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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Ragvir4ever

Just started reading your ff and i started from this latest update.
thanks buddy😊

Looks like you're gonna make me read the whole thing from the beginning... it's brilliant!👏😊
hehehe tht wud be grt .. i have been reading ur ddlj .. so u can read my jtyjn ... we can do tit for tat .. lol😉😆
It's a really nice take on the story, totally original, good job!👏
thanks once again buddy .. it all the matter of this masala filled in the brain ...
By the way, putting the precap up like that is just mean, now i can't wait for the next update! 😉😆
hehe dont worry i m thinking to put the next part soon n if time permits tomrw itself!

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Posted: 16 years ago
read ur whole FF together and seriously telling..... its superb, aswesome, fantastic, mindblowing, and would surely make a history👏
.... i just loved it......
and i m waiting anxiously for the next part..... please update soon.....


*~VASUNDHARA~*

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Posted: 16 years ago
Aww the precap seems really interesting am curious for next part wud b waiting for the next update its awsome affy!!

Luv,

Shagun
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: cuty_pie

read ur whole FF together and seriously telling..... its superb, aswesome, fantastic, mindblowing, and would surely make a history👏
.... i just loved it......
and i m waiting anxiously for the next part..... please update soon.....


*~VASUNDHARA~*



hey vasu thanks a loads .... ur comments made me smile .... thanks a lot! i ll try to update soon ...😊😊😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_shagun

Aww the precap seems really interesting am curious for next part wud b waiting for the next update its awsome affy!!

Luv,

Shagun



thanks shags ... will do it .. i m already making it .. will post it as soonas its ready!😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
Part 12

Rocky returns to his room with tears in his eyes. He cudnt resist crying anymore when he saw ragini and ranveer together almost like a couple. but as a true friend he cud do nothing but cry. he sat on the bed and putting his hands in his pockets he removed something. he was lking it with affection n tears rolling down his eyes. suddenly angel comes who was unhappy too but she was rather tough and knew to control her emotions.

Angel: rocky .. wht hapnd bro .. whts tht? (listening her voice rockys hurrily tries to put the thing inside but angel goes near him) rocky? upar dekho. u r crying? aur yeh kya hai? mujhe nahi bataoge? (she lks at him with innocence)

Rocky cudnt hide frm her sis bcos she was the only one in her life. he removes the thing. it was a cute gold ring on which was written 'RR'. [over here as Rocky-Ragini]
Looking at the ring angel face' colour fades. she understands her bros emotions. tears start flowing frm her eyes too. she knew her bro needs her.

Rocky: Sis aaj mom ki bohat yaad aa rahi hai...

Angel: come on bro dont say like this. (she wipes her tears) main tumhari mom hu na.. 😉(she tries to make the environment funny.)

Rocky: (he has this mix reaction of cry and smile on his face) hmph .. tum meri mom ... haan thik hai ... par tum to meri step mom ho... mom se bhi zyada mujh par raaj karti hu ..

Angel: come on bro aisa nahi kaho. (she gives him a hug) i m sorry for all tht.. now promise me tum kabhi roge nahi.

Rocky: ek baat poochu sis.. kya tum ranveer ko miss nahi karti?

To this angel becomes silent. after few secs.

Angel: bro main janti hu u like ragini aur haan main bhi ranveer ko pasand karti hu par ham un dono ke beech nahi jaa sakte. they both are made for each other. as a friend hamein unka saath dena chahiye.

Rocky: u r right sis. aur kya hua agar woh hamein pasand nahi karte. but we all r friends. aur kisi ne hamein unhe pasand karne se roka bhi to nahi. one thing i promise.. agar ragini ko kabhi bhi meri zarurat hui to main hamesha uska saath dunga. aaj to ranveer hai .. but agar kabhi bhi ... right sis?

Angel: right bro😉😆

Few days later at Kashmir:

Aalekh is waiting for Sadhana to get ready soon so tht they can go out. He is ready in his pathani and chudidaar.

Aalekh: Sadii ' jaldi karo ' hamein der ho rahi hai '

Sadhana: aaloo bas do minute '. Thodi der aur ' abhi aai '

Aalekh lks at the watch , starts walking here and there. Lks at his watch.

Aalekh: omg. 2 minute ka 10 minute ho gaya kab aayegi yeh '. Sadiii ..

Theres no reply ..

Aalekh: saddi tum thik to ho na '(no reply- he thinks to go inside the room.. he pushes the door harshly) SADI KYA HUA TUMHE ???

As soon as he opens the door aalekh is shocked to see her. His mouth is wide open. Sadi turns. She is lking like a baby doll dressed in a kashmiri dress just like below. [just imagine sadi in the lady's place]



Sadhana: (blushes ' eyes downs) kaisi lag rahi hu main aaloo'😳😳

Aalekh: (smiles) Aalekh ki Pari.😊😃

To this see moves her eyes up blushes and turns aalekh comes frm behind, turns her to his side and hugs her and gives a cute peck on her cheek. They leave.

Oonti:

Professor Shah is giving an announcement. All the students are listening properly since their trip is almost ending and nw they need to worry fr their marks.

Shah: Ok students, I hope u all have enjoyed the trip. Now we all will be returning back tomorrow at night. But before leaving I wud like you all to submit me ur reports in the morning and give abt 10 mins of the presentation of what u all have done. Any questions?

Everyone: NO Sir. Thank you Sir.

Ranveer: hey rags ' meri to khair nahi .. mujhe zaraa madad kar lo aaj raat ki kya present kar na hai .. warna main to gaya kaam se '

Ragini: tum bhi na ranveer' waqt par kaam nahi karte ' anyway milte hai raat ko ..

Kashmir:

Aalekh and Sadhana r in a kashmiri boat. (lk below)





The song 'Hum Dil De Chuke Sanam' is going in the background. They both r sitting opposite to each other, lking in each other eyes with love as if nothing exists around. Sadhana is very shy, comes near aalekh and puts both her arms around his face. Aalekh just leans on her stomach.

Suddenly a boat passes besides them with full of red roses. Sadhana picks up one rose and hands it to aalekh but "ouch" the thorn hurts her thumb. Aalekh takes the rose, keeps it aside holds sadhanas thumb and gives a kiss. Aalekh smiles, sadhana smiles back and shws him another thumb. Aalekh gets a wide smile. He gives the kiss on another one too.

Finally they land down. Aalekh picks up Sadhana in his arms and they go back.

Oonti:

(night)

Ragini had been showing ranveer abt the presentation.

Ragini: (yawns) bas ranny ' itna hi ' ab baki ka tum khud kar lena '

Ranveer: ok rags. Tumhari file waise bohat acchi hai ' good luck.

Ragini: thanks same to u ..

Ranveer leaves. After changing rangini soon goes to her bed. She is abt to close her eyes when she feels theres someone outside her room. She cud see a shadow.

Ragini: (wakes up ' tries to find) kaun ? kaun hai waha ??

But there was no reply and she goes back to sleep.

Next morning:

Everyone ' Ranveer , rocky , angel and others are ready with their presentations. Ragini has not yet turned up.

Ragini: hey bhagwan sirf 15 min. kahin mera presentation choot na jaye. Aaj main late kaise ho gai. (she puts her dupatta and starts moving out but she remembers) oh file ' kahan rakha tha .. haan 'drawer me '(she opens the drawer to remove the file but its not there .. she makes the mess of the drawer) FILE? File kahan gai ?!


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Thats it for this part. Pls dnt forget to leave comments. Next part will reveal something new. Thanks.

Edited by talkativetaurus - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey this time i m the first one to comment.... yippeee

this part was simply awesome..... loved it... seriously loved it👏👏👏.... SaLekh's romance was jus too cute😍😍... hope we cud see some scenes like this in d real show also.....
please update soon waiting for the next part eagerly....😊😊😊

*~VASUNDHARA~*

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Posted: 16 years ago
Wow! 👏
I've been reading it from the beginning and i haven't finished yet but i just had to comment. Your fan fic is brilliant, so original. I loved the romantic moment between Saalekh at their mehndi ceremony, I wish moments like that happened in the real show.
The conversation in Part 4 between Ragvir and their respective mothers was really funny, I could see what you were trying to do and it totally worked, i could picture it like it was actually happening in the show.
Plus the wedding in Simla was romantic. I love the way you compare Saalekhs openly romantic relationship with Ragvir's subtle and slowly blooming one. It's done really well
All the characters are so real and adorable, I love Sadhna. I wish she was more like that in the show, she acts more her age in your fan fic and it suits her. Also, i'm glad there aren't any negative characters, it's nice to get a break from all the serial vamps.
Will comment again when i've read more, loving it so far.
By the way, i know i'm going on a bit but I also really like the way you add pictures of their outfits or the one of the mandip, i would never have thought to do something like that.
Aap ke imagination ka bhi jawab nahi 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
Just finished reading the rest and i loved it, as was expected😆
My favourite was the party scene where Alekh's making up to Sadhna, how sweet was the surprise Ragvir had for Saalekh. Maybe in the show it will be the other way around for when Ragvir get married (note i said when not if😆)
Felt really bad for Rocky and Angel but i still hope Ragvir get together soon.
Can't wait for the next part update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
Oh...!!! I got to know about Part 11 yesterday and today you have posted the next part...!!! Double Treat for me..!! 😃😃😃 So sorry I couldn't comment on that part coz I wasn't aware of it...!!! But seriously, your parts are awesome...!!! 😳😳😳

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