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WONDERFUL 👏 The part was too great...!!! 😳😳😳 It was looking as I am reading the update of the SERIAL .... There was very little of Ragvir... Anyways, it was AMAZING ... 😊😊😊 You are such a GREAT writer.... 🤗 Please post the precap soon...!!!

Ratings...10/10 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
Selection of song was great...!!!
Mothers' feelings were very well written...!!!

As everything ISN'T perfect so lemme point out some minus points....
Mamaji was missing....😒😒😒
Malti was not shown.... how is she feeling ???

Please don't mind for the minus points....!!! Part is still great...!!! 😳😳😳

It is mind blowing I luv it. 👏

Originally posted by: born-leader

WONDERFUL 👏 The part was too great...!!! 😳😳😳 It was looking as I am reading the update of the SERIAL .... There was very little of Ragvir... Anyways, it was AMAZING ... 😊😊😊 You are such a GREAT writer.... 🤗 Please post the precap soon...!!! thnx a lot aimen ..😊 ur comments r very grt n i appreciate it..

Ratings...10/10 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
Selection of song was great...!!!
Mothers' feelings were very well written...!!! lol u seem to analyze everything ...

As everything ISN'T perfect so lemme point out some minus points....
Mamaji was missing....😒😒😒 well yes but no ... he was in the grp with kaushalya .. the song demanded her to sing .. but mamaji was very much there n over here he is sadhanas real father ...
Malti was not shown.... how is she feeling ??? malti n vinu r nt there in this FF .. they may come later but nt as sadhana n raginis brother n bhabhi ...

Please don't mind for the minus points....!!! Part is still great...!!! 😳😳 - no probs .. thts ok ... i knw where i m going ...

awwwww affy wat happened to u??

awwwwwwwwwww da story is tooo gudddd..

such a nice cute n happy happy complete family..

wish bidaai mai b aisa hii hoo jayee..

TT excellent. Keep the FF going. 👏

Yeah but I'll call him MAMAJI as it suits him A LOT...!!! 😃😃😃 Just reveal whether Malti and Vinu's PERSONALITY are same as that in serial or we will have NICE Malti over here...!!! 😆😆

thanx that is so cool good intro ⭐️ 👍🏼

Originally posted by: dina

awwwww affy wat happened to u??

hope ur fine..

i was also unwell due to hot weather but now m quite fine mashallah!

take care...

as vr all waitin 4 ur fanfics

i had viral fever last week .. but nw i m ok .... have lil cough .. but thts ok ..it will go soon ...

Originally posted by: dina

awwwwwwwwwww da story is tooo gudddd..

such a nice cute n happy happy complete family..

wish bidaai mai b aisa hii hoo jayee..

lol yh .... but i think bidaai is much happier than the other serials ....