baldev ~ ff (part 7 , pg 7)

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a4aarsh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

plz dont separate Veera from Baldev

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Lovely_KaranIka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

nice OS but plz Veeba ko alag mat karo..

Edited by Lovelyvb - 11 years ago

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Nikki

@Nikki36

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Nice update, , everyone is a die hard veeba fan so want them to be together, but in reality people get hurt and move on and this baldev seems to be trying to do that. Wether he is successful will all depend on how ur story is written.

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@VinithaDhawan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

sabse kutty haan😡!!! mene pehele he bola tha ki ye bohot he alag os/ff hai...aur isme no VEEBA!!! main khud bohot 😕pareshaan hoon ye kehekar...lekin yaha jasmeet aur ballu saath hai...

ps - 😳this jasmeet is actually me...ok guys!!

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@VinithaDhawan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

thnx for all comments guys!!!🤗

Part 4

baldev went straight to his room...

baldev : (in his mind) eh aaj mennu ki hoya?? veera ke hone ya na hone se mennu koi farak nahi pad raha...aur..shayad..eh..sab kuch...ja.. jasmeet ke...kaaran ho raha hai..(a small smile crept through his lips)

**next day**

early baldev got ready and went down to have breakfast...wat he saw was really surprising and he couldn't take his eyes off...jasmeet was helping bansuri...she was wearing an anarkali suit...and her hair tied in a parantha...baldev mesmerized...wen bansuri went to the kitchen...baldev went to jasmeet...

baldev : uhh...tu...mera matlab tumhe ye kapde kisne diye???

jasmeet : ohh ye...balwant tayaji ne diya...kyun poocha?? kya main inn kapdo main achi nahin lag rahi kya??😕

baldev : nahin nahin...bohot soni lag rahi hai tu...😉*winks*

jasmeet : (blushing)😳 sach main...thnx!!

bansuri comes...

bansuri : aagaya puttar...aaja bet jaa...

baldev : (looking around) uhh..beeji...pappaji kahin dikh nahin rahe... bahar hai ki??

bansuri : haan...vo unhe naa koi zaroori kaam aagaya..isiliye voh kal shaam ko he dilli(delhi) nikal gaye...kal main batana bhool gayi tujhe!! voh ab 10 ya 15 din baad aayenge...

they starts eating...wen veera comes and knocks.. bansuri goes and asks her wat she wants...they starts talking, every sec she looks at baldev... but baldev didn't even glance at her which made her angry...after talking veera goes...these thngs r being noticed by jasmeet...after breakfast baldev goes out...jasmeet sees this and thinks this is the perfect time to ask and goes behind him...

jasmeet : baldev...

he just goes on walking as he didn't hear her...she couldn't catch up with him as he was walking very swiftly...after smtime wen jasmeet looked around she knew tht she was lost...she runs everywhere...but couldn't make out the way to go back...tired of running here and there she goes and sits in stone pillar and starts crying...wen suddenly she feels a hand in her shoulder...she looks up and sees baldev standing full of sweat...

baldev : (panting) jasmeet...tu...ithe ki kar rahi hai?? pata hai mene tennu kaha kaha nahin dhoonda!!

jasmeet unable to control her tears hugs baldev...and cries her heart out...baldev hugs her back and consoles her...

hows it guys...pls comment and like...will update later...

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ElireEli

@ElireEli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Very good Eva👏😳...BTW what is the couple name for this FF? Since there is no Veeba, jasmeet + Baldev = jasba??😃 😆 On a serious note...unique concept and very well written.. Please continue soon...want to know what's in store for Baldev...and thank you for this story dear🤗

Edited by ElireEli - 11 years ago

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AMbili

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

reswa ...will try to edit and commend soonish baby ;)

ooops sorry choti baby actualt why no veeba🥺

am sorry actualy i dont like anyone other than veera with balluhope you understand ...😳😳😳writting are great👏👏 but no veeba 🥺

Edited by ..crazy_doll.. - 11 years ago

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..rashi..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

nice one...but y no veeba???!!!! like buttoun not working...will like afterwards

Edited by rashi... - 11 years ago

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TehsinaJFJ

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

M really sorry Eva..!I cannot read dis story..I am just a die hard Veeba lover,and no matter how much I love Baldev I cannot see him wid any1 else..!🥺Hell if he ditches Veera for me,evn dn I wud murder him!😡Dt is how much I love Veeba..😭So sorry I cannot read dis..Hope u understand..Love u!🤗❤️

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@VinithaDhawan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

i'm not getting nice comments..anyways there's a twist coming up😉...everyone wants veeba only!!! thnx for who all liked it...for them i'm going to rite this...sina di especially for u!!😛

Part 5

while they were hugging veera was passing by and saw them both hugging...she was going explode by seeing this...while on the other side baldev broke the hug and said not to worry...veera came to him..

veera : baldev...mennu tujse kuch zaroori kaam hai...aa na!

baldev goes with her...

baldev : tennu mujse ki kaam hai veera???

now veera who was unable to control her tears after seeing jasmeet and baldev hug...starts crying very badly...baldev was shocked by this sudden reaction...

baldev : (tensed) oye veera...tu...tu ro kyun rahi hai??? koi pareshaani hai toh tu mennu batana...hum koina koi hal dhoond lenge!!

veera : (still crying) nahin dhoond payenge...kyunki...tu...tu...uss jasmeet se pyaar karta hai na???

baldev : (surprised) ki?? ki kaha tune?? pyaar?? main jasmeet se pyaar karta hoon...*starts laughing*😆😆

veera : (shocked) tu...hass...raha hai??

baldev : (controlling his laughter) aur nahin toh ki karoon!! tu na ek dam kamli hai...main usse pyaar vyaar nahin karta...aur na he voh mennu...kyunki voh kisi aur se pyaar karti hai...aur voh hai mera dost jaggi...samjhi!! ussi ki madad karne keliye layi hoon main usse ithe!! haan jab main usse peheli baar mila tab mere dil wich kuch kuch hota tha...lekin jab ussne mennu poori baat batayi toh main uss kuch kuch ko mitta di...vese tu inna pareshaan kyun thi?? main kisike saath bhi jaaon tennu ki farak padhta hain??

veera who was in shock after hearing all this...came out to her senses when she heard what baldev said those last lines...

veera : farak padhta hai mennu...jab tu kisi kudi nu dekhta hain toh mennu uss kudi ko mar daalne ka mann karta hai...jab tu kisi aur kudi nu pyaar kare toh mennu jalan hoti hai...

baldev was shocked!!

baldev : kyu..kyun veera?? kyun???

veera : kyun...kyunki...main...main...

baldev : kyunki main kya veera??? bata...

veera : kyunki main tennu pyaar karne lagi hoon!!

a small smile crept through his face...afterall his sherni told wat he wanted to hear!!

veera : tu..muskura kyun raha hai?? aur batana...kya tu...mujse pyaar karta...

he placed his lips onto hers without letting her cmplete her sentence...veera was shocked...but then kissed him back with all the love...after sm mins...breaking the kiss..

baldev : main hamesha se he tumse pyaar karta tha veera...aur aaj bhi karta hoon...aur hamesha karta rahoonga!! bohot takleef aur dard hua mujhe jab pata chala ki tu uss samay sirf pyaar ki natak kar rahi thi...tab bohot nafrat tha mere andar lekin...thode din ke baat vo sab kuch badal gaya...

veera : (hugging him) i luv u baldev!!! main bohot pyaar karta hoon tujse!!!

baldev hugs her back...after sm time he breaks the hug...

baldev : shaam ho chuki hai...main tennu ghar chadtha hoon...aaja!!

she goes with him...

hows it guys?? haan pata hai thoda twist hai😉!!! anyways pls do like and comment!!!😳