baldev ~ ff (part 7 , pg 7)

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AMbili

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Posted: 11 years ago

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thanks soo soo much evu😳😳it was just fab ...veeba track dil garden garden ho gaya❤️😉loved the way veera possesively confessed her feelings..suprb👏👏👏great work😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

thnx everyone for the comments...

Part : 6

they reached veera's house...veera was going to get inside..

baldev : veera...sun..

veera : haan...

baldev : ughh...kuch nahin...tu..jaa..

veera : hun..kya hai??? bol na jo bolna chahtha tha!!

baldev : kuch nahin bola na!!

veera : toh theekhe...main jaa rahi hoon...bye..

baldev : haan...haan..bye..

veera goes inside...baldev returns home to find everyone having dinner...he sees jasmeet too...

bansuri : aree baldev puttar..aana jaldi se khana khaa...

jasmeet : baldev tumne ja...jaggi ko kahin dekha????

baldev : (naughtily) haan dekha toh...kyun tumhe kuch kehana hai kya??

jasmeet : (☺️) nahin...voh bass ese he poochliya tha...

bansuri : aree jasmeet isme ithna sharmane vaali ki baat hain??

baldev : aree beeji aapnu nahin pata..jasmeet jaggi se pyaar karti hain...jabse isne jaggi nu dekha usse pyaar hua hain..

jasmeet : ☺️

baldev : dekho toh jaggi ka naam sunthe he kese sharma rahi hain..

bansuri : agar esi gall hain toh rishtha pakka karlete hain..kyun baldev??

baldev : meri toh haan hain!! aur jaggi ka bhi...tumhara jasmeet??

jasmeet : 😳..haan!!

baldev : toh rishtha pakka!!

**next day**

baldev goes to veera's house..calls her and tells her the whole story...she's very happy!! baldev plans a surprise for her and tells her to come near the khet at 5pm today!! so veera agrees!!

how was it?? pls comment!!

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HappyST

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Very nice...keep it up...👍🏼

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Lovely_KaranIka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

very nice.. update it soon 😳

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Nikki

@Nikki36

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Ha ha you gave into pressure and turned it into a veeba story. I like the pospossibility of the jaggi and jasmeet jodi. Cute update

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@VinithaDhawan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

thnx for commenting guys...

Part 8

veera came near the khet at 5pm...she was waiting for half an hour...she called baldev but it was unreachable...suddenly she heard a noise behind her...

veera : (scared) kon hai?? (turned around)

voice : oye main hoon...baldev!!

baldev came out...from were he was hiding...veera was skocked to see him...he was wearing a pure white suit...he was looking dashing!

veera : baldev...tu...inn kapdon main kyun ho??

baldev : oye...bhool gayi kya...ithe surprize dikhane keliye bulaya tha...ye bekaar sawaal poochne keliye nahin...toh chale..

veera : lekin kithe??

baldev : aree abhi abhi toh bataya tha...surprize dikhane vaaste...

veera : ohh...haan chal!

baldev tied cloth around her eyes...then took her to a place...and then removed the cloth!! veera was astounded by wat she saw...a table set with flowers on the middle and a plate of spaghetti...then baldev sat (as if to propose her) with a diary milk silk...

baldev : veera main tujse bohot pyaar karta hoon...mennu pyaar ki baare main zyaada kuch nahin maloom...magar agar jo abhi mere dil wich inni khushi aur ajeeb sa lag raha hain..isse pyaar kehete hai to mennu pata hai pyaar ki hai...oye kaha kho gai...inna acha speech dia ek taali toh macha deti!!

veera : baldev...main bhi tumse bohot pyaar karti hoon!!

baldev stood up...veera took the chocolate...and shared it!!! then they went to the table...and sat at opposite ends...they started eating the spaghetti...they were enjoying very much...

thus their journey of luv starts from here...

The End!!

how was it guys?? i know its a sudden end... pls like and comment!!

Edited by evanna_rocks - 11 years ago