Ek Vivaah Aisa Bhi FAN FICTION chapter7 pg6

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Ek Vivaah Aisa Bhi ...kahani pyaar ki
**FANFICTION**



I have officially lost it ... so here is some different story setup for all the sumveer fans 😳

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Character Sketch:

>>Suman

Young, cheerful, smart and loving girl who is an orphan. Suman doesn't remember much about her parents except the fire that killed her parents when she was three. Suman was found by Devraj and Suhasini who took her in and raised her as their own. As fate had decided, Suman soon finds a comforting friend in Ranveer only to discover later that she has fallen in love with him.

>>Ranveer Mittal

Ranveer is the only son of Aakash and Sindoora Mittal and is the youngest son of the Mittal Family. Born and raised in a well-known family, among his loved ones. He soon falls deeply in love with Suman, who he has known as his best friend during most his childhood. He will fight against all odds to marry Suman.

>>Gyana Mittal

Dadi'sa, elder of the family, mother of Devraj, Brijesh and Aakash Mittal. She is kind and caring, loves her grandsons a lot and treats Suman as a family. She expresses her desire to see her three grandchildren marry on the same day, playing an important role in Ranveer's marriage with Suman.

>>Devraj Mittal

Devraj Mittal, a successful businessman and "Head" of the well-known Mittal family as he is the eldest of the three brothers. He highly regards his family and would not allow any wrong done to them. He and Suhasini had a daughter who died of a medical condition at an early age. He raised Suman as his own, never letting her feel that she is an orphan, after he and Suhasini found her.

>>Suhasini Mittal

Suhasini Devraj Mittal loves her family, considers Suman as her daughter. She runs the house. Suman idolises her and comes to her for any advice she ever needs. Suhasini is wise and understanding which is why she is consulted by all in the family for anything needed.

>>Brijesh Mittal

Brijesh is second son of Gyana Mittal with same priorities as Devraj. Brijesh helps Devraj with the business. He is a father of two, Sahil and Manan. He gets along well with everyone in the family.

>>Nupur Mittal

Nupur Brijesh Mittal is loving and kind in nature, never differentiates between all the kids including Suman. She likes to help Suhasini run the house. Her positive nature always helps the family through tense situations. She's very religious and always prefers consulting a priest before starting any work.

>>Aakash Mittal

Aakash is youngest son of Gyana Mittal with same priorities as his brothers. Aakash started his own business venture with his wife Sindoora after their marriage. He is the father of Ranveer. Ranveer idolises his father and comes to him for advice whenever he needs. Aakash understands Ranveer well and has always been supportive of him in every situation. He gets along well with everyone in the family.

>>Sindoora Mittal

Sindoora Aakash Mittal is modern lady who works with her husband in same business. Her closest friend is Kalavati who also happens to be her business partner. Sindoora loves her son and is the only one who doesn't approve of Devraj and Suhasini's decision of having Suman in the family. Sindoora also doesn't want Suman around Ranveer but never succeeds in doing so.

>>Disha Mittal

Disha is the daughter of Devraj and Suhasini who dies at the age of eight due to a medical condition. The loss of their only child leaves an emptiness in Devraj and Suhasini's life which is soon filled by Suman. Disha may have left their life but her spirit lives on through Suman who slightly resembles Disha in her way of loving and caring for people around her.

>>Sahil Mittal

Sahil is the eldest son of Brijesh and Nupur, and eldest of all the kids in the family. Sahil is caring and loving just like his father. Though he may not always agree to but still helps his younger brothers in their mischiefs. He always treats Manan and Ranveer equally.

>>Manan Mittal

Manan is youngest son of Brijesh and Nupur, and middle brother among the three. He is the most mischievous out of the three but still loved by all. His carefree and cheerful nature can make anyone forget their anger on his mischiefs. Manan is closer to Ranveer in comparison to Sahil because of Sahil's slight sincere nature.

>>Kalavati Parmar

Kalavati is mix of modern and traditional type. After her husband left her, Kalavati handled the business partnership with Aakash and Sindoora Mittal. Kalavati is now a single mother of two daughters, Sanjana and Antara. Kalavati Sindoora have been great friends since their childhood and have some things in common, including their nature.

>>Sanjana Parmar

Sanjana is eldest daughter of Kalavati. She is also happy-to-go-lucky kind of person who is well pampered by her mother. She prefers to live her life in carefree way.

>>Antara Parmar

Antara is youngest daughter of Kalavati. Unlike Sanjana, Antara is the quiet type who prefers to live peacefully. She is loving and caring. Antara soon becomes fast friend with Suman when they meet in the school.


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Index:

Character Sketch: page1 (scroll above) 142075734
Prologue: page1 (scroll below) 142075776

Chapter 1 page2 142116705
Chapter 2
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Chapter 3
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Chapter 4
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Chapter 5
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Chapter 6 page5
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Chapter 7
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Prologue:

Devraj and Suhasini were driving down the road, headed towards the children's hospital. Devraj gently places his hand on suhasini's hand. Suhasini tries her best to hide her tears before looking up at Devraj.

Devraj~ "You know you have the right to share your pain and loss. It will only help you ease that burden you carry in your heart."

Suhasini~ "I know. I just want to be as strong as you are. You lost your daughter as well. How can you stay so strong?" Fresh tears forms in her eyes.

Devraj~ "Suhasini ji, I'm not as strong as you think I'm. I just have enough responsibilities on me and the need to be that support pillar you need... that doesn't allow me to show my pain."

Suhasini~ "Why does god had to take away our daughter?"

Devraj~ "I'm sorry Suhasini ji, but that is a question I have no answer to. Maybe it was his wish and what a mere human could do against god's will."

Suhasini~ "Then what should I do now? How do I learn to live through this pain?"

Devraj~ "All I can tell you is what maa'sa would say. She always says that god never gives pain that you cannot bear. Sometimes it is a test for his devotee, sometimes he just has a hidden will behind it... all you need to do, is follow the path he choose for you."

Suhasini rests her head on devraj's shoulder and let her tears flow down, hoping they would take away some of her sorrow with her. She closes her eyes only to remember the last memories of her daughter disha, as she was counting her last breaths in the hospital.

"...Maa, please don't send me away with tears in your eyes. I know I'm dying. Have always known. I heard the doctor telling papa. I'm not afraid of dying maa. But... I fear for you. I know... you and papa... and everyone loves me. Once I see the god, I will ask him why he gave me such short time to spend with you. But I want you to promise me maa... you will not blame anyone, not even god... for taking me away. Dadi'sa says that god has a hidden motive behind his every action. I want you to promise me that you will find that motive for me... please maa... I love you maa."

Suhasini whispers "I promise disha." As she opens her eyes only to discover that they have arrived at their destination.

Suhasini and Devraj goes inside to meet the head staff of the hospital. They receive lot of words of condolences from the staff but nothing could ease the pain of loss of their only daughter. Devraj and Suhasini offer some toys and necessities for the kids, along with a small fund to pay for the treatment of other kids whose parents cannot afford it. All this discussion was only weighing down on Suhasini so she decides to get some fresh air. Suhasini excuses herself to go wait near the car. As Suhasini is passing by the kids ward, she overhears two nurses talking.

Nurse1~ "Has that girl from last night eaten anything yet?"

Nurse2~ "No. She hasn't even spoken a word since she was rescued out of that fire."

Nurse1~ "Do we know if she has anyone we can contact? A family member or relative?"

Nurse2~ "Not that I know of. All I was told is that everyone else in that fire didn't make it. She is lucky to even get out with minor burns."

Nurse1~ "And her parents?"

Nurse2 shakes her head in a no gesture.

Nurse1~ "Poor child... what will happen to her now?"

Suhasini couldn't control herself and felt like something was pulling her towards the room where this little girl was kept. Suhasini goes to the room as the nurses are called in by a doctor to check up on another kid in the hospital.

Suhasini looks inside and sees a three year old girl holding on to a small stuffed toy. Her eyes staring in the empty space. There was a small bandage on her arm and on her leg, apart from that this girl had no other injury that she could see. Suhasini couldn't look away from this girl who just sat there in silence. In the past month since her daughter's death, this was the first time Suhasini didn't feel the pain of her loss. Instead she was filled with motherly care for this little girl. Suhasini goes and sits by this little girl. Suhasini caresses her. Suhasini notices a speck of ash on her forehead. Suhasini picks up the nearby towel and wipes it gently off of her forehead.

It was Suhasini's gentle touch that made that little girl look up at her. Suhasini didn't say anything, only caressed her. Suhasini remembered what nurses said that this girl hasn't eaten anything since she was rescued from the fire. Suhasini picks up the food tray that was left nearby and offers a small bite to the girl. The girl keeps staring at her for a moment before finally opening her mouth to eat from suhasini's hand. After the girl ate some food, Suhasini gently picks her up and settles her in her laps. Suhasini let all her love out on this little girl as if she found her daughter again. Suhasini didn't realise when she fell asleep along with this little girl, who also slept in her arms.

Devraj finished the discussion and paper work with the head staff which took him over an hour. Devraj was worried he left Suhasini for so long to wait near the car. But when he reached by the car, his worries only increased when he found out through their driver that Suhasini never came to the car. As soon as the head staff heard this, they sent out people to look for Suhasini in the hospital. Soon the two nurses told them about seeing Suhasini ji near that little girl's room. On checking, to devraj's surprise, Suhasini was indeed in that same room with that girl in her arm, sleeping peacefully. The nurse was about to wake them up when Devraj asked her not to.

Nurse picked up the empty platter from the table and showed it to doctor narrating everything what she had talked to other nurse earlier. Devraj understood it all as soon he heard the girl's story.

Devraj~ "Doctor, would it be a problem if we take this girl with us?"

Doctor looks at Devraj with surprise.

Devraj~ "It seems that this girl and my wife shares more than what it would seem. From what the nurse has told us, this girl has no one else to look after her. And I haven't seen my wife this peaceful since we lost our daughter. If this girl needs a family, she will get one... and my wife gets back her daughter. I don't want to put my wife through the loss of another daughter."

Doctor listened to Devraj very carefully and agreed that it is in everyone's favour that Suhasini and this girl are united. "I will have the arrangements done. Then you can take this girl with you."

Devraj" Thank you doctor. If you don't mind, I wish to stay here too."

Doctor~ "Sure, you can stay here sir. I will let you know when the discharge papers are ready."

Devraj nodes and takes a seat besides the bed as the doctor leaves. Devraj could feel the same bond towards this little girl that Suhasini must have felt when she meet this girl. Like Suhasini, he felt the same ease in his pain of loss being around here watching Suhasini and the little girl sleep.

Devraj thinks "I don't know why, but you have brought something back in our life... that we had lost when we lost our daughter. I promise to you my dear daughter, I will never let anything or anyone ever take you away from us."

It wasn't until another hour passed by when Suhasini woke up. She realised that she fell asleep holding that little girl and that it wasn't a dream. But she didn't wanted to let go, which made her kiss on that girl's forehead. When she looked up, she saw Devraj sitting next to them. Before Suhasini or Devraj could say something, the doctor arrived with some papers.

Doctor~ "Devraj sir, you just need to sign these papers for formality and then you can take your daughter home with you."

Devraj took the papers and signed them as told by the doctor. Suhasini couldn't believe what she heard. Doctor thanked Devraj and told him that now they can take the little girl with them. Once the doctor left them, Suhasini looked at Devraj with all sorts of questions in her eyes.

Devraj understood "Suhasini ji, we can take our daughter home when you are ready."

Suhasini felt really happy to have her daughter back. She gently kissed the girl's forehead again. This time, the girl woke up.

Suhasini caressing her, asks "Beta, what is your name?"

Girl replies in her soft sweet voice "Suman."

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Posted: 8 years ago
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awww.. it's really heart touching.. loved it.. waiting for next update.. 😳
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Hai. It's so touching and beautiful. Do update soon.
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thanks @pratyusha and @beautiful

next update on Saturday 😉😉😉😉
this time suman ranveer will meet for the first time 😳😳😳
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Originally posted by: sweetcathy29

thanks @pratyusha and @beautiful

next update on Saturday 😉
this time suman ranveer will meet for the first time 😳😳😳


waitinggg 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice character sketch and background given to the story - nice to see suman not play a widow for a change... but this also means no veer?
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Originally posted by: Yuvika_15

nice character sketch and background given to the story - nice to see suman not play a widow for a change... but this also means no veer?

thanks @yuvika
I wanted something different story base for a change
really lost it watching this sonali drag n drama for all these past episodes


anyway
i was wondering if someone brings it up... 😆😆😆😆

veer will be there for sure.
I think this hint is enough for you all to know who his real parents are...
😃😃😃😃😉😉😉😉
Edited by sweetcathy29 - 8 years ago
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Wow!!
character sketch & prologue were amazing!!
looking forward for chapter 1

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