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Originally posted by: cuty_pie

hey this time i m the first one to comment.... yippeee

wow tht s kool

this part was simply awesome..... loved it... seriously loved it👏👏👏.... SaLekh's romance was jus too cute😍😍... hope we cud see some scenes like this in d real show also.....

thnks dear. i hope so too. it will def.

please update soon waiting for the next part eagerly....😊😊😊

i ll post the precap tom ... do read😃

*~VASUNDHARA~*

Originally posted by: Ragvir4ever

Wow! 👏

I've been reading it from the beginning and i haven't finished yet but i just had to comment. Your fan fic is brilliant, so original. I loved the romantic moment between Saalekh at their mehndi ceremony, I wish moments like that happened in the real show.

The conversation in Part 4 between Ragvir and their respective mothers was really funny, I could see what you were trying to do and it totally worked, i could picture it like it was actually happening in the show.

Plus the wedding in Simla was romantic. I love the way you compare Saalekhs openly romantic relationship with Ragvir's subtle and slowly blooming one. It's done really well

All the characters are so real and adorable, I love Sadhna. I wish she was more like that in the show, she acts more her age in your fan fic and it suits her. Also, i'm glad there aren't any negative characters, it's nice to get a break from all the serial vamps.

Will comment again when i've read more, loving it so far.

By the way, i know i'm going on a bit but I also really like the way you add pictures of their outfits or the one of the mandip, i would never have thought to do something like that.

Aap ke imagination ka bhi jawab nahi 😆

Originally posted by: Ragvir4ever

Just finished reading the rest and i loved it, as was expected😆

My favourite was the party scene where Alekh's making up to Sadhna, how sweet was the surprise Ragvir had for Saalekh. Maybe in the show it will be the other way around for when Ragvir get married (note i said when not if😆)

Felt really bad for Rocky and Angel but i still hope Ragvir get together soon.

Can't wait for the next part update soon

Originally posted by: born-leader

Oh...!!! I got to know about Part 11 yesterday and today you have posted the next part...!!! Double Treat for me..!! 😃😃😃 So sorry I couldn't comment on that part coz I wasn't aware of it...!!! But seriously, your parts are awesome...!!! 😳😳😳

Originally posted by: just_in

Loved these lines:

Angel: come on bro dont say like this. (she wipes her tears) main tumhari mom hu na.. 😉(she tries to make the environment funny.)
Rocky: (he has this mix reaction of cry and smile on his face) hmph .. tum meri mom ... haan thik hai ... par tum to meri step mom ho... mom se bhi zyada mujh par raaj karti hu ..

aaj to ranveer hai .. but agar kabhi bhi ... right sis?

O..Oh What do you mean by this line?

So rags is in trouble and who is going to get her out of it?