh gets her hand close
and kiss on it.. There is eye locking and they both speak with their eyes ..😳

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Thats it for this part. Hope u guys enjoyed it like i did while writing .. Please leave
comments. Thnx.😊
Edited by talkativetaurus - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#68
awww the ending was the best!!!!

TT you genius you! you did it again... there is a huge smile on my face and i just finished putting a playlist on my ipod with these songs =)

great job! can't wait to see whts next!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: prettylady

awww the ending was the best!!!!

TT you genius you! you did it again... there is a huge smile on my face and i just finished putting a playlist on my ipod with these songs =)

great job! can't wait to see whts next!



oh ... thanks pretty 😃 since u guys r reading it i ll try to make it fun each time..😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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lovely !!! i really enjoyed reading it...i wish it came on the television or something...wanna see it !!!

some body please take Affy to some producer as a writer....
Edited by SadButTrue1 - 17 years ago

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