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Posted: 17 years ago
#31

Hey guys! Please please more people comment! Mujhe aisa lag raha hai ki koi mera FF padte hi nahi hai!

He looked over at Kanya, but she pointedly looked away. Kanya stalked off to take a shower. She glared as she walked off, thinking about Ranbir and how confusing he was being. But behind her, Ranbir smiled. Why? Because Kanya, in her anger had forgotten to take clothes into the bathroom with her...

Part 13: Love-Hate

As the cool water flowed down and touched Kanya's skin, it made her shiver, just like Ranbir's touch. She was so confused. Ranbir refused to recognize their relationship as husband and wife, yet, in the last couple days, the circumstances suggested otherwise. More troubled than she was when she came in, Kanya turned off the shower and stepped out. She wrapped a towel around herself and reached for the... oh no, she forgot her clothes.

K: (thinking) Oh god, ab kya karoon? Ranbir se puchhoon? Nahi! Main us stupid saand se koi madat nahi chahiye...

K: Ranbir?

R: Haan?

K: Mujhe zara kapde de doge please?

Outside the bathroom, Ranbir grinned.

R: Kyun? Main tumhara naukar hoon kya?

K: Please Ranbir, aise zid mat karo...

Ranbir was delighted. For the first time after a long time, Kanya sounded so helpless, calling him for help. He was going to have fun with this. After such a long time he was hearing her speak to him sweetly. He sauntered to a chair and flopped down casually.

R: Listen you 2 by 2. Main tumhara naukar nahi hoon aur mujhe tumhare liye kuch bhi karna zaroori nahi hai. Jo bhi kaam hai, tumhe khud karna padega.

Kanya bit back a retort and said, "Please Ranbir, samjha karo na. Main bahar kaise aaoon?"

R: Chal ke.

Kanya lost it. She angrily stomped out of the bathroom in the towel and walked up to a very surprised Ranbir.

K: Listen you saand! Tum zyaada bhaav mat kha! Yeh mat bhulo ki mere bina, tum abhi bhi us sunsaan raaste par bhatak rahe hote!

Ranbir stood up.

R: Hello? Shayad tum bhool rahi ho ki woh tum thi jo mere chune hue raaste par chalne se inkaar kiya! TUMHARI wajeh se hum wahaan pe phas gaye the! Aur uska baad bhi shayad main jaldi pahunchtha! Agar tumhe bachaane ke liye nahi rukna padtha toh!

K: Tumhe kisne kaha mujhe bachaane ko?! Main apne aap ko sambhal sakti!

R: Oh I'm sorry! Tum toh SuperKanya ho na?! Kisi ki madat ki zarurat nahi! Nahi party pe, nahi gunde se bachaane mein aur nahi khidke se chhadne ko! Toh abhi meri madat kyun chahiye kapde laane mein?!

K: At least main apne aap ko dhoka toh nahi deti hoon!

R: What does that mean?!

K: Tum banne rehna 'hate guru'! Kisi ki feelings ki qadar nahi hai tumhe, hai na?!

R: Shut up you chipkali! You don't know what you're talking about!

K: Hate guru hi banna tha toh mujhse pyaar karne ki natak kyun kiya?!

R: Woh natak nahi tha!

K: Liar!!!

Ranbir grabbed her around the waist and kissed her ferociously. Taken aback, Kanya lost all train of thought and obeyed her instinct. She slid her arms up his chest and around his neck. Ranbir's other hand found it's way around her waist as well. They kissed passionately. Ranbir was slowly backing her up against the wall. As she hit the back of the wall, they broke apart.

K: I hate you!!!

R: I hate you more!!!

He dove back to her lips, hungrily exploring her mouth. She closed her eyes, enjoying the 'hate' that they shared. As Ranbir's lips traveled from her lips to her neck, the towel slid down and hit the floor.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
comments:
unpredictable91:

me first

wow i luved their fight
continue soon krish
princez-preciou: krishhhhhhhhhhh!!!
yaar bohod gussa hoon tujse just wen i was getting to the hot mood yaar tunne katam kardi!!
mindblowing part i luv ur ff...!
plz plz continue sooon!
desaigirl101: 1st thanks for pm me for the update secondly love love love love love love love love love love love love it
plz continue soooooooooooooooooooooooooon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Multani90: Ok, first of all I want to say Krish that whoever is not reading your ff, is missing out a lot!!!! Because you are brillant!!! And people who are silent, please stop being silent!!!!! God, people comment!!!
Krish!!!!!!!!!! omg.....this was just I don't have any words, I read this part 7 times already!!!! 7 times!!!! Yaar, your are amazing, wow the hate, naughtiness, angry, love, passion, the hidden emotions, the contrained emotions, the confusion, that hate that makes the love even stronger!!!! Omg...yaar tumhari writing ki main bahut badi fan ho!!!!
This was such a treat for us!!!! It was perfect, uff, and that last part, oh I would kill Kanya to be in her place!!! That kiss, oh baba, whoa!!!! the force, the passion!!!!!! Bad boy sexy-- you character is the most amazing character. Sachi Krish, I love this ff so much!!! You made my day!!!!!!!!
Please cont. soon. I will be waiting!!!
matwamango: Very steamy. Loved every word.
Multani90: And I need to add that their fight surpasses most fights we have seen on KIT!
baby_gurl#1: oh wow!!! awsome intense moment!!
gr8 update cont sooonnn!!! <3<3
stars_shine*: awesom part
thnx for the PM
continue soon
rajkin: Kanya Getting this close and enjoying the hate.....OOOohhh how unique can your piece of work get.Amazing.You continue to give us such wonderful updates.Thanks for the pm too.
Jo nahi padh rahe tumhara ff,they are missing -k its like missing the best of KIT-Cmon ppl none of u can afford to do that.Silent ppl pls comment.Anyway I read each part so many times and thanks for ur ff which is no less than a treat every single time.
GGG3: Hot!!!!!!!!!!!.Venting their passion at last;following their id,brushing aside ego and super ego.Amazing part.Eagerly awaiting the next update.Thanks for the pm Krish.

sweet cherry: omg that was awesome so hot and aggresive love
ur an awesome writter.
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soooooooooooooooooon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏👏
plzzzzzzzzzz yaar make it longer 4 us
psarada: WOW hot update. I really like the way you give titles to your updates which really match up with the story and its mood. Now eagerly awaiting the next update.
suganain: Sandeep😆😆 I agree, that was a wonderful update.
The whole good-girl bad-boy thing going on was sizzling!
Big fan of this fan-fiction!
Continue Soon!


candy princess: OMG the ending was HAWT u had to stop writing plz plz comeon continue right now plz plz continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
rajkin: Rewind to the day u wrote the update- kuch yaad aaya - hey u had to write some more-haina- so continue...............plssssssss jallllldddddiiiiiiiii update karo na
punjabi.princes: great update
continue soon!
sweet cherry: omg krish. 4 startes ur an amazing writter
plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz
krish continue soon
nd by da way i'm called trish
continue sooooooooooooooooooon
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue reli
sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon

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Posted: 17 years ago
#33

Ranbir grabbed her around the waist and kissed her ferociously. Taken aback, Kanya lost all train of thought and obeyed her instinct. She slid her arms up his chest and around his neck. Ranbir?s other hand found it?s way around her waist as well. They kissed passionately. Ranbir was slowly backing her up against the wall. As she hit the back of the wall, they broke apart.

K: I hate you!!!

R: I hate you more!!!

He dove back to her lips, hungrily exploring her mouth. She closed her eyes, enjoying the ?hate? that they shared. As Ranbir?s lips traveled from her lips to her neck, the towel slid down and hit the floor.

Part 14: Mrs. Ranbir Nanda ka vaada

Kanya sighed and Ranbir, refusing to break the kiss, held her even more tightly. Kanya?s hands slid up Ranbir?s chest and he reached down and ripped the shirt away, breaking some buttons.

K: Mmm

Ranbir grabbed her around the waist and picked her up and moved towards the bed...

~A little while later~

Kanya was smiling contentedly. Ranbir was fast asleep, his face buried in Kanya?s soft hair. It was a great feeling. His bare chest right on top of her, only separated by a thin bed sheet. His strong, protecting arms tightly around her waist. His rough, stubbly cheek brushing against her cheek.

Kanya smiled and absent-mindedly lifted her arms around him and started rubbing his back. Her mind drifted off into past memories.

When he rescued her from drowning...

When he tried to kiss her...

When he smelt her mehndi...

When she hugged him in the dark...

Now, it was all worth it. This feeling felt so right, so perfect, like it was the one and only thing in the universe that was meant to be. Their love was finally complete.

Ranbir grinned into Kanya?s hair. He was awake, but was enjoying her rubbing his back too much to get up. He closed his eyes again and enjoyed her soft, warm hands against his back. He lifted his head slightly and kissed her neck.

Kanya gasped and stopped rubbing. Ranbir smiled devilishly and kissed her again.

K: Ranbir...tum jaag rahe ho?

He smirked and lifted his lips close to her ear and whispered, ?Maybe,?

She blushed and looked away.

K: Ranbir, uttho na

R: Nahi

K: Ranbir...

R: No

She blushed even harder and smiled. She shifted to look in his eyes. There she saw Ranbir, looking at her intensely and playing with her hair.

K: I love you.

It hit Ranbir like a ton of bricks. He was shocked speechless.

K: Ranbir?

R: Huh? Yeah?...

K: I love you

He gulped nervously and stopped playing with her hair. Kanya?s smile faltered and a sudden realization gripped her.

K: Ranbir? Tum bhi toh mujhse pyaar karte ho, na?

Once again, Ranbir was silent. He was ashamed, confused...

R: Kanya...I...main...nahi...I mean...

K: Save it Ranbir. Mujhe laga ki tum badal gaye ho, kal raat ke baad. Par nahi, main ghalat thi.

Ranbir stared at her sorrowfully.

K: I hate you.

Ranbir mustered up his courage and said it.

R: I don?t care! I hate you too!

Kanya laughed sarcastically.

K: Oh really? Kuch dher pehle toh mujhpe bahut pyaar aa raha tha!

Ranbir?s sudden courage was severely dented.

R: Kanya...I?m sorry... par

K: Shut up! Main kuch nahi sunna chahti! Ab agar main tumse kuch sunoongi, toh woh tab hoga jab tum mujhe apnaaoge. Main tumhe I love you bulvakar hi rahegi! Yeh vaada hai, Mrs. Ranbir Nanda ki!

With that, she kissed him hard and pulled the bed sheet around her and walked away, leaving Ranbir confused and sorry.

Edited by kwarudkar - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
Ranbir needs to smell the roses and admit his true feeling for Kanya.
Loved every word. Continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#35
oh i am loving it. i love this ranbir.
continue soon.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#36
loved it.My what intensity.I will b waiting jab tak woh I love u nahi bolta.And thank u for updating.Its a treat ,a treat, a treat -Always.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37
::aare hai meh marjawa!
wow krish kya update the!
love it simply loved it!
yaar it just topped up my whole day!!!!!!!
excellent part!!!
and i love kanya and ranbir here excellent description!
love you so much for updating!!!
oo and the hotnesss and spice4 wow!
continue sooooooooon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38
Wow!!!!!!
Finally you updated!!!!!!!!!!!!
Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please continue soon!!!!!
Ranbir has to say i love you!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39
it was good a make it longer
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Posted: 17 years ago
#40
hey krish
awesom as always!!
ranbir u must say i love you
continue soon!!

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