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Posted: 17 years ago
#21
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unpredictable91: so cute
continue soon
yogitz: oh beautiful pliz continue soon
and thank you.
punjabi.princes: aww such a cute ending
great update
continue soon!
stars_shine*: aww its amazing
continue soon
desaigirl101: CUTE Scene!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
KC294: that was amazing... i loved the scene and i also listened to the song... brilliant 10 out of 10
pls continue soon
princez-preciou: oo one cute scene continue!
rajkin:
The moments between them were so beautifully written out. And such a peaceful ending.I miss not hearing the song cos it was takin ages to load so i read it first cos coudnt resist.I am yet to combine both .And thats an added bonus cos that will b like one more update.
rajkin: yes heard it. marvellously perfect - the feel that the music of the song gave to the script. Wht can i say I just wanna say that the vocals blended so beautifully and enhanced the impact.Thanks
GGG3: Soooooooo moving.Loved it.Thanks for the update
miss.sonia: nooooooo this one was soo short😭# why plz update soon and a lonnnnnnnnnnnnnnng
one opklz plz pzl plz this onewas 2 short
me: thanx guys! Multani 90 pls comment! i <3 ur comments! 😆
Multani90:

Hai Krish, this was completely fab!!! Amazing! I am so love with this ff. I can feel every detail!!! Omg!!! in this part I love the way you detailed, elaborated with perfection Ranbir expressions! I love how you included his eyes! My favorite, they talk magic to me. I imagined it, and I smiled!!! It was beautiful. And the whole flashback with done with perfection, remembering at the same time. And the song is the jaan of this part!!! Amazing!!! Hai, the dard, its flows right to me, and I love that!!! Love the smooth transition! And Kanya strength, hate, pain, love, lovely!

And the ending part was just I have no words, the tear falling on Kanya's cheek!!! And Kanya's undying innocence so beautiful. It was really beautiful, there was serenity, and the ultimate dard. ahhhh....just amazing!!! And Ranbir, oh I love the way you execute Ranbir's character. Ahhhhhhhhhh.....another hug 🤗and applause 👏🏻for you!!! I am not lying I love the way, each part gives a different flavor, and is done with profound detail, complete justice to bad boy sexy! Uff...so sexy mera billa.
Please continue soon, I will be waiting! I get really excited about this ff!
me: thank u!🙂
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Posted: 17 years ago
#22
Hey guys! I was completely free today so thought I'd continue. We've had a bunch of rona dhona recently in KIT and in my last update so I thought I'd make a funny and hott update! Enjoy yaaron!
Part 11: Romance on the highway

"I love you, Kanya."

The words rang in her head, filling her with a warm, sweet feeling. And then, she woke up.

Sunlight streamed through the poorly thatched ceiling of the jhopri. Kanya lifted her head and stared up at Ranbir, sleeping next to her with his arm over her waist.

K: (thinking) Ranbir, tum sote hue bahut cute lagte ho. Bilkul bachhe ki tara.

She quietly lifted his arm off of her and went outside. The early morning rays of the sun peeked over the treetops, illuminating the place with a soft, rosy glow. Even though it couldn't be later than 6 a.m., the Mumbai traffic was already moving. Kanya could hear it in the distance.

"I love you Ranbir,"

"Mmm, me too" Ranbir muttered in his sleep with a smile on his face. He opened his eyes and found himself shirtless on a pile of hay. He looked around and saw his jacket lying in a corner and went over and pulled it on, and went outside, not bothering to zip it up. Outside, he saw Kanya standing, looking worried. She was still wearing the short white dress. Ranbir leaned casually against the hut, observing that Kanya's dress was slightly see-through when she stood fully in the sunlight like that. He smirked, enjoying the sight.

Kanya turned on Ranbir. He immediately wiped the smirk off of his face and adopted a more vacant expression.

K: Ab tum yahaan khade khade kya kar rahe ho?

R: Aur kya karoon?

K: Kyun? Yahaan se nikalna nahi hai kya?

R: Oh, that.

K: Yeah that. Yahaan aao aur meri madat karo.

R: No, I don't think I will.

Kanya whirled around. She walked up to him angrily.

K: Fine! Good! Tum tire puncture karo, humme yahaan, is sunsaan raaste par shauk se ghumao, raasta bhul jaao aur phir mujhpe saare nikalne ke responsibility thopdo!

Kanya had now backed up Ranbir against the wall.

R: BACHAO!

K: Kya kar rahe ho, you stupid saand?

R: (jokingly) Main kya bewakuf lagta hoon? Tum soch rahi hongi ki main shirt nahi pehen raha hoon aur hum dono akele is sunsaan raaste par hai toh tum kuch bhi kar sakti ho? Main tumhe mere izzat pe haath dalne nahi doonga!

K: Shut up!

Ranbir laughs. Kanya backs off and folds her arms, looking very pissed off.

R: Vaise, don't worry. Main Ranbir Nanda hoon. Main kuch bhi kar sakta. Main kuch karta hoon.

K: Fine.

With that, she went into the hut. Ranbir fixed his eyes on the road, determined to flag down any passing cars. As no cars passed, Ranbir's mind began to float back to the last night. He remembered Kanya stealing a glance at his rain-soaked chest... him staring at her drenched body... her beautiful face, asleep...

His gaze wandered towards the hut and suddenly, his eyes were glued to it. He could see, through the holes of the poorly constructed hut, Kanya slipping out of the dress. He shifted so as to get a better view. He wished there were more holes. A bit of skin here... a flash of skin there... he stared as Kanya stepped out of the dress, every molecule in his body screaming to be in there with her. He stared, unabashedly, at whatever little amount of her body he could see, wishing for more.

Inside, Kanya stepped out of the dress and began to comb out her wet hair with her fingers and suddenly felt a tingle on the back of her neck, as if someone were watching her. She whirled around in the hut, but saw no one. Confused, she resumed combing her hair.

Ranbir, so obsessed with Kanya, missed two cars passing by as he stared hungrily at her. Finally when Kanya came out of the hut, once again in the dress, Ranbir quickly zipped up his jacket and fixed his gaze once more on the road.

K: Any luck?

R: No...

K: (murmuring) Saand, ek bhi kaam thik se nahi kar sakte.

R: Kya kaha?

K: Hato, main karti hoon.

R: Yeah right, jaise koi mujhse gazar kar tumhare liye ruk sakta hai.

K: Tum jhopdi mein jaao.

R: Kyun?
K: Bas jaao.

R: Fine.

He went into the hut and watched through a hole. As a car came by, Kanya flipped her hair prettily and waved a hand. The car screeched to a stop. A man came out.

J: Hey, main Jayant. Aapko lift chahiye?

K: Yes please

J: Toh aa jao na.

R: (softly) Kamina saala. Mere biwi pe nazar dalta hai.

K: Ranbir, bahar aao.

Ranbir, still growling, came out of the hut.

J: (frowning) Yeh kaun hai?

K: Yeh mera pati hai.

J: (disappointed) Oh.

They got into the car and drove off, Kanya smiling at Jayant, Jayant looking sadly back at Kanya and Ranbir glaring intensely at Jayant.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#23
That was cool. Loved Ranbir's sneaky glances
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Posted: 17 years ago
#24
punjabi.princes:lol great update
continue soon!
rajkin: arre kya treat diya hai tumne. Waah that shift in expression while watching her in the sunlight. From smirk to a blank one. Voow.ANd yor Ranbir is cho cuute and mischevous- wishing there were more holes in the hut and lettin go of two cars....he thinkin of hoe kanya had stolen a glance at him in the rain.....Kya kahoon. kya likha hai waah.
yogitz: you are always setting a record by writting gr8 updates.
wish our tv pair was like that. (hot hot ranbir and cold cold kanya)
princez-preciou: heheh! krish i luvd dat part man ranbir adn kanya are awesome in diss ff i miss dem days!
anyhow pls pls continue soooooon!
desaigirl101: Great Great Great UPDATE!!!!!!!!
Update A.S.A.P
stars_shine*: gr8 update
continue soon
unpredicatble91:

haha poor jayant

it was sooo good
continue soon
candy princess:
AWSOME and hotly cute plzz continue soon fast fast!!!
suganain: hehe, loved it funny scene and better then whats going on in the show. Continue Soon!
KC294: that was funny... and brill
pls continue soon
GGG3: Ranbir drooling over the physical charms of his wife secretly was so funny.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#25

Part 12: Breaking and entering

Recap: They got into the car and drove off, Kanya smiling at Jayant, Jayant looking sadly back at Kanya and Ranbir glaring intensely at Jayant.

~* Back at the Nanda house *~

The car drove up to the house. Ranbir barely noticed that they were home as he was too busy mentally cursing Jayant.

K: Thanks, Jayant!

J: You're very welcome Kanya! See you later.

R: Whoa! Who says there will be a later?

Kanya ignored Ranbir and smiled sweetly at Jayant and said bye. As he drove away, Kanya made for the front door. Ranbir grabbed her arm.

R: Wahaan se nahi! Agar gharwaalon ne humme aise dekhliye toh...

K: Oh yeah, peeche se jaate.

Ranbir and Kanya walked around the house quietly. As the reached Ranbir's bedroom window, Ranbir jumped and climbed in. He extended his hand to Kanya.

K: (angrily) Main khud kar sakti hoon. Mujhe tumhare madat ki koi zarurat nahi!

Ranbir folded his arms and leaned causally against the window. Kanya jumped, groped and attempted to climb up 1...2...3...4 times. She looked up at Ranbir and he bent down and extended his hand again. Kanya blushed and caught on to it. Ranbir pulled, but he couldn't seem to get Kanya up.

R: (thinking) Yeh chipkali itni heavy kaise ho gayi?

He finally bent down and wrapped his other arm around her small waist and pulled.

CRASH!

Ranbir landed on the floor and Kanya on top of him. Ranbir stared at her. Kanya stared at him. His arm was still wrapped tightly around her waist and her hands were on his chest.

They both stopped thinking for a minute. They forgot the rest of the world and knew nothing but how good they felt against the other's body. Kanya was breathing fast, her chest rising and falling against his. Ranbir's arm slipped down her waist slowly. A strand of Kanya's hair was tickling his face. He lifted up a hand and tucked it behind her ear, brushing his hand against her cheek.

Kanya's heart was telling her to close her eyes, to hug him tightly and never let go. Ranbir's heart was telling him to bring her closer, to kiss her fiercely, expelling all his passion unto her.

A: Chachu!

Ranbir and Kanya scrambled to get up, both looking very embarrassed.

A: Chachu, Kanya, aap dono kahaan reh gaye the? Hum dono mere dost ke saath ghar aa gaye the, par app dono tab tak bhi aaye the!

R: Oh, woh kya hai ki...

A: It's okay Chachu. I know you two need some alone time, (they blushed again) so main abhi jaata hoon.

Ayaan left, leaving Kanya and Ranbir looking very uncomfortable.

R: (thinking) Kya Ayaan? Achhi khaasi romance chal rahi thi, aur tumne aa ke woh bhi rukaya!

He looked over at Kanya, but she pointedly looked away. Kanya stalked off to take a shower. She glared as she walked off, thinking about Ranbir and how confusing he was being. But behind her, Ranbir smiled. Why? Because Kanya, in her anger had forgotten to take clothes into the bathroom with her...
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Posted: 17 years ago
#26
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz put the next new update plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz i read this part a million times now
Edited by sweet cherry - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#27
aare krish read this part before yaar i want a new part nah !!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#28
I know, but I hav to post up the old parts b4 i put the new one, it wud be kind of wierd otherwise. but i am working on an update as i do that.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#29
yeh i get u !
i want more of ur brilliance yaar!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#30
sweet cherry: awesome update can't wait 2 c wat ranbir got up his sleeves.😉
princez-preciou: ooo krish yaar u had to end it .....
i was getting a full blast of the scene then u left it..
dear it was brilliant and i want more
so continue sooon!
rajkin:
Aaaaaaahhhhhh end kyun kiya.But it was a very michevous ending.I Cant wait for the next episode. But I have to patiently.
haaa kitna accha girey dono.Mujhe toh awaaz bhi aa gayi.
GGG3: Ayaan😡😡😡interrupted at the crucial moment.Come back soon Krish.Can't wait to know what mischief he is up to.BTW,brilliant update as always.
stars_shine*: krish y did u end there!!!
awesom part
continue soon!!
punjabi.princes: great update
why soo short?
plzz continue soon!
me: thanx guys! it was short cuz i thought that was a good cliffhanger ending. srry. but why no more ppl comment??😭
Multani90:

Arre, meri Krish! this was awesome!!! Brillant!!! Awww..you have Ranbir's bad boy sexy character down to perfection for me!!! Wish they would bring bad boy sexy back in KIT, this always being sweet Ranbir isn't particulary working for me!!! Its like a overdose of sweets! ok so going back to the update, omg....I just loved the Ranbir folding his arms, and leaning very causally against the wall, and then when he bent down and wrapped his arm around her waist! oh, was that hot or what! And and the scene was so good, bodies so close together, I wish I was the one top of his chest!😳 Hai so sexy!

Perfect timing Aayan, awesome time to spoil the fun😡😆! But that was fab, to built up the akwardness.

And the last part hai marjawa!!! I love bad boy sexy, and his sexy smile!!! Love the naughtiness!
Please continue soon! I will be waiting!!!
unpredicatebl91: it was awesome
plz plz comtinue soon
me: This is the 200th post!🥳🤪
rajkin: congrats cute writer
kspooja10: nice 1 pls continue

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