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Posted: 16 years ago
Part 11

Introducing Karan:



He is Ranveer and Ragini's classmate and Ranveer's enemy from the first day of the college. He is the same guy with whom Ranveer fought and was beaten up badly and then ragini helped ranveer after which they became best friends.

Karan is son of a very rich business tycoon and is known as 'Mr Goldy' in the college. Girls r behind him because of his money. His father has already named half of his property in his name.


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In the classroom:

All were shocked with raginis answer.

Ranveer: rags yeh tum kya keh rahi ho. Are u out of ur mind ' tumhara career.. tumhare marks ?

Ragini: (shes gets up with a jerk) ek baar keh diya na nahi aana hai to bas ..(she starts going out of the classroom) ranveer tum aa rahe ho to chalo warna main jaa rahi hu ghar.

Angel: whats wrong with ragi?! Ranveer u better ask her n let us knw ..

Ranveer: yeh ... tum dono pareshaan nahi ho .. I ll call u both ..

They both sit in the car. Ranveer tries to ask her again the reason for this.

Ranveer: rags ... rags .. (she is nt answering) rags ... problem kya hai.

Ragini: har baar problem batana zaruri nahi ranveer (she starts wiping the tears)

Ranveer: mujhe bhi nahi bataogi ..phir ro kyu rahi ho ..

Ragini: bas! Stop.. stop the car.. ranveer I said stop it..

Ranveer: ok.. ok I m sorry .. nahi poochta.(he keeps on driving. Theres pindrop silence)

Ranveer stops the car at raginis house. Ragini gets down and shuts the door harshly.

Ranveer: (in mind) kya baat hai aunty uncle se pataa lagana padega .

Ranveer returns home sadly, unhappy and confused.

Vasundara: hello beta. Hw was ur day?

Ranveer: (gives a fake smile) it was ok mom


Vasudara : (feels somethings nt right) kya hua beta..everything ok ?

Ranveer: yes mom bas thodi si thakaan lagi hai .

Vasundara: ok jao jakar thoda aaram karlo phir ham shamko ragini ke ghar jayenge. Tum mujhe apni car me drop kar lena. Tumhe usne bataya to hoga hi ki uski mom ki tabiyat kuch thik nahi hai.

Ranveer: (spills the water frm the mouth) KYA? Rags ki mom ki tabiyat ..?

Vasundara: haan .. unhe bohat high fever hai ..

Ranveer: oh tab main kahu ki rags itni sad kyu thi aaj .mom usne field trip par bhi aane se manaa kar diya. Aur pata hai jo field trip par nahi aayega uske 5% marks finals me se deduct ho jayenge. Ab woh nahi jayegi to main jakar kya karu.

Vasundara: oh is it? Tum fikar nahi karo... everything will be ok ...ham uske ghar jakar usko manaa lenge..

Ranveer: (hugs her) thanks mom ..😊

Ragini enters the house with tears in her eyes. Her parents are sitting in the main room. They call her.. she just smiles and goes to her room.

Bauji: ye ragini ko achanak se kya hua. Sab kuch thik to hai na..

Kaushalya: pataa nahi .. college me to sab thik raha na .. aap jakar pooch kyu nahi lete..

Bauji: nahi nahi rehne do use thodi der ..shayad thak gai hogi 'khane khate waqt ham use bula lenge ..

In the evening:

Vasundara, Ranveer, Rocky n Angel all come at Raginis house.

Kaushalya: namaste vasundara ji.. achanak kaise aana hua.

Vasundara: arey kaisi baat kar rahe hai aap. Aap ki tabiyat ke bare me sadhana se pataa chala to ham kaise na aate.. aapki tabiyat kaisi hai aur ragini bete dikhayi nahi de rahi.

Kaushalya: jee .. woh apne kamre me hai.. pataa nahi kya hua hai ..

Bauji: maine bhi poochne ki koshish ki par kuch kehti hi nahi .. sirf bulane par thoda khana khakar phir chali gai..ranveer bete college me sab thik to hai na ..

Ranveer: jee uncle .. woh baat ye hai ki aaj field trip ka announcement hua aur ragini ne aane se inkar kar diya ..ham sab shocked ho gaye..

Rocky: yes uncle..aur ragini kitni hoshiyaar hai .. agar woh nahi aai to uske marks deduct ho jayenge.

Kaushalya: lekin usne manaa kiya kyu?

Ranveer: aunty, ye to main bhi nahi jaanta par shayad .. (he lowers the head and then again lks at her)

Kaushalya: hmm samajh gai .. ye ragini bhi na aap sab fikar nahi karo ragini ko itne acche aap sab jaise dost mile hai ..woh zaroor jayegi..

Angel: yes aunty .. agar woh nahi gai to ham jakar bore ho jayenge.

Kaushalya goes near raginis room and tells her to come out.

Ragini: nahi maa .. main thik hu

Kaushalya: bete tumse milna vasundara ji aai hai . Bahar aao

Ragini comes out ..lks tht everyone in the room is just waiting fr her. She feels awkward.

Kaushalya: hmm .. ab batao kya baat hai

Ragini: kuch nahi maa kuch bhi to nahi ..(says it lowering her eyes)

Vasundara: ragini bete ..hamein tumhari prb pataa hai par tum kyu gabhrati ho tum chali jaogi to kya tumhari mom ka khayal koi nahi rakhega? (she lovingly holds raginis jaws) yahan par main hu , tumhare bauji hai .. aur tumhare uncle bhi to hai 'phir tum pareshan kyu hoti ho ..yahan dekho tumhare sab dost tumhara intezaar kar rahe hai.. ab chalo ye aansu pocho .. (she wipes them) aur jaldi se sabko ek smile dedo ... aur apne doston ko khush khabri sunao ki tum unke saath field trip jaa rahi ho ..

Ran/Roc/An: (chorus) AB TO CHAL RAHI HO NA?

Ragini just smiles and nods her head saying yes.

Ran/Roc/An: yaaay .

Ranveer: thank god .. accha hua mom aaj tum saath chali .. rags ko manana yani mahabharat ladna ' pataa nahi jab use koi propose karega to woh ise kaise manayega ..

Ragini: (she wides her eyes) ranveeerrr?!!? Kya bole .. (she starts running behind him )

Bauji: hahaha .. ye dono to bacche hi rahenge. Bhagwan kare inki dosti par kisi ki nazar na lage'

Angel and Rocky lk at each other and smile .

5 days later:

The university leaves for the picnic to Oonti. They reach the trip at night. Early morning they all leave for their field work. After the entire days work they were taken to a beach where they cud have fun. Angel, Rocky and Ranveer were having fun in the beach. Ragini with just her legs in the water was lking at them. After fews mins ranveer saw her and told her to come but she refused. Ranveer insisted but she still refused. Ranveer got an idea. He came near her and started throwing water on her. To this she responded and started doing the same. Ranveer started running and ragini ran behind him. They both landed in the middle of the beach and started fighting and playing with water and having fun. Angel and rocky joined them. After much playing ragini was enuf and she started going.

Ranveer: ruko na thodi aur der rags..

Ragini: nahi ranny .. bas ho gaya ..main change kar leti hu .sardi ho jayegi .. tum sab bhi aao warna field trip par aaye hai ..bimar ho kar lautoge '

Ranveer: aa rahe hai yaar

Ragini: main kuch khane ko lati hu jaldi aana ..

Ranveer: haan aa rahe hai ..

Ragini starts to leave but not b4 she had to do some mischief. She picks water and calls ranveer.

Ragini: ranveer ..(he turns and she throws it on his face)

Ranveer: teri to .(he is shocked with water on his face. B4 he cud run behind her she runs away, he stood over there smiling at her)

Ragini comes to the beach after changing and is removing snack items for all of them to eat. She keeps on watching them having fun and goes on smiling.

Ragini: (shouts) ranny ab bas bhi karo.. rocky..angel .. come fast .. snacks tayyar hai ..

Someone from behind comes and starts teasing her.

Karan: waah ranny ke liye badaa accha snacks tayyar kiya hai .. zaraa kabhi hamara liye bhi to tayyar karna .. (he puts his hand on ragis shoulder)

Ragini: excuse me (pulls off his hand) karan tum yahan se jao

Karan: arey aise kaise jaaye .. tumhare haath se khana khaye bagair nahi jayenge..

Ragini: fine! To main hi chali jaati hu

She starts moving away to the other side when again he tightly holds her hand to which ragini tries to escape but it was so hard tht as she pulls off karans hands she falls very harshly and comes on ranveer and rockys legs. Ranveer picks her up and hands her to rocky. Ragini is crying. Angel comes and tries to handle her.

Ranveer: (his eyes is blood red filled with anger) tumhari himmat kaise hui ragini ko haath lagane ki .. tumhari dushmani mujhse hai .. job hi karna hai mere saath karo

Karan: just get lost ranveer.. mujhe tumse muh nahi lagna..

Ragini felt tht they will fight.

Ranveer: ab shuru kiya hai to khatam bhi karo (and he gives him a big punch on his face)

A real fight starts between them.They both start fighting and bleeding. Ragini is crying really badly.

Ragini: **CRYING** angel unhe chudao '. Unhe roko .. rocky kuch karo '

She tries to go and stop them but angel stops her as she might get hurt in their fight. Finally ragini escapes from angel and goes to ranveer. Ranveer is in so much anger tht he is nt in the sense to listen anyone.

Ragini: (he holds ranveers hand) ranveer chodo .. bas karoo '(ranveer stills fight) *RANNY TUMHE MERI KASAM HAI .. LEAVE IT!* (she starts feeling dizzy)

Angel: Ragini .. (she handles her at time)

Finally ranveer gets to his senses and throws karan who is hurt n bleeding as well.

Ranveer: Angel rags ko andar room me le jao .. main aata hu

With rockys help he reaches raginis room.. ragini is crying .. he comes and sits near her

Ranveer: rags ... (she turns her face opposite side ' he tries to turn her) rags .. oouch .

Ragini: RANVEER [:O]... kya hua .. kaha chot lagi (she becomes quiet)

Ranveer: (smiles - holds his ears) sorry rags

Ragini: *crying* hamesha sorry bolte rehte ho .. mere bare me kabhi socha hai .. meri kya halat ho rahi thi ..

Ranveer: ok ok thik hai tum ro nahi ..angel rags ke liye thoda pani le aao pls..

Angel goes to get water for ragini and rocky is standing on the door lking them.

Ragini: aainda se tumne aisa kiya na to dekhana .. main tumhe kabhi .. (ranveer interrupts her)

Ranveer: chup ..ye dekho (he puts a cap on her head)

Ragini: (removes it) ye kya cap .. aur ispar ye kya likha hua hai ..

Ranveer: khud hi padhlo ..

Ragini: R...A...G...V...I...R... whts this? Rag..ragvir? means?

Ranveer: (hits on her head) buddhu ..Ragvir means Ragini and Ranveer. Ye cap hamari dosti ki nishani hai ...

Ragini: (hitting on her forehead) ohho ..thanks ... (she speedily hugs ranveer)

Ranveer: aaaaooouch!

Ragini: oh I m sorry .. lao main tumhe dawai lagaa du ..

Ranveer: nahi pehle main tumhe lagaa du ..

Ragini: pehle maine kahan na

Ranveer: par pehle tumhe lagaa na

Ragini : hmm .. badmash

Ranveer gets the medicine and starts putting it on raginis hands.. As he puts suddenly ragini starts lking at ranveer and she gets the flashbacks of the times they have spent together. It brings a smile on her face. She gets a different kind of feeling this time ..

The song 'Tumse hi hi din hota hai' from jab we met goes in the background..


Ranveer: (snaps his fingers) hello... kahan kho gai ...ab tumhari baari .. mujhe dawai lagani hai ki nahi ..

Ragini gets back to her senses. She hits her forehead once again smiling as if wht happened to her and applies medicine to ranveer.

The last scene is with Angel who returns with a glass of water who has been watching all this along with Rocky and both feel sad. Angel keeps the water on the table without telling anything to RR who r in their own world and they both leave.


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Ok so i think the part was quiet long + was updated sooner than usual. Pls dont forgt to leave ur comments for this part - need true comments. i was prepared with this part long back. just had to travel till here. i m sure if u liked this part .. u will like the next part too and most of the upcoming parts bcos the story has almost reached its climax.

Edited by talkativetaurus - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
WOW !!!👏
I just started reading ur FF....and i must say its really nice.
Different from others....but very interesting.😊😛
Will comment in detail after i catch up with all the parts......(hopefully soon 😆)
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Posted: 16 years ago
thanks starz .... take ur time to read it .... i have read urs too .... its grt as well. ...
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Posted: 16 years ago
Awsomee seriously awsome affy, now also i wish Ranvir starts thinking of imaginative tumsehi lolzz in the coming parts a beautiful part!!

Luv,

Shagun
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Posted: 16 years ago
thanks shags ...... ranveer ki akl thikane aane me thoda time lagega .....
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Posted: 16 years ago
thanks neetu... glad to see u reading. 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Precap

Aalekh is waiting for Sadhana to come out of the room so tht they can go out. But she is taking time. When she takes too long he finally enters the room and is shocked to see Sadhana.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Loved these lines:

Ranveer: thank god .. accha hua mom aaj tum saath chali .. rags ko manana yani mahabharat ladna ' pataa nahi jab use koi propose karega to woh ise kaise manayega ..😳😆

Ragini: ranveer ..(he turns and she throws it on his face)
Ranveer: teri to .(he is shocked with water on his face. B4 he cud run behind her she runs away, he stood over there smiling at her)😛
Ranveer: (smiles - holds his ears) sorry rags
Ragini: *crying* hamesha sorry bolte rehte ho .. mere bare me kabhi socha hai .. meri kya halat ho rahi thi ..
RR who r in their own world 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
Just started reading your ff and i started from this latest update.
Looks like you're gonna make me read the whole thing from the beginning... it's brilliant!👏😊
It's a really nice take on the story, totally original, good job!👏
By the way, putting the precap up like that is just mean, now i can't wait for the next update! 😉😆
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: just_in

Loved these lines:

Ranveer: thank god .. accha hua mom aaj tum saath chali .. rags ko manana yani mahabharat ladna ' pataa nahi jab use koi propose karega to woh ise kaise manayega ..😳😆

Ragini: ranveer ..(he turns and she throws it on his face)
Ranveer: teri to .(he is shocked with water on his face. B4 he cud run behind her she runs away, he stood over there smiling at her)😛
Ranveer: (smiles - holds his ears) sorry rags
Ragini: *crying* hamesha sorry bolte rehte ho .. mere bare me kabhi socha hai .. meri kya halat ho rahi thi ..
RR who r in their own world 😳



yipee just.... u r back with ur fvrt lines .... thanks a ton fr reading!!!😃😃😃

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